Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
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When Professor Snape heals Hermione's injuries after the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, they are both surprised by what they learn. The two must work together to help Harry defeat Lord Voldemort.
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Member Since 2009 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 339 | 13 Reviews Written | 1,004 Review Responses
age : 34
sex : female
hometown : melbourne, australia
lives : brooklyn, usa
likes : HGSS, the holes in canon that make fanfiction fun, long walks on the beach
note regarding the phoenix trilogy : I am working on it! RL events are slowing me down, but I hope to be back posting sometime over summer (2010). Wish me luck . . .
Reviews for Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
An interesting beginning, curious to see where you will take the story.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. The second chapter is coming soon.
Very interesting beginning! Looking forward to more.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! More is on the way . . .
Excellent start - I like the way you've fitted your story around canon events and you write Snape particularly well. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! I love writing Snape, he's so much fun when he's grumpy.
I am very excited to see what you might have up next. This concept is fascinating. The romance angle is lovely, but also the potentional for unique magical situations is enormous. Snape was a most lovely balance of snark and sweetness. 
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thanks! I like my Snape with quite a bite to him . . . ;)
That was awesome!! Great visual images that you invoked for me as a reader! You had a point and you made it... while not making it to long or to short. It was interesting and the end result has made me bookmark it so I can follow the next chapter. Well done!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! The second chapter is in the queue, so you shouldn't have too long to wait.
Interesting start, I expect you to play with the 'scar'. Will this turn into romance at all?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
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Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Of course! It'll be a fair while, though . . . I hope you can wait that long ;)
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
If it's concering them two, then of course!
This was beautifully written, your story captivated me from the very beginning. You made a great plot out of Hermioned scar, and the line "you are a phoenix" totally won me over. Yup, I am very, very sure that I will have a great time following this story!!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm delighted that you liked it.
you are a very talented writer, the story is intriguing. I like Hermione and Snape are in character with a twist. Looking forward to follow your plot.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! I'm glad that you like the characterisations. The second chapter should be up fairly soon.
Very creative. I especially liked the exchanges between Snape and Hermione, very much in chracter and yet a side of Snape we only get to see in fanfic. Inventive idea - the curse's effects is different because of another spell's infuence and of course the idea of Severus Snape singing! Oh, I'd have love to hear that! I bet he did sound like a phoenix! Wonder what he really thought of that?
Are you going to have another chapter? I hope so.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! Of course we never see the less-than-evil side of Snape in canon -- it would never have done to resolve the tricky issue of his loyalty until he was lying on the floor and bleeding to death.The second chapter is already in the queue . . . I hope you like it.
Very interesting:) Can't wait to see more to understand why she's calling him a Phoenix :):)
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! Eventually, everything will be clear -- I hope you'll stay along for the ride.
This is a brilliant start! I hope you will consider posting more soon!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Chapter two is already in the queue, never fear! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
An Amazing story well done!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm so glad that you think so. Thanks!
I am looking forward to seeing where this adventure takes us!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
On a long and winding road . . . ;)
Wow - promising start - and very beautifully written.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much!
wow! this is an awesome begining. i can't wait to see how this will progress! thanks so much
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hey, thanks! I appreciate your review. This is my first fanfic, so I was really nervous about posting it.
That's got to be the best apology in the history of literature. For that alone this fiction deserves immortality.