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Secret Recipe

1: The Letter

2: The Book

3: That Alluring Scent

4: Back in the Headlines

5: A Birthday Suggestion

6: Soup for Two

7: The Perfect Hex

8: Lovely Lavender

9: Bad News Blaise

10: Eye of Lizard

11: Unspoiled

12: Homework

13: Illogical Behavior

14: Sources of Amusement

15: Computer Lessons

16: Rock Skipping Lessons

17: Viktor Krum

18: Blackmail Epidemic

19: Draco's Dilemma

20: Truth Revealed... Well, Sort Of

21: More Truth Revealed

22: Likely Suspect

23: The Dark Mark

24: Hope for Snape

25: Hexes and Cures

26: The Meeting

27: The Spell

28: The Toad

29: The Bees' Nest

30: Life Is but a Dream

31: Consorting with Felons

32: Isolation

33: The Talking Toad

34: Research with Ron

35: Boxing Day Beetle

Secret Recipe

ClayPotter

677 Reviews   |   677 Ratings, 0 Likes, 434 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance post-DH/DH compliant Friendship Potions Under Duress 186,448 Words 35 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Arthur Weasley Dolores Jane Umbridge Harry Potter Hermione Granger Hugo Weasley Molly Weasley Rita Skeeter Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Winky Stan Shunpike George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Lavender Brown Blaise Zabini Draco Malfoy Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Rose Weasley Original Character Viktor Krum Kingsley Shacklebolt Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Lily Potter (daughter of Harry) Scorpius Malfoy Cornelius Fudge Irma Pince Seamus Finnigan Crookshanks

After over nineteen years of seclusion, Snape receives a letter from Hermione Granger-Weasley asking for his help. His decision to get involved changes his life forever. Canon compliant, even though Snape survives.

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Chapters (35)

Chapter 1: The Letter

Chapter 2: The Book

Chapter 3: That Alluring Scent

Chapter 4: Back in the Headlines

Chapter 5: A Birthday Suggestion

Chapter 6: Soup for Two

Chapter 7: The Perfect Hex

Chapter 8: Lovely Lavender

Chapter 9: Bad News Blaise

Chapter 10: Eye of Lizard

Chapter 11: Unspoiled

Chapter 12: Homework

Chapter 13: Illogical Behavior

Chapter 14: Sources of Amusement

Chapter 15: Computer Lessons

Chapter 16: Rock Skipping Lessons

Chapter 17: Viktor Krum

Chapter 18: Blackmail Epidemic

Chapter 19: Draco's Dilemma

Chapter 20: Truth Revealed... Well, Sort Of

Chapter 21: More Truth Revealed

Chapter 22: Likely Suspect

Chapter 23: The Dark Mark

Chapter 24: Hope for Snape

Chapter 25: Hexes and Cures

Chapter 26: The Meeting

Chapter 27: The Spell

Chapter 28: The Toad

Chapter 29: The Bees' Nest

Chapter 30: Life Is but a Dream

Chapter 31: Consorting with Felons

Chapter 32: Isolation

Chapter 33: The Talking Toad

Chapter 34: Research with Ron

Chapter 35: Boxing Day Beetle


About ClayPotter

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ClayPotter

Member Since 2008  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 78  |  907 Reviews Written  |  1,499 Review Responses

I live in Virginia with my husband and 2 children. I make pottery, but, thanks to Harry Potter, I have rediscovered a passion for writing.

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10/10

mick42

There is no real difference between the spells in that book, and Imperus curse, they should be made unforgiveables as well.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

They are mild versions of the Imperius, to be sure. Hermione will see to it that her daughter will never fall under those spells. Rather like a date-rape drug, they should be outlawed. Perhaps Arther should introduce legislation!

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

They are mild versions of the Imperius, to be sure. Hermione will see to it that her daughter will never fall under those spells. Rather like a date-rape drug, they should be outlawed. Perhaps Arther should introduce legislation!

10/10

Elizabeth

Gosh, I hope Umbridge isn't from Virginia or I might want to move.

I'm so glad you're writing this story again. I've been waiting ages. I'm glad you didn't drop it. Now you really have me wondering who is behind this. I thought it was all nicely packaged and we knew the bad guy. I guess I'll be totally surprised when it all comes out.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I am always disappointed when I watch a show or movie that is predictable. So I thought a plot twist or two was in order. We all hate Umbridge, but she was too obvious. You'll find out soon enough.Thanks for not giving up on me. I'll finish it eventually. No more  year-long breaks, but there might be a couple of month-long breaks before the end. Please have patience with me. RL keeps me busy.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I am always disappointed when I watch a show or movie that is predictable. So I thought a plot twist or two was in order. We all hate Umbridge, but she was too obvious. You'll find out soon enough.Thanks for not giving up on me. I'll finish it eventually. No more  year-long breaks, but there might be a couple of month-long breaks before the end. Please have patience with me. RL keeps me busy.

10/10

mick42

 Someone is putting ideas in his head, after he has never had one all of his very own, now has he, and the best way to get to Ron is via his ego. Vanity thy name is Ron.  

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

When it comes to social niceties, Ron is definitely lacking. He does have a few redeeming qualities, which will show up later. But I agree with you. He is very insecure, having grown up in the shadow of so many amazing brothers (with the exception of Percy).

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

When it comes to social niceties, Ron is definitely lacking. He does have a few redeeming qualities, which will show up later. But I agree with you. He is very insecure, having grown up in the shadow of so many amazing brothers (with the exception of Percy).

10/10

mick42

He needs to explain to hermione, why he is behaving this way, or they will be at cross purposes foever.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

As you have read by now, he has explained his reasons for his lack of romantic action. I can understand his reasons, but his self control just drives me crazy sometimes!!! And I am writing this stuff!!

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

As you have read by now, he has explained his reasons for his lack of romantic action. I can understand his reasons, but his self control just drives me crazy sometimes!!! And I am writing this stuff!!

10/10

kitkat98

Wow.  Just discovered this story, it's brilliant!  Looking forward to seeing who's really behind the plot.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

! Welcome aboard. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. All will be revealed eventually.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

! Welcome aboard. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. All will be revealed eventually.

10/10

mick42

I hope that Molly can keep Hugo healthy, untill this whole mess { ie Ronnikins } is sorted.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

The best thing that could happen to Hugo is for Hermione and Ron to break up. He will get better, I promise.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

The best thing that could happen to Hugo is for Hermione and Ron to break up. He will get better, I promise.

10/10

Phyllidia

Yes, he is passionate.  Now he needs to get his passionate hands (and veritaserum) on Fudge.  Just sayin'....Ready for the next chapter. O-B-V-I-O-U-S-L-Y

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Not sure when I'll get that next chapter up. It is written, but posting is a process that takes some uninterrupted time (for me anyway). I'll try to get in the queue next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Not sure when I'll get that next chapter up. It is written, but posting is a process that takes some uninterrupted time (for me anyway). I'll try to get in the queue next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

10/10

mimmom

oh dear.  Poor things.  What a cruel world!  I hope they get that horrible Umbridge!

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Yes, the world can indeed be cruel. Keep your hopes up. All is not lost.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Yes, the world can indeed be cruel. Keep your hopes up. All is not lost.

10/10

HBAR

Just stopping in for a moment to say that I am finally finding the time to retread this, and I have been thoroughly enjoying this so far.  I thought I would fly through being anxious to get to the new ones you've posted, but I am loving this story all over again.  I hope you continue to post on a regularish basis.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I am trying my best to post in a regularish basis, as you say. RL keeps me busy, but I keep plugging away at this story. It will come to its inevitable conclusion sooner or later. Thanks for sticking with me.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I am trying my best to post in a regularish basis, as you say. RL keeps me busy, but I keep plugging away at this story. It will come to its inevitable conclusion sooner or later. Thanks for sticking with me.

0/10

Minerva

What a surprising turn of events! I will look forward to how you untangle this, I have absolutely no idea who might be behind the campaign.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

, for sticking with me. All questions will eventually be answered.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

, for sticking with me. All questions will eventually be answered.

9/10

Bettina

brrr, I have just showered, and now I feel like needing another shower. Toads are slimy. She is not only not behind these machinations, but she was not after Snape either?? Odd that! OR then.. someone has wiped her memory before Severus got hold of her. Yes, that could be it. She certainly didn't like him at Hogwarts as he was opposing her openly. Severus forgot to ask her about her role in the war--maybe he could have identified an inconsistency?Enough speculation. Thanks for a great, if confusing, chapter.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I actually like toads, but Umbridge is another animal all together. All of your questions will eventually be answered. Thanks for reading and sticking with me.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I actually like toads, but Umbridge is another animal all together. All of your questions will eventually be answered. Thanks for reading and sticking with me.

10/10

mick42

PEER PRESSURE? NOT A BAD GUY? How old is he, 12, what kind of "coaching" makes a man turn on his child, Hermione is a muggle born, so what does that mean for Rose and Hugo, they are not pure bloods are they. Everyone has choices to make in life, Ron doesn't have the guts to do this on his own, so blames someone else for what he does. What will he do if his "coach" decides Rose and Hugo's blood so polluted, by Hermiones "mudblood" they need to be eliminated.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Don't worry, no one will be eliminated in this story. All will work out in the end. The fun is in the ride, although right now it is quite rocky for our heroine and her children.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Sorry, a child in pain makes my blood boil, I didn't mean to go off on such a rant.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Don't worry, no one will be eliminated in this story. All will work out in the end. The fun is in the ride, although right now it is quite rocky for our heroine and her children.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Sorry, a child in pain makes my blood boil, I didn't mean to go off on such a rant.

10/10

mick42

You can safely say,that I am not a fan of Rons, I have always thought of him as an insecure prat,that rides on the coatailes of those around him. If he had been sorted into Slytherin he would have been Draco Malfoys right hand man, and taken the dark mark at the same time. Having said that, I'm still having trouble with his behaviour here, Hermione is not only his wife, but has been his friend from the age of eleven, they fought together side by side in time of war, how can he treat her this way? It can't be her blood status, he has always known that, and Harry is a half blood, and married to Ginny. The Wealseys fought against Voldermort,and all he stood for, Fred died for it, so how can he now turn around and torture his wife and his children this way? It makes me think that there is something else going on, either some sort of mental illness, or a spell. Sorry to have gone on for so long, your story does tend to provoke a very passionate response in your readers.    

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi Mick42,Thank you so much for your many thoughtful reviews. As I write this, I'm sure by now that you understand Ron's motives. He seems to be a real villan in this chapter, but he just wants to keep his family together, and he has followed bad advice toward this end.When I started this story, I never dreamed of the heated responses I would receive. I really hit some raw nerves with many people, who, like me, hate injustice and prejudice.I appreciate you taking the time to review. I'll respond to them all, even though many of the questions you ask have already been answered as you continued to read.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Hi Mick42,Thank you so much for your many thoughtful reviews. As I write this, I'm sure by now that you understand Ron's motives. He seems to be a real villan in this chapter, but he just wants to keep his family together, and he has followed bad advice toward this end.When I started this story, I never dreamed of the heated responses I would receive. I really hit some raw nerves with many people, who, like me, hate injustice and prejudice.I appreciate you taking the time to review. I'll respond to them all, even though many of the questions you ask have already been answered as you continued to read.

0/10

mistresscosmos

I got all giddy when I saw you updated. I had to go re-read the whole story just because.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I'm flattered,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. Thanks for reading and sticking with me. I'll finish it, I promise. There may be months between updates, but no more year-long breaks.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I'm flattered,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. Thanks for reading and sticking with me. I'll finish it, I promise. There may be months between updates, but no more year-long breaks.

0/10

Phyllidia

Good thing Herms isn't as headstrong as Harry or Ron--otherwise she might have just showed up at Severus' place in the all-together after his e-mail.  I suspect both Fudge and the Toad.  Tho' I am hoping very vile and perhaps life-ending things happen to the Toad.  I never thought she was suitably punished by JKR.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Oh, I agree with you there. The Toad should have done time in Azkaban. Instead, she's still at the Ministry wreaking havock! It is soooo not fair.Thanks for your insightful review (wink, wink, nudge, nudge).

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Oh, I agree with you there. The Toad should have done time in Azkaban. Instead, she's still at the Ministry wreaking havock! It is soooo not fair.Thanks for your insightful review (wink, wink, nudge, nudge).

0/10

Phyllidia

<quivers lip> *snerf* Poor Severus.  He is going to be so upset. 

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

His heart is breaking right now, just like Hermione's.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

His heart is breaking right now, just like Hermione's.

0/10

Phyllidia

Enjoying the story.  Glad to see recent updates.  Hope RL is being kind to you.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks so much,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. RL is keeping me busy, but I'll manage to finish this story somehow. Please have patience with me.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks so much,

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

. RL is keeping me busy, but I'll manage to finish this story somehow. Please have patience with me.

10/10

mick42

It's good that Hermione is starting to realise, the true cause of Hugo's illness, but  keeping the peace with Ron, isn't going to work, it's not only the verbal fights, that are affecting him, but the emotional atmosphere as well.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Very true. Parents sometimes don't realize that verbal abuse and yelling can cause as much or more damage than physical abuse.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Very true. Parents sometimes don't realize that verbal abuse and yelling can cause as much or more damage than physical abuse.

10/10

mick42

Everything was going so well, untill Ron showed up. I think the colour of his hair,has seeped into his brain, what in Merlin's name possessed him to draw his wand on SEVERUS SNAPE?!!! he was lucky to be able to walk away, with only a sore hand.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

You are right about that! My Severus has mellowed with age, but he still has a temper, and some excellent wand skills. Ron's ego was cut down a peg or two, I'd say. That's all Severus really wanted to do.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

His mouth always was more deadly, than his wand.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

You are right about that! My Severus has mellowed with age, but he still has a temper, and some excellent wand skills. Ron's ego was cut down a peg or two, I'd say. That's all Severus really wanted to do.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

His mouth always was more deadly, than his wand.

10/10

mick42

The "Weasle mind,y" view of life is a little creepy, if a women doesn't love you, then it's ok to cast a spell to change her mind, she doesn't want more children, then force her by law.I'm shocked that Harry knew obout the book, and didn't think to warn Hermione .

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

There are many reasons Harry would want to stay out of their love life. For one thing, he was given a book, too. Perhaps he didn't realize how deep Ron would stoop to get Hermione to marry him.Thanks for the review.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

There are many reasons Harry would want to stay out of their love life. For one thing, he was given a book, too. Perhaps he didn't realize how deep Ron would stoop to get Hermione to marry him.Thanks for the review.

10/10

mick42

Great chapter, love the emails and letters.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks. Some probably feel that they wouldn't resort to such Muggle rubbish, but I believe that they are both smart enough to use whatever they think will work. Why not have the best of both worlds?

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks. Some probably feel that they wouldn't resort to such Muggle rubbish, but I believe that they are both smart enough to use whatever they think will work. Why not have the best of both worlds?

0/10

Bettina

The cedit card didn't say where they meet, and Snape surely knows to keep Hermione at distance if he so choses. I'm thoroughly appaled of the wizarding world and esp disappointed in Dumbledore. What the heck did he discuss with Severus? Did Umbridge also hide a few pieces of evidence in Snape's favour and enjoy seeing him convicted? She certainly never liked him. As the only, or maybe the prime school of wizarding Britain, Hogwards certainly has to keep up a reputation, but limiting whom teachers socialise with does go ruddy far. They'll soon have to look for a new Charms teacher I wager (hope).

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I tried to look at the school situation from a parent's POV. Being a Death Eater is like the Muggle version of Organized Crime. Would you want your child's teacher rubbing elbows with a convicted mob boss on a regular basis? Especially if the child were in a boarding school and that teacher had access to your child 24-7?As for Umbridge... you'll just have to keep reading. :)Thanks for your thoughtful review.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I tried to look at the school situation from a parent's POV. Being a Death Eater is like the Muggle version of Organized Crime. Would you want your child's teacher rubbing elbows with a convicted mob boss on a regular basis? Especially if the child were in a boarding school and that teacher had access to your child 24-7?As for Umbridge... you'll just have to keep reading. :)Thanks for your thoughtful review.

0/10

gurlimargrethe

what a sad time for everybody we love. Hopefully Umbridge will soon get justice and a lot of problems will be solved. I am sad that the wizard world are sush wimps, where are all the old ordermembers?

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Most of the old order members are dead, or they have gotten on with their lives. And the fewer people who know about their research, the better.Thanks for sticking with me. The reviews keep me going.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Most of the old order members are dead, or they have gotten on with their lives. And the fewer people who know about their research, the better.Thanks for sticking with me. The reviews keep me going.

10/10

mick42

The perfume is a perfect touch, I hope Hugo responds well, and starts to feel better, then Hermione can work on the cause, { her realaitonship with Ron }.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks. I am very particular about perfumes. Not just any will do. I can understand Snape's aversion to the one Rob chose for her.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

Thanks. I am very particular about perfumes. Not just any will do. I can understand Snape's aversion to the one Rob chose for her.

10/10

mick42

Poor Hugo,so many people stay together '' for the children'' and do so much damage. Severus to the rescue again. Ron's behaviour is beneth contempt,no better than date rape.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I agree. I once knew a couple who stayed together for the children's sake, but their fighting would come to blows! They wondered why the kids picked fights with others in school! Finally they got a divorce, and everyone was much better off.Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)

I agree. I once knew a couple who stayed together for the children's sake, but their fighting would come to blows! They wondered why the kids picked fights with others in school! Finally they got a divorce, and everyone was much better off.Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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