great chapter.  I knew Ron the dunghead would eventually show up and blow his gasket about the turn of events.  he's such a prat.  anyways, i can't wait to read more!

LOL I like Harry and Hermione zapping Ron when he got out of hand.  He needed it. :)

OMG I'm So glad that they cursed Ron before he could do something truly stupid.  He's such a spaz.  I'm so happy that he actually listened to the whole story.  But in the end I thought "Open Mouth, Insert Foot" when Severus walked in!  Haha, too funny.  Great Chapter Dear.  ~ Brena

beautiful!  loved hermione and harry both zapping ron!  thanks so much

I simply LOVE this story!!

This was a great chapter. I really enjoyed the mental image of Severus giving Sebastian a bath. Very cute. I'm so happy to see Hermione being so comfortable around Severus for their child. I was also jealous of how Poppyy could just fix her up after the whole child birth thing. It seriously makes me wish that poppy could fix me up when its my turn to give birth! Anyways I'm off to read the latest update. Much Love ~

Oh, how good of you to continue this.... I already feared you might have given up on this story. I've already read the old version several times and this one is even better!

“Indeed,” came a silky voice from the doorway. "It is."I smirked at that line. I do hope Hermione fall's in love with him. Look forward to more.

I just got caught up on your story, and I really have to say it's quite excellent. What a painful and harrowing time Hermione must have had, trying to decide what to do after that night and then again when her parents threw her out. I have a feeling at some point either Severus or the boys will be having a few choice words with them for not giving their only child a chance to explain what happened, causing her so much anguish and suffering in the process. So far, only the few current residents of Hogwarts know of little Sebastian's existence, but I imagine it will be tough to keep him a secret once the rest of the students return. Well done, and I already added this story to my favorites!

I had lost this story but was so glad to find it back, and even with two more chapters. Great ones, indeed. Looking forward to Severus' attempts at wooing her! will he get advice from AD and PP? Which would be the even less useful ones? Sebastian is a tiny bit too vivid (for his age, I mean). But then he's magical. I'm not sure how rapidly they develop. So he might indeed astound us? So far it's you astounding me with your wonderfully descriptive but sensible writing. Keep going!!

such a picture...sev with the baby on his chest.  and then trying to bathe him!!  wonderful update.  thanks so much

I would have sold my soul for magical maternity care during any of my pregnancies... I really love the slow comfortable way Hermione and Severus are interacting. They're still a bit tentative...but in a good way. Excellent!

This is sooo heartwarming! I'm glad you updated! Loved the chapter (again), and I'm looking forward to the next one (no pressure there).Happy Holidays!gab

nice chapter

It's really good so far. I think what I like best is not only the way you characterized everyone, but also the fact that Sebastian wasn't an accidental 'the contraceptive didn't work' baby. The two of them are too sensible to leave that to chance.

So glad you managed to get an update in before Christmas! And such a cute chapter it is...

Such a nice chapter.  I'm glad things are working out, even slowly.  Love the visual of Severus giving the baby a bath.  New update soon?????

This is truly adorable. The debt of feelings and thoughts you have added is wonderful.

This story is simply adorable. And mind you, I am not too fond on SS/HG, and definitely not fond of babies. And still!I am glad you are giving Severus some peace. ... and his expression held nothing. No anger, no hurt, and no pain ... was a truly beautiful line.Thank you for sharing this with us.Happy Holidays. /M

This was a very nice chat.  I hope Severus stops kicking himself in the ass over what was done to him.  But that could take some time.  Its just Hermione could really use his attention right now, not him being all stuck in his own head.  I can't wait to see whats next.  Cheers! ~Brena 

Hi Red,I've read this story twice already on Ashwinder, but since I enjoyed it very much I'm going to use this chance to read it again. I've enjoyed the first to chapters and I'm looking forward to the next one!gab

Normally I don't like Snape as a father. But this story is so heart-warming. Simply adorable! Thanks for sharing. /M

I have read this story several times before, and I still love it! It's one of the best! I am glad you are posting it here. Are you changing it at all? I hope not, it was fine the way it was!

So far, I'm really liking the story. It's got me hooked. Can't wait for more!

Red ~ I remember starting to read this story over on Ashwinder a long time ago.  I loved it then, but then due to the set up over there I lost track of your updates, and never got to see the ending.  So, I'm just going to re-read and finish it over here on TPP (posting lots of reviews along the way).  I loved the whole idea of story and can't wait to finally see the ending!  Lots of Love  ~