The Calm Before the Storm
Chapter 8 of 16
Red Writing HoodHermione has left Hogwarts during her sixth year. Secrets and desperation brings her back.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Chapter Eight: The Calm Before the Storm
“She’s been in there an awfully long time,” Harry stated as he glanced at the closed door with a look of concern.
Severus agreed inwardly and rose to his feet, and crossing the room, he paused to knock lightly on the door, not wanting to scare the baby inside.
“Hermione?”
There were no answering words from inside, and he pushed the door open farther. The door barely made a squeaking sound as he pushed it open to poke his head inside. His eyes scanned the room quickly, and he breathed deeply when they settled on the woman in question by the window. She sat quietly in the false moonlight, leaning back into the rocker with the baby securely attached to one breast. Both appeared to be deep in sleep. He glanced back at Harry who had walked behind him and was viewing the sleeping pair as well.
“Poor thing, she must be exhausted,” Harry whispered.
“Indeed, she’s had a hard life up until now. Let me get them into bed and I will be out in a moment.”
“Need any help?” Harry offered while watching Severus approach mother and child, gently removing the baby from her breast and covering her back up.
“No, Mr. Potter, this will take only a moment. Please wait outside.”
Harry nodded and turned, leaving Severus to gaze down at the baby in his arms, and the mother still sleeping soundly in the chair. The older man gently swept a brown curl from her tired face before carrying his son to the crib, laying him gently onto his back. He picked up a cotton blanket and draped it loosely over the baby.
“There you go, little man, now Daddy has to attend to Mummy,” he whispered softly to his son before leaning down to kiss the tiny head. With an uncharacteristic smile, he turned back to Hermione, studying her as she slept. She did indeed look exhausted. This would be the first time she would ever get help with Sebastian and would actually be able to get full night’s rest. With him being next door, he intended to be there for the two of them. Carefully he stepped before her, deftly shifted her to where he could tuck his hands under her knees and slip his other hand behind her back. With a bit more effort than he expected, he rose with her in his arms. She was heavier than she appeared, it would seem. Her eyes fluttered for a moment before she fell back into sleep.
“That’s it, Hermione, get some sleep. Things will be fine in the morning,” he whispered into her ear and was rewarded with a contented sigh, her arms snaking around his neck as she settled into his chest.
He gazed into her sleeping face and sighed regretfully. If things had been different, if fate had not interfered in both of their lives, this could have been different. Things could have gone in another direction.
But then, if they had, he would not have his son, and Hermione wouldn’t be sleeping in his arms.
Almost.
He gazed at her once more as he carried her to her bed. Laying her down tenderly, he paused and rested a hand on her cheek. Maybe not completely sleeping in his arms, but at the moment, it was the closest he would ever get. He doubted that she would ever let him get any closer to her after what he'd done to her last year.
Soon he was going to have to have her give him back his memory. He dreaded that day, but he had to know, had to know what kind of revenge to foist on Lucius.
He covered her up and lingered a moment more, just watching her sleep. She could be a beauty if she wanted to be. He noted the long thick lashes that curled slightly at the tips, the rosy glow on her cheeks, and the healthy pink tint of her lips as she smiled in her sleep. No, this woman was already a beauty; no amount of makeup could recreate the natural condition of her complexion.
He pulled his gaze from her and turned toward the door. He was barely two steps away when he paused, turned back, and silently bent down to kiss her forehead.
“Sleep well, my sleeping beauty,” he whispered softly before quickly crossing the room and meeting Potter just as he closed the door.
“Everything all right?” the younger man asked, catching a peek inside before the door closed firmly blocking his view.
“Yes, they are both sleeping peacefully.”
“Good… I… ” Harry started to speak when a crackling noise erupted from behind them. Severus quickly stepped in front of Harry to block his form from whoever was trying to communicate through the Floo, just in case it was Lucius doing his weekly interruption.
“Severus?”
Severus tried not to breathe too audibly in relief as he recognized the voice. He stepped towards the hearth as Albus Dumbledore’s head popped through. “Yes, Headmaster?”
“Ah, I was just seeing if you came in yet. Did Miss Granger make it in as well?”
“She did, sir. They are both sleeping at the moment.”
Albus smiled, and then noticed Harry in the room. “Ah, Harry, my boy, I’m glad that you have also returned. All is well I assume?”
Harry glanced at Severus, then the nursery door, before turning back to the head floating in the fire.
“Yes, sir. I see why you asked me to return so early.”
“Good, good. Severus, I wish to see both you and Hermione in my office later this morning.”
Severus glanced at his watch, only then realizing that dawn was beginning to creep in.
“Of course. Let me get a few hours sleep and we both will be there.”
“Certainly. I shall leave you to it.” He grinned. “Goodnight, Severus, and Harry, I do believe you are out past curfew.”
Harry tried not to grin but failed at the good-humored attempt to be authoritative. “Yes, sir, I’m heading out now anyway.”
“Good, all young men need their sleep. Good night, I’ll see you at breakfast. Oh, and Severus, do please bring your son. I would love to see him.”
Severus nodded silently at the older man’s head before the fire died out, leaving the room in a dank coolness.
Severus and Harry bid each other a curt farewell. Harry left quietly, allowing Severus to close the door behind him.
Severus headed towards his room but first made a detour back into Hermione’s room to check on them first. He saw that Hermione and his son had kicked off their blankets. He quickly re-covered her before walking over to the crib to re-cover the baby. Like mother like son. He grinned.
“Good night,” he whispered as he paused at the door, taking in the scene before him.
Tranquility.
The calm before the storm.
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping
182 Reviews | 5.27/10 Average
Please tell me there will be more? Was lovin every minute of it.
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
This story is completed over at Adultfanfiction.net. I havent found a good beta to finish this story properly. The chapters I have left isnt approved by this site and I had to quit posting here until I get a good beta editor. Sorry.RWH
Response from snapesgoddess (Reviewer)
I will check it out over there then. Thanks youre a great writer. Was really lovin the story.
Please tell me there will be more? Was lovin every minute of it.
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
The whole story is over at Adultfanfiction. I lost my beta and my story isnt perfect enough for here. You can go and finish it there if you want.Thanks for reading. I appreciate it. Same name, same title. RWHood
Aww. It's good to see Severus and the boys getting along. though it has to be heart breaking for Severus to not be able to claim his son in public. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
The whole story is over at Adultfanfiction. I lost my beta and my story isnt perfect enough for here. You can go and finish it there if you want.Thanks for reading. I appreciate it. Same name, same title.RWHood
A wonderful story! If anyone is interested I found the completed story on FanFiction.net. You are a great author, Red Writing Hood
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you Lovestruck, I appreciate your kind words. I also have this over at Adultfanfiction as well.RWH
great chapter, i can't wait to read more!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thanks Hon! I appreciate it.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thanks Hon! I appreciate it.Red
For advice on your lovelife, write to Uncle Albus, agony columnist. He can remember THAT far back. I am impressed! very good chapter!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL. Well, he wouldnt make a Doctor Ruth...but he has his moments. Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL. Well, he wouldnt make a Doctor Ruth...but he has his moments. Red
i like your albus way better than jkr's. excellent update. thanks so much!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Man, talk about a great compliment. Thank you!Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Man, talk about a great compliment. Thank you!Red
Wow! I just read the whole of this.. it's amazing!! Who would have thought SEVERUS and his soft side. Love it.
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL, Thanks. I like to think that everyone has a soft spot for their own child...well, most everyone, there are those that couldnt care less, but that is NOT my Severus....Grrrr.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL, Thanks. I like to think that everyone has a soft spot for their own child...well, most everyone, there are those that couldnt care less, but that is NOT my Severus....Grrrr.Red
What an amazing story ... I can't wait to see where you take it from here. And Severus' concerns about why Lucius never taunted him about that night aside, here's another thought: Draco surely told his father about Hermione's disappearance after that night, so if Lucius was so intent on securing Hermione, why didn't he attempt to track her down? Or was Hermione 'lucky' enough elude him by hiding out in the Muggle world until she gave birth?
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I'm pretty sure I answered these questions, you just have to keep reading. LOL. Thanks for the review,Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I'm pretty sure I answered these questions, you just have to keep reading. LOL. Thanks for the review,Red
I had started to worry about you, and I'm sooo glad you're back!!! Great chapter, as always!!gab
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
No wories about me, just took some time to locate a new beta reader. Thanks though.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
No wories about me, just took some time to locate a new beta reader. Thanks though.Red
I read this on Ashwinder, and it's one of my favorites, so I am reading it again here! I have to say your portrayal of Dumbledore in this story is one of my favorites in any story. And Severus is done well too, even if he is a little tiny bit OOC. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I am pleased to hear that. Reviews like this keep me writing. Thank you.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I am pleased to hear that. Reviews like this keep me writing. Thank you.Red
Severus is fabulous at self-torture. I really love the way you used Dumbledore. He felt caring, rather than manipulative. That's a nice way to read him. I hope we get to see a lot of Severus' plan to get revenge on Lucius!!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL...well, you wont get to see any revenge until the last of the story, but its well worth the wait. LOLRed
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL...well, you wont get to see any revenge until the last of the story, but its well worth the wait. LOLRed
“Woo her, I suppose.” haha, that was just too sweet!Yes, this chapter was certainly worth the wait. I missed your story a lot.I like the way you have portrayed Severus in this chapter. He just cannot accept how much good he is doing, can he?And I am very curious about what he'll do with the candle.Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next. Cheers. /M
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I like a somewhat OOC Snape. But I do agree, he does like to self criticize himself. He's a good man, but he refuses to see it himself.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I like a somewhat OOC Snape. But I do agree, he does like to self criticize himself. He's a good man, but he refuses to see it himself.Red
lovely update. i like the way you discribe hermione's thot processes. thanks so much
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you, I appreciate that. More is coming soon.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you, I appreciate that. More is coming soon.Red
This was a great chapter for Hermione's POV. I would be thinking the same thing if I were here...why didn't he come find me? Anyways I'm so glad that she was able to think through the situation and find that common ground. Keep those chapters coming! ~Brena
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you, Brena, More chapters are coming. Please keep reading. I appreciate your reviewsRed
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you, Brena, More chapters are coming. Please keep reading. I appreciate your reviewsRed
I like that Hermione is not harbouring a crush on Severus already. She has seen him through new eyes and will need to get to know him better, which makes for a good story! :)
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Me too. Its a brand new relationship and we all know how exciting new relationships can be to build.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Me too. Its a brand new relationship and we all know how exciting new relationships can be to build.Red
Beautiful story. I love all the little details you have put it. This story is shaping up to be one I read over and over again. Looking forward to see how things develop.
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Oh, I really appreciate your review. I'm so glad that you are enjoying it. More are coming. Just had to find another beta.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Oh, I really appreciate your review. I'm so glad that you are enjoying it. More are coming. Just had to find another beta.Red
A great story. I love the way the relationship is developing. What will happen, though, when school starts back?
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I think you will have a very interesting surprise when school starts back.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I think you will have a very interesting surprise when school starts back.Red
A great story. I love the way the relationship is developing. What will happen, though, when school starts back?
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL...Ditto the first answer.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL...Ditto the first answer.Red
great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you. More will be coming up soon.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you. More will be coming up soon.Red
Great chapter! I'm so glad Hermione doesn't blame Severus for what happened. I can't wait to see the revenge they get with Lucius. Keep em coming....
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Im going to try to keep them coming, however, I do need to find another beta reader. I seem to be having problems with my chapters and need someone who understand sentence structure. I'm an idiot when it comes to those gosh darn commas! Ugh...any rate, as soon as I can, I will get another one up.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Im going to try to keep them coming, however, I do need to find another beta reader. I seem to be having problems with my chapters and need someone who understand sentence structure. I'm an idiot when it comes to those gosh darn commas! Ugh...any rate, as soon as I can, I will get another one up.Red
I really like the added details you have given the story it's just enough to give it a more polished feel. Especially Poppy and Minerva's acknowledgement of the realtionship. The theme of family is coming through quite well. The staff and her friends at Hogwarts will provide Hermione with the extended family that will help sustain Hermione, Severus and Sebastian as they themselves grow into a family.
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you. I'm glad that you like the rewrite. However, I'm afraid that the next chapters may take a while. I have to locate another beta to go over sentence structure. I suck at that. Anyway...as soon as I do, I'll get another chapter up.Thanks for your patience.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Thank you. I'm glad that you like the rewrite. However, I'm afraid that the next chapters may take a while. I have to locate another beta to go over sentence structure. I suck at that. Anyway...as soon as I do, I'll get another chapter up.Thanks for your patience.Red
Another wonderful chapter, but that's what I could write in ever single review here. Although "shag with her female friends"??? I am not a native speaker of English but it sounds weird to me...
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Hum...sounds fine to me. Although the way you have it here...that does sound odd. Hum.Red
Response from Muggline (Reviewer)
Well, I always thought that "to shag with someone" means "to have sex with someone". "She never wanted to have sex with her female friends" - oh but I hope so!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Goddess, I hope not. I think I had better go and re-read that part. LOLThanks again.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Hum...sounds fine to me. Although the way you have it here...that does sound odd. Hum.Red
Response from Muggline (Reviewer)
Well, I always thought that "to shag with someone" means "to have sex with someone". "She never wanted to have sex with her female friends" - oh but I hope so!
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
Goddess, I hope not. I think I had better go and re-read that part. LOLThanks again.Red
You know, I am amazed. I am not a big SS/HG fan. And I most definitely do not like babies. But I am so glad that I started to read this wonderful story. I drop everything when I hear that it has been updated, and leave the computer with a happy feeling when I have read the new chapter.Already looking forward to the next. Thank you for sharing. /M
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL. I'm glad that you like this story. It makes me feel good to read a review like this. However, it may take a while to get the next chapter up. I have to locate another beta reader. One that understands sentence structure better than me. Ugh! Anyway... I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can.Blessed Be!Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
LOL. I'm glad that you like this story. It makes me feel good to read a review like this. However, it may take a while to get the next chapter up. I have to locate another beta reader. One that understands sentence structure better than me. Ugh! Anyway... I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can.Blessed Be!Red
Loved this chapter, this time just as much as last time. I'm already waiting anxiously for the next one!gab
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I'll get it up as soon as I can. Need a new beta reader. But...hopefully, it wont take too long.Red
Response from Red Writing Hood (Author of A Secret Worth Keeping)
I'll get it up as soon as I can. Need a new beta reader. But...hopefully, it wont take too long.Red