Isolation
Chapter 32 of 35
ClayPotterHermione finds herself feeling very much alone.
A/N: Thanks again so very much to jengeorge and shebringsmewater for their fine beta work. And I wouldn't get far without the help of my hard-working Admin, lyn_f. You ladies are the best!
And, of course, I make no money from the writing and sharing of this story. It all belongs to the amazing JK Rowling.
Chapter 32
Isolation
Although that horrid article by Rita Skeeter had stolen Hermione's appetite, she made her way to her assigned seat at the High Table in the hope of forcing down some breakfast. As she approached, McGonagall waved her over. "You have third period free, if I recall correctly, Professor Granger, do you not?"
"Yes, ma'am," Hermione choked out. She was trying her best to maintain her composure in front of the entire school, but it was indeed difficult.
"Come to my office then."
Hermione nodded obediently and made her way to her seat. She knew it was necessary, but it was the last thing in the world she wanted to do.
As she sat at the table in a feeble attempt to eat breakfast and put on a brave face, she received two more Howlers and four more letters from angry parents. She also noticed, much to her chagrin, that the Headmistress also received several owls, and from the look on Minerva's face, none of them were friendly.
It was all Hermione could do to make it through her first class of the day, double Charms with the fourth-year Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws. When the bell finally sounded, her mind was so stressfully consumed with thoughts of the upcoming meeting that she forgot to assign the class any homework. She absentmindedly straightened papers on her desk as they all quickly filed out, in a rush, no doubt, to exit before she changed her mind. After the room had emptied, she closed and warded the door and headed for Minerva's office.
"Hermione," Minerva began apologetically, "I know this is a most unfair situation, and I know as well as you do that Severus has done nothing to deserve such wicked treatment, but the fact remains that he is a convicted felon and therefore inappropriate for you to keep company with."
"But Minerva..."
"I'm sorry, Hermione, but my hands are tied in this instance. I must answer to both the parents and the Board of Governors, and they are all calling for your resignation if you do not put an end to your association with Severus."
"But I'm the only friend he has!" she insisted. "I can't abandon him now. He cares deeply for my children, and they for him. He needs us!"
"And from everything I've heard, you need this job. You can't have it both ways, Hermione. I'm afraid you will have to choose between Severus Snape and your career here at Hogwarts."
"Please don't do this to me, Minerva. I can't bear to break his heart."
Minerva's eyes narrowed as she studied her former pupil. "Is it his heart or yours that will be broken?"
Hermione sniffed and stared at her shoes as a lone tear meandered down her face.
Minerva moved around the side of the desk and placed a gentle hand on Hermione's shoulder. "Do you love him, child?" she asked with a touch of wonder in her voice.
Hermione nodded as the tears began to flow freely.
"And what are his feelings in this matter?"
"He has never actually said as much, but I believe that he cares deeply for me."
"Oh, dear. This does complicate things. The decision would be easy if he could afford to support you. But you and I both know that's not possible in his present situation. Perhaps someday... But for now, I must insist..."
"NO!" Hermione glared at her former head of house. "I will NOT abandon him. The entire wizarding world turned its back on him when it should have heralded him as a hero. I refuse to do the same. I'll take a Muggle job to support myself if I must. But I will not throw his friendship back in his face. To hell with the rest of the wizarding world. If this is how they treat their heroes, perhaps I'd just as soon wash my hands of the lot."
"Hermione, you don't mean that," Minerva pleaded.
Hermione had stopped crying, her tears having been replaced by sheer rage. "Do what you must, Minerva, but I will not turn my back on Severus Snape!" With that, she turned on her heel and headed for the spiral staircase, teaching robes billowing defiantly behind her.
"You leave me little choice, child," the headmistress called after her. But Hermione disappeared through the door in an irate huff.
"Ah, love's sweet sorrow," commented Dilys Derwint's portrait in a soft, calm voice.
"She is right, you know," Phineas Nigelus Black added with his chin held high. "He deserves an award, not condemnation."
"Don't you think I know that?" Minerva snarled back at him. "But my hands are tied."
"Perhaps we should ask Severus for another alternative," suggested Albus gently. "If he cares for her the way I believe he does, he'll do what's best for her."
*****
Friday morning found Hermione back at the records office at the Ministry of Magic. She had suffered through a number of glares on her way through the corridors, and one employee had even had the gall to mutter Professor Snape's name and tsk at her as she walked by. She tried to ignore the insults and innuendos, but Mrs. Oddfellow's comment was the last straw. She had given the woman instructions as to which records she needed for the morning, and the woman had just returned with a pile hovering behind her. Hermione thought she was going to get off easy, but the old biddy just couldn't keep her thoughts to herself. "Gads, woman!" she announced as she waddled to the front counter. "You had Viktor Krum in the palm of your hand, and you turn him down for that scum, Snape. Have you lost your MIND??!"
In a fit of wandless magic, sparks flew out of Hermione's hand as she pointed her finger in the old fuddy-duddy's face. "Severus Snape is a hero," she growled. "Somehow, some day, I'll prove it. But until then, if I ever hear you speak ill of him again, so help me, I'll turn you into a NEWT PERMANENTLY!!"
The stuff-budget snorted like the pig that she was. "Well, I never! Such rude behavior." She hobbled away to the back of the room and didn't emerge for the rest of the time that Hermione remained there.
Thank Merlin for small favors. As she cleared her mind and concentrated on her work, Hermione discovered that every transferee that had put in a request to leave the country had been a Muggle-born, and each of their transfer papers had been signed by none other than Dolores Umbridge. The circumstantial evidence was finally beginning to build up against her.
Hermione left the Records Office that afternoon and headed straight up to the Auror Office in hopes of catching Harry to give him an update, but Ron informed her that Harry was away on assignment and wouldn't be back until Wednesday at the earliest. He offered to relay a message, but she declined his offer. Since she didn't dare put her findings in writing, she would just have to wait until he came back.
"Sorry about that article, Hermione," Ron admitted with trepidation. "I know Snape doesn't deserve what he got. And neither do you."
"Thanks, Ron." Hermione gave him a melancholy smile. It was the first kind word she had received since breakfast that morning.
"Hogwarts couldn't ask for a better teacher than you. If they can't see that... well... then they don't deserve you."
"Perhaps you could write a letter to the editor? It might not do much good, but you never know."
"You know writing is not my strong suit, Hermione. But I'll try. I'd tell you to move back in with me and keep on seeing Snape on the side, but after spending so much time in France, I started dating Gabrielle Delacour, and somehow, I don't think having you living there would help my chances with her. I hope you don't mind."
"Oh, no, Ron. I don't mind. I want you to be happy."
"As long as it's with someone else." They both chuckled, and she reached up and gave his shoulder a friendly pat.
"Thanks for telling me. I'd rather hear it from you than through the grapevine."
***
After retrieving Hugo from the Burrow, Hermione made her way home. But her computer beckoned and repelled her simultaneously. She wanted desperately to IM Professor Snape, but she was so afraid of what he would say. Would he refuse to see her anymore, claiming it was for her own good? She had not received an owl from him all week. She knew he must have been stewing over that damnable article. Curse that Skeeter woman!
After a quiet dinner and seeing Hugo to bed, she finally decided to face the music. She held her breath as the screen hummed to life. She was disappointed to discover that he wasn't online. But sure enough, an email awaited her from HalfBloodPrince. When she opened it, her heart sank.
My dearest Miss Granger,
I regret to inform you that I will no longer be able to attend dinner at your home on Sunday evenings or any other evenings for that matter. Although it pains me to do so, I'm sure you can see that it is in the best interest of both you and your children. Words cannot express my sorrow in coming to this decision, but it has become unquestionably necessary. A Slytherin at times can ignore his moral fiber in such instances, but in the end, I decided to channel my inner Gryffindor.
We both know it's unavoidable. We both know it is the right thing to do. Please do not attempt to sway my decision. It is final.
I feel that we should keep in touch, however, until such time as the powers that be deem even friendly letters inappropriate. We can stick to emails and IMs on weekends and owls during the week. If you need to relay anything important that has to do with our little project, I suggest that you relay the information only via email, since it is undetectable by the wizarding authorities, or employ the emissary skills of Mr. Potter.
I will be available tomorrow afternoon if further correspondence is needed. Look for me online anytime after two o'clock.
Once again, please forgive my decision. To say it was difficult is an understatement in the extreme.
I am, as always, forever yours,
Severus Snape
Well, there it was in a nutshell. McGonagall must have gotten to him... appealed to his inner Gryffindor. One of the few times she wished he wouldn't have been so gallant. She would wait until tomorrow to IM him about the case.
*****
When Sunday afternoon finally came, Hermione dutifully corresponded with Professor Snape about the case as requested. After going back and forth about her findings, they determined that they still didn't have enough to convict Umbridge. Professor Snape asked if she had discussed her findings with Potter. She told him what Ron had conveyed to her the previous Friday afternoon about Harry being out of town on assignment. Snape told her not to worry. He would get the information to Potter during the week. He had an idea as to how to proceed, but he couldn't elaborate at the moment because it was something that she was better off not knowing about. He was attempting to end the conversation when Hugo came into the room.
"Tell Professor Snape that I miss him, and I think Rita Skeeter should be thrown in Azkaban for telling lies about both of you! I can tell the people on the Wizengamot what a great guy he is if he thinks it will help."
Hermione laughed. "I'm afraid they can't throw her into Azkaban for telling lies, love. But here, I'll spell the computer to respond to your voice, and you can tell Professor Snape yourself."
"That would be GREAT! If he can't be here, this is the next best thing." The boy waited patiently while his mother informed Professor Snape of the change and cast the necessary spell.
Snape stared sadly at the computer screen and waited for Hugo's message. He managed a half-smile at the notion that Hugo was willing to testify on his behalf. Such a pure soul. Such a brave heart. He would end up in Gryffindor for sure.
After a short conversation, Miss Granger came back on.
MuggleBornWitch: I echo Hugo's sentiments. I miss you terribly.
HalfBloodPrince: Don't dwell on it. You'll accomplish nothing and only cause yourself pain.
MuggleBornWitch: Easier said than done, I'm afraid. Rose is really sorry, by the way. She blames herself for all of this. She feels that if she hadn't been bragging about having you for a private Potions tutor, none of this would have happened.
HalfBloodPrince: Poor girl. Please reassure her that I do not hold her responsible. Someone would have discovered our friendship sooner or later. I'm actually flattered that she would want to brag about her association with me. No one has felt the desire to do that for many years.
MuggleBornWitch: No one knows you like we do.
HalfBloodPrince: Thank Merlin.
Hermione chuckled.
HalfBloodPrince: I have work to do. I suggest you spend some quality time with your son. Give him a hug for me.
MuggleBornWitch: Will do. Owl me?
HalfBloodPrince: Of course.
Hermione couldn't quite bring herself to say, "goodbye."
MuggleBornWitch: Until later, then.
HalfBloodPrince: Later.
Apparently, neither could he.
*****
Although Professor Snape had promised to owl Hermione during the week, by Wednesday she had yet to receive anything but more angry letters from parents. McGonagall had given a press release to the Daily Prophet and The Quibbler, which hit the newsstands by that same day, announcing that Professor Granger had ceased socializing with Severus Snape, in the hope of quelling parental objections. So the volume of negative owls finally began to subside. But Hermione knew that suspicions would linger indefinitely unless she could find a way to clear his name.
It all boiled down to convicting Umbridge, finding her guilty, and having her dispelled from the Wizengamot. Then, and only then, would an appeal to prove Professor Snape's innocence have any hope of bearing fruit.
Whatever Professor Snape had up his sleeve, she hoped and prayed it would work.
*****
Wednesday evening, Hermione felt the credit card heat up in her pocket. She had just left the Great Hall after dinner and was heading up to her quarters when she noticed it, so she stepped into a nearby alcove and discreetly pulled it out. It read, "S to P only. 7-12-7p." She knew from the message that Harry and Professor Snape would meet the following evening at 7:00 p.m. She knew the rules: if she was caught, she would probably lose her job. But her heart ached so badly from missing him that she just simply had to go. So she pushed herself to get all of her grading done early, she offered to take a later hall patrol, switching with a grateful Madam Hooch, and tried to look nonchalant as she strolled about the castle grounds the following evening after dinner.
At 6:45 p.m., she managed to end up right by the Whomping Willow. She leaned against a large boulder and pretended to be winded as she scanned the castle windows for curious on-lookers. But it was December. Daylight had made its escape hours ago. And the overcast sky made visibility almost impossible save for the dim light coming from the castle windows. Since no direct light illuminated anything this far away, she needed nothing extra to conceal her activities, but she cast a Notice-Me-Not charm for good measure. Then she Levitated a large rock over the knotted root and let it drop. Just as the tree stilled, an orange fur ball shot through the shadows and into the hole between the roots. Crookshanks! Harry and the Professor will just love this! she mused.
As Hermione and her half-kneazle made their way through the cramped tunnel towards the cellar entrance to the Shrieking Shack, she could feel the anticipation and anxiety growing. Will he be angry with me for showing up uninvited? Will he Disapparate away on the spot? Oh, Merlin, I hope not. Just one hug, Professor, please, please, please? Then I'll leave, I promise.
She continued to practice pleading with her beloved Professor and second-guessing her decision to crash their party until she finally arrived at the end of the tunnel. But as she glanced up, she noticed that there was no light, no sound, no signs of life. She checked her wristwatch. Just before 7:00 p.m. Perhaps I'm a bit early. She Levitated the crate off the opening and lit the end of her wand with a silent Lumos.
She blew the dust from the crate with a loud gust of breath and sat down. Then she decided that the light might attract attention from anyone who happened to pass by, so she extinguished her wand and waited patiently...
Crookshanks leaped up onto her lap and made himself comfortable. She gently stroked his fur as he began to produce a purring sound so loud it could scare away any mouse within fifty feet. The minutes ticked by with an aching lack of speed or enthusiasm. Finally, Hermione glanced down at her watch, whose hands and numbers glowed in the dark. 7:03. I've only been here for five minutes? God, it feels more like fifteen!
She continued to stroke Crookshanks' fur. At this point he had rolled over and was presenting his expansive tummy for inspection. "Professor Snape is never late, Crooks," she pondered out loud. "Now, Harry is quite another matter."
After only about fifteen minutes, but what felt like hours, she finally began to worry about them. "Where could they be, Crooks? Why aren't they here?"
She reached into her pocket and retrieved the credit card. The message from the day before was still emblazoned on its surface. "S to P only. 7-12-7p." No change. A change would have shown up and stayed there, even if she had not noticed the card burning. She glared at her watch. 7:30 p.m. If they were coming, they would have been here by now.
As the tears rolled down her contorted face, she felt soft paws knead her shattered heart. Then her familiar stretched up to put his front paws on either side of her neck, and he silently licked her tears away. "Is this why you came, love, to comfort me? How did you know?" She cradled the flat-faced fluff-ball in her arms and buried her nose in his soft belly. "How did you know I would need you so much?"
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I hope you stil intend to finish the story xoxo
Response from Buckshotwon1 (Reviewer)
No problems. Hugs
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Someday. I haven't forgotten. Now that I work full...
I can't fault you for making a working relationship between HG & RW. I think it's better that way and better for the kids. I never thought he was evil. Just self absorbed and easily misguided.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I tried to be realistic about their relationship. I have known married couples who werer terrible together, but after the divorce, they got along much better living separate lives. They were just not meant to share a house. In real life most people are not purely good or evil. They come in shades of grey. Thank you for reading. I still swear I will finish it someday.
SS's breaking heart made me cry!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi. Thank you for your review. Yes, the chapter was meant to pull on your heart strings.
Omg its been 5 years ago I started to read your fic back in 2008 and it was such an upset when you stoped updating the next year. And just today I was looking for my old e-books and saw your fic and immediatly went here:) It seems you keep on updating so you just ought to finish such an amazing story!;) may the muse be with you🙏🏻oh and sorry for my awful English:)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I am so bad to have not updated in such a long time. I feel really guilty for leaving everyone hanging at such a suspensful moment, but my life has been crazy since I stopped writing. I have a full time job with overtime, I go to school part time, and I spend a couple of hours a day in my car going from place to place because work, school and home are so far away from each other. I think often about my story and how I would like to finish it. I have an outline. I even have parts of it written, but not the next part. That one has kept me stuck because I want it to be funny, but the comic muse has deserted me lately. I guess I just have to force myself. But time steals away many of the things I would like to do. And I have to sleep in there somewhere. I have not abandon it. I will finish it eventually. Thank you for taking the time to remind me that people are out there that are still interested.
I am SO pleased you started updating again. I always did love this story. :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks. It has been a while since my last update but I hope to be writing again soon. Please continue to be patient with me. I will finish it. I promise.
But I want more! Drat. I rarely start works in progress b/c I can never contain myself enough to wait for updates on things I like. Somehow I didn't notice this wasn't finished, so here I am, all jittery, needing my fix. Next chapter plz?
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Next chapter still needs some work. Sorry. Much of it is written, but I really want it to be funny. Comedy is hard to write. Please be patient with me. My life is crazy right now. Too many irons in the fire.
Rose was very rude, but when all is said and done, she is daddy's little girl, and will stick by him nomatter what. As she grows older she may see that Severus is a good man, and accept him in their lives. I have been wondering, given the role both her parents played in the war why does she know so little, knowing Ron he would be more than willing to tell war storys, but Hermione said the children know very little of their parents ordeals at school.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I think you are right, that Ron would want to brag about their exploits at school, but I also think Hermione would advise against it. She wouldn't want her kids to think it was OK to go looking for trouble just because their parents did. I also took my cue from the epilogue in book seven. All the kids on the train are staring at Harry, but when one of their children asks what everyone is staring at, Ron says it's him, he's really famous. If he had told his kids about everything that happened, they would know that people were staring at Uncle Harry, not their father. So that makes me believe that at least at this young age, even Ron would keep his mouth shut about their adventures at school.
I am REALLY hoping that Umbridge gets what she deserves.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Things are not always what they seem. But don't worry, you'll get your wish.Thanks again for taking the time to read and review. It means the world to me.
Ron is learning that age old lesson " Kama is a BITCH " and who better to teach it than Lav Lav.
Severus' dream was wonderful, I hope it comes true in the end.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Many of my readers wanted something horrible to happen to Ron as a result of his cheating on Hermione and trying to keep her children away to get her back. I'm not a vindicative person, and I find that usually these things work out without me taking revenge on my own. So I let Hermione stay out of it. Karma does have a way of making a person pay, and I'm glad to know that you enjoyed the way things back-lashed at Ron.Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Well, that was just a mean place to leave things! He is so going to kill her. I'll let you decide if "her" means Rita or Hermione, lol. I really have no idea what is going to happen now. Perhaps they can run away and become teachers at Possum Pouch. :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Most of the next chapter is written, but it is not quite finished yet. Do have patience with me please. I know where this is going, I just have to take the steps to get there.Thanks so much (again) for reading and reviewing. Your's is the only review for this chapter after a whole week. I used to have a following... Oh well. Don't worry, I'll finish it, even if you, I and my betas are the only ones who read it!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I don't know what keeps people from reviewing. It takes very little time (unless you are on your phone and it keeps erasing you note!), and it keeps authors writing. I would hate to see people stop posting for lack of reviews.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Most of the next chapter is written, but it is not quite finished yet. Do have patience with me please. I know where this is going, I just have to take the steps to get there.Thanks so much (again) for reading and reviewing. Your's is the only review for this chapter after a whole week. I used to have a following... Oh well. Don't worry, I'll finish it, even if you, I and my betas are the only ones who read it!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I don't know what keeps people from reviewing. It takes very little time (unless you are on your phone and it keeps erasing you note!), and it keeps authors writing. I would hate to see people stop posting for lack of reviews.
I'm on my phone and it is a pain in the ass to review here, so suffice it to say that this chapter was excellent, Ron and Hermione included.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I usually read on my phone as well, so I know just where you are coming from. I thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. The reviews spur me on to scrape the moments together that I need to finish this, although from the look of the reviews, I don't have many readers left. My own fault for waiting so long to get back to it. One cannot force inspiration to strike, however, so I do the best I can with the time and muse that I have.Thanks again for the complement.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I usually read on my phone as well, so I know just where you are coming from. I thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. The reviews spur me on to scrape the moments together that I need to finish this, although from the look of the reviews, I don't have many readers left. My own fault for waiting so long to get back to it. One cannot force inspiration to strike, however, so I do the best I can with the time and muse that I have.Thanks again for the complement.
Really liking the mystery as it is coming together now. ;)+the hints of the future are such a tease!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks for the encouraging comments,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I appreciate the review and the fact that you are hanging in there with me.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks for the encouraging comments,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I appreciate the review and the fact that you are hanging in there with me.
I'm having several ideas about the culprit and that development was something I was sort of hoping for. Verrry interested about next chapter.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
It takes a while before all is revealed, but all will be answered eventually. I like plot twists. Hope this keeps at least some of you guessing for a while.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
It takes a while before all is revealed, but all will be answered eventually. I like plot twists. Hope this keeps at least some of you guessing for a while.
I am interested to see what Severus and Kingsley come up with for the restaurant. And, are they really seeing the future somehow in their dreams? And Rita ... If she had any sense at all, she would have approached Hermione who proved to be trustworthy in the past. But alas ...
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Rita doesn't have the luxury of approaching anybody. As you know by now, she is under someone elses influence... someone not very nice. It is easy to hate Rita, but things are not always as they seem.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Rita doesn't have the luxury of approaching anybody. As you know by now, she is under someone elses influence... someone not very nice. It is easy to hate Rita, but things are not always as they seem.
I don't suppose there is any chance that Snape is a feline animagus? Just where are they?!?! * is nervous*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
As far as I know, Snape has no Animagus form. Where he and Harry ended up is answered in the next chapter, as you already know by now. Nothing to be nervous about, although I do feel sad for Hermione.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
As far as I know, Snape has no Animagus form. Where he and Harry ended up is answered in the next chapter, as you already know by now. Nothing to be nervous about, although I do feel sad for Hermione.
I had forgotten what a cliffhanger this is. I am so glad you are back to posting. I have to say that while I am with Hermione that Umbridge is definitely involved, I don't have a clue how this is going to end up. I suppose as long as Severus gets the girl and stays out of Azkaban, the rest will fall into place.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
That is the best reason for writing, to be sure he gets the girl in the end. They both deserve to be happy.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
That is the best reason for writing, to be sure he gets the girl in the end. They both deserve to be happy.
Rita disappearing is very concerning, indeed. Poor Winky, so frightened. Poor Snape is probably still floored as to how she escaped. I am as well. *is nervous*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
By now you have read ahead and know that Rita escaped up the chimney, a place Severus didn't think to ward. Oh well. He doesn't know that she is an unregistered Animagus.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
By now you have read ahead and know that Rita escaped up the chimney, a place Severus didn't think to ward. Oh well. He doesn't know that she is an unregistered Animagus.
I had intended to stop and review each chapter while I reread since I didn't do so the first time around, but I am reading on my phone while I await the repair of my computer and it is a bitch to do so. But, I had to drop in here for a moment because this chapter has one of those scenes that has always stuck with me since I read it. That is the healing scene between Severus, Rose, and Hugo. It is such an intense yet wonderful moment of bonding. Love it!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks so much
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, that is one of my favorites as well. I read alot on my phone. I have read all of your reviews as you posted them, but I can't respond on my phone. Sorry you had to wait for my responses.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks so much
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
, that is one of my favorites as well. I read alot on my phone. I have read all of your reviews as you posted them, but I can't respond on my phone. Sorry you had to wait for my responses.
Oh, how awful! I had sort of hoped that Severus was being too cautious, but he was spot on. I suppose at least Hermione has no reason to keep Rita's secret now. Or perhaps she can use it as a bargaining chip to get Rita to spill about the blackmail. Or perhaps Severus will be so pissed off that he will kidnap Rita all over again, and this time she wil be lucky if she gets away in one piece.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
No one gets dissected in my story. I'm a peaceful person. All will eventually end happy. It will get rougher before it gets better, but it will end happy, don't worry.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
No one gets dissected in my story. I'm a peaceful person. All will eventually end happy. It will get rougher before it gets better, but it will end happy, don't worry.
Well, that was unexpected (and wonderful). I must have more!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
More coming soon. Thanks for sticking with me. Glad you enjoyed it the second time around too.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
More coming soon. Thanks for sticking with me. Glad you enjoyed it the second time around too.
Draco may be A slytherin, but Severus is THE Slytherin. As for Hermione and Severus, it seems to be, two steps forward, and one step back with them.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I agree - Severus is THE Slytherin. Draco has such an ego. I very much wanted Severus to beat him at his own game. That was a very fun chapter to write.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I agree - Severus is THE Slytherin. Draco has such an ego. I very much wanted Severus to beat him at his own game. That was a very fun chapter to write.
Poor little Winky, how heartbreaking for her, I'm so glad that she is safe with Severus now. I am a little suprised at some of the comments about the situation between Viktor and Hermione, even women who have been highly trained in martial arts have been known to be paralised with fear, in those circumstances, Hermione did manage to fend Viktor off, but that dosen't make it any less traumatic for her, rape happens in the mind first.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I was surprised by the one girl's comment as well. I feel like Hermione thought she knew Viktor and was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt - in other words, she thought he would have taken "no" for an answer. Obviously she was wrong. When she realized this, she became hurt and confused, wondering if she had done something to warrant such behavior on his part. Most women feel sullied under such circumstances, even though she was not raped. She was still grabbed and groped, and that is not pleasant under any circumstances. Caressing and foreplay are one thing, unwanted grabs and gropes are another.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I can only speak for myself, as a survivor I can tell you that I am nither small nor frail,but was still unable to fight off my attacker { someone I knew } it was the inferance that power would keep her safe that I found disturbing, this implys that the woman is at fault,if she for whatever reason can not fight back. I know that it is inposable to fully understand, unless one has lived through such an event, so I pray that no one reading this, will ever fully understand.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I was surprised by the one girl's comment as well. I feel like Hermione thought she knew Viktor and was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt - in other words, she thought he would have taken "no" for an answer. Obviously she was wrong. When she realized this, she became hurt and confused, wondering if she had done something to warrant such behavior on his part. Most women feel sullied under such circumstances, even though she was not raped. She was still grabbed and groped, and that is not pleasant under any circumstances. Caressing and foreplay are one thing, unwanted grabs and gropes are another.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I can only speak for myself, as a survivor I can tell you that I am nither small nor frail,but was still unable to fight off my attacker { someone I knew } it was the inferance that power would keep her safe that I found disturbing, this implys that the woman is at fault,if she for whatever reason can not fight back. I know that it is inposable to fully understand, unless one has lived through such an event, so I pray that no one reading this, will ever fully understand.
I have always had a soft spot for Winky, and you write her so well. As for Viktor, there is nothing as sad as a former jock, that still thinks he is a catch, he's lucky that Winky was there to pull Severus back from the edge. Looking forward to finding out more about, Otto, Rita and Lav Lav .
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
This is sort of the "part 2" of my story. We'll get to the bottom of it all eventually.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
This is sort of the "part 2" of my story. We'll get to the bottom of it all eventually.
I'm very happy that Ron has been sorted out, and the children are now able to see their mother.Severus is being very nobel, but I hope that he and Hermione get together, sooner or later.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Sooner or later... I promise. Keep enjoying those dreams they share. I put them in there to hold the readers over, and to give hope to our favorite couple.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Sooner or later... I promise. Keep enjoying those dreams they share. I put them in there to hold the readers over, and to give hope to our favorite couple.
I am wondering how Ron would react to someone using the book on Rose, forsing her into a marriage she doesn't want, these spells are the equivalent of a date rape drug. Even if Hermione goes back to Ron "for the sake of the children" what does he think wil happen when they grow up, Hermione will have no reason to stay once they are of age { seventeen in the wizarding world } she will leave anyway, all he is doing is postponing the inevitable, but what can one expect from someone who takes realationship advice, from Malfoy and Nott.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Just as Harry chided him. Ron listed to the advice he wanted to hear. He would have done anything to get Hermione to stay with him. He was holding on to a dream that he had kept since adolescence. It was so very hard to let go. Many people stay in a bad marriage because they remember the way it "used to be" and hope to get that original feeling back. Sometimes it's just really hard to move on.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
As a wise man once said"you can't go back to OZ" but it must be so hard not to keep trying.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Just as Harry chided him. Ron listed to the advice he wanted to hear. He would have done anything to get Hermione to stay with him. He was holding on to a dream that he had kept since adolescence. It was so very hard to let go. Many people stay in a bad marriage because they remember the way it "used to be" and hope to get that original feeling back. Sometimes it's just really hard to move on.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
As a wise man once said"you can't go back to OZ" but it must be so hard not to keep trying.