Chapter 8 – Best Friends
Chapter 8 of 32
grugsterHarry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and caring family to cope with.
ReviewedChapter 8 – Best Friends
Only fifteen minutes later, his two worried-looking friends stumbled into the hospital wing.
“Harry, what happened?” Ron was already babbling, but stopped abruptly when he saw Professor Dumbledore-Snape stand up from the bed. “Oh. Hello, Professor.”
“Hello to you two as well,” she said cheerfully, smiling warmly at them. “I will give you three a little more privacy and sit down over there at the table, okay?” It was more of a statement than a question, but Harry nevertheless nodded and smiled at her.
Ron looked bewilderedly after his professor when she passed him. He turned back to Harry and asked, “Why is she here?”
“Merlin, Ron, stop bombarding him with questions. He'll tell us when you shut up, right, Harry?” Hermione said and came nearer to the bed.
Ron grimaced behind her and rolled his eyes, but then he also moved closer to the bed.
Harry sighed and looked uncertainly over at his professor. She was reading a magazine and at least seemed not to be interested in anything that the three teenagers were doing. How shall I begin? he thought, while looking uncertainly at his two best friends.
“It’s not so easy to tell you,” Harry said sadly and looked down at his hands.
“Oh, Harry, you know you can tell us everything. We’re your best friends,” Hermione said enthusiastically and sat down beside Harry.
Ron, meanwhile, sat down on the bed at Harry’s feet.
“I know, but it’s still very hard... and embarrassing,” Harry said, still looking at his hands.
Hermione and Ron didn’t say anything and just waited for Harry to go on.
Harry sighed and looked up. “I lied to you in the train and in my letters. My uncle didn’t leave me alone this summer. It was really bad.”
Hermione grabbed his hand, and Ron was looking at him with a sympathetic expression on his face.
“I was wearing a Glamour Charm in your presence. In reality, I looked really bad.”
“You still look really bad, Harry,” Hermione said nonchalantly.
Harry felt his face with his hands, but couldn’t find anything. “I haven’t looked in a mirror since Madam Pomfrey took the spell from me. But James, er Healer Smith, has healed almost all my wounds. I feel much better now.”
“You look pale and sick. And you’ve big bags under your eyes, Harry.”
“Yes, and that’s exactly the reason why he is only allowed a short visit, Ms. Granger.”
Hermione and Ron jumped from the bed in shock. They had been so engrossed in what Harry was telling them that they didn’t notice Madam Pomfrey coming in.
“Of course, Madam Pomfrey,” Hermione said. “We haven’t been here for long.”
Hermione and Ron’s gaze followed the nurse while she approached Harry to cast several diagnostic spells on him.
“Mr. Potter still needs rest. You can visit him later,” Madam Pomfrey said sternly.
Harry began to protest, “But I haven’t told them the most important part, Madam Pomfrey, please, only–”
“No, Harry, you have to eat something, and then you will sleep a while,” Madam Pomfrey said sternly.
“But the Professor said that the Headmaster will come to speak with me. What if I’m asleep then?” Seeing that all this didn’t seem to interest her, he added stubbornly, “And I’m not tired at all.”
“When you start to push out your bottom lip and sulk, I swear I will take a picture of it and show it to you every time you say that you are too old to be fussed over,” Madam Pomfrey said threateningly.
Harry looked for help to his professor, who had come over to the foot of the bed.
“You had better do what she says, Harry. I’m sure you won’t miss the Headmaster when he comes to visit you,” she said calmingly.
He sighed and reluctantly said, “Okay.”
“Come on, you two, I will accompany you to your dormitories,” the professor said and started to push the teenagers in the direction of the door.
Ron ducked under her arm. “I totally forgot. Here, Harry.” He handed the photo of Harry’s parents to Harry, and then he quickly went back to the professor and Hermione.
“I will come and visit you later, Harry,” the professor said over her shoulder while she led the teenagers out of the infirmary.
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Under the watchful eyes of Madam Pomfrey, Harry ate more than he would have without her prodding. He felt so full that it almost hurt. He felt very exhausted and was now glad that he could sleep a while.
“But you will wake me when the Headmaster comes to visit me, Madam Pomfrey, won’t you?” Harry looked pleadingly at the nurse.
“You will be awake when he comes to visit you, Harry. He won’t be back until late afternoon,” Madam Pomfrey explained while tucking the already drowsy teen in the bed.
After Harry gulped down a fever reducer and a Dreamless Sleep potion, he fell asleep the moment his head hit the pillow.
“Not tired at all, hmm?” Poppy said, smiling. She brushed the loose wisps of hair out of his face and softly said, “Sleep well, child.”
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Latest 25 Reviews for Harry and His New Family
178 Reviews | 5.49/10 Average
Please post more! i have become obsessed!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.
Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)
Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction. it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.
Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)
Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction. it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!
Loving this story so far. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more.
I trully wonder what punishment Severus will think appropriate for the two. I hope it will involve the two of them together so maybe they can start to get along better.
hehe awesome chapter....hehe i already read it all at fanfiction! your stories are soo awesome! hehe please update all your stories soon! in Ashwinder, PP, and FF! hehe thanks "Cheers"
awesome update. i really like the way this story is written. can't wait for more
*sigh* it's going to take time. i hope maybe he and draco can become friends...draco needs real friends. great update. thanks and smoochies
aww, come on....please? rly i don't know how changed ur fics are in ff.net but I'm reading over there....and when u upload i'll read over here to see the differences... so....update for your poor fans, eh? thx
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
The next chapter is in the queue already. So I hope it will be up in a few days.Thanks for your review!
I think I'm about to keel over and die right now. I hate cliffhangers. This is an awesome story, please update as soon as you have time. Please. Siriusly. :) "Cheers",
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I hate all the draco's of the world.I always looking forward to your story.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Bad author who mistreats her poor reasdrs with evil cliffies *stick out tongue*
BTW I was wondering if you're planning to update your other story about little Severus?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I would love to update "A better childhood" but I can't find a beta. :( If you know someone who could help me or if you would help me, it would be great. Otherwise you need to read the not so perfectly edited version on fanfiction(dot)net. There is even a sequal up for it. Thank you very, very much for your review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I'm awful at grammar and punctuation but I help with the missing words and such. Try asking SouthernWitch. She's very kind and a wonderful beta. Now I will check FFnet becauseI miss that little fellow a great deal.
Please finish this story I love it it is very compelling could not stop reading read it in 3 hours.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
This story already is finished, just not on this site because my chapters need a lot of editing to make them acceptable for this site. So no worries, it is finished and if my beta doesn't leave me, it will be uploaded here as long as I get feedback.Thank you very much for your review!
Same old Draco, kicking someone when they are already down. I hope Severus will be wise enough not to believe Draco's version of events. Good chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
It's not a bad little story. But you don't update fast enough to suit me. ^_^
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, it's hard to make my chapters to be accepted here. That's why the updates take so long. :( Sorry. Thank you very much for your review!
Don't be depressed! I thought your Weasley twins were rather over the top (honestly? Calling his dead mother 'hot?' tasteless) but overall helpful. After all, if the wild Weasleys get along with Snape, surely Harry can. As for Draco, I'm sure Severus will be able to figure out what happened. Even if Draco gave him the best story ever told, Harry's complete freakout would tell a rather more convincing version.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, I thought long about leaving them be like I wrote them, but then I decided it would be okay. Thank you very much for your review!
I am about to get a f*cking heart attack right now. Your story is so friggin' awesome! I totally loff it. :) Awesome chapter. Hope you have another up soon. :) "Cheers",
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
And I love your review! :) Thank you for it! This story is already finished, but only on fanfiction(dot)net. It costs me a lot of efford and betas to make the chapters grammatically correct, so they will be accepted here. It surely will take me years to finish it here on this site. I'm glad you and some others are patient enough!Sunny
I'll try again. This one person that he doesn't want to speak with must be *drumble sound* Draco maybe? What do you think? And I think th etwins may be too right. That's easy to get Sev on your side once you've got past the bat persona. I suite like this Severus very much. He seems really approachable.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Well guessed! :)Thank you very much for your review!
I wonder who is at the door. James is a great therapist and Harry seems to be making progress. Interaction between Snape and the twins was funny. Good chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I really like Jame. He seems to be of great help for Harry. As for the person knocking at the door, I'd guess it's maybe Ginny. Am I close?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
No, not Ginny. :) But with red hair too! Thank you very much for your review!
ron is such a clueless prat! loved the interaction between sev and harry. great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
That's so nice to see Harry opening up and relatively relaxed. Also thanks for the longer chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
The later chapters will be much longer then my first ones. My writing style changed as well. The story has 84 chapters!Thank you very much for your review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
84!! WOW !! I long to read them all.
altho i know severus would hate to be called sweet, that was a very sweet thing he did. lovely story. can't wait for the trip to diagon alley! thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
It's hard for Harry to reconcile the previous severus with this one. I'm sure with time things will go better.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
glad you updated, you're take on the paternal Severus/Harry is new, especially with Harry's issues. thanks for the posting
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
So, I'm pretty sure friendlily isn't a word, but really I'd never have known that English is your second (or third, or fourth) language. Either you have an exceptional Beta or you're crazy good at this. Heck, even native speakers need a good beta or two to keep their punctuation in line. Some of your sentences are a bit short or choppy, but aside from one sentence fragment, "Then the twisted cruel smirk as he raised his arm," you're scott-free. And what's more, I'm hooked. Good writing! And may I ask, what IS your first language?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
German is my first language, and I have two VERY GOOD betas for this story!!! I hate that I only can write those short sentences. I try very hard to be better, but until now I fail. :( I hope that one day that will change. My writing style has changed a lot over the last month. I finished this story a week ago with 84 chapters. If you don't loose interest in the story after the first chapter, I promise the second half of the fic will be much better.I hope you will like the rest of the story as well.Sunny