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Harry and His New Family Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey
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Harry and His New Family

1: Chapter 1 - On the Train

2: Chapter 2 – No Sleep Found

3: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation

4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

5: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One

6: Chapter 6 – The Examination, Part Two

7: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape

8: Chapter 8 – Best Friends

9: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus

10: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown

11: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress

12: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home

13: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I

14: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II

15: Chapter 15 – Paul

16: Chapter 16 – Problems Again

17: Chapter 17 - Breakfast

18: Chapter 18 - James

19: Chapter 19 - Decorating

20: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione

21: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept

22: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit

23: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron

24: Chapter 24 – The Shopping

25: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship

26: Chapter 26 – Talking with James

27: Chapter 27 - The Twins

28: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble

29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment

30: Chapter 30 - Reasons

31: Chapter 31 - Punishment

32: Chapter 32 - Albus vs. Severus

Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

Harry and His New Family

Chapter 4 of 32

grugster

Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and caring family to cope with.

Alternate Universe General Psychological Friendship Hogwarts Castle 66,011 Words 32 Chapters WIP
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Thanks a lot to my beta-readers, Orodruin and Duchess_Of_Arcadia, for correcting my mistakes.

Disclaimer: All recognizable characters belong to J.K. Rowling, and I am not earning anything by writing this story.

I’m not a native speaker of English!


Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

They had hardly set foot in the infirmary when Madam Pomfrey came striding quickly in their direction. “What happened, Severus? A Potions accident?”

She came to an abrupt halt when she saw Harry trying to back away, hiding behind Severus. That was odd.

“No, Poppy, it wasn’t a Potions accident.” He restrained Harry from backing away and led him over to one of the beds. Poppy followed them, her mind already racing to find the possible causes for Harry’s odd reaction.

“Sit down here, Harry.” He motioned to Harry to the bed and then turned to Poppy.

“I want you to check Mr. Potter fully for any illnesses or injuries.” He pronounced the last word in a way that made Poppy realize that was why they were here. A glance in the scared and wet face of Harry made it clear that he wasn’t here by his free will.

“Okay, Harry, just relax and let me cast a few diagnostic spells first.”

Harry’s breath was quick and his gaze was frantically flickering between Severus and Poppy. It even lingered for a short time on the door until Severus shifted so that he was blocking Harry’s view.

Poppy already had performed the diagnostic spells and was now looking at Professor Snape. “Perhaps you should leave us alone, Severus?”

“NO!” Harry shouted in panic. “You promised, Professor.” Harry jumped up from the bed.

Poppy was taken aback by this reaction and was frozen in shock. But Severus was fast and grabbed Harry by the shoulder. “Back on the bed, Harry,” he ordered and shoved him back in the direction of the bed.

“But you can’t leave me alone here, Professor. Please!” Harry begged as he tried to wriggle out of Severus’ grasp, with no success.

“I’m not going anywhere, Harry! I will uphold my promise, and you will get back on this bed. Now!” he said sternly.

Harry reluctantly obeyed and jumped on the bed again.

Poppy had recovered from the shock and was her professional self again.

“Harry, I have to examine you closer now. For that, you have to remove your shirt.”

Harry immediately clutched the hem of his shirt and pulled it even further down. “No, you already scanned me with your wand. Just give me something for the wounds and heal my ribs, so that I can breathe better.” Out of his eye he could see Snape breathe in sharply and move closer.

So, he didn’t know how much I was in pain. Fantastic, now my chances of leaving the hospital wing are practically zero, Harry thought sadly. But I don’t want them to see it. I’m just a weak freak. They will expel me from Hogwarts.

Harry started to panic again. He frantically looked for an escape route, but Professor Snape must have predicted that and had moved so close that he couldn’t jump from the bed. There was only one way left. With one swift movement, he leaned back, swung his legs over the bed and jumped down on the other side. That was as far as he got until Snape shouted, “Petrificus Totalus.” And with that, he was paralyzed.

“Severus, no!” Poppy shouted, but it was too late. “Don’t use magic on him! He’s too worn out.”

She moved around the bed and gently placed Harry’s still form, with Severus’ help, on the bed again. She then placed a spell on the bed, which would prevent Harry from leaving it.

When this was all done, she removed Severus’ freezing spell from Harry.

The moment he was released, Harry tried again to jump from the bed, but realized that he couldn’t move over the side of the bed. He could still swing his legs over the side, but couldn’t jump down. He gave Madam Pomfrey a shocked look and moved back against the headboard, pulled his legs to his body and encircled them with his arms.

“I don’t want to remove my shirt. Just give me a healing salve.”

“No, Harry. I cannot just give you a healing salve. I need to see how much you are hurt and how deep the wounds are. You are also underweight and magically drained. There is nothing to be embarrassed about Harry.” Poppy tried to calm him.

Harry tried to back away even further, only the headboard against his back prevented it. “No, please!” He buried his head between his knees and his chest.

He could hear Poppy sigh and turn to Severus. “I think we should call for help from St. Mungo’s.”

“NO!” Harry was kneeling on the bed now. “Don’t send me away! I don’t want to go to a hospital!” He started crying again. Angry by his own reaction, he forcefully wiped his sleeve over his tears.

“Harry, we are not sending you away or placing you in a hospital,” Severus said while sitting on the bed in hope to calm Harry with his presence. Poppy was already moving to the fireplace to call for help because she knew that they couldn’t do this alone.

“No, Professor. Please, stop her. They will take me with them. I know it,” Harry pleaded when he saw Poppy’s head disappear in the fireplace. He tried to stand up, but Severus had seized his underarm and was pulling him nearer to himself.

“Harry, calm down. It’s not the first time we’ve asked for a special healer from St. Mungo’s to help us. They are very kind and very talented. I have a few friends amongst them. They will just help us to examine you and speak with you. They won’t take you with them.”

“Promise?” Harry felt like a small boy to ask this, but he needed it to feel secure.

“I promise!” Severus said honestly.

Harry stopped struggling and seemed to calm down. Severus sighed in relief.

That lasted only a short time until Harry saw that Poppy hadn’t came back alone. He tried to wriggle free again. Seeing the cause of Harry’s struggle, Severus let go of Harry and stood up from the bed.

Harry immediately hid his face between his knees and chest and pressed his back against the headboard as hard as possible.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Harry and His New Family

178 Reviews  |  5.49/10 Average

10/10

imahdreamer

Please post more! i have become obsessed!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.

Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)

Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction.       it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.

Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)

Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction.       it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!

10/10

Marty21

Loving this story so far. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more.

10/10

snitchette

I trully wonder what punishment Severus will think appropriate for the two. I hope it will involve the two of them together so maybe they can start to get along better.

10/10

Red_Garnet

hehe awesome chapter....hehe i already read it all at fanfiction! your stories are soo awesome! hehe please update all your stories soon! in Ashwinder, PP, and FF! hehe thanks "Cheers"

0/10

j_mckay91

awesome update. i really like the way this story is written. can't wait for more

0/10

kimjo2

*sigh*  it's going to take time.  i hope maybe he and draco can become friends...draco needs real friends.  great update.  thanks and smoochies

10/10

Red_Garnet

aww, come on....please? rly i don't know how changed ur fics are in ff.net but I'm reading over there....and when u upload i'll read over here to see the differences... so....update for your poor fans, eh? thx

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

The next chapter is in the queue already. So I hope it will be up in a few days.Thanks for your review!

10/10

Red_Garnet

I think I'm about to keel over and die right now. I hate cliffhangers. This is an awesome story, please update as soon as you have time. Please. Siriusly. :) "Cheers",

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

8/10

zenobia

I hate all the draco's of the world.I always looking forward to your story.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

Bad author who mistreats her poor reasdrs with evil cliffies *stick out tongue*

BTW I was wondering if you're planning to update your other story about little Severus?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I would love to update "A better childhood" but I can't find a beta. :( If you know someone who could help me or if you would help me, it would be great. Otherwise you need to read the not so perfectly edited version on fanfiction(dot)net. There is even a sequal up for it. Thank you very, very much for your review! 

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

I'm awful at grammar and punctuation but I help with the missing words and such. Try asking SouthernWitch. She's very kind and a wonderful beta. Now I will check FFnet becauseI miss that little fellow a great deal.

0/10

chinoslady

Please finish this story I love it it is very compelling could not stop reading read it in 3 hours.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

This story already is finished, just not on this site because my chapters need a lot of editing to make them acceptable for this site. So no worries, it is finished and if my beta doesn't leave me, it will be uploaded here as long as I get feedback.Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

esmelle

Same old Draco, kicking someone when they are already down.  I hope Severus will be wise enough not to believe Draco's version of events.  Good chapter. 

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

9/10

MsTree

It's not a bad little story. But you don't update fast enough to suit me. ^_^

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Yes, it's hard to make my chapters to be accepted here. That's why the updates take so long. :( Sorry. Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

liviconnor

Don't be depressed!  I thought your Weasley twins were rather over the top (honestly?  Calling his dead mother 'hot?' tasteless) but overall helpful.  After all, if the wild Weasleys get along with Snape, surely Harry can.  As for Draco, I'm sure Severus will be able to figure out what happened.  Even if Draco gave him the best story ever told, Harry's complete freakout would tell a rather more convincing version.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Yes, I thought long about leaving them be like I wrote them, but then I decided it would be okay. Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

Red_Garnet

I am about to get a f*cking heart attack right now. Your story is so friggin' awesome! I totally loff it. :) Awesome chapter. Hope you have another up soon. :) "Cheers",

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

And I love your review! :) Thank you for it! This story is already finished, but only on fanfiction(dot)net. It costs me a lot of efford and betas to make the chapters grammatically correct, so they will be accepted here. It surely will take me years to finish it here on this site. I'm glad you and some others are patient enough!Sunny

10/10

snitchette

I'll try again. This one person that he doesn't want to speak with must be *drumble sound* Draco maybe? What do you think? And I think th etwins may be too right. That's easy to get Sev on your side once you've got past the bat persona. I suite like this Severus very much. He seems really approachable.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Well guessed! :)Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

esmelle

I wonder who is at the door. James is a great therapist and Harry seems to be making progress. Interaction between Snape and the twins was funny. Good chapter.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

I really like Jame. He seems to be of great help for Harry. As for the person knocking at the door, I'd guess it's maybe Ginny. Am I close?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

No, not Ginny. :) But with red hair too! Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

kimjo2

ron is such a clueless prat!  loved the interaction between sev and harry.  great update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

That's so nice to see Harry opening up and relatively relaxed. Also thanks for the longer chapter.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

The later chapters will be much longer then my first ones. My writing style changed as well. The story has 84 chapters!Thank you very much for your review!

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

84!! WOW !! I long to read them all.

0/10

kimjo2

altho i know severus would hate to be called sweet, that was a very sweet thing he did.  lovely story.  can't wait for the trip to diagon alley!  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

It's hard for Harry to reconcile the previous severus with this one. I'm sure with time things will go better.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

feisanna

glad you updated, you're take on the paternal Severus/Harry is new, especially with Harry's issues.  thanks for the posting

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

liviconnor

So, I'm pretty sure friendlily isn't a word, but really I'd never have known that English is your second (or third, or fourth) language.  Either you have an exceptional Beta or you're crazy good at this.  Heck, even native speakers need a good beta or two to keep their punctuation in line. Some of your sentences are a bit short or choppy, but aside from one sentence fragment, "Then the twisted cruel smirk as he raised his arm," you're scott-free.  And what's more, I'm hooked.  Good writing!  And may I ask, what IS your first language?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

German is my first language, and I have two VERY GOOD betas for this story!!! I hate that I only can write those short sentences. I try very hard to be better, but until now I fail. :( I hope that one day that will change. My writing style has changed a lot over the last month. I finished this story a week ago with 84 chapters. If you don't loose interest in the story after the first chapter, I promise the second half of the fic will be much better.I hope you will like the rest of the story as well.Sunny

10/10

esmelle

Great chapter title, very appropriate. Thanks for the update, looking forward to the shopping.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

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