Ooh, a mystery.  I wonder if Lavender is behind it.

Hmmm... the good professor has a point--Ron's behaviour is illogical. I wonder what he wants and what is causing his strange behaviour. Lovely chappie as always, dear. Looking forward to more!    -

Aww, what a wonderful chapter, dear! I think it is sweet that Morticia and Gomez are so affectionate with one another--so much so like the Addams couple. I wish that Sev would let go of some of that tough resolve and give in a little sometimes. He is such a great, honourable man and Hermione needs someone like that, not the "Walnut Head," Ron.                 -

Very intersting line of thinking. Severus is right, it's to much anger comming from Ron. Hope to read more soon!

This story makes my heart hurt.  I just imagine my ex trying to do this to me and it just kills me.  And it's not even happening to me!  Excellent story and I am following it closely, but I can't wait until Ron gets his and Hermione gets to see his children again.

I was wondering where all this hatred Ron has for Hermione sprung from. There's something definitely going on, and I wouldn't be surprised if it was illegal. That would be just fitting, since Ron prides himself on being an Auror. I think whatever it is should land him in Azkaban. Hermione will look the innocent, and perhaps it will spur Ron into seeing reason. Then she can take the kids, and get full custody instead, since their father would be a felon himself. I know it's a long shot, and probably not even remotely close to what you have thought up. I'm sure your plan for Ron is much more intriguing than what my imagination came up with.

I've been having a diffiucult time reading this story. I went through a similiar situation and it has brought back many of my old feelings and fears.
To say that Ron's attitude and nastiness paralells my ex's is putting it mildly. I have, however been unable to NOT read it. I want to see Ron get his comeuppance as my ex did. The story is well written and emotional charged. I look forward to the next chapter.

I was so glad to see an update. I can't wait to see what Snape uncovers. Have you given us a hint and I missed it?

I wouldnt thing Ron could keep secret whatever the hell is bothering him so much that he is willing to put his whole family thorugh this hell. Its an interesting idea tho. I cant wait to see how this unfolds! coolness!~

Just stopping by in case you are still around to let you know that at least one person (and likely many more) would love to see this finished.  No pressure, just encouragement.  Hope all is well.

This is a wonderful story. I enjoy reading it everytime you update. You are right, your story should have been nominated. I just found out about LJ voting and was surprised your story was not there. If I wasn't so late in finding LJ I would have nominated your story myself. Keep writting and updating you dont need a nomination. You are voted for by the number of people who read and follow your story.  

This was a wonderful chapter.  Very thought provoking.  I will stay with you and wait until you post again.  This story caught my eye a while ago and now I look forward to your updates.

Please don't get discouraged about awards (I know, easier said than done - fought it myself this time.) It's a wonderful story, but I guess only the top 5 stories in each category get to the next level - and that can be tough to achieve. You won't know if people nominated you unless you hit the top 5.  I look forward to reading more in the future, but I do understand wanting the best continuity. You are weaving a fabulous! tale (and time the completion right and maybe it will be eligible for next year! we just need the grass roots campaign!)

As much as I love to see your updates, I understand wanting to make sure it is fluid and not contradictory.  I will bide my time and happily read when posting continues.  I love this story.  The intrigue is great and the romantic in me so wants a happy ending for Severus and Hermione.

This sis a great story,  and I'm glad to see an update. While I hate to think of a long wait on the rest of the story...

You've created a compelling, well-written mystery, Clay.  I am disappointed that we won't see updates for a while, but I'll not abandon this story.  Good luck and may the muse give you swift fingers.

I was happy to see an update. I love your story and are looking forward to the day you update again. Take your time and don't be disapointed about the missing nomination, I guess there are a lot of people out there who are enjoying this and as Cerydden state a lot of us do not nominate.

I have enjoyed your story very much and have always looked forward to the next installment - I hope that it won't be too long, but if so I will be waiting :-)

Hey, I always get happy to see that you updated!  I'm a happy ending junkie and it seemed I'd get my fix with this story.  I will be very happy to see the next installment. Please don't be discouraged about the nominations. I have never nominated anyone for anything, but I know what I like and I like this story.  I think exposure is a key, plus a lot of authors practically beg people to nominate them or vote for them.  Advertising pays, I guess.  Anyway, hang in there and make yourself satisfied ... the rest of us will be!

Did Umbridge give Rita the mirror? This is really interesting.  Take your time, dear, and give us your story when you are ready.

Why do parents feel the need to use their children as weapons.  I'm glad to see that Severus went to Molly; hopefully she beats the stuffings out of our lovely Ron *prat*.  Looking forward to the next installment

I read this the other day, but just realized that I didn't leave a review. You've said in some review replies that Ron is getting bad advice.  I was pondering just who might dislike Hermione that much and also have influence with Ron.  Then it hit me--the 'advisor' doesn't have to dislike her--he or she simply has to be a total ass----. There are a number of those in the HP universe to choose from, but one right in Ron's own family that he might be swayed by:  Percy (the prat!). If Ron is actually listening to Percy these days, he has fallen farther down the intelligence scale than I ever believed possible!!Snape had a good idea, returning Hugo to his grandmother and letting Molly know that Ron prevented Hermione from coming to Hugo's party.  I hope she straightens her jerk of a son out. 

wonderful!  lovely update and i'm placing all my trust in you to see that ron is thoroughly punished!  thanks so much

I am hopeful that together Snape and Hermione can find a loop hole that even lawyer Blaise didnt know about!

And just when I thought I couldnt loath Ron anymore, he sinks further down!! I like the idea of Hermione recording all her attempts to see Hugo but I doubt it will help much. Poor Rose that is going to be one hellva shock when she gets her mother's letter. I hope Hermione plans a visit to Hogsmeade as well. Go Snape go run and hide!