Longing
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Severus fails a test for his allegiance to Voldemort. The fallout from one night will change everything.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
Reviews for Longing
You know, a Severus who speaks like this to Hermione could be forgiven almost everything. His words about how she deserves to be pursued, to see a man make a fool of himself because of her, they where utter perfection and just what the fragile ego Hermione has at the moment needs to hear. The words would make any woman with an unce of blood in her veins jump his bones ofcourse:-)) Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I'm glad you liked it. It was difficult to write since when does Severus Snape like to make a spectacle of himself? I didn't want him to be too OCC, but who knows what love can make a man do?Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I'm glad you liked it. It was difficult to write since when does Severus Snape like to make a spectacle of himself? I didn't want him to be too OCC, but who knows what love can make a man do?Thanks!Livvy
I am crying. Feeling beautiful for the first time is amazing! And you wrote it so very well. Hermione must have some stellar will power, not many could resist Snape and his "how you doing?" mode!! also, poor ginny. What a terrible ordeal to go thru.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Ginny is strong, and Harry loves her. She'll get through this. It's not right for Hermione and Severus, but it will happen!Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Ginny is strong, and Harry loves her. She'll get through this. It's not right for Hermione and Severus, but it will happen!Thanks,Livvy
Oh my. I adored this chapter, despite having some trouble with the darkness of previous ones. Poor Hermione! Poor Ginny! Now, lets see how the horcrux hunt goes.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
The next chapter is going to be a big one for all our characters. I hope you like it!Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
The next chapter is going to be a big one for all our characters. I hope you like it!Thanks,Livvy
Aww, and he made her feel that way without sweeping her off to the bedroom. I really respect him for his decision and his motives. His very lovely motives. If all men were that considerate...
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! He has to really work hard to make a believer out of her, and she needs to value her worth. The next chapter is gonna be huge, plot-wise and after that will come all the mushy love stuff :)Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! He has to really work hard to make a believer out of her, and she needs to value her worth. The next chapter is gonna be huge, plot-wise and after that will come all the mushy love stuff :)Thanks!Livvy
After Ginny returned to Dumbledore's office, I was afraid that Harry was going ruin everything. Severus acted quickly to quell Harry's natural horror that she might have been harmed.Ginny is undoubtedly a powerful witch to have held Severus in her mind. Exhausted from the effort, he nevertheless got the information on the horcruxes they needed.The most special part of this chapter for me was the time Hermione and Severus shared in his chambers. He told her in the most beautiful way how he feels about her: "Let me be a fool for you. Let me set all their tongues wagging that Severus Snape has fallen so deeply in love, he would act the idiot in the name of love. You should have that experience of a man acting differently from what others expect—all because of you.” The ending of this chapter was so sweet. I loved it! 
Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh, I'm so glad! I can't wait until the dark stuff is over, which will be the next chapter and all the romantic stuff can start between them. I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing it!Thaks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh, I'm so glad! I can't wait until the dark stuff is over, which will be the next chapter and all the romantic stuff can start between them. I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing it!Thaks!Livvy
Just beautiful.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! I hope you like the next chapter. It will be the big showdown with Voldie!Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! I hope you like the next chapter. It will be the big showdown with Voldie!Thanks,Livvy
"Let me be a fool for you. Let me set all their tongues wagging that Severus Snape has fallen so deeply in love, he would act the idiot in the name of love." That, I can't wait to see!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I hope you enjoy how I do it. Nothing too grandiose, though. He still has to be our Severus, after all :)Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I hope you enjoy how I do it. Nothing too grandiose, though. He still has to be our Severus, after all :)Thanks,Livvy
Nice one Severus!!And well done Ginnny.I always look forward to these updates and there is no change. Don't keep us to long lol FAB story! x
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'll put the next chapter in the queue.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'll put the next chapter in the queue.Livvy
OMG! That was intense. Ginny had been well prepared and played her role to perfection. Severus has done his job well. I wonder what the Dark Lord is going to do to Lucius when he wakes up from his "explosive orgasm that left him weak and near sleep." Lord Smartymort has thoroughly screwed the pooch. With a helping hand from Ginny. *snort* I appologize... I couldn't help myself.
This was a whale of a chapter! Good for you!Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
"Lord Smartymort has thoroughly screwed the pooch."ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!That was hilarious! I'm glad you liked that. Ginny is one smooth operator when she has to be ;)Hope you like the next chapter!Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
"Lord Smartymort has thoroughly screwed the pooch."ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!That was hilarious! I'm glad you liked that. Ginny is one smooth operator when she has to be ;)Hope you like the next chapter!Thanks!Livvy
Uh-oh, I am quite sure that I am going to like the upcoming chapters very much...
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I hope you like them and how I direct these characters!Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I hope you like them and how I direct these characters!Thanks!Livvy
OMG I was so scared this chapter! First I was afraid that Hermione was somehow going to walk in on Ginny and Severus sucking face. Then the whole thing with Moldie-Voldie! I knew she was supposed to act, but holy crap was she convincing! I was so afraid that she was serious about the wedding and stuff! Such a great chapter and I know I tell you all the time how much I'm enjoying the tale you're spinning here, but seriously hon, you rock! Much Love ~Brena
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter will be up any day now.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter will be up any day now.Thanks!Livvy
Hell Yeah. I'm so glad Hermione put her foot down and stood up for herself and what she wants from her relationship with Severus! I was so afraid she was going to run off again. This chapter moved very well also, I got to the bottom and was like "wow" that went fast, but it was full of content! Anyways, Awesome update dear! ~Brena
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I felt it was important for Hermione to have that moment where it was just thrown in her face and she had to make a gut reaction. Snape wanted her honest reaction and she was awesome how she told him off. I think it was really important with her development.Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I felt it was important for Hermione to have that moment where it was just thrown in her face and she had to make a gut reaction. Snape wanted her honest reaction and she was awesome how she told him off. I think it was really important with her development.Thanks,Livvy
WOW livvy Powerful stuff here.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I'm glad you liked it! Next chapter will have more on Sev and Hermione.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I'm glad you liked it! Next chapter will have more on Sev and Hermione.Thanks!Livvy
I don't know if it's worse or better that Ginny knew it was the real Voldemort under the glamor. yuck! She's tough. I almost feel so sorry for Lucius - but not quite!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh, heck no! I don't feel a bit of sympathy for Lucius, but yeah, Ginny was pretty strong.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh, heck no! I don't feel a bit of sympathy for Lucius, but yeah, Ginny was pretty strong.Thanks!Livvy
Wow, unbelievably amazing, Livvy! Your imagination is so vivid!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!Thanks!Livvy
wow! she got out intacta. ginny played the perfect part. thanks so much for this stiring update and i look forward to the next chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! THe next chapter is in the queue.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! THe next chapter is in the queue.Livvy
Wow, that was intense. Poor Ginny.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! Don't worry. Ginny wil be okay. Next chapter will bring us back to see how Sev and Hermmione are doing.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thanks! Don't worry. Ginny wil be okay. Next chapter will bring us back to see how Sev and Hermmione are doing.Thanks!Livvy
Pure genius!/M
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Up next, our fav couple!Livvy
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Um, um, ... not mine.There you see just how good your story is: you make me read SS/HG!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Up next, our fav couple!Livvy
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Um, um, ... not mine.There you see just how good your story is: you make me read SS/HG!!
Oh what a great chapter!I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work!GO GINNY!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Ginny was brilliant, wasn't she? Next chapter is in the queue. We'll get more on Severus and Hermione there.Thanks!!!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Ginny was brilliant, wasn't she? Next chapter is in the queue. We'll get more on Severus and Hermione there.Thanks!!!Livvy
Well played Ginny. Bravo!!! Missed are favourite couple though. Look forward to the next chapter. x
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
We'll have our fav couple in the next chapter. It's in the queue.Thanks!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
We'll have our fav couple in the next chapter. It's in the queue.Thanks!
Wow! Ginny played her part to perfection. but I wonder What Hermione will think IF or WHEN she finds out that Severus gave Ginny a lust potion to make Tom attractive to her, and then she kissed Severus:"She kissed him, opening her mouth to taste his. He was slow, letting her find her way before he responded and matched her eagerness to search out his mouth, lips and tongue. She pushed her breasts into his chest as she took over, trying to see if she could do this—if she could tempt a powerful, older wizard. She was so grateful he was allowing her to explore and feel out her way before tenderly pulling away.I know that all of them are working to defeat the Dark Lord, but somehow I don't think that Hermione will be happy that Severus matched Ginny's eagerness to search out his mouth, lips and tongue. She pushed her breasts into his chest as she took over, trying to see if she could do this—if she could tempt a powerful, older wizard.There is a lot of room here for misunderstanding and hurt feelings. Great chapter, livvy, and well done!Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Some things just don't need to be shared. There is no attraction between Snape and Ginny, he was merely helping Ginny get her nerve up. Hermione doesn't need to know, or Harry either. Ginny won't forget all Snape did to help her and that will aid her in forgiving him for hurting Hermione.Snape is going to really kick their relationship up a notch, and you'll see in the coming chapters.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Some things just don't need to be shared. There is no attraction between Snape and Ginny, he was merely helping Ginny get her nerve up. Hermione doesn't need to know, or Harry either. Ginny won't forget all Snape did to help her and that will aid her in forgiving him for hurting Hermione.Snape is going to really kick their relationship up a notch, and you'll see in the coming chapters.Thanks!Livvy
WOW for a minute I was scared for her! I'm glad things went smoothly. I cannot help but wonder if Snape will admit to Hermione about his kiss with Ginny...hmm...that could be a pickle... Excellent job like always!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
No, he nor Ginny will share that. It would only hurt Hermione and Harry, and they do not have an attraction for the other. It was merely Snape letting Ginny get her nerve up and now she will feel more kindly towards him. He did not try to take advantage of her, told her he was not Tom and did not let things progress. If they had progressed past kissing, then things should be confessed, but it didn't and that will be safely tucked in the past.Snape now will focus on his relationship with Hermione and getting their realtionship running better. Next chapter will be an important chapter.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
No, he nor Ginny will share that. It would only hurt Hermione and Harry, and they do not have an attraction for the other. It was merely Snape letting Ginny get her nerve up and now she will feel more kindly towards him. He did not try to take advantage of her, told her he was not Tom and did not let things progress. If they had progressed past kissing, then things should be confessed, but it didn't and that will be safely tucked in the past.Snape now will focus on his relationship with Hermione and getting their realtionship running better. Next chapter will be an important chapter.Thanks!Livvy
*FG* oh, I was afraid there for a moment, but Ginny performed admirably.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
LOL! She did, didn't she? Just proves the point that she truly could match Voldie with power. But now the shit will hit the fan, and V. is not going to be happy knowing he was duped.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
LOL! She did, didn't she? Just proves the point that she truly could match Voldie with power. But now the shit will hit the fan, and V. is not going to be happy knowing he was duped.Thanks!Livvy
Wow, glad to see the plan went off so well. For a minute there, I thought Voldie would just take advantage of her anyway. Boy is he going to be angry when he wakes up! Mwahahaha!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh yes, he will be extremely pissed off, and will seek to scare the crap out of Ginny with warnings of his impending arrival to take her away with him. Big stuff next chapter and we'll be back with our fav. couple as well!Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh yes, he will be extremely pissed off, and will seek to scare the crap out of Ginny with warnings of his impending arrival to take her away with him. Big stuff next chapter and we'll be back with our fav. couple as well!Thanks!Livvy
Good Girl. I always knew she was smart and cunning.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh yes! Ginny has got mad skills!Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh yes! Ginny has got mad skills!Thanks,Livvy