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Harry and His New Family

1: Chapter 1 - On the Train

2: Chapter 2 – No Sleep Found

3: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation

4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

5: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One

6: Chapter 6 – The Examination, Part Two

7: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape

8: Chapter 8 – Best Friends

9: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus

10: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown

11: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress

12: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home

13: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I

14: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II

15: Chapter 15 – Paul

16: Chapter 16 – Problems Again

17: Chapter 17 - Breakfast

18: Chapter 18 - James

19: Chapter 19 - Decorating

20: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione

21: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept

22: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit

23: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron

24: Chapter 24 – The Shopping

25: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship

26: Chapter 26 – Talking with James

27: Chapter 27 - The Twins

28: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble

29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment

30: Chapter 30 - Reasons

31: Chapter 31 - Punishment

32: Chapter 32 - Albus vs. Severus

Harry and His New Family

grugster

178 Reviews   |   178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 69 Favorites )

Alternate Universe General Psychological Friendship Hogwarts Castle 66,011 Words 32 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Fred Weasley George Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Poppy Pomfrey Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Minerva McGonagall Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Remus Lupin Draco Malfoy

Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and caring family to cope with.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - On the Train

Chapter 2: Chapter 2 – No Sleep Found

Chapter 3: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation

Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

Chapter 5: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One

Chapter 6: Chapter 6 – The Examination, Part Two

Chapter 7: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape

Chapter 8: Chapter 8 – Best Friends

Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus

Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown

Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress

Chapter 12: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home

Chapter 13: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I

Chapter 14: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II

Chapter 15: Chapter 15 – Paul

Chapter 16: Chapter 16 – Problems Again

Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Breakfast

Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - James

Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Decorating

Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione

Chapter 21: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept

Chapter 22: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit

Chapter 23: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron

Chapter 24: Chapter 24 – The Shopping

Chapter 25: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship

Chapter 26: Chapter 26 – Talking with James

Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Twins

Chapter 28: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble

Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment

Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Reasons

Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Punishment

Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Albus vs. Severus


About grugster

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grugster

Member Since 2005  |  6 Stories  |  Favorited by 17  |  7 Reviews Written  |  472 Review Responses


Hi,


I absolutly love fanfiction but I never thought I would write one myself. But when Healer Pomfrey put up a contest I decided to write a stroy for it! The result was my story "Everything will be okay soon" !

I'm a social worker in a children shelter for abused, hard to educate and/or criminal girls.


Bye Sunny

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Reviews for Harry and His New Family

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10/10

MollysSister

Now I am tired too! Harry dontca know yawning is contagious!!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

:D

0/10

MollysSister

Severus married the bosses daughter? That was gutsy!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I had to look in my dictionary to know what gutsy means. So I've learned something new. :D Thank you for your review!

10/10

MollysSister

Harry had never been to a doctor? The depths of his abuse continue to apall me. Looking forward to meeting Ivy!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Do you think the Dursleys would have spend any money on it or even would care? Thank you for your review!

10/10

MollysSister

James can discover all that just by touch? Very cool

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Isn't he wonderful? I wish my doctor would have abilities like this. Thank you for your review!

0/10

MollysSister

seems like Harry is int the midst of a full blown panic attack!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Very close to it.

0/10

MollysSister

Well that would be the one thing Vernon could hold over Harry isnt it? To refuse to let him go back to Hogwarts. Can something very bad happen to Vernon? I think we need some revenge here!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Oh, yes many of you wished for revenge, but I don't believe in the an eye for an eye tactic. The Dursleys will have their punishment, but I won't let Severus loose at them. :) Thank you for your review!

0/10

MollysSister

Harry is going to collapse soon! I wonder is he being affected by post traumatic stress disorder?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

100 points for you. Thank you for your review!

10/10

MollysSister

Harry must be terribly scared from all that abuse. Poor thing.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you for your review!

0/10

kimjo2

lovely update.  it's good to see hermione and ron so supportive.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

debjunk

Poor kid.  At least he's getting help.  I can see how he wouldn't want anyone to know.  The fear of being thrown out of school is probably overwhelming for him.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you for your review!

10/10

Muggline

OMG, but this is awful! I am very much looking forward to a little visit that Snape will (hopefully) pay to Privet Drive in some later chapter...

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Oh, I have to disappoint you. Severus won't see the Dursleys. I fear he wouldn't restrain himself and than he couldn't become Harry guardian. Thanks for your review!

0/10

Maggie

It wasn't Vernon was it?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Yes, it was.

0/10

carley9

Very good so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I'm very glad you like it! Thanks for your review!

9/10

sinbad

Poor Harry, having to give up Quidditch for a few months.  All well, James is right, he might fall off the broom.  I'm surprised Harry didn't suggest a sticking charm...

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thanks for your review!

10/10

snitchette

I'm so aching aching for Harry. Not only is he hurt physically but also mentally, and that will be the worst to overcome I fear. How can I help him, please tell me.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I'm very glad you like it! And Harry will get help now, so don't worry!  Thanks for your review!

0/10

kimjo2

poor harry.  i think you have demonstrated an aspect of the abused victemology very well.  i look forward to the next chapter.  thanks so much

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

My job background makes it easy for me to write stuff like this! I'm very glad you like it! Thanks for your review!

10/10

huanita

I am really liking this story!!! and i am not much of a non sSeverus/Hermione shipper.  i hope that the next chapter is comming soon, and that you will be able to make them longer.  thanks for writing!!!! Huanita

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Snapes wife has many similarity with Hermione in many SS/HG fanfictions.You will see. I'm very glad you like it! Thanks for your review!

0/10

rhiannon113

Fortunately, this will be the worst part for Harry, and then it will get much better. Great job depicting the fear and lack of trust that deveops in abused children. It's heart-breakingly accurate.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

My job background makes it easy for me to write stuff like this. I write the most parts out of experience.I'm very glad you like it! Thanks for your review!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Oh my goodness.  I know I haven't reviewed every chapter, but I want you to know that you have me hooked  Please update soon and I really look forward to the next chapter.  I am adding this to my favorite stories right now.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Interesting start.  

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad he is getting used to this new familly and beginnig to consider them his family. I'm also very glad for the quick update. Keep it that way as much as you can, please.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

rhiannon113

Poor Harry. The perspective of the abused is very compelling. If he'd only ask for help, but that's way it always is, isn't it? I can't wait until Harry is happy again. But it's shaping up to be a very interesting journey along the way.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

If it would be so easy to speak about abuse, it would be so much easier to help these victims.Thanks for your review! I have problems to get my chapters through the validation system. Even with two betas! Therefore it needs a lot of time to update! :(

0/10

debjunk

So sad that Harry is treated so horribly.  I liked your new, improved final battle.  And the fact that it's early gives them all an opportunity to live without fear.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

This is very tantalizing. Sometimes I try to read too much stories t the same time. But I'll always have room for good stories like yours.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your kind words!

0/10

Madame DeFarge

i dont how how long ago you wrote this excellent story but for pity's sake, finish it!!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I finished it a long time ago and I even wrote a sequel. But I stopped submitting it here, because even with 3 betas I always had problems to be accepted here. If you want to read it you need to go to fanfiction(dot)net.

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