Defensive Mechanisms
Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
Chapter 14 of 25
grangerousWhen Professor Snape heals Hermione's injuries after the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, they are both surprised by what they learn. The two must work together to help Harry defeat Lord Voldemort.
ReviewedPhoenix Song, Chapter Fourteen : Defensive Mechanisms
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Severus was teaching Granger the elements of warding. She had grasped the theoretical principles quickly and had replicated the complex wand movements flawlessly. Indeed, she was producing very sophisticated magical barriers, but he still wasn't satisfied. Because she still wasn't casting with the entire force of her body, her wards were weak. Although they were complicated enough that dismantling them took time and skill, forcefully breaking through them was relatively simple.
Granger stood in the centre of his office, wand in hand, casting the ward once more. Severus circled the perimeter of the room, destroying each of her attempts and critiquing her performance.
"Come on, Granger," he snarled after dismantling yet another of her efforts. "This isn't charmwork."
Granger blew a stray curl from her forehead in annoyance. "What's the difference?" she asked grumpily.
He paused his pacing and examined the young woman before him. The physical signs of her increased fitness were evident. She should be doing better than she was. "Be specific, Granger."
She crossed her arms under her breasts, uncomfortable under his long stare. "The difference, sir, between warding and charmwork. What should I do differently?"
Severus propped one hip against the surface of his desk and crossed his arms. "The best and most intricate charmwork," he responded in lecture mode, "comes from the wrist: the swish, the flick. Wandwork for Defence Against the Dark Arts, however, needs the strength of your whole body behind it." Granger still looked a little sulky, but her lower lip was caught between her teeth, and Severus could see the cogs turning. "Sit," he instructed, circling behind the desk to take his own seat.
Granger sat with a soft sigh. Severus repressed an urge to give her a shake. She had been miserable and grumpy since the evening she'd run into him in the hallway, blinded by tears. The modified seating arrangements at mealtimes were evidence enough that she'd argued with Ronald Weasley; Harry Potter was running interference between the two and looking less than happy about it. Weasely, it seemed, was drowning his sorrows over the altercation in a pool of Lavender Brown's saliva...neither the most sophisticated method nor the most discerning choice of partner, he might add. Why does she even care what that idiot boy thinks or does? he wondered. How can she let him affect her performance in class? There it was, the selfish core to his concern. He missed the energetic spark she brought to her lessons. He missed their light-hearted banter. He missed her smiles.
"Granger," he barked.
She looked up, startled, from the contemplation of her left knee. "Sir?"
"Tell me about Viktor Krum."
Her body froze, wide eyed and wary. "What about him?" she asked, her voice carefully neutral.
Interesting. "Everything," Severus waved one hand in an all-encompassing gesture. "How you met, what he's like, what he's up to now."
"Why?" Her body language screamed her reluctance.
Severus raised one eyebrow at her impertinence, but her tears were too fresh in his memory to push her to her limits this evening. "Because, Miss Granger, I need to know."
She flinched a little at his use of the honorific. Interesting. Her lips were pressed into a thin line, and her chin was slightly raised. What is it about Krum that she doesn't want to tell me? Severus sighed. He might as well tell her why he wanted to know.
"During the last war, the Dark Lord received a significant amount of support from the pureblood families of Eastern Europe," he explained. "Karkaroff was particularly useful in the recruitment process, due to his contacts at Durmstrang. Karkaroff, as you know, turned traitor after the Dark Lord's fall and was recently killed." Granger shuddered. Her eyes were fixed on his face, and she was listening intently. "With Karkaroff out of the picture, the Dark Lord is hoping to re-initiate contact, and Krum has been suggested as a likely possibility. Because of my presence at Hogwarts during the Tri-Wizard tournament, the task has fallen to me."
"You!?" Granger sputtered with indignation. "You want me to give you information about my friend so that you can recruit him to the Death Eaters?!?"
"Did I say that?" Severus' voice was cold, his face impassive. Her words hurt. "Think hard before you open your mouth."
Granger hesitated, biting down on her lower lip. He saw the uncertainty in her face as she ran the conversation through again in her mind. He raised one eyebrow. "Well?"
"No, sir. You said nothing of the sort."
Severus regarded her coldly for several moments before continuing. "Hearing of the Dark Lord's plan, Dumbledore instructed me to sound Krum out very carefully indeed. It may be possible to recruit him for the Order instead." As he spoke, Granger flushed, mortified by her previous outburst.
"I beg your pardon, sir," she ventured once he paused for breath. "I was out of line."
Severus continued as if she hadn't spoken, though he drank in the signs of her evident remorse. "Your information is crucial. The Dark Lord has heard the details of Krum's stay at Hogwarts from me and from Draco Malfoy. Krum's involvement"...Severus pronounced the word as if it were dirty..."with you raises a warning flag, although at present the Dark Lord is inclined to think it a ploy designed to keep tabs on Harry Potter."
Hermione crossed her legs viciously and folded her arms tightly across her chest. The anger that had simmered for days rose momentarily to the surface. "It seems," she commented acidly, "that the Dark Lord and Ronald Weasley have something in common."
Severus smirked. "I take it that you have a different opinion."
Granger drew a deep breath and only narrowly avoided another angry outburst. Pressing her lips together, she exhaled through her nose before replying. "Yes."
He quirked an interrogative eyebrow.
"What do you want to know?" It wasn't her normal, enthusiastic tone, but she had thankfully migrated from resistant to resigned.
"Begin at the beginning."
Granger took a few moments to marshal her thoughts. "We met in the library. At first I found his constant presence annoying, or at least that of the girls who were always hanging around." She sniffed disapprovingly. "It was ridiculous! If he wasn't an international Quidditch star, they wouldn't have cared at all! It's not like he's typically handsome, you know. He has a big nose and dirty hair, and he scowls all the time." Both of Severus' eyebrows shot skyward, but Granger didn't notice. She had lost herself in the story, oblivious to the physical resemblance between the man she was describing and the man she was describing him to. "Anyway, eventually we got talking...mostly about Transfiguration. He's doing some really interesting research now, actually." Her face lit up, and Severus was surprised by the sudden pang of jealousy her words triggered. Not for Hermione Granger, he hurriedly reassured himself. No, not for a student, but for the idea of a library romance in general. The relationship she was describing sounded . . . perfect. "He's working on Animagus transformations that can encompass various animals rather than just one particular species."
Severus forced his attention back to the topic at hand. "Has he had any luck?"
"Oh, yes. I mean, you must have seen the shark transformation he produced to rescue me from the Merpeople."
"Incomplete, as I recall." For some reason, the glowing look that accompanied Granger's mention of the rescue irritated him.
"Well, yes. But that's the point. Viktor's Animagus form is an eagle...predictable really, given his talent as a seeker: flight, good eyesight, ability to spot and catch small prey. To transform into a shark...even partially...took enormous skill!"
Granger was talking animatedly now, but it gave Severus no comfort. He changed the topic abruptly, back from Krum's research to the situation in the library. "So, you talked about Transfiguration; what else?"
"It was only when he invited me to the ball that I realised he liked me like that. I was flattered, of course, and we had a nice time." Her voice took on a brittle edge of triumph. "It certainly surprised a lot of people. Anyway, then he had to rescue me from the lake, as I said before. And then he invited me to visit him in Bulgaria." At the word "visit," her body stiffened visibly. The conversational tone with which she'd recounted much of the story evaporated entirely, and the wariness Severus had noted at the beginning of the discussion was back in full force. "That's about it. Though we're still friendly, and we write letters fairly frequently."
There's something about the visit she doesn't want to tell me. "Did you go to Bulgaria to see him?"
Granger pursed her lips. She answered the question but was far from forthcoming with details. "I did."
A powerful suggestion insinuated itself into Severus' brain. "Did you sleep with him?"
She flushed. "That is none of your business," she snapped.
"Really, Miss Granger," he sneered, "I have no prurient interest in the sexual exploits of my students." He could see from the fierce look in her eye that it wasn't enough and resorted to an underhand Dumbledorian tactic: "It is my life that will hang in the balance in the meeting with Krum; I merely ask for information."
"Fine." Granger uncrossed her legs and re-crossed them the other way, wriggling her shoulders in annoyance. "I slept with him, satisfied?"
Severus felt slightly breathless, but couldn't otherwise name his response to her confession. It certainly wasn't satisfied.
Granger was glaring at him, her expression so reminiscent of Minerva McGonagall that it made the idea of her sleeping with anyone faintly terrifying. "I haven't told anyone that before. Not a single soul. I warn you, Professor Snape," she held up an admonishing finger, "that if I ever hear about this from somebody else, I will know it was you. I will track you down, and Professor or not, I will make you regret it. I have absolutely no desire for my sexual exploits"...she spat the words..."to form the topic of Hogwarts' gossip! Do I make myself clear?"
Severus admitted himself shaken by the force of her rage. Magical energy was thrumming through her body, and he was surprised she hadn't broken any of the glass jars that lined the shelves of his office. Years of training kept his face impassive. "I assure you, Miss Granger," he sneered, "I have better things to do than indulge in scurrilous gossip."
"You'd better," she muttered and looked away.
Maintaining a firm grip on his breathing, Severus returned to the interrogation. "Are you still a couple?"
"No. Not really. We're friends."
He raised one eyebrow at the imprecision of that definition. "Who broke it off?"
"I did." Granger still wasn't looking at him, and she addressed her answers to a spot several feet to his right.
His future interactions with Viktor Krum didn't really justify the depths of his curiosity, but Severus pushed on regardless. "You slept with him, you broke it off, and yet you remained friends. A remarkable achievement, Miss Granger."
Granger sighed and rolled her eyes. "Look," she said, turning to look at him directly. "We slept together after we broke up; it was my idea, so don't go thinking I was fooled by his whole international-Quidditch-star routine. Once I got to Bulgaria, it became clear that things weren't really going to work out, not in the long term. Blood purity is a ridiculously big deal in Bulgaria, and Viktor is a public figure. We were followed by reporters everywhere we went. Plus the whole long-distance thing didn't help. We decided, well, I decided that we'd be better off as friends. Viktor was very nice and understanding about the whole thing. Once the pressure was off, though," she shrugged, "sex suddenly seemed a much more inviting prospect. I enjoyed it," she added defensively. "It was fun. I don't regret it in the slightest."
Against his better judgement, Severus asked another question: "And what did your parents think?"
Hermione blinked. "That, Severus Snape, is none of your business! But for your information," she leant forwards and tapped the tabletop with an indignant finger, "my parents were fine with it. Before I left, my mother gave me a packet of condoms and told me to be careful." She leant back in her chair and crossed her arms once more. "For God's sake, I was almost sixteen."
Severus made a mammoth effort to get the conversation back on track. "Tell me more about Bulgaria. It seems likely that the Dark Lord will send me there over Christmas."
"To meet with Viktor?" Granger clearly welcomed the shift in focus.
"Yes."
"I wouldn't bother. He's coming to England." His surprise must have registered on his face, for she elaborated. "He's taking the opportunity to meet with several Quidditch managers. And," she hesitated for only a second, "he's going to spend a couple of days at my parents' house."
Any response Severus might have made was forestalled by a knock at the door. He shot Granger a warning glance as he called for the visitor to enter. The door swung open to reveal Hooch, who crossed her arms and leant one shoulder casually against the door frame.
"Severus," she remarked by way of greeting.
"What do you want, Hooch?" he snapped back.
"To see if you're up for a drink," she replied, unperturbed by his rudeness.
"As you have no-doubt noticed," he smirked, "I'm far too busy supervising Miss Granger's"...his eyes flicked to her dismissively..."detention."
Her back safely towards the visitor, Granger rolled her eyes. Hooch, however, refused the none too subtle hint that she should leave.
"You know, Severus," she drawled, "I'd heard your detentions were bad, but I had no idea you actually made the students converse with you."
Touché. Severus felt one corner of his mouth twitch upwards, and he looked up into Hooch's laughing eyes. "Hooch," he growled, acknowledging defeat. "Get out!"
She laughed. "I'll see you at ours later, then? Minerva's coming, too. Which means, I warn you, that you'd better be ready to discuss the Gryffindor-Slytherin Quidditch match in loving detail!" She waved as she pulled the door shut behind her, visibly enjoying his discomfort. As the heavy oak thumped closed, the sound of her laughter was abruptly silenced.
He glanced at Granger. She'd soaked up the interaction between him and Hooch like a sponge and was regarding him curiously. To be honest, his regular inclusion in Hooch and Poppy's monthly lesbian poker nights baffled him as much as the idea seemed to surprise Granger, but he had no intention of telling her that. Let her think what she likes.
Severus scowled and returned to the all-important topic of Viktor Krum. "Krum is coming to stay with you? In London?"
She nodded. "Yes," she acknowledged.
This could work to my advantage. "Perhaps you could organise a meeting. Coffee one afternoon, somewhere in Muggle London?"
She nodded again. "I'll write to him and find out exactly what his plans are."
"Very good." For a long moment he considered the woman in front of him, eyes narrowed in thought. "Next week, we will meet in the Room of Requirement. If you get there before I do, wait outside. Wear comfortable, loose-fitting clothes. Sports clothes." That caught at her interest, and he could see the questions forming. "You are dismissed," he said, cutting off any comment she might have made.
"Good evening, sir," she replied. Gathering her things, she walked to the door. As it closed behind her, he caught the speculative look she gave him, then she was gone.
Severus made his way up to Poppy and Hooch's quarters not long after Granger left. At his knock, Poppy opened the door by hand.
"Severus," she exclaimed with a smile, "come on in!"
Minerva and Hooch were seated around the coffee table, Firewhiskeys in hand.
"Severus!" Minerva was positively cackling with joy. She held her alcohol well, but had clearly consumed just enough to regard boasting over the recent Quidditch match as appropriate behaviour. "I have two words for you: Ronald Weasley!"
Severus rolled his eyes as he strode towards the fireplace, conjuring himself an armchair before he replied. "Nonsense, Minerva," he drawled, settling his long limbs into the chair, "Weasley looked good only because Vaisey was absent. If your team needs our top goal scorer incapacitated before you have a hope of winning, it's not much to crow about."
"Really, Severus!" expostulated Minerva. "Had Slytherin won, you would be sitting here bragging...even if the reason were that Gryffindor had fielded the first-years on school brooms rather than our first seven!"
Poppy pressed a tumbler of Firewhiskey into his hand and gave him a companionable smile.
"To be honest, Minerva, I'm not certain I would have noticed any difference in their Quidditch abilities." Severus punctuated his sarcasm with an elegantly arched eyebrow and let his shoulders relax back into the upholstery.
As he spoke, Poppy made her way around the back of Hooch's chair, trailing one hand through the soft, spiky hair across the nape of the other woman's neck, before seating herself on the other end of the couch.
"Poker?" asked Hooch, speaking over Minerva's spluttering indignation and summoning the cards from the mantelpiece so that they flew through the air in a stream. She caught them neatly in her left hand and began to shuffle, moving the cards through the air in an impossibly complex pattern; any Muggle card shark worth his salt would have had a fit at the sight.
As Poppy conjured poker chips, Minerva regained some of her composure, smugly commenting that Severus already owed her ten Galleons from their bet on the House Quidditch match. With a sneer and a languid wave of one hand, he sent the equivalent number of poker chips skittering across the table to join her pile.
"You'll need more than my ten Galleons if you hope to win this evening," he remarked.
McGonagall would bet on anything, and she and Severus kept a running tab that neither party ever sought to cash in for real money. At various times in their long, competitive friendship, each of them had been astronomically in debt to the other.
"We'll see about that, young man!" she replied, picking up the cards Hooch had dealt her and fanning them expertly.
At that point, Poppy dimmed the light in the sitting room, with the exception of a luminous, faintly green sphere that hung over the table, and the game began in earnest. The four friends were evenly matched, though perhaps Severus could claim the "poker face" edge, and they bickered and gossiped amicably as they played. Severus could feel some of the tension unspooling from his body, chased out by the warmth of the alcohol and the company.
By the time Albus arrived, Severus had won back a fair percentage of the ten Galleons he had surrendered to Minerva. The headmaster grinned merrily as he stepped out of the Floo.
"My, my," he remarked, "if this isn't a beautiful display of inter-house unity!"
Severus rolled his eyes at the repetition of one of Albus' favourite jokes, as he discarded two cards from his hand and summoned two others from the deck with a flick of his fingers. "If by 'unity,' Albus," he drawled, "you mean united in the desire to beat each other, you need look no further than the Great Hall."
Hooch grinned at the comment. "Or the Quidditch pitch," she added.
Minerva scooted her chair sideways so that Albus could fit another into the increasingly crowded space around the low table.
"Always so cheerful, Severus," teased Albus as he took his seat.
"If you don't like this particular model of Slytherin geniality, you could always invite Slughorn instead," replied Severus without heat. He'd been ridiculously relieved that none of his friends had wanted much to do with the returned Potions professor. While all three women were perfectly polite to Slughorn's face, they hadn't once invited him to their regular evening gatherings. Since, with the exception of Hooch, who'd been playing professional Quidditch at the time, the others had been colleagues of Slughorn's while Severus himself had been but a student, the omission was one he hadn't taken for granted.
"Speaking of Horace," remarked Dumbledore, leaning forward slightly in his chair and addressing himself directly to Severus, "I must insist that you attend his Christmas party. Don't look at me like that, young man! While you may not think much of his particular brand of inter-house interaction, it may yet have positive consequences. Most of your Slytherins follow your lead implicitly, and I will not have them snub the possibility of making connections just because you do. In public, at least, I expect you to behave towards Horace with grace and propriety."
Irrationally, the good sense of Dumbledore's proposal irritated Severus even more than the sentiment. It frustrated him that Dumbledore, who had done little to incorporate Slytherin house into the larger school body, would criticise him on such a level. Luckily, Minerva began to speak, removing the necessity for him to respond.
"I'm afraid that I won't be there, Albus," she commented smoothly, "I'm assigned to patrol the corridors that night, and since Horace has invited several outside guests, security has to be much tighter than usual."
"I'll be there," interpolated Hooch. "Gwenog is coming and I haven't seen her in ages. I wonder if she's still seeing Patty Parkin?"
"No!" exclaimed Minerva excitedly. "Not that incredibly tall brunette?"
And the gossip mill was off and running. Severus sat back and cradled his Firewhiskey to his chest, safe in the knowledge that Albus had lost his opportunity to interrogate him for at least the next forty-five minutes.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
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I am absolutely LOVING this story, and am only mildly miffed that I had begun writing something similar, because your creation is miles better than mine would have been. However I cannot BELIEVE you wrote this but weren't sure about writing a follow-up - are you crazy?! Of course we want a sequel!!! I can't wait to continue to the final chapter and also to read Phoenix Tears... and then to rethink the story I've been working on! Damn you for being so bloody good, well done!
I loved the story, and am going to go see what i can find in regards to a sequel now. Curious to how you will continue the canon events in your almost non-canon way. :)
This was a truly wonderful, emotion filled story. I loved hearing the book from Hermione and Snape's perspectives. You answered a lot of questions that JK's book left me asking, and made it a more believable. I am so glad to discover that you wrote the sequel as well. I can't wait to go read it.
A great fic!! Congratulations for it! It's cool the way you are following the original story and, in the same moment, telling a diferent one. Kisses
this is awesome. awesome awesome awesome. everything holds together so well; it's all so tightly knit! you've incorporated everything perfectly! I don't know how you do it. this is right up there with Diana Wynne Jones novels, where everything fits and I'm left going "how did she do that." I am so impressed! Thanks for a great story :)
so hermione got snape's help with planning for being on the run. annoyingly convincing...I like to think she did it all herself. but really, it makes a lot of sense.
your explanations of arithmantic thought are fascinating. the details you give are logical and convincing. it's awesome.
I love love love it when authors go into the intricacies of magical theory. I love the explanations of the differences between charms and warding. This is so cool!
"I suggest running, perhaps supplemented with yoga." possibly one of the most bizarre things I have heard Professor Snape say. Ha!
terribly sad, and fascinating. You've really managed to convince me that muggleborns are more likely to be good Occlumens than their counterparts.
What a brilliant fic!!! This is definitely one of my favorites now, and I especially love how Sev shared the Felix Felicis!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I'm really delighted that you enjoyed the story, and thank you for leaving such a nice review. The sequel to this story is now completed, and I do hope that you enjoy that, too. :)
I am utterly astonished at your revelation that this is your first piece of fiction! You have a masterful command not just of narative but of character, motivation, plot, and drama. I am really impressed!And I'm delighted to see that I'm not the only one clamoring for more. I await what is to come with baited breath, and thank you profusely for a darn good read!I don't know if you've read Lariope's "Second Life," but I am delighted that you both chose the same method for sharing those last drops of Felix Felicis. I can't think of a better moment to prepare them both for all that is to come....Brava--excellent work! Looking forward to the sequel.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I have written non-fiction stuff (dissertation, etc.), but yes, this is the first piece of fiction I've written. Trust me to decide to start with something small and easily managed. :)I have read "Second Life," and very much enjoyed it. Thanks again, I do hope that you enjoy the sequel as much as you have this. :) Your reviews were a pleasure to receive.
She is the one person clever enough to puzzle it out. I can believe that she would have guessed it and known it to be true because it is indeed the simplest--the most elegant--solution. Can he at least find some comfort in her knowing?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
The way I've constructed the story, she did have enough information to work it out--in fact, I didn't need to make sure she knew very much beyond what she already should have known from canon. I think she'd be capable of seeing the lie of the land.Thanks for the review!
Wow! So much here! And all of it to do with Severus, quite delicious.It makes sense that he would have killed his father--that's the most interesting explanation I've heard for his choice to become a Death Eater: they were the only ones who would have him after such a tragedy.And it was nice to see him touched by Davis' project. He needs to remember how much esteem his Slytherins have for him, especially in these dark days.You keep driving home so effectively the damnable place he's in and the bleak future ahead. It makes sense that he would have known about the Elder Wand, and that he would have understood so well how alone he would be after killing Albus.Now to find out what he needs to tell Hermione....
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very, very much! The question of why or how Severus joined the Death Eaters is one that everyone has to hurdle sooner or later. Given his place and his treatment from others at the time, I just can't see how he would have done anything else, really--he would have been so happy for the acceptance. Hogwarts, well, Dumbledore at least, really failed the Slytherin students.Thanks again for the review.
Utterly fascinating!I must commend you throughout all of this for making the magical, theoretical, and academic components ring so true. I know nothing of mathematics (I can barely add without a calculator and a lot of scrap paper!), but your Arithmancy sounds so plausible that I buy it completely. And all the details you've supplied of the lessons that have been going on all make it sound quite realtistic (magically, of course!). What else, I wonder, does Albus need to tell Severus, and what does Severus need to tell Hermione (besides "You have to let Harry die in order to allow him to live, and, oh, by the way, I rather fancy you" that is)?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! I was a big maths geek when I was in high school--with a particular love for calculus and imaginary numbers. Given how well imaginary numbers work in Muggle mathmatics, the possibilities for magical mathematics seem boundless!! :)Thanks again for the review.
Oh, dear lord, bless her for the extreme act of courage it took to come down to his office, and bless him for the equal leap it took to offer one of the best apologies I've ever had the pleasure of reading.And I'm terribly glad it was only McLaggen--she could've handled him eventually, but it was good that Severus was there to lend a hand and deduct points from the great bully. I think it might've also helped him decide later to allow her to stay long enough in his office to have it out with him.This chapter makes me very hopeful!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm glad that you liked the apology! :)Hermione's got the courage she needs, when she needs it. That's her special Gryffindor flair.She would have handled McLaggen eventually--and I couldn't bear to write her as a complete damsel in distress.Yay for hope! Thanks for the review.
ARE WE INTERESTED?!?! ARE YOU KIDDING?!?!?! IT CAN'T BE ABOUT TO END?!?!! I was desperately afraid that this was a WIP, but YES, PLEASE, YOU ABSOLUTELY MUST CONTINUE IT!!! (Okay, I'll stop yelling now. I think I've made my point.) Will now go on and read the FINAL CHAPTER. Arghh!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
LOL. Your point is coming accross loud and clear, I promise! :) Thank you for the enthusiasm!The final chapter is pretty satisfying, I think--even if I do say so myself!! :)Thanks for all of your reviews.
Oh, hell, who's got her?! Evil cliffie! No time to review, must rush off and see what's next!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ha ha ha. Oh, yes. My first cliffhanger! What sweet memories . . .
Hermione, please use that very big brain of yours and actually listen--perhaps you can figure out why he's behaving like a jealous, self-pitying prat. (One of you needs to be thinking clearly in all of this.)Love the fact that Dumbledore's horrifying revelation to Severus about Harry's fate is delivered while he's rather drunk. Gives me just a tiny bit more pity for Albus. And I also love the idea of Severus hearing it while he's more focused on his own jumbled emotions.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hmm, perhaps he's acting like a jealous, self-pitying prat because he's a . . . um . . . jealous, self-pitying prat?? *smirksCan Hermione's year get any worse??Dumbledore's a manipulative old man. He must have know Severus would see through him were he sober.Thanks for the review!
I think we all wish we had mothers who understood the concept of a fuckbuddy--if not the frankness to insist on having a discussion about such things!Hermione is discovering the complications of the delicate dance of her position.I'm curious to see how her reunion with Severus goes, though I expect they are both convinced they have their feelings well in hand. (At least Hermione has had some nice distractions for her holiday treat!)
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I thought Hermione deserved a nice Christmas present after Ron had been such an arsehole all semester. :)And yes, the embarassing forthrightness of liberal mothers!! :) I'm sure she'll be more appreciative once she gets a bit older!Thanks, again.
He took a vindictive pleasure in secretly being a better man than the so-called nice, friendly people around him.That's an amazing insigh and obviously one of the reasons your portrayal of Severus is so spot-on.Poor Severus, seeing the echoes of the tragedy of his past, feeling he can't even want Hermione, and watching her with Krum, who isn't a bad guy (especially in this portrait--kind of thick in social situations, but fundamentally decent), but who isn't him.(Nice touch with the Italian portrait speaking Italian, by the way.)This continues to be fascinating!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ma certo che i ritratti italiani parlono italiano!! :)I'm thrilled that you're enjoying my characterisation of Severus. I think he's so fascinating! Thanks for the lovely review.
And I just added it, too. This is really an accomplished, fascinating piece.The scene in the Room of Requirement was especially terrific.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, and thank you! She's noticing an awful lot about him. :)
I completely buy this picture of the staff at play.I love Severus' interrogation of Hermione about Krum; found out more than he bargained for, I think, but she at least got some information in return.You are doing an amazing job of drawing a truly believable portrait of everyone, but most especially of Severus. This is a competent, complex, interesting, intelligent man who knows very clearly what he's doing. I love it.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I really like Severus--he's so nice and complicated. :) And he needs some downtime with his gay friends, too!!Thanks for the thoughtful review, it--indeed all of them--mean a lot to me.
And they continue to learn a little about one another. Such a shame that Ron can be such an idiot. This was in an earlier chapter, but it still applies all too well:"I always assumed that was because they were, well . . .” “Imbeciles?” he suggested smoothly, one eyebrow raised.Made me laugh. And now I'd sad for Hermione. Because he's right.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ron gave her a really hard time that year, silly sod. But at least Snape is providing some comfort at this point! :) Plus, as you now know, I'm sending her a Christmas present!!
Complexities and fascinations! Dumbeldore's reaction is quite intriguing, considering his own history (does Severus know about Arianna? probably not). You continue to weave an entirely new, interesting tale into the cloth of canon, and I continue to find it a wonderful read.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm assuming that Severus didn't yet know about Ariana; though eventually he will learn.I'm glad that there's enough new stuff that the story isn't boring! Thanks for the review!