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Harry and His New Family
grugster178 Reviews | 5.49/10 (178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 69 Favorites )
Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and caring family to cope with.
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grugster
Member Since 2005 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 17 | 7 Reviews Written | 472 Review Responses
Hi,
I absolutly love fanfiction but I never thought I would write one myself. But when Healer Pomfrey put up a contest I decided to write a stroy for it! The result was my story "Everything will be okay soon" !
I'm a social worker in a children shelter for abused, hard to educate and/or criminal girls.
Bye Sunny
Reviews for Harry and His New Family
not the shirt`!! pity. she would have had a nice view, wouldn't she.as long as the maneuver worked. no one could really blame James.it is really new for me to see a very concerned, careful Severus towards Harry. new and funny and nice.now, let's get to know this mysterious wife of him.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I thought he would be absolutely not AMUSED when Poppy would have pulled his shirt of. Even if we two would have enjoyed it very much. ;)
I like this healer James. he has a wonderful way of taking up the patiences pace.Harry definitely needs time to let all this happen. to trust any adult again.And then it is this closenes to Severus James produces. so clever.And now they use Severus as object to demonstrate the instruments. lol.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I'm glad you like James! I wished there would be people like him in reality. :)
His case sounds very severe.so he doesn't want to go to a hospital, because he would be? sent home`no`. expelled from Hogwartrs ? no. socially dead?a hard fight.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you for your review!
ah, so it is Snape who takes action. gooood.poor, Harry. he shrinks back from so much personal contact, being called by the first name, being taken care of by the great dark wizard. And he can cry. that is a gift. yes, he has to cry it out.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I'm glad you like it that it was Snape who found out first!
mhm, the beaten hero.not the most dangerous wizard won over him, but a brutal muggle.And he has so many wounds, that he doesn't know where to start the healing. just hope, that Hermione finds out soon, so that he stops this hiding and starts healing.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
You will see. Thank you for your review!
i just love how sweet she is to harry. i hope they take him. wonderful update. thanks so much
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Well, she seems nice. Will we find out how she and Severus got together?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
In later chapter, but not right now. You will find out more about his new family in the pace Harry does.Thank you very much for your review!
It will be interesting to see how his friends will react and I'll love hearing about what happens to his family.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
Ouch, good thing magic was able to heal Harry quickly! I like your writing style, it is nice, easy to read and has a good flow in the story.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you. I often fear my style is too simple because English isn't my mother tongue.Thank you very much for your review!
I like the Healer, he has a great bed-side manner and is quite humorous!
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
:) I'm glad you like him!
How sad, hopefully the adults are adding 2 and 2 together and have an idea of what the problem is.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
I like how you are keeping an abused person in character. This is what I would expect from an abused child.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you!
It is interesting that Harry hasn't approached anyone yet about what's happening. Perhaps it is because he's so young?
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Or becauce he thinks it isn't something to bother the others with.Thank you very much for your review!
What an interesting concept, I like the idea that Harry killed the snake in ND year and Severus and Albus killed off the Dark Lord.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yeah, I wanted to get rid of Voldemort as soon as possible. :)Thank you very much for ALL your review!
And the mystery deepens aournf this Prof Dumbledore Snape. I'm begining to get frustrated you know. But I'm glad Harry won't be allowed to continue living with the Dursleys.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
What exactly is frustrating you? Thanks you for review!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
That we don't know anything about her, and you're divulging very few informations. I'm dying from curiosity.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Oh, yes, I forget sometimes that the readers here don't know my character descriptions, which are on my fanfiction.net profile. You can check it out or just wait until you learn more about her later in the story. :)
Wow, Professor Dumbledore-Snape must be a really special lady. I'm looking forward to reading more about her.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I'm glad you like her! :) Thank you for your review!
poor severus! no good deed goes unpunished! that was wonderful the way they handled the two boys! great update. thanks so much
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thanks for your review!
my! a totally different point of view.All is over after book no2, and everyone can go back to normal, or to something completely different.Thank you for this idea.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Yes, I wanted Voldemort away as fast as possible. Thanks for your review!
Thank you for this revealing chapter – I do hope that things are looking up now.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thanks for your review!
Poor Harry. I'm with Severus, those Dursleys need some punishment. Of course, James is right. It would be better for Severus to stay out of prison so he can help Harry.Poor guy, tries to do the right thing and gets accosted by Healers.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
:D Thanks for your review!
I have no words to describe how horrible I feel at the mention of Harry's multiple wounds. They really are awful people. I almost fear for sexual agression when James wanted to look at his bottom.As for Severus, I hope he is not to ill.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
No, there was no sexual abuse.To know about Severus and his illness you just have to wait for the next chapters!Thanks for your review!
what wonderful healers! too bad all medical practicioners aren't like that! thanks so much for the terrific update
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
:) I'm glad you like him! Thanks for your review!
Lol, Severus gets an exam too. Poor guy, just trying to help. Poor Harry, too. So scared... At least James is making him feel comfortable.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much for your review!
This is such a heart-rending representation of the effects of abuse. Well done
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
Thank you very much!
Wow – I guess I am going to like this James bloke.
Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)
I'm very glad you like him! :) Thanks for your review!