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Harry and His New Family

1: Chapter 1 - On the Train

2: Chapter 2 – No Sleep Found

3: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation

4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

5: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One

6: Chapter 6 – The Examination, Part Two

7: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape

8: Chapter 8 – Best Friends

9: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus

10: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown

11: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress

12: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home

13: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I

14: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II

15: Chapter 15 – Paul

16: Chapter 16 – Problems Again

17: Chapter 17 - Breakfast

18: Chapter 18 - James

19: Chapter 19 - Decorating

20: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione

21: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept

22: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit

23: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron

24: Chapter 24 – The Shopping

25: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship

26: Chapter 26 – Talking with James

27: Chapter 27 - The Twins

28: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble

29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment

30: Chapter 30 - Reasons

31: Chapter 31 - Punishment

32: Chapter 32 - Albus vs. Severus

Harry and His New Family

grugster

178 Reviews   |   178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 69 Favorites )

Alternate Universe General Psychological Friendship Hogwarts Castle 66,011 Words 32 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Fred Weasley George Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Poppy Pomfrey Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Minerva McGonagall Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Remus Lupin Draco Malfoy

Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and caring family to cope with.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - On the Train

Chapter 2: Chapter 2 – No Sleep Found

Chapter 3: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation

Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

Chapter 5: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One

Chapter 6: Chapter 6 – The Examination, Part Two

Chapter 7: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape

Chapter 8: Chapter 8 – Best Friends

Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus

Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown

Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress

Chapter 12: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home

Chapter 13: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I

Chapter 14: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II

Chapter 15: Chapter 15 – Paul

Chapter 16: Chapter 16 – Problems Again

Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Breakfast

Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - James

Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Decorating

Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione

Chapter 21: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept

Chapter 22: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit

Chapter 23: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron

Chapter 24: Chapter 24 – The Shopping

Chapter 25: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship

Chapter 26: Chapter 26 – Talking with James

Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Twins

Chapter 28: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble

Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment

Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Reasons

Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Punishment

Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Albus vs. Severus


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grugster

Member Since 2005  |  6 Stories  |  Favorited by 17  |  7 Reviews Written  |  472 Review Responses


Hi,


I absolutly love fanfiction but I never thought I would write one myself. But when Healer Pomfrey put up a contest I decided to write a stroy for it! The result was my story "Everything will be okay soon" !

I'm a social worker in a children shelter for abused, hard to educate and/or criminal girls.


Bye Sunny

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salvamea

not the shirt`!! pity. she would have had a nice view, wouldn't she.as long as the maneuver worked. no one could really blame James.it is really new for me to see a very concerned, careful Severus towards Harry. new and funny and nice.now, let's get to know this mysterious wife of him.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I thought he would be absolutely not AMUSED when Poppy would have pulled his shirt of. Even if we two would have enjoyed it very much. ;)

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salvamea

I like this healer James. he has a wonderful way of taking up the patiences pace.Harry definitely needs time to  let all this happen. to trust any adult again.And then it is this closenes to Severus James produces. so clever.And now they use Severus as object to demonstrate the instruments. lol.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I'm glad you like James! I wished there would be people like him in reality. :)

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salvamea

His case sounds very severe.so he doesn't want to go to a hospital, because he would be? sent home`no`. expelled from Hogwartrs ? no. socially dead?a hard fight.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

 Thank you for your review!

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salvamea

ah, so it is Snape who takes action. gooood.poor, Harry. he shrinks back from so much personal contact,  being called by the first name, being taken care of by the great dark wizard. And he can cry. that is a gift. yes, he has to cry it out.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I'm glad you like it that it was Snape who found out first!

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salvamea

mhm, the beaten hero.not the most dangerous wizard won over him, but a brutal muggle.And he has so many wounds, that he doesn't know where to start the healing. just hope, that Hermione finds out soon, so that he stops this hiding and starts healing.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

You will see. Thank you for your review!

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kimjo2

i just love how sweet she is to harry.  i hope they take him.  wonderful update.  thanks so much

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

debjunk

Well, she seems nice.  Will we find out how she and Severus got together? 

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

In later chapter, but not right now. You will find out  more about his new family in the pace Harry does.Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

sinbad

It will be interesting to see how his friends will react and I'll love hearing about what happens to his family.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

sinbad

Ouch, good thing magic was able to heal Harry quickly!  I like your writing style, it is nice, easy to read and has a good flow in the story.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you. I often fear my style is too simple because English isn't my mother tongue.Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

sinbad

I like the Healer, he has a great bed-side manner and is quite humorous!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

:) I'm glad you like him!

10/10

sinbad

How sad, hopefully the adults are adding 2 and 2 together and have an idea of what the problem is.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

sinbad

I like how you are keeping an abused person in character.  This is what I would expect from an abused child.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you!

10/10

sinbad

It is interesting that Harry hasn't approached anyone yet about what's happening.  Perhaps it is because he's so young?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Or becauce he thinks it isn't something to bother the others with.Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

sinbad

What an interesting concept, I like the idea that Harry killed the snake in ND year and Severus and Albus killed off the Dark Lord.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Yeah, I wanted to get rid of Voldemort as soon as possible. :)Thank you very much for ALL your review!

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snitchette

And the mystery deepens aournf this Prof Dumbledore Snape. I'm begining to get frustrated you know. But I'm glad Harry won't be allowed to continue living with the Dursleys.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

What exactly is frustrating you?  Thanks you for review!

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

That we don't know anything about her, and you're divulging very few informations. I'm dying from curiosity.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Oh, yes, I forget sometimes that the readers here don't know my character descriptions, which are on my fanfiction.net profile. You can check it out or just wait until you learn more about her later in the story. :)

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WriterMerrin

Wow, Professor Dumbledore-Snape must be a really special lady.  I'm looking forward to reading more about her.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I'm glad you like her! :) Thank you for your review!

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kimjo2

poor severus!  no good deed goes unpunished!  that was wonderful the way they handled the two boys!  great update.  thanks so much

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thanks for your review!

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salvamea

my! a totally different point of view.All is over after book no2, and everyone can go back to normal, or to something completely different.Thank you for this idea.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Yes, I wanted Voldemort away as fast as possible. Thanks for your review!

10/10

Muggline

Thank you for this revealing chapter – I do hope that things are looking up now.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thanks for your review!

9/10

debjunk

Poor Harry.  I'm with Severus, those Dursleys need some punishment.  Of course, James is right.  It would be better for Severus to stay out of prison so he can help Harry.Poor guy, tries to do the right thing and gets accosted by Healers.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

:D Thanks for your review!

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snitchette

I have no words to describe how horrible I feel at the mention of Harry's multiple wounds. They really are awful people. I almost fear for sexual agression when James wanted to look at his bottom.As for Severus, I hope he is not to ill.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

No, there was no sexual abuse.To know about Severus and his illness you just have to wait for the next chapters!Thanks for your review!

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kimjo2

what wonderful healers!  too bad all medical practicioners aren't like that!  thanks so much for the terrific update

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

:) I'm glad you like him! Thanks for your review!

9/10

debjunk

Lol, Severus gets an exam too.  Poor guy, just trying to help.  Poor Harry, too.  So scared...  At least James is making him feel comfortable.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

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rhiannon113

This is such a heart-rending representation of the effects of abuse. Well done

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much!

10/10

Muggline

Wow – I guess I am going to like this James bloke.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I'm very glad you like him! :) Thanks for your review!

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