Chapter 27 - The Twins
Chapter 27 of 32
grugsterHarry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and a caring family to cope with.
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Thanks a lot to my beta-readers, Orodruin and AmyLouise, for correcting my mistakes.
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters belong to J.K. Rowling, and I am not earning anything by writing this story.
Chapter 27 - The Twins
Harry stopped in front of the door and listened, stunned, to what it was announcing. He had been waiting for Hermione and Ron, but that wasn't what the door announced.
“Mr. Fred Weasley and Mr. George Weasley ask to be let in,” the door stated a second time when Harry only stood open-mouthed in front of it.
Harry had totally forgotten about the Weasley twins. The first day at Hogwarts, he had been so disappointed that they had spoken so little with him, and then he had forgotten them during all the new things happening here. “Ehm...open up,” Harry ordered the door.
“Happy to...” Fred began.
“See us, Harry?” George ended.
“Ehm... yeah,” Harry said, still a little stunned.
“Hmm, Fred, it seems our Potions partner is not very happy to see us.”
“Yeah, it seems so.” George rounded Harry. “But why?”
“Er... I have been a little distracted lately, you know, and I just didn’t think that you would show up,” Harry tried to explain.
“But we have, right?” Fred asked.
“So, will you show us around?” George asked while already going further into the quarters and looking around with interest.
“I'm not sure if that is such a good idea. I’ll go and tell Severus that you’re here,” Harry said, already feeling uneasy with the twins, who seemed to be very relaxed around here—too relaxed.
“Oh, it’s Severus now? So when will we be able to use his lab? Have you already nagged him about it?” George asked and threw his arm around Harry's shoulders.
“Please don't speak so loud, or I will be in trouble,” Harry said, getting more and more nervous.
“Oh, come on, old Snapey won't hear us,” Fred said, coming over to Harry after inspecting the room.
“Old Snapey has already heard enough.” Severus' baritone was to be heard while he came down the stairs. “And old Snapey wants to talk with you two cretins before you speak with Harry.” Severus looked warningly at the Weasley twins and then turned to Harry. “And you, young man, still have company in your room, haven't you?”
“Yes,” Harry said in a small voice.
“Then don't make James wait. I will send these two to your room when I'm through with them,” Severus said and gestured in the direction of Harry's room.
Harry gulped and looked worriedly at the twins. To Harry's surprise they didn't look worried or scared. They just grinned at him. “We’ll see you later, Harry.”
“'Kay.” With that Harry went back to his room and James.
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James had left a few minutes ago, and Harry had dragged his Potions journal out of his trunk. He flipped through the last few sheets to distract himself. Fred and George had been with Severus for over fifteen minutes now. What the hell is he doing with them?
He jumped when the twins came in without knocking. “So, what are you doing?” It was George who spoke and threw himself beside Harry on the bed.
“The shrink’s gone already?” Fred asked.
Harry blushed. What they said reminded him that everyone knew about his problems. “I would prefer if you wouldn't call Healer Smith that. And if I come back to classes again, please don't shout around that I have to speak with a Healer.”
“Why? The whole school already knows,” George said as he propped himself up on his elbows.
Seeing Harry's shocked face, Fred added, “Calm down, Harry. Most were shocked that you didn't tell them, and they feel so guilty that they won't ever bring it up to you. And the Slytherins won't dare to say anything now that you are a Snape. So you don't have to worry.”
“Merlin, Harry, can you see the possibilities that we have now that you live here?” George asked, and looked dreamily at the ceiling after he had thrown himself down on his back again.
“I can call myself lucky if Severus lets me brew together with him in his private lab. I don't think he would be thrilled to know what we are working on.” Harry held his Potions journal up.
“Oh, he knows that we are good, and he also knows what we are brewing. Putting one and one together, he must know that you are in on it as well,” Fred said, and went over to the photos. “Wow, is that your mom? She’s hot.”
“Was hot,” Harry said, annoyed and a little hurt.
“Yeah; sorry, mate. She looks quite young in this one.” Fred pointed at one of the photos Severus had given him.
“Severus gave it to me. My mom is sixteen in that photo. She and Severus were friends.”
“Really,” George said and turned on the bed to have a look at it as well. “That's wicked.”
“What was he talking with you about?” Harry asked to change the topic. The twins weren't people he wanted to speak about his parents with.
“Ah, just the usual stuff: don't do something ridiculous,” Fred explained.
“Or dangerous,” George added.
“Or stupid,” Fred ended, and rolled his eyes. “Just a little more determined because now he has to fear for you and not just for us.”
“The usual stuff? So he has talked with you about your potions before?” Harry was surprised.
“Sure. He knows what we’re doing. He always says he prefers to know what we are working on, so he has the fitting antidote at hand,” George said, grinning. “He is really cool, Harry. You just have to know how to deal with him. A little lying here...”
“A little showing respect there...” Fred went on.
“And an ounce of truth, and you have the bat of the dungeon as your pet,” George said.
“He will kill you if he hears you talking about him like that. And I also don't like it when you speak like that about my adoptive father,” Harry said, a little annoyed. He respected Severus and letting them speak about him like that made him feel as if he was betraying Severus.
“Wow, already defending your new family. Come on, cool down, we respect your new father, okay?” Fred assured Harry.
“And you can't imagine how glad we are that you are now a Snape.” George sat up and ruffled Harry's hair. “So, how about sneaking into his library and seeing what we can find?”
“How about letting me survive at least a few weeks without getting into trouble? They haven't even signed the adoption papers yet.”
“As if they wouldn't sign them if you get into trouble. You should have seen Snape as he spoke with us. You’d think you really are one of his. He threatened to skin us alive and use our skin as potions ingredients if we hurt you. He looked really worried,” Fred told Harry.
A warm feeling spread through Harry's chest as he heard this, but he was abruptly pulled out of the wonderful feeling when the doorknob flared green again and started to sir.
“That must be Ron and Hermione.” Harry jumped up and ran to the entrance door.
Again the door did not announce Hermione and Ron. It was only one person, and Harry definitely wasn't looking forward to meeting this one.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Harry and His New Family
178 Reviews | 5.49/10 Average
Please post more! i have become obsessed!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.
Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)
Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction. it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.
Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)
Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction. it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!
Loving this story so far. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more.
I trully wonder what punishment Severus will think appropriate for the two. I hope it will involve the two of them together so maybe they can start to get along better.
hehe awesome chapter....hehe i already read it all at fanfiction! your stories are soo awesome! hehe please update all your stories soon! in Ashwinder, PP, and FF! hehe thanks "Cheers"
awesome update. i really like the way this story is written. can't wait for more
*sigh* it's going to take time. i hope maybe he and draco can become friends...draco needs real friends. great update. thanks and smoochies
aww, come on....please? rly i don't know how changed ur fics are in ff.net but I'm reading over there....and when u upload i'll read over here to see the differences... so....update for your poor fans, eh? thx
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
The next chapter is in the queue already. So I hope it will be up in a few days.Thanks for your review!
I think I'm about to keel over and die right now. I hate cliffhangers. This is an awesome story, please update as soon as you have time. Please. Siriusly. :) "Cheers",
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I hate all the draco's of the world.I always looking forward to your story.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Bad author who mistreats her poor reasdrs with evil cliffies *stick out tongue*
BTW I was wondering if you're planning to update your other story about little Severus?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I would love to update "A better childhood" but I can't find a beta. :( If you know someone who could help me or if you would help me, it would be great. Otherwise you need to read the not so perfectly edited version on fanfiction(dot)net. There is even a sequal up for it. Thank you very, very much for your review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I'm awful at grammar and punctuation but I help with the missing words and such. Try asking SouthernWitch. She's very kind and a wonderful beta. Now I will check FFnet becauseI miss that little fellow a great deal.
Please finish this story I love it it is very compelling could not stop reading read it in 3 hours.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
This story already is finished, just not on this site because my chapters need a lot of editing to make them acceptable for this site. So no worries, it is finished and if my beta doesn't leave me, it will be uploaded here as long as I get feedback.Thank you very much for your review!
Same old Draco, kicking someone when they are already down. I hope Severus will be wise enough not to believe Draco's version of events. Good chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
It's not a bad little story. But you don't update fast enough to suit me. ^_^
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, it's hard to make my chapters to be accepted here. That's why the updates take so long. :( Sorry. Thank you very much for your review!
Don't be depressed! I thought your Weasley twins were rather over the top (honestly? Calling his dead mother 'hot?' tasteless) but overall helpful. After all, if the wild Weasleys get along with Snape, surely Harry can. As for Draco, I'm sure Severus will be able to figure out what happened. Even if Draco gave him the best story ever told, Harry's complete freakout would tell a rather more convincing version.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, I thought long about leaving them be like I wrote them, but then I decided it would be okay. Thank you very much for your review!
I am about to get a f*cking heart attack right now. Your story is so friggin' awesome! I totally loff it. :) Awesome chapter. Hope you have another up soon. :) "Cheers",
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
And I love your review! :) Thank you for it! This story is already finished, but only on fanfiction(dot)net. It costs me a lot of efford and betas to make the chapters grammatically correct, so they will be accepted here. It surely will take me years to finish it here on this site. I'm glad you and some others are patient enough!Sunny
I'll try again. This one person that he doesn't want to speak with must be *drumble sound* Draco maybe? What do you think? And I think th etwins may be too right. That's easy to get Sev on your side once you've got past the bat persona. I suite like this Severus very much. He seems really approachable.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Well guessed! :)Thank you very much for your review!
I wonder who is at the door. James is a great therapist and Harry seems to be making progress. Interaction between Snape and the twins was funny. Good chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I really like Jame. He seems to be of great help for Harry. As for the person knocking at the door, I'd guess it's maybe Ginny. Am I close?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
No, not Ginny. :) But with red hair too! Thank you very much for your review!
ron is such a clueless prat! loved the interaction between sev and harry. great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
That's so nice to see Harry opening up and relatively relaxed. Also thanks for the longer chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
The later chapters will be much longer then my first ones. My writing style changed as well. The story has 84 chapters!Thank you very much for your review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
84!! WOW !! I long to read them all.
altho i know severus would hate to be called sweet, that was a very sweet thing he did. lovely story. can't wait for the trip to diagon alley! thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
It's hard for Harry to reconcile the previous severus with this one. I'm sure with time things will go better.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
glad you updated, you're take on the paternal Severus/Harry is new, especially with Harry's issues. thanks for the posting
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
So, I'm pretty sure friendlily isn't a word, but really I'd never have known that English is your second (or third, or fourth) language. Either you have an exceptional Beta or you're crazy good at this. Heck, even native speakers need a good beta or two to keep their punctuation in line. Some of your sentences are a bit short or choppy, but aside from one sentence fragment, "Then the twisted cruel smirk as he raised his arm," you're scott-free. And what's more, I'm hooked. Good writing! And may I ask, what IS your first language?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
German is my first language, and I have two VERY GOOD betas for this story!!! I hate that I only can write those short sentences. I try very hard to be better, but until now I fail. :( I hope that one day that will change. My writing style has changed a lot over the last month. I finished this story a week ago with 84 chapters. If you don't loose interest in the story after the first chapter, I promise the second half of the fic will be much better.I hope you will like the rest of the story as well.Sunny