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Longing
livvy6505 Reviews | 6.88/10 (505 Ratings, 0 Likes, 387 Favorites )
Severus fails a test for his allegiance to Voldemort. The fallout from one night will change everything.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
Reviews for Longing
Severus has made such a huge, grievous mistake in the way he's treated her! I know Ginny won't let him forget his stupidity, and I hope Dumbledore won't either.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Oh, you know it! Severus will pay in spades.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
This is EXQUISITE! Clearly J.K. Rowling has nothing on you! I have been reading this story from the beginning, and it has become an obsession. The TRUE romance, the passion! It is incredible!!!Please! Hurry with the next chapter!! I can not wait!!! Truly, truly excellent! One of the best stories I've ever read, by far!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed my fic. The next chapter should be there since it is a complete story. Hope you like the ending! :)Thanks for reviewing,Livvy
Beautiful ending to a delightful story. Thank you for sharing it.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
What a wonderful ball, can't wait to see how their evening ends.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
I save the best for last! :)Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Oh, I'm so happy for Hermione, she deserves good things.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! She sure does deserve the best!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
war is hell, so glad it's over.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
lol! So is everyone else!Thanks!Livvy
Wow, Ginny and the Dark Lord, what will Harry think, Will she tell Harry everything?Loved the ending, Severus can be sensual and even sweet when he wants to be.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, Harry is a good man. Even Severus can step up when he needs to. He knows how much his cowardice harmed Hermione and he wants to make it up to her for the rest of his life.Thanks!Livvy
Well done Ginny, I'm sure you'll have nightmares for a while about what you had to do to get the information, but it was for the "Greater Good".
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
She'll be fine. Harry is a good man. He loves her very much.Thanks!Livvy
I hope Ginny keeps her cool around the creepy Dark Lord.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
She's got the whole of Hogwarts behind her. She'll do fine!ThanksLivvy
It's good to see Hermione and Severus making progress, but I think she will need time before anything serious happens.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
She will need time to sort out her head.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
I love the Ginny/Voldemort angle, very inventive. I hope Snape gets Hermione sorted out soon, before it's to late.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, things getting complicated quickly.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Very powerful chapter, I love it.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
It's wonderful that he can heal her physical scars, lets see how he does with her mental scars.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
It's going to be a process, but he will do his very best.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
It was good to see Dumbledore include Snape in healing Hermione, he was the cause, so maybe he is the only one who can help her.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, Severus needs to see the full extent of the damage he has done.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
It's about time Severus saw what his harsh words have done, and did something to help Hermione heal.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Nothing like a smack in the head with a good dose of reality to wake someone up! ;)Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Severus needs to take a long look at Hermione and see how much she has truly changed since the attack. He also needs to take responsibility for his part in these changes.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Absolutely. He will need to do some serious reevaluation on his life.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Seeing Hermione like this is heartbreaking.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, it is. Soon, there will be help for her.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
It's no wonder she is cutting, she has been victimized twice, and the second time it was by someone she trusted and respected.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, she is spiraling downward. Snape has a lot to answer for.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
What a truly horrible night, poor Hermione. Severus needs to apologize.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, he was out of line. There will be a reason for that, but he does need to apologize.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Snape seems to be a day late and a dollar short - again.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, he'll be like that for a while, unfortunately.Thanks!Livvy
I thought Ginny was a touch O/C in the earlier chapters. I am beginning to understand now.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Yes, she was a bit too intense, but now that we know what's been going on...Thanks!Livvy
Is he going to go easy on her now? I don't know. There are still quite a few chapters remaining and you do have an "angst" warning. I'm all over the conversation between Ron and Hermione. You have Ron speaking in a plural sense, “...You’re our mate, and we love you! ... We don’t want to lose you.” That's exactly the way I believe someone with the emotional range of a teaspoon would carry a conversation!On to chapter 8
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
lol! Yes, that's Ron to me. There is a lot more to come, especially with Ginny.Thanks!Livvy
Simply a fantastic story. I loved the premise from the beginning....you are right, this is the first time I have read a fic that had Severus refusing to harm Hermione after she had been captured. I loved the characterizations you had of all the characters. And as much as I loved how you portrayed Severus and Hermione, I do have to say I loved your portrayals of Harry and Ginny the most in this fic. Thank you so much for sharing this!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)
Thank you! It's hard to go out on a limb, you don't know how it will be received, so I appreciate each review I have received from this fic.Thanks!Livvy