Family and Friends
Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
Chapter 17 of 25
grangerousWhen Professor Snape heals Hermione's injuries after the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, they are both surprised by what they learn. The two must work together to help Harry defeat Lord Voldemort.
ReviewedPhoenix Song, Chapter Seventeen : Family and Friends
DISCLAIMER : The characters and many of the situations described in this story are the property of the incomparable J.K. Rowling. I make no money from this story, which exists as a work of tribute.
My betas, LAxo and WriterMerrin, are a fangirl's dream come true.
WARNING : In the words of my brilliant beta WriterMerrin, "I don't think I've ever seen that much Viktor action in a SSHG piece, but I think it works well in establishing the Hermione you seem to be going for." Consider yourselves warned.
Viktor Krum made Hermione feel wonderful. While objectively, he looked at her much the same way that McLaggen did, one man's gaze made her feel sexy and powerful, the other dirty and shameful. She loved the way his brows creased together when he was thinking. She loved the difference between his awkward shuffling walk and the liquid power and grace of his movements on a broom. She loved the way his speech quickened when he was excited about an idea; she loved the way he mangled her name. After the rejection she'd experienced from Ron during this last term, some time spent in the company of an intelligent, admiring, sports star was exactly what she needed; at the same time, his presence also made it much easier to squash her crush on Snape back into submission. Not that Hermione was too stupid to notice the resemblance between the two men, but Snape was her teacher. No matter how intelligent, muscular or darkly funny he was, she would behave appropriately from now on. Her lessons with him were far too important to let a silly crush interfere in any way. And if she occasionally let her eyes flutter closed and her lips brush against the stubble just to the side of Viktor's mouth, that was her own concern.
Hermione had been terribly worried about seeing Snape for the first time since their awkward scene under the mistletoe, but to her inordinate relief he had acted just the same as ever. In fact, she pondered, several times recently I've assumed he would get angry and yell, and each time I've been proved wrong.
She sat through the opera in a delicious haze of contented anticipation. Viktor held her hand in his, and his thigh was warm against hers. The music swelled and pulsed through the air around her. Flowing over and through her, the sound triggered thoughts and responses that were better keyed to the events of the last few days than the story as it unfolded onstage.
At the end of the performance, Hermione and Viktor slipped out into the night and ducked into a dark alley. Behind a decidedly unromantic dumpster, Viktor put his arms tightly around her, his bags slung up onto one shoulder. Hermione pulled the Portkey from her pocket and held it up against his cheek with two fingers.
"Are you ready?" she asked. When Viktor smiled, she took a deep breath and channelled Judy Garland as best she could. "There's no place like home."
There was a sharp pulling sensation behind her navel, and the smelly alleyway spun away. She felt the warmth of Viktor's arms tighten around her and pressed her face against the firm support of his chest. Moments later, they landed in her bedroom, staggering slightly to keep their balance. The lights were off, and the room was lit only dimly by the streetlights outside the window.
"Hold on a minute," she instructed, fumbling her way towards the light switch. These days she spent so little time at her parents' house that she had to navigate mostly by guess. "There." The sudden light revealed a single bed, a generous number of bookshelves stuffed with everything from old picture story books to her textbooks from school, a white desk recessed into the gap between two built-in wardrobes, and a girly-pink colour scheme indicative of an earlier phase in her life. Viktor Krum and his sports bags looked almost comically out of place. Hermione stifled a giggle as she opened her door briefly and peered out into the hall. The lights were all out, and her parents surely asleep: they were not the kind to stay up late worrying. Viktor could greet them in the morning. She shut the door again and leant against it, her hands pressed to the wood behind her back. The full import of Viktor's presence in her bedroom was pressing insistently to the forefront of her mind and sending small tendrils of desire creeping outwards from her belly. Hermione felt suddenly very warm and stripped off her hat and gloves, unwinding her scarf and tossing it onto the bedside table.
"My parents made up the spare bed for you, but, er, you're welcome to sleep here if you'd like." Hermione felt suddenly nervous.
Viktor had put down his bags and sat gingerly on the side of her bed. "From one of your letters, I got the impression...forgive me if I'm wrong...that perhaps there voz something between you and your friend Ron."
Hermione didn't bother to conceal the bitterness of her reply. "He has a girlfriend."
"Ah. His loss." Viktor looked at her with an almost-sympathetic smirk.
"Um, do you have a girlfriend?" Since they were asking and answering the appropriate questions, Hermione thought it best to be thorough, although, from the way he had held her hand at the opera, she was betting on a "no."
Viktor shrugged. "No. Where there's Quidditch, however, there are always girls . . ." Although he trailed off, Hermione had no trouble interpreting his meaning.
"I'm not looking for a relationship, as such . . ." Hermione had no intention of luring him into her bed under false pretences.
At that, he grinned, transforming his serious face entirely. There was an intensity to his gaze that pooled deep in her gut, and she pushed herself off the door and stepped over towards the bed. "If we only haff five days, Herm-own-ninny, we'd best make the most of them." He reached out and brushed the back of his hand lightly down her cheek before winding one of her curls around his finger. "It vould be my very great pleasure to sleep here tonight."
"Good," smiled Hermione, elated by the prospect. She placed her hands firmly on his chest and pushed him backwards onto the bed, climbing on top to straddle him. "Although I should warn you, sleeping wasn't exactly at the top of my agenda."
As anticipated, Hermione's parents were unperturbed by the discovery of her sleeping arrangements. They were both ex-hippies, and her mother took a kind of perverse enjoyment in permissive parenting methods, delighting in the moments when she managed to shock her comparatively straight-laced daughter. Indeed, on the third day of Viktor's stay, her mother waylaid Hermione in the kitchen while Viktor and her father were engaged in a rather tedious discussion about the nutrition requirements of professional athletes.
"What's the story with you and your Bulgarian boyfriend?" she asked with interest, the gleam in her eye revealing a thirst for details.
"Mum, he's not my boyfriend."
"Fine. Your fuckbuddy, then."
"Mum!" Hermione's exclamation was half exasperation, half helpless laughter. "Where did you even learn that word?"
"From Liza, actually, which reminds me. She and Carla and little Thom are coming over tomorrow. Is your Bulgarian going to be fine with the whole happy-family-two-mothers concept?"
"I'm sure he will be." Hermione chewed on her bottom lip for a second. "I'll bring it up with him tonight. As long as he's prepared, it'll be fine."
"You haven't answered my question, young lady, don't think I've forgotten."
Hermione rolled her eyes at her mother, who had propped her hips against the kitchen bench and was clearly ready for an in-depth mother-daughter chat. "We're just friends."
"Friends who fuck."
"Yes. Friends who fuck." Hermione glanced nervously over her shoulder towards the living room, where Viktor and her dad were still talking. Pulling out her wand, she cast a Silencing Charm. At her mother's inquisitive look, she explained the spell. Her mum took it as an indication that Hermione was about to spill the proverbial beans and sidled closer. "Viktor's a great guy," Hermione explained. "He's smart, he's sexy, he's great in bed." Her mother smirked. "He really likes me for who I am. He likes the way that I look, he loves how smart I am, he's absolutely, not at all, not even the tiniest bit intimidated by me, but at the same time, he respects me."
Her mum was listening avidly. "But?" she asked. "I feel like there's a huge 'but' looming."
Hermione sighed. "You're right. But, he takes everything too seriously. In the long term I need someone who is going to make me laugh and gets my jokes. I mean, maybe it's just a language thing, but I don't think so. Plus, he never argues with me. I need someone who's not going to agree to everything so readily. Don't get me wrong, I really like him, and I'm having fun. I asked him to come and visit, and I'm enjoying him being here."
Hermione's mother reached out an arm and laid it around Hermione's shoulders, pulling her close. "I understand. I do. And I agree with your assessment of the situation. I just wanted to make sure I was reading things right, and to be sure that you were okay. You're being safe, right?"
Hermione was touched, even if she rolled her eyes and huffed her breath out loudly. "Mum! I use all the charms, and we use condoms. There's no way I could catch something or get pregnant. That is one thing you really don't have to worry about."
Dr. Granger patted her daughter's shoulder reassuringly. "I'm just checking, Hermione. I do trust you, you know."
Hermione laughed. She knew. She threaded her arms around her mother's waist and gave her a squeeze. She didn't spend that much time with her parents, but they were unbearably dear to her. And the older she got, the more she recognised bits of her parents in her own personality. "Come on, Mum, let's go rescue poor Viktor from Dad's indefatigable interest."
Hermione was delighted to see her cousin Liza and her small family. Forewarned, Viktor coped admirably with lesbian parenthood, although it was clear that out homosexuality was not a commonplace occurrence within his social circles. Still, while Liza was out to Hermione, Hermione wasn't out to Liza, and the visit occasioned the only really tense moment of Viktor's visit. Speaking with Carla and dandling the thirteen-month-old Thom on her lap, Hermione overheard Liza's conversation with Viktor with growing trepidation.
"So, Viktor, what do you do?" Liza asked.
"I play football." Hermione felt her stomach drop. Liza played herself, for an amateur women's team, and was almost certain to push this lie past the point where it cohered.
"Professionally?"
"That is the goal." Krum seemed blissfully unaware of either the bad joke that he had made, or the danger into which he was sinking.
"Wow! I've a ball in the back of the car; we could have a kick around after lunch! What do you say?"
"I vould like that."
To Hermione's intense relief, it turned out that Viktor was almost as good with a ball at his feet as he was with a broom between his legs. He danced around the Granger's small back yard as if the ball were tied to his foot with a short piece of elastic. Liza managed to get Carla and both of Hermione's parents to play for the first ten minutes or so...Hermione excused herself by promising to watch Thom...but once it was clear that Liza and Viktor were the only ones likely do anything much with the ball, the others retreated quickly to their glasses of wine, leaving Viktor and Liza to juggle the ball between them. Hermione surrendered the small boy to her mother and entertained herself watching Viktor display an entirely unexpected, yet visually pleasing, physical skill.
Less than a week later, Hermione Flooed back to school via the fireplace in her parents' bedroom. Stepping out into Professor McGonagall's office, she was surprised to see the headmaster sitting in the corner.
"Afternoon, Hermione. I'm sure I don't need to remind you of the charm to clean up your own ash?"
Hermione could take a hint and had her wand out to perform the charm even before McGonagall finished her greeting.
"Good afternoon, Professor McGonagall, Headmaster."
"By the way, Hermione, there's a new password: Abstinence." McGonagall pursed her lips slightly. "The reason for the change should be apparent once you see the Fat Lady."
"Thanks, Professor." Hermione levitated her bags and started for the door.
"Ah, Miss Granger, a word, if you don't mind." Dumbledore stood smoothly, opening the door for her with his good hand and gesturing her out into the corridor. Hermione followed obediently, her raised eyebrows the only index of her curiosity. Once they were several metres away from McGonagall's door, Dumbledore spoke. "I hear that Professor Snape and Viktor Krum were eventually able to come to an understanding."
A gurgle of laughter escaped Hermione. "Yes. They did rub each other the wrong way."
"You, my dear, are to be congratulated. Few people would regard either man as easily handled, yet you managed to bring the business to a head very smoothly."
Hermione flushed slightly with pleasure. She might think that the headmaster's ethics left something to be desired, yet his praise was rare and welcome.
"Ah, Miss Granger, before you leave, I must ask you to deliver a message for me." Dumbledore held out a small scroll addressed to Harry.
"Certainly, sir." Hermione took the letter and tucked it into her pocket.
"My next lesson with Harry is scheduled for tomorrow evening. I understand that Professor Snape will also be available at that time should you wish to have a lesson."
"Thank you, that would be wonderful." Hermione beamed at the prospect of class with Snape.
"I will let him know." The headmaster made a formal bow and turned as if to leave.
"Um, Professor?" she ventured suddenly, surprising even herself with the question. Dumbledore turned back at once. "You, er, wouldn't happen to know the whereabouts of the list of members of Dumbledore's Army, would you?" She knew she'd phrased the question awkwardly, and she inwardly winced.
"I would indeed." Dumbledore beamed at her. "I have been keeping it safe on the assumption that you would eventually wish to relieve poor Miss Edgecombe of the visible reminder of her actions." He twirled his wand with his blackened hand, conjuring the parchment, which drifted gently down towards Hermione until she caught hold of it.
Staring at the list of signatures, she felt oddly melancholy. "Thank you, sir," she replied politely. "I do."
Dumbledore twinkled at her over his glasses. "Will that be all, Miss Granger?" he asked.
"Do you know why she betrayed us to Umbridge?" she responded, unable to hold back the question.
"Her mother works at the Ministry," explained Dumbledore, not unkindly, "I understand that it came down to a question of friends or family."
Hermione swallowed heavily, disgusted with herself for not having removed the curse earlier. "Thank you, sir," she replied mechanically, before turning and heading for the Gryffindor common room, her luggage floating behind her. It was only once she'd reached the Tower that it occurred to her to wonder why Dumbledore hadn't removed the jinx himself; he was more than capable after all.
Harry, Ron and Ginny arrived from the Burrow a couple of hours later, and Hermione ran into them on her way back from the library. Buoyed up by the memory of Viktor Krum, who floated just behind her breastbone, she ignored Ron entirely, and not even his enthusiastic reunion with Lavender punctured her equanimity.
Harry was bursting with news and wasted no time in pulling her aside to fill her in: Rufus Scrimgeour's surprise Christmas visit, Lupin's time undercover with Fenrir Greyback's werewolf pack, and most importantly, the overheard conversation between Draco Malfoy and Professor Snape.
Hermione turned the new information over in her brain, trying to make sense of it. Malfoy was definitely up to something; she couldn't deny that any longer, although she was still disturbed by the vindictive anger he triggered in Harry and she did her best to point out the leaps of logic in Harry's assessment of the situation. Doing so, however, inevitably reminded her of the particular summer afternoon when she and Ron had decided on the plan to downplay Malfoy's role. A sharp pang of misery threatened her good mood. Why does Harry have it in so badly for Malfoy and Professor Snape? she wondered, insistent on distracting herself. At least this time, Snape was easier to defend. Professor Snape was obviously trying to work out what Malfoy is up to...and a good thing, too. Assuming that Malfoy was behind Katie's injury . . . but, an Unbreakable Vow? They're so dangerous. She wondered vaguely whether there was any way she could ask Snape about it without revealing Harry's eavesdropping.
This really was suspicious behaviour on Malfoy's part, even if his "master" didn't turn out to be Voldemort. Hermione's fingers itched to add these events to the Arithmantic matrix. It might just be enough information to make sense of Katie Bell's relationship to the whole. Hmm. She'd have to do it without Vector's help though, because otherwise Harry's less-than-justifiable activities would be implicated for sure. With extra equations to run, and tomorrow's lesson with Snape on the horizon, this term was promising to be every bit as busy as the last.
A / N : I know it's short! But to compensate, I'll try to have the next chapter posted within a few days. And a very, very particular thanks to everyone who has left a review!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
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I am absolutely LOVING this story, and am only mildly miffed that I had begun writing something similar, because your creation is miles better than mine would have been. However I cannot BELIEVE you wrote this but weren't sure about writing a follow-up - are you crazy?! Of course we want a sequel!!! I can't wait to continue to the final chapter and also to read Phoenix Tears... and then to rethink the story I've been working on! Damn you for being so bloody good, well done!
I loved the story, and am going to go see what i can find in regards to a sequel now. Curious to how you will continue the canon events in your almost non-canon way. :)
This was a truly wonderful, emotion filled story. I loved hearing the book from Hermione and Snape's perspectives. You answered a lot of questions that JK's book left me asking, and made it a more believable. I am so glad to discover that you wrote the sequel as well. I can't wait to go read it.
A great fic!! Congratulations for it! It's cool the way you are following the original story and, in the same moment, telling a diferent one. Kisses
this is awesome. awesome awesome awesome. everything holds together so well; it's all so tightly knit! you've incorporated everything perfectly! I don't know how you do it. this is right up there with Diana Wynne Jones novels, where everything fits and I'm left going "how did she do that." I am so impressed! Thanks for a great story :)
so hermione got snape's help with planning for being on the run. annoyingly convincing...I like to think she did it all herself. but really, it makes a lot of sense.
your explanations of arithmantic thought are fascinating. the details you give are logical and convincing. it's awesome.
I love love love it when authors go into the intricacies of magical theory. I love the explanations of the differences between charms and warding. This is so cool!
"I suggest running, perhaps supplemented with yoga." possibly one of the most bizarre things I have heard Professor Snape say. Ha!
terribly sad, and fascinating. You've really managed to convince me that muggleborns are more likely to be good Occlumens than their counterparts.
What a brilliant fic!!! This is definitely one of my favorites now, and I especially love how Sev shared the Felix Felicis!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I'm really delighted that you enjoyed the story, and thank you for leaving such a nice review. The sequel to this story is now completed, and I do hope that you enjoy that, too. :)
I am utterly astonished at your revelation that this is your first piece of fiction! You have a masterful command not just of narative but of character, motivation, plot, and drama. I am really impressed!And I'm delighted to see that I'm not the only one clamoring for more. I await what is to come with baited breath, and thank you profusely for a darn good read!I don't know if you've read Lariope's "Second Life," but I am delighted that you both chose the same method for sharing those last drops of Felix Felicis. I can't think of a better moment to prepare them both for all that is to come....Brava--excellent work! Looking forward to the sequel.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I have written non-fiction stuff (dissertation, etc.), but yes, this is the first piece of fiction I've written. Trust me to decide to start with something small and easily managed. :)I have read "Second Life," and very much enjoyed it. Thanks again, I do hope that you enjoy the sequel as much as you have this. :) Your reviews were a pleasure to receive.
She is the one person clever enough to puzzle it out. I can believe that she would have guessed it and known it to be true because it is indeed the simplest--the most elegant--solution. Can he at least find some comfort in her knowing?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
The way I've constructed the story, she did have enough information to work it out--in fact, I didn't need to make sure she knew very much beyond what she already should have known from canon. I think she'd be capable of seeing the lie of the land.Thanks for the review!
Wow! So much here! And all of it to do with Severus, quite delicious.It makes sense that he would have killed his father--that's the most interesting explanation I've heard for his choice to become a Death Eater: they were the only ones who would have him after such a tragedy.And it was nice to see him touched by Davis' project. He needs to remember how much esteem his Slytherins have for him, especially in these dark days.You keep driving home so effectively the damnable place he's in and the bleak future ahead. It makes sense that he would have known about the Elder Wand, and that he would have understood so well how alone he would be after killing Albus.Now to find out what he needs to tell Hermione....
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very, very much! The question of why or how Severus joined the Death Eaters is one that everyone has to hurdle sooner or later. Given his place and his treatment from others at the time, I just can't see how he would have done anything else, really--he would have been so happy for the acceptance. Hogwarts, well, Dumbledore at least, really failed the Slytherin students.Thanks again for the review.
Utterly fascinating!I must commend you throughout all of this for making the magical, theoretical, and academic components ring so true. I know nothing of mathematics (I can barely add without a calculator and a lot of scrap paper!), but your Arithmancy sounds so plausible that I buy it completely. And all the details you've supplied of the lessons that have been going on all make it sound quite realtistic (magically, of course!). What else, I wonder, does Albus need to tell Severus, and what does Severus need to tell Hermione (besides "You have to let Harry die in order to allow him to live, and, oh, by the way, I rather fancy you" that is)?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! I was a big maths geek when I was in high school--with a particular love for calculus and imaginary numbers. Given how well imaginary numbers work in Muggle mathmatics, the possibilities for magical mathematics seem boundless!! :)Thanks again for the review.
Oh, dear lord, bless her for the extreme act of courage it took to come down to his office, and bless him for the equal leap it took to offer one of the best apologies I've ever had the pleasure of reading.And I'm terribly glad it was only McLaggen--she could've handled him eventually, but it was good that Severus was there to lend a hand and deduct points from the great bully. I think it might've also helped him decide later to allow her to stay long enough in his office to have it out with him.This chapter makes me very hopeful!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm glad that you liked the apology! :)Hermione's got the courage she needs, when she needs it. That's her special Gryffindor flair.She would have handled McLaggen eventually--and I couldn't bear to write her as a complete damsel in distress.Yay for hope! Thanks for the review.
ARE WE INTERESTED?!?! ARE YOU KIDDING?!?!?! IT CAN'T BE ABOUT TO END?!?!! I was desperately afraid that this was a WIP, but YES, PLEASE, YOU ABSOLUTELY MUST CONTINUE IT!!! (Okay, I'll stop yelling now. I think I've made my point.) Will now go on and read the FINAL CHAPTER. Arghh!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
LOL. Your point is coming accross loud and clear, I promise! :) Thank you for the enthusiasm!The final chapter is pretty satisfying, I think--even if I do say so myself!! :)Thanks for all of your reviews.
Oh, hell, who's got her?! Evil cliffie! No time to review, must rush off and see what's next!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ha ha ha. Oh, yes. My first cliffhanger! What sweet memories . . .
Hermione, please use that very big brain of yours and actually listen--perhaps you can figure out why he's behaving like a jealous, self-pitying prat. (One of you needs to be thinking clearly in all of this.)Love the fact that Dumbledore's horrifying revelation to Severus about Harry's fate is delivered while he's rather drunk. Gives me just a tiny bit more pity for Albus. And I also love the idea of Severus hearing it while he's more focused on his own jumbled emotions.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hmm, perhaps he's acting like a jealous, self-pitying prat because he's a . . . um . . . jealous, self-pitying prat?? *smirksCan Hermione's year get any worse??Dumbledore's a manipulative old man. He must have know Severus would see through him were he sober.Thanks for the review!
I think we all wish we had mothers who understood the concept of a fuckbuddy--if not the frankness to insist on having a discussion about such things!Hermione is discovering the complications of the delicate dance of her position.I'm curious to see how her reunion with Severus goes, though I expect they are both convinced they have their feelings well in hand. (At least Hermione has had some nice distractions for her holiday treat!)
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I thought Hermione deserved a nice Christmas present after Ron had been such an arsehole all semester. :)And yes, the embarassing forthrightness of liberal mothers!! :) I'm sure she'll be more appreciative once she gets a bit older!Thanks, again.
He took a vindictive pleasure in secretly being a better man than the so-called nice, friendly people around him.That's an amazing insigh and obviously one of the reasons your portrayal of Severus is so spot-on.Poor Severus, seeing the echoes of the tragedy of his past, feeling he can't even want Hermione, and watching her with Krum, who isn't a bad guy (especially in this portrait--kind of thick in social situations, but fundamentally decent), but who isn't him.(Nice touch with the Italian portrait speaking Italian, by the way.)This continues to be fascinating!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ma certo che i ritratti italiani parlono italiano!! :)I'm thrilled that you're enjoying my characterisation of Severus. I think he's so fascinating! Thanks for the lovely review.
And I just added it, too. This is really an accomplished, fascinating piece.The scene in the Room of Requirement was especially terrific.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, and thank you! She's noticing an awful lot about him. :)
I completely buy this picture of the staff at play.I love Severus' interrogation of Hermione about Krum; found out more than he bargained for, I think, but she at least got some information in return.You are doing an amazing job of drawing a truly believable portrait of everyone, but most especially of Severus. This is a competent, complex, interesting, intelligent man who knows very clearly what he's doing. I love it.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I really like Severus--he's so nice and complicated. :) And he needs some downtime with his gay friends, too!!Thanks for the thoughtful review, it--indeed all of them--mean a lot to me.
And they continue to learn a little about one another. Such a shame that Ron can be such an idiot. This was in an earlier chapter, but it still applies all too well:"I always assumed that was because they were, well . . .” “Imbeciles?” he suggested smoothly, one eyebrow raised.Made me laugh. And now I'd sad for Hermione. Because he's right.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ron gave her a really hard time that year, silly sod. But at least Snape is providing some comfort at this point! :) Plus, as you now know, I'm sending her a Christmas present!!
Complexities and fascinations! Dumbeldore's reaction is quite intriguing, considering his own history (does Severus know about Arianna? probably not). You continue to weave an entirely new, interesting tale into the cloth of canon, and I continue to find it a wonderful read.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm assuming that Severus didn't yet know about Ariana; though eventually he will learn.I'm glad that there's enough new stuff that the story isn't boring! Thanks for the review!