Chapter 31 - Punishment
Chapter 31 of 32
grugsterHarry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and a caring family to cope with.
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Chapter 31 - Punishment
Both boys shrunk into their chairs.
“First, your separate punishments. Harry, you are grounded for the next week. That means you will be returning to the quarters as soon as classes are over. No visits from your friends until next Friday.”
Harry was shocked but didn’t dare to say anything. At least he could see his friends in classes.
“Draco, as I already told you, you will clean the Slytherin’s bathroom for the next week, and you will write your mother a letter about what happened.”
Draco blushed and nodded.
“Now to your shared punishment. You will both help Hagrid to de-gnome the garden on Sunday morning. If you don’t work together and do your work well, that will be repeated until you two learn to work together. Is that clear?”
Both boys nodded eagerly. All their hopes that this conversation was over now were destroyed when Severus spoke again. “In addition, you two will write an essay about what you have done wrong, what you could have done instead, and how you can avoid situations like this in future. And I don’t want to read ‘We will try to get out of the way of the other.’ Is that clear, too?”
Again, both boys nodded.
“You will write your essays together here in the library on Sunday afternoon. I want to see at least five feet from each of you. You will start at one o’clock and will work on it until at least five o’clock. If you need more time, you will just stay longer. I don’t want to hear about any complaints to your mothers or whomever. If I hear of something like that, you can be sure I will find another punishment for you in addition to the others. Clear?”
“Yes, sir,” both boys answered quickly.
“Good!” Severus leaned back in his chair. He was satisfied with how this conversation had turned out. “Draco, you can go. Write the letter to your mother today. I will wait to contact her until tomorrow.“
“Yes, sir,” Draco said as he stood up. He looked uncertainly at Harry and then went over to Severus and hugged him.
Harry couldn’t stop himself from feeling jealous. He knew it was stupid, but he also wished he could hug Severus now. It would make the conversation and punishment stuff less embarrassing, and he would feel much better because if Severus hugged him back, he knew he would be forgiven.
Draco left the room, and Harry started to feel even more unsure. He looked down at his hands again. What else should he do? He couldn’t just go over and hug Severus. He squeaked when his chair was suddenly pulled closer to Severus and turned so that Harry had to face his adoptive father. “So, what’s going on in that head now?” Severus asked in a kind tone and ruffled Harry’s hair.
Hearing that Severus’ voice wasn’t strict anymore, Harry looked up. “Are you still angry with me?”
“I’m proud of both of you that you have spoken so openly. No, I’m not angry with you. I hope you have learned something from this, and I also expect you to serve your punishment properly.”
“I will,” Harry said, nodding frantically.
“Then you are forgiven, Harry,” Severus said in his friendly voice again.
Harry bit his bottom lip and considered what to do. Finally, he took all his courage and threw himself at Severus and hugged him.
Severus wasn’t surprised. He had seen Harry’s expression when Draco had hugged him, and he had hoped that Harry would find the courage to do what he wanted to. Severus shifted Harry onto his lap, and Harry leaned against his chest, sighing.
“Severus?” Harry asked cautiously.
“Yes, Harry?”
“What about tomorrow? Albus, Minerva and the twins wanted to go to Hogsmeade with me. Am I still allowed? I mean because of the grounding.”
“Normally, I would say no, but the twins are already so very excited about it, and Albus and Minerva also wanted to spend some time with you. So if they still want to take you with them, you can go.”
“What about Ivy?”
“What about her?” Severus asked, confused.
“Will she also give me a punishment?”
Severus chuckled. “No, of course all that I told you was arranged with her in advance. We always decide together about everything that concerns our children. She just didn’t take part in this conversation because of Draco. She feared it would be too awkward for him.”
“Oh,” Harry said and snuggled closer.
“And Albus and Minerva?”
“Are grandparents in this case and will not interfere in our decision about punishment. But of course, they could decide that they don’t want to go to Hogsmeade after this.”
Harry groaned miserably.
Severus chuckled again. “You just have to ask them.”
Finally realizing that he was still sitting on Severus' lap, Harry blushed and stood up.
“Please, sit down again. I would still like to speak with you about something else.” Severus gestured to Harry’s chair.
When Harry sat down again, Severus said, “On Monday, you will only attend the first four classes. Then you will meet James in the hospital wing for a check-up, and we will go to the Ministry to sign the adoption papers… or have you changed your mind?”
“No, I would still like the adoption,” Harry said eagerly.
“We also have to name your godparents then, Harry. Alastor and Poppy are the godparents of Lysander and Eathan and would like to be yours as well. So is that okay with you?”
“Sure.” He had always wondered how it would be to have a godfather or godmother. Now he would have both. Sirius had been killed before he could even get to know him, after all.
“Then that is settled,” Severus said and smiled. “So, ready to face the rest of the family again?”
Harry sighed. “Okay.”
When they entered the living room, it was even more crowded than before. The twins were looking at Harry with scared expressions. “Are we not going to Hogsmeade tomorrow?”
Harry quickly gazed at Albus and Minerva and then looked down at the sad faces of the twins. “I don’t know. I did something very stupid, and maybe your grandparents don’t want to take me with you this time.”
“Why don’t you three go playing for a while so that we adults can decide what we will do?” Albus asked.
“Okay,” Harry said sadly and guided the twins in the direction of their room. Before they reached the stairs, he turned and said, “I just want to say again that I’m sorry. Really! Whatever you decide, it will be okay with me.” With that he turned and left his new parents, grandparents and godparents to what they wanted to speak about.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Harry and His New Family
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Please post more! i have become obsessed!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.
Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)
Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction. it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.
Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)
Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction. it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!
Loving this story so far. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more.
I trully wonder what punishment Severus will think appropriate for the two. I hope it will involve the two of them together so maybe they can start to get along better.
hehe awesome chapter....hehe i already read it all at fanfiction! your stories are soo awesome! hehe please update all your stories soon! in Ashwinder, PP, and FF! hehe thanks "Cheers"
awesome update. i really like the way this story is written. can't wait for more
*sigh* it's going to take time. i hope maybe he and draco can become friends...draco needs real friends. great update. thanks and smoochies
aww, come on....please? rly i don't know how changed ur fics are in ff.net but I'm reading over there....and when u upload i'll read over here to see the differences... so....update for your poor fans, eh? thx
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
The next chapter is in the queue already. So I hope it will be up in a few days.Thanks for your review!
I think I'm about to keel over and die right now. I hate cliffhangers. This is an awesome story, please update as soon as you have time. Please. Siriusly. :) "Cheers",
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Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I hate all the draco's of the world.I always looking forward to your story.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Bad author who mistreats her poor reasdrs with evil cliffies *stick out tongue*
BTW I was wondering if you're planning to update your other story about little Severus?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I would love to update "A better childhood" but I can't find a beta. :( If you know someone who could help me or if you would help me, it would be great. Otherwise you need to read the not so perfectly edited version on fanfiction(dot)net. There is even a sequal up for it. Thank you very, very much for your review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I'm awful at grammar and punctuation but I help with the missing words and such. Try asking SouthernWitch. She's very kind and a wonderful beta. Now I will check FFnet becauseI miss that little fellow a great deal.
Please finish this story I love it it is very compelling could not stop reading read it in 3 hours.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
This story already is finished, just not on this site because my chapters need a lot of editing to make them acceptable for this site. So no worries, it is finished and if my beta doesn't leave me, it will be uploaded here as long as I get feedback.Thank you very much for your review!
Same old Draco, kicking someone when they are already down. I hope Severus will be wise enough not to believe Draco's version of events. Good chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
It's not a bad little story. But you don't update fast enough to suit me. ^_^
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, it's hard to make my chapters to be accepted here. That's why the updates take so long. :( Sorry. Thank you very much for your review!
Don't be depressed! I thought your Weasley twins were rather over the top (honestly? Calling his dead mother 'hot?' tasteless) but overall helpful. After all, if the wild Weasleys get along with Snape, surely Harry can. As for Draco, I'm sure Severus will be able to figure out what happened. Even if Draco gave him the best story ever told, Harry's complete freakout would tell a rather more convincing version.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, I thought long about leaving them be like I wrote them, but then I decided it would be okay. Thank you very much for your review!
I am about to get a f*cking heart attack right now. Your story is so friggin' awesome! I totally loff it. :) Awesome chapter. Hope you have another up soon. :) "Cheers",
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
And I love your review! :) Thank you for it! This story is already finished, but only on fanfiction(dot)net. It costs me a lot of efford and betas to make the chapters grammatically correct, so they will be accepted here. It surely will take me years to finish it here on this site. I'm glad you and some others are patient enough!Sunny
I'll try again. This one person that he doesn't want to speak with must be *drumble sound* Draco maybe? What do you think? And I think th etwins may be too right. That's easy to get Sev on your side once you've got past the bat persona. I suite like this Severus very much. He seems really approachable.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Well guessed! :)Thank you very much for your review!
I wonder who is at the door. James is a great therapist and Harry seems to be making progress. Interaction between Snape and the twins was funny. Good chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I really like Jame. He seems to be of great help for Harry. As for the person knocking at the door, I'd guess it's maybe Ginny. Am I close?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
No, not Ginny. :) But with red hair too! Thank you very much for your review!
ron is such a clueless prat! loved the interaction between sev and harry. great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
That's so nice to see Harry opening up and relatively relaxed. Also thanks for the longer chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
The later chapters will be much longer then my first ones. My writing style changed as well. The story has 84 chapters!Thank you very much for your review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
84!! WOW !! I long to read them all.
altho i know severus would hate to be called sweet, that was a very sweet thing he did. lovely story. can't wait for the trip to diagon alley! thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
It's hard for Harry to reconcile the previous severus with this one. I'm sure with time things will go better.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
glad you updated, you're take on the paternal Severus/Harry is new, especially with Harry's issues. thanks for the posting
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
So, I'm pretty sure friendlily isn't a word, but really I'd never have known that English is your second (or third, or fourth) language. Either you have an exceptional Beta or you're crazy good at this. Heck, even native speakers need a good beta or two to keep their punctuation in line. Some of your sentences are a bit short or choppy, but aside from one sentence fragment, "Then the twisted cruel smirk as he raised his arm," you're scott-free. And what's more, I'm hooked. Good writing! And may I ask, what IS your first language?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
German is my first language, and I have two VERY GOOD betas for this story!!! I hate that I only can write those short sentences. I try very hard to be better, but until now I fail. :( I hope that one day that will change. My writing style has changed a lot over the last month. I finished this story a week ago with 84 chapters. If you don't loose interest in the story after the first chapter, I promise the second half of the fic will be much better.I hope you will like the rest of the story as well.Sunny