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Harry and His New Family
grugster178 Reviews | 5.49/10 (178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 69 Favorites )
Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and caring family to cope with.
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grugster
Member Since 2005 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 17 | 7 Reviews Written | 472 Review Responses
Hi,
I absolutly love fanfiction but I never thought I would write one myself. But when Healer Pomfrey put up a contest I decided to write a stroy for it! The result was my story "Everything will be okay soon" !
I'm a social worker in a children shelter for abused, hard to educate and/or criminal girls.
Bye Sunny
Reviews for Harry and His New Family
I really like this series. An interesting perspective to deal with.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Life's going to be quite different for him now.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Absolutely. Thank you very much for your review!
I like your vision of Severus as a dad. I found this chapter to be a nice light read.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I'm glad you like mny version of Severus. Thank you very much for your review!
I've been following this story and really enjoying it. What a wonderful family to be invited into!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
what a wonderful chance for harry to be "normal" thanks so much
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
what a jelous swine draco is. poor harry is so insecure those words feed right into it. faboo update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Glad Sev is treating him well
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I'm sure learning more about his family will be good for Harry.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
what a lovely update. i like the idea of poppy and moody...they both should have someone. thanks so much
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
It feels like Harry has anxiety because there are so many caring people who want to be there for him. You've done such a good job making us feel his uncertainty!! Very well done. =]
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Yeah! I'm so glad things are going to get better for him.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
:) Thank you very much for your review!
Eurgh. With that title and the opening, I was really worried at first!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
:)
It's nice to see that a magical band-aid isn't being slapped on this. It will take time and hard work for harry to heal.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, it will. Thank you very much for your review!
I'm glad Harry chose this family. I wonder if he will call Sev Dad.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, he will but much later! Thanks for your review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
OMG That was supposed to be a joke. Will he really?? And Sev will let him do it. *shoking* It's good I'm warned so I can prepare myself.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
You will have forgotten it until it happens. There will be many, many chapter until it will happen. It would be so unrealistic otherwise! :)
I don't mean to be rude but HURRY with the updates. I'm just dying to know what is happening!!!!!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
On fanfiction.net this story is already at chapter 28, but their are too many mistakes in them and so I need to wait for my second beta to correct the chapters to be able to submit them here. And that needs time because she works for many writers.Thanks for your rview!
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Oh, well I'm really into this story so I just might go out there and read it. How many chapter will there be (I really like this story btw).
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I don't even know right now how many chapter it will have. But it will be my longest story ever. I have a notebook full of ideas for this story and so it will be LONG!
Hee, he has to live with Albus, Minerva, Snape, AND Dumbledore-Snape. This ought to be interesting. I love how you portrayed Albus. It's right on target for that ole goof. I'm wondering how Sev is going to react. =) Update again soon!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
On fanfiction.net this story is already at chapter 28, but their are too many mistakes in them and so I need to wait for my second beta to correct the chapters to be able to submit them here. And that needs time because she works for many writers. Please be patient! Thanks for your rview!
It's almost harder that they'll all be so kind, isn't it? He's going to have quite a time making the adjustment. Looking forward to it!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, he will need time. Thanks for your review!
I'm beginning to wonder if he will be able to live his life again. I do not consider him a freak but his emotional state is clearly unstable. And I agree with Severus: we're lucky no evil evil wizard is lurking in the shadows to rise to power.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
This fic has 84 chapters and in the end Harry is much better! But it is a long and stoney way!Thank you very much for your review!
I was a bit alarmed about reading a fic with Severus married to an OFC, but it is fascinating.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I'm glad you like it nevertheless! Thank you very much for your review!
Well, the description of the final battle really didn't work for me. I don't think it's necessary to the story at all. All I wanted to know was that it's an AU story, what year it takes place, and that Big Bad Voldie is dead.You handled the information about Ginny Weasley's realtionship with Lee Jordan with more finesse, I think, by letting the readers get the information by way of Hermione and Ron's argument. Oh, and I love the arguing Ron and Hermione in this story...Anyway, I think I'd be more interested in what happened to Voldemort after getting to know the characters and situation of your story a little better. As it is, it just kind of takes me out of the story.Excellent start. Thanks so much for writing and sharing. Have you written much else in English before? You sound like a pro and I just love what you have posted so far!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, I didn't like this chapter as well. I fear it is very vivisible. :( I learned a lot over the years I wrote this story.The later chapter are better.This first chapter was written with the help of my beta. My English wasn't very good when I wrote it, but I leaned a lot in the last two years. I have written more stories but the most of them I only upload on fanfiction(dot)net.Thank you very much for your review!
I am intrigued. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
'Now only the toilet was left. He opened the lid and lowered his pajama pants. Suddenly Harry felt an invisible hand smack him on his bottom, and the room said, “Sit down!”'LOL
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
:D Thank you very much for your review!
now finally he can have some rest. he is where he belongs. with friends, and people who care for him. you let him be a child again. no hero attitudes. no nothing.just a hurt child.so nice how you describe him.And his friends still do not know to much.but Hermione will find out, but no, it is in no books. so maybe she has to wait for your update just as anybody else.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Nice chapter, but a bit short. I would have liked to have seen Harry tell his friends everything, but perhaps it is better for him to deal with it in small doses.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
The chapters I update here are my old ones. At that time I wrote short chapters. Later I made them longer.Thanks for your review!
I've notived that you usually update A better childhood in the same time than this one. Can I hope for a good readig this afternoon or tomorrow?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I fear no. My beta for A better Childhood has no time. But the story is already submitted until chapter 21 on fanfiction(dot)net. I don't know when I will be able to submit a new chapter here because I need Pookah (the beta) to correct my fanfiction(dot)net versions to submit it here. Too many mistakes in them. :(
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Too many mistakes in them. :( That's why I prefer to wait until it's polished and read it here. I'm not a native speaker and Iprefer-need to read perfect english. Else I'll never improve my skills. But I did read the information about the characters, especially Pr Dumbledore-Snape, and it helps the wait for the new chapters. So thanks a lot.