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Secret Recipe

1: The Letter

2: The Book

3: That Alluring Scent

4: Back in the Headlines

5: A Birthday Suggestion

6: Soup for Two

7: The Perfect Hex

8: Lovely Lavender

9: Bad News Blaise

10: Eye of Lizard

11: Unspoiled

12: Homework

13: Illogical Behavior

14: Sources of Amusement

15: Computer Lessons

16: Rock Skipping Lessons

17: Viktor Krum

18: Blackmail Epidemic

19: Draco's Dilemma

20: Truth Revealed... Well, Sort Of

21: More Truth Revealed

22: Likely Suspect

23: The Dark Mark

24: Hope for Snape

25: Hexes and Cures

26: The Meeting

27: The Spell

28: The Toad

29: The Bees' Nest

30: Life Is but a Dream

31: Consorting with Felons

32: Isolation

33: The Talking Toad

34: Research with Ron

35: Boxing Day Beetle

Secret Recipe

ClayPotter

677 Reviews   |   677 Ratings, 0 Likes, 434 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance post-DH/DH compliant Friendship Potions Under Duress 186,448 Words 35 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Arthur Weasley Dolores Jane Umbridge Harry Potter Hermione Granger Hugo Weasley Molly Weasley Rita Skeeter Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Winky Stan Shunpike George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Lavender Brown Blaise Zabini Draco Malfoy Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Rose Weasley Original Character Viktor Krum Kingsley Shacklebolt Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Lily Potter (daughter of Harry) Scorpius Malfoy Cornelius Fudge Irma Pince Seamus Finnigan Crookshanks

After over nineteen years of seclusion, Snape receives a letter from Hermione Granger-Weasley asking for his help. His decision to get involved changes his life forever. Canon compliant, even though Snape survives.

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Chapters (35)

Chapter 1: The Letter

Chapter 2: The Book

Chapter 3: That Alluring Scent

Chapter 4: Back in the Headlines

Chapter 5: A Birthday Suggestion

Chapter 6: Soup for Two

Chapter 7: The Perfect Hex

Chapter 8: Lovely Lavender

Chapter 9: Bad News Blaise

Chapter 10: Eye of Lizard

Chapter 11: Unspoiled

Chapter 12: Homework

Chapter 13: Illogical Behavior

Chapter 14: Sources of Amusement

Chapter 15: Computer Lessons

Chapter 16: Rock Skipping Lessons

Chapter 17: Viktor Krum

Chapter 18: Blackmail Epidemic

Chapter 19: Draco's Dilemma

Chapter 20: Truth Revealed... Well, Sort Of

Chapter 21: More Truth Revealed

Chapter 22: Likely Suspect

Chapter 23: The Dark Mark

Chapter 24: Hope for Snape

Chapter 25: Hexes and Cures

Chapter 26: The Meeting

Chapter 27: The Spell

Chapter 28: The Toad

Chapter 29: The Bees' Nest

Chapter 30: Life Is but a Dream

Chapter 31: Consorting with Felons

Chapter 32: Isolation

Chapter 33: The Talking Toad

Chapter 34: Research with Ron

Chapter 35: Boxing Day Beetle


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ClayPotter

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I live in Virginia with my husband and 2 children. I make pottery, but, thanks to Harry Potter, I have rediscovered a passion for writing.

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10/10

Buckshotwon1

I hope you stil intend to finish the story xoxo

Response from Buckshotwon1 (Reviewer)

No problems. Hugs

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Someday. I haven't forgotten. Now that I work full...

0/10

Ljpjcg

I can't fault you for making a working relationship between HG & RW.  I think it's better that way and better for the kids.  I never thought he was evil. Just self absorbed and easily misguided. 

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I tried to be realistic about their relationship. I have known married couples who werer terrible together, but after the divorce, they got along much better living separate lives. They were just not meant to share a house. In real life most people are not purely good or evil. They come in shades of grey. Thank you for reading. I still swear I will finish it someday.

0/10

Ljpjcg

SS's breaking heart made me cry!

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi. Thank you for your review. Yes, the chapter was meant to pull on your heart strings.

10/10

Buckshotwon1

Omg its been 5 years ago I started to read your fic back in 2008 and it was such an upset when you stoped updating the next year. And just today I was looking for my old e-books and saw your fic and immediatly went here:) It seems you keep on updating so you just ought to finish such an amazing story!;) may the muse be with you🙏🏻oh and sorry for my awful English:)

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. I am so bad to have not updated in such a long time. I feel really guilty for leaving everyone hanging at such a suspensful moment, but my life has been crazy since I stopped writing. I have a full time job with overtime, I go to school part time, and I spend a couple of hours a day in my car going from place to place because work, school and home are so far away from each other. I think often about my story and how I would like to finish it. I have an outline. I even have parts of it written, but not the next part. That one has kept me stuck because I want it to be funny, but the comic muse has deserted me lately. I guess I just have to force myself. But time steals away many of the things I would like to do. And I have to sleep in there somewhere. I have not abandon it. I will finish it eventually. Thank you for taking the time to remind me that people are out there that are still interested.

0/10

mlmonty

I am SO pleased you started updating again. I always did love this story. :)

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks. It has been a while since my last update but I hope to be writing again soon. Please continue to be patient with me. I will finish it. I promise.

0/10

flaminia_x

But I want more! Drat. I rarely start works in progress b/c I can never contain myself enough to wait for updates on things I like. Somehow I didn't notice this wasn't finished, so here I am, all jittery, needing my fix. Next chapter plz?

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Next chapter still needs some work. Sorry. Much of it is written, but I really want it to be funny. Comedy is hard to write. Please be patient with me. My life is crazy right now. Too many irons in the fire.

10/10

mick42

Rose was very rude, but when all is said and done, she is daddy's little girl, and will stick by him nomatter what. As she grows older she may see that Severus is a good man, and accept him in their lives.  I have been wondering, given the role both her parents played in the war why does she know so little, knowing Ron he would be more than willing to tell war storys, but Hermione said the children know very little of their parents ordeals at school.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I think you are right, that Ron would want to brag about their exploits at school, but I also think Hermione would advise against it. She wouldn't want her kids to think it was OK to go looking for trouble just because their parents did. I also took my cue from the epilogue in book seven. All the kids on the train are staring at Harry, but when one of their children asks what everyone is staring at, Ron says it's him, he's really famous. If he had told his kids about everything that happened, they would know that people were staring at Uncle Harry, not their father. So that makes me believe that at least at this young age, even Ron would keep his mouth shut about their adventures at school.

10/10

mick42

I am REALLY hoping that Umbridge gets what she deserves.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Things are not always what they seem. But don't worry, you'll get your wish.Thanks again for taking the time to read and review. It means the world to me.

10/10

mick42

Ron is learning that age old lesson " Kama is a BITCH " and who better to teach it than Lav Lav.

Severus' dream was wonderful, I hope it comes true in the end.  

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Many of my readers wanted something horrible to happen to Ron as a result of his cheating on Hermione and trying to keep her children away to get her back. I'm not a vindicative person, and I find that usually these things work out without me taking revenge on my own. So I let Hermione stay out of it. Karma does have a way of making a person pay, and I'm glad to know that you enjoyed the way things back-lashed at Ron.Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

10/10

HBAR

Well, that was just a mean place to leave things!  He is so going to kill her.  I'll let you decide if "her" means Rita or Hermione, lol.  I really have no idea what is going to happen now.  Perhaps they can run away and become teachers at Possum Pouch.  :)

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Most of the next chapter is written, but it is not quite finished yet. Do have patience with me please. I know where this is going, I just have to take the steps to get there.Thanks so much (again) for reading and reviewing. Your's is the only review for this chapter after a whole week. I used to have a following... Oh well. Don't worry, I'll finish it, even if you, I and my betas are the only ones who read it!

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

I don't know what keeps people from reviewing.  It takes very little time (unless you are on your phone and it keeps erasing you note!), and it keeps authors writing.  I would hate to see people stop posting for lack of reviews.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Most of the next chapter is written, but it is not quite finished yet. Do have patience with me please. I know where this is going, I just have to take the steps to get there.Thanks so much (again) for reading and reviewing. Your's is the only review for this chapter after a whole week. I used to have a following... Oh well. Don't worry, I'll finish it, even if you, I and my betas are the only ones who read it!

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

I don't know what keeps people from reviewing.  It takes very little time (unless you are on your phone and it keeps erasing you note!), and it keeps authors writing.  I would hate to see people stop posting for lack of reviews.

10/10

HBAR

I'm on my phone and it is a pain in the ass to review here, so suffice it to say that this chapter was excellent, Ron and Hermione included.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. I usually read on my phone as well, so I know just where you are coming from. I thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. The reviews spur me on to scrape the moments together that I need to finish this, although from the look of the reviews, I don't have many readers left. My own fault for waiting so long to get back to it. One cannot force inspiration to strike, however, so I do the best I can with the time and muse that I have.Thanks again for the complement.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. I usually read on my phone as well, so I know just where you are coming from. I thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. The reviews spur me on to scrape the moments together that I need to finish this, although from the look of the reviews, I don't have many readers left. My own fault for waiting so long to get back to it. One cannot force inspiration to strike, however, so I do the best I can with the time and muse that I have.Thanks again for the complement.

0/10

moor

Really liking the mystery as it is coming together now. ;)+the hints of the future are such a tease!

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks for the encouraging comments,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. I appreciate the review and the fact that you are hanging in there with me.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks for the encouraging comments,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. I appreciate the review and the fact that you are hanging in there with me.

0/10

helgeke

I'm having several ideas about the culprit and that development was something I was sort of hoping for. Verrry interested about next chapter.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

It takes a while before all is revealed, but all will be answered eventually. I like plot twists. Hope this keeps at least some of you guessing for a while.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

It takes a while before all is revealed, but all will be answered eventually. I like plot twists. Hope this keeps at least some of you guessing for a while.

10/10

HBAR

I am interested to see what Severus and Kingsley come up with for the restaurant.  And, are they really seeing the future somehow in their dreams? And Rita ... If she had any sense at all, she would have approached Hermione who proved to be trustworthy in the past.  But alas ...

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Rita doesn't have the luxury of approaching anybody. As you know by now, she is under someone elses influence... someone not very nice. It is easy to hate Rita, but things are not always as they seem.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Rita doesn't have the luxury of approaching anybody. As you know by now, she is under someone elses influence... someone not very nice. It is easy to hate Rita, but things are not always as they seem.

10/10

HBAR

I don't suppose there is any chance that Snape is a feline animagus?  Just where are they?!?!   * is nervous*

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

As far as I know, Snape has no Animagus form. Where he and Harry ended up is answered in the next chapter, as you already know by now. Nothing to be nervous about, although I do feel sad for Hermione.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

As far as I know, Snape has no Animagus form. Where he and Harry ended up is answered in the next chapter, as you already know by now. Nothing to be nervous about, although I do feel sad for Hermione.

10/10

HBAR

I had forgotten what a cliffhanger this is.  I am so glad you are back to posting.  I have to say that while I am with Hermione that Umbridge is definitely involved, I don't have a clue how this is going to end up.  I suppose as long as Severus gets the girl and stays out of Azkaban, the rest will fall into place.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

That is the best reason for writing, to be sure he gets the girl in the end. They both deserve to be happy.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

That is the best reason for writing, to be sure he gets the girl in the end. They both deserve to be happy.

10/10

HBAR

Rita disappearing is very concerning, indeed.  Poor Winky, so frightened.  Poor Snape is probably still floored as to how she escaped.  I am as well.  *is nervous*

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

By now you have read ahead and know that Rita escaped up the chimney, a place Severus didn't think to ward. Oh well. He doesn't know that she is an unregistered Animagus.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

By now you have read ahead and know that Rita escaped up the chimney, a place Severus didn't think to ward. Oh well. He doesn't know that she is an unregistered Animagus.

10/10

HBAR

I had intended to stop and review each chapter while I reread since I didn't do so the first time around, but I am reading on my phone while I await the repair of my computer and it is a bitch to do so.  But, I had to drop in here for a moment because this chapter has one of those scenes that has always stuck with me since I read it.  That is the healing scene between Severus, Rose, and Hugo.  It is such an intense yet wonderful moment of bonding.  Love it!

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks so much

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

, that is one of my favorites as well. I read alot on my phone. I have read all of your reviews as you posted them, but I can't respond on my phone. Sorry you had to wait for my responses.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks so much

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

, that is one of my favorites as well. I read alot on my phone. I have read all of your reviews as you posted them, but I can't respond on my phone. Sorry you had to wait for my responses.

10/10

HBAR

Oh, how awful!  I had sort of hoped that Severus was being too cautious, but he was spot on.  I suppose at least Hermione has no reason to keep Rita's secret now.  Or perhaps she can use it as a bargaining chip to get Rita to spill about the blackmail.  Or perhaps Severus will be so pissed off that he will kidnap Rita all over again, and this time she wil be lucky if she gets away in one piece.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

No one gets dissected in my story. I'm a peaceful person. All will eventually end happy. It will get rougher before it gets better, but it will end happy, don't worry.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

No one gets dissected in my story. I'm a peaceful person. All will eventually end happy. It will get rougher before it gets better, but it will end happy, don't worry.

10/10

HBAR

Well, that was unexpected (and wonderful).  I must have more!

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

More coming soon. Thanks for sticking with me. Glad you enjoyed it the second time around too.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

More coming soon. Thanks for sticking with me. Glad you enjoyed it the second time around too.

10/10

mick42

Draco may be A slytherin, but Severus is THE Slytherin. As for Hermione and Severus, it seems to be, two steps forward, and one step back with them.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I agree - Severus is THE Slytherin. Draco has such an ego. I very much wanted Severus to beat him at his own game. That was a very fun chapter to write.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I agree - Severus is THE Slytherin. Draco has such an ego. I very much wanted Severus to beat him at his own game. That was a very fun chapter to write.

10/10

mick42

Poor little Winky, how heartbreaking for her, I'm so glad that she is safe with Severus now. I am a little suprised at some of the comments about the situation between Viktor and Hermione, even women who have been highly trained in martial arts have been known to be paralised with fear, in those circumstances, Hermione did manage to fend Viktor off, but that dosen't make it any less traumatic for her, rape happens in the mind first.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I was surprised by the one girl's comment as well. I feel like Hermione thought she knew Viktor and was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt - in other words, she thought he would have taken "no" for an answer. Obviously she was wrong. When she realized this, she became hurt and confused, wondering if she had done something to warrant such behavior on his part. Most women feel sullied under such circumstances, even though she was not raped. She was still grabbed and groped, and that is not pleasant under any circumstances. Caressing and foreplay are one thing, unwanted grabs and gropes are another.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

I can only speak for myself, as a survivor I can tell you that I am nither small nor frail,but was still unable to fight off my attacker { someone I knew } it was the inferance that power would keep her safe that I found disturbing, this implys that the woman is at fault,if she for whatever reason can not fight back. I know that it is inposable to fully understand, unless one has lived through such an event, so I pray that no one reading this, will ever fully understand.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I was surprised by the one girl's comment as well. I feel like Hermione thought she knew Viktor and was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt - in other words, she thought he would have taken "no" for an answer. Obviously she was wrong. When she realized this, she became hurt and confused, wondering if she had done something to warrant such behavior on his part. Most women feel sullied under such circumstances, even though she was not raped. She was still grabbed and groped, and that is not pleasant under any circumstances. Caressing and foreplay are one thing, unwanted grabs and gropes are another.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

I can only speak for myself, as a survivor I can tell you that I am nither small nor frail,but was still unable to fight off my attacker { someone I knew } it was the inferance that power would keep her safe that I found disturbing, this implys that the woman is at fault,if she for whatever reason can not fight back. I know that it is inposable to fully understand, unless one has lived through such an event, so I pray that no one reading this, will ever fully understand.

10/10

mick42

I have always had a soft spot for Winky, and you write her so well. As for Viktor, there is nothing as sad as a former jock, that still thinks he is a catch, he's lucky that Winky was there to pull Severus back from the edge. Looking forward to finding out more about, Otto, Rita and Lav Lav .  

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

This is sort of the "part 2" of my story. We'll get to the bottom of it all eventually.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

This is sort of the "part 2" of my story. We'll get to the bottom of it all eventually.

10/10

mick42

I'm very happy that Ron has been sorted out, and the children are now able to see their mother.Severus is being very nobel, but I hope that he and Hermione get together, sooner or later.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Sooner or later... I promise. Keep enjoying those dreams they share. I put them in there to hold the readers over, and to give hope to our favorite couple.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Sooner or later... I promise. Keep enjoying those dreams they share. I put them in there to hold the readers over, and to give hope to our favorite couple.

10/10

mick42

I am wondering how Ron would react to someone using the book on Rose, forsing her into a marriage she doesn't want, these spells are the equivalent of a date rape drug. Even if Hermione goes back to Ron "for the sake of the children" what does he think wil happen when they grow up, Hermione will have no reason to stay once they are of age { seventeen in the wizarding world } she  will leave anyway, all he is doing is postponing the inevitable, but what can one expect from someone who takes realationship advice, from Malfoy and Nott.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Just as Harry chided him. Ron listed to the advice he wanted to hear. He would have done anything to get Hermione to stay with him. He was holding on to a dream that he had kept since adolescence. It was so very hard to let go. Many people stay in a bad marriage because they remember the way it "used to be" and hope to get that original feeling back. Sometimes it's just really hard to move on.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

As a wise man once said"you can't go back to OZ" but it must be so hard not to keep trying.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Just as Harry chided him. Ron listed to the advice he wanted to hear. He would have done anything to get Hermione to stay with him. He was holding on to a dream that he had kept since adolescence. It was so very hard to let go. Many people stay in a bad marriage because they remember the way it "used to be" and hope to get that original feeling back. Sometimes it's just really hard to move on.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

As a wise man once said"you can't go back to OZ" but it must be so hard not to keep trying.

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