That Alluring Scent
Chapter 3 of 35
ClayPotterSnape risks a trip to Diagon Alley to find a gift for Miss Granger.
All characters you recognize are the creations of the brilliant J. K. Rowling from her Harry Potter book series. I make no money from the writing and sharing of this story.
I would like to thank my hardworking betas, JENGEORGE and NervousAboutAngels, as always, for their hard work and diligence. They really helped to make this a better story.
Chapter 3
That Alluring Scent
The following afternoon, Snape made his way downstairs to find oatmeal with his usual breakfast, 2:00 p.m. on the dot. "Good afternoon, Winky," he announced as he settled himself at the kitchen table. "It looks delectable as always."
"Thank you, Master Severus. Will Winky still be going to town this afternoon then?"
"You may do as you please this afternoon, Winky. I wish to purchase something of a personal nature to add to the box, so I will owl it myself later."
Winky seemed even more pleased and excited that Snape felt the need to attend to Miss Granger's request personally. This was a good sign, a very good sign indeed. She hadn't seen her master this enthusiastic about life for quite some time.
He downed his food quickly, then ladled enough of the Calming draught into a phial for one week's worth of consumption and tightly corked the top. Then he put quill to papyrus and scrawled out the dosing instructions and arranged the phial and note, along with the packing material, into a box big enough to hold something else. He wasn't sure how big the item he needed to purchase would be, but he could always shrink or enlarge the box to fit appropriately.
"Have a good afternoon, Winky. Don't wait up for me!" he quipped as he donned his heavy winter traveling cloak, pulled the hood up so as to hide his face, and headed out the front door towards the river, which no longer reeked of pollution or dead fish. Yes, the environmentalists and the community had really worked hard to clean it up. It was actually a pleasant place to enjoy now, weather permitting. The neighborhood had really changed since his childhood. The inhabitants were not rich, to be sure, but they were good, decent, hard-working Muggles that always had a friendly word to say and kept the area clean and inviting.
His eyes scanned the riverbank for signs of intelligent life. Finding none, he spun on the spot and immediately felt the pressure of Apparition bearing down on him. It had been so long he had forgotten just how uncomfortable the experience could be. Just when he thought he would never take another breath, and his eyes were about to pop out of their sockets, he arrived in the deserted side street next to the Leaky Cauldron, behind which could be found the secret entrance to Diagon Alley.
In hope of not being recognized, Snape pulled the hood even farther over his face and quietly stalked through the pub. Since shady characters were not uncommon there, no one gave him a second glance. He eased out the back door, touched his wand to the proper sequence of bricks in the alley wall, and entered his destination. By this time the sun was low in the winter sky. The Owl Post Office would close soon. He had to find the right perfume and get over there quickly if he wanted this package to go out today.
The girl at the cosmetic counter in Madam Malkin's was so young, by Snape's estimation, that she had never been his student, and therefore, she would not have a clue who he was. So he pulled his hood back enough to show his face to the girl, but to no one else in the shop.
"Good afternoon, sir." She smiled broadly at him with flirtatious dark blue eyes. "May I help you?" Her long, straight, dirty-blonde hair had obviously been artificially highlighted with a lighter shade of blonde and hideous streaks of magenta, purple and teal blue. She might have been almost attractive if it weren't for the atrocious extra colors. But when she spoke, Snape noticed that, to top it off, she had something stuck into the center of her tongue. Silver in color with a loop and bead attached. He didn't know what it was, but it distracted him to the point of fascination. He almost forgot what he had come for.
"Sir? Are you OK?"
Suddenly, his eyes broke away from her mouth and looked at the fragrances on the shelf behind her. "Yes, sorry," he stammered with a touch of embarrassment and then gestured towards the shelf. "I'm trying to find a fragrance for an acquaintance. May I sample some of those?"
"Oh, yes, sir. We have quite an assortment to fit every need and pocket book. Would you want the economy brand?" she asked as she sprayed the air in front of him with the cheapest of the lot.
He coughed and took a step back, waving his hands to clear away the offensive odor. "Warn me before you do that again, will you?" He glared at her as he added silently, little twit! The instant the perfume hit the air Snape recognized it as Miss Granger's new perfume. Economy brand, eh? Leave it to the Witless Wonder to be a big spender.
"Sorry, sir. I didn't mean to imply..."
"One with a bit more subtlety, if you don't mind," he cut her off.
She reached back to the shelf and chose the gaudiest bottle in view, popping the lid off as she turned back towards him. This time he took a quick step back just as she squirted the offensive concoction into the space between them.
"I said subtle!" he growled between coughs and wheezes as he turned his head to the side in search of uncontaminated air. When he turned back to face her, his irritation was unmistakable.
"Not to your liking, sir?" she asked, cowering slightly under his stern authoritarian gaze.
His silence spoke volumes.
"I guess not," she concluded meekly.
This was getting him nowhere and time was short. With almost ten bottles left on the shelf he had to narrow down the choices. "Do you have anything with chamomile and rose hips?"
"Oh, yes, sir." The sales girl brightened up immediately. "That would be our top of the line item, 'Secret Recipe' from Paris, France. They say a Veela invented it centuries ago to win over the only man who didn't instantly fall in love with her."
Snape raised his eyebrows. As she reached for the bottle and turned to face him, he gently reached up and surrounded both her hand and the bottle she had retrieved in his long slender fingers. Her eyes met his with a startled look as she became immediately mesmerized by the endless depths of their blackness. He doubted that any of her thoughts or memories would be of interest to him, except... that thing in her mouth... It had been so long since he had cast the spell, he figured, what the hell, I could use the practice. Legilimens... He sifted quickly through the chaotic impressions of her mundane twisted life: defying her parents by listening to horrid sounds she seemed to consider music, unnaturally coloring her hair, getting a Hungarian Horntail tattooed across her left shoulder, and finally, the last straw that had prompted them to throw her out of the house, this... this tongue ring. So that's what it's called. How bizarre! With great relief, he quickly withdrew from the unfocused mayhem that was her mind.
"Allow me," he crooned in a silky deep voice and gracefully eased the precious bottle from her hand. Such a sophisticated substance didn't need a spray delivery system. He removed the stopper and passed it quickly under his nose. This was it. Even after thirteen years he would know that scent anywhere. "I'll take it. Only I want a new one, unopened, untouched... unspoiled."
"Of course, sir," she replied with wide eyes. She crouched under the counter and mumbled a charm under her breath to unlock the cabinet. Then she reached in and retrieved a rather dusty bottle, still sealed. "Sorry about the dust, sir. We don't sell many of these because they are so expensive." She blew violently on the bottle in an attempt to rid it of its unwanted decoration. Luckily, Snape saw what she was about to do and took a couple of steps back, or the dust as well as her questionable breath would have accosted his sensitive nostrils. "Shall I gift wrap it for you?"
"No, thank you, that won't be necessary."
"That'll be fifty galleons then, sir," she informed him as she slid the outwardly unimpressive bottle into a small paper bag.
Snape had no idea what the price of an average perfume bottle should cost because until yesterday he had never in his life even contemplated purchasing one. But he had come prepared and casually laid the necessary coins on the counter as if it were an everyday occurrence. Then, before she could thank him, he had pulled his hood back over his face, grabbed the bag, and swept from the shop.
Once outside he found a bench that was away from the main flow of foot traffic and sat down. He then retrieved the box with the potion, slipped the perfume in beside it, and added a couple of lines to the papyrus with an explanation about his gift. Satisfied that all was ready, he stood and headed for the Owl Post Office.
Only a couple of blocks from the bench he had sat on, the Owl Post Office stood next to Ollivander's, the Wand Maker. It was nice to know the old man was still in business after all the Dark Lord had put him through. Snape entered the Owl Post Office and glanced around. Three clerks stood at an expansive counter ready to help customers, and each had quite a long line waiting. Two of the three he thought he recognized as former students, so he picked the third young man. Again, like the girl from Madam Malkin's, he looked too young to have attended Hogwarts while Snape was a teacher there.
The line he was in slowly dwindled down until finally there was only one person in front of him. As that witch finished up, the young clerk pulled out his cash drawer and looked up with a smile at a much older gentleman coming up with his own cash drawer in his hands. "Break time, Larry," said Stan Shunpike.
"About time!" the young man replied as they switched out the drawers.
Snape was mortified. He has spent the entire afternoon in Diagon Alley without being recognized, but he knew that would come to an abrupt end as soon as Stan looked up and heard his voice. Damn!
"What can I do for you, sir?" asked Stan.
Snape took a deep breath and steeled himself for the inevitable. Although the hood still successfully hid his face from plain view, his unmistakable voice would surely give him away. He removed the box from his pocket and pushed it towards Stan. Could he get away without speaking? It was worth a try.
"Mailing a package, then?"
Snape nodded.
Stan put the package on the scale. "Eight ounces. Where's it goin'?"
He would have to speak. It was unavoidable. "Local."
That one word was all it took. Stan's eyes grew wide as he bent his head slightly and tried to get a better look at Snape's face. "Severus Snape, I don't believe it."
"Then don't. How much do I owe?" Snape asked tersely, hoping not to draw attention to himself.
"Five knuts. Where've you been? Nobody's seen you for ages. People were beginning to spread rumors that you were dead!"
"And you needn't inform them otherwise. I am dead as far as the wizarding world is concerned," Snape replied bitterly. "I did my time. I just want to be left alone." He was beginning to regret coming. Why had he let sentimentality grip his heart? She had made him vulnerable again, damn her! And now he would pay for it. He couldn't let his appearance here become a spectacle. If he was going to correspond regularly with Miss Granger there had to be another way.
Suddenly a solution came to him. He retrieved the package that was still sitting on the scale and stormed out of the Owl Post Office, leaving Stan standing there with his eyes buggy and stammering to the next wizard in line. "That was Severus Snape did you see him? Severus Snape!"
Snape knew he was cutting it short if this package was to make it to Miss Granger before she left her office for the day. He headed straight for Eeylops Owl Emporium, where he got away with simply pointing and paying without uttering a word and headed outside with a beautiful barn owl perched on his shoulder. He didn't believe in cages, having spent six months in one himself. Perhaps she could find a mate and they could nest in the eves of his house. He often thought it would be a perfect location for a barn owl nest.
But there was one other thing he wanted to add to the letter, the brilliant revelation that had come to him in his haste to escape Stan Shunpike. He sat with his new owl by his side on the very same bench that had served his needs earlier, scribbled one last line on the parchment, then placed it back in the box and tied it to the bird's leg with the string he transfigured from a dead leaf that happened to be floating by. "Come back to my house on Spinner's End once you deliver this." He spoke to the bird as if speaking to a human, and she seemed to understand, as she rubbed her face affectionately against his outstretched hand. He gently scratched the back of her head in return. "Off you go, then. You may hunt on your way home if you like," he added as she flew off.
Snape stood and quickly retreated back through the Leaky Cauldron to a quiet side street where he hastily made his exit before Stan Shunpike alerted the wizarding world to his continued existence.
*****
A few minutes later, Snape's beautiful barn owl was tapping on the glass beside Hermione's desk. With a quick intake of breath and a wildly beating heart, she opened the window and welcomed the bird inside. With trembling hands, she untied the package. In an instant, the bird had disappeared through the open window. As cold as it was outside, Hermione didn't stop to close it again. She cut through the string with her wand and eagerly opened the box.
"Whatcha got there, Mrs. Weasley?" asked Agnes Garmand, one of her coworkers.
"Oh, just a potion I ordered to try and calm Hugo's nerves," she answered.
"Poor little bloke," commented Agnes. "Hope it helps."
"So do I," Hermione answered truthfully.
She lifted the note and temporarily put it aside but picked it back up immediately when she realized that there were two containers inside the box, one homemade, and one store-bought that looked vaguely familiar. Where had she seen that little perfume bottle before? Then it hit her. Viktor Krum had given her a heavenly bottle of perfume upon her graduation from Hogwarts. She remembered how soothing its aroma had always been. It had been her favorite, and since she had used it very sparingly, it had lasted for over five years. But when they got married, Ron insisted that she throw away the empty bottle. He didn't want any reminders of Viktor Krum in his house. Could this be the same perfume? Was this package from Viktor, not Snape? She anxiously began to read.
Miss Granger,
I am sending this remedy to you with a condition attached. This potion is one I have never attempted to make, but don't worry. There is nothing in it that could cause your son any harm. I will send you a different version of the potion each week, and you will keep copious notes on his symptoms, something I know you are quite capable of doing.
Two tablespoons mixed with any beverage, morning and bedtime.
Inform me of any changes in his condition.
The additional contents of this package are for your own personal enjoyment. I believe you will find it much more compatible with your body chemistry than what you are currently wearing.
By the way, thank you for the chocolates. They were most enjoyable.
Your Humble Servant,
SS
P.S. Do you have access to e-mail? If so it could solve the other problem you spoke of. You may reach me at HalfBloodPrince@yahoo.co.uk
Hermione stared in disbelief at the note in her hand. Snape's tight anal scrawl had not evolved in the slightest since his time at Hogwarts, although she was glad to read that he had enjoyed the chocolates. But that was only the beginning. The note had been written on the finest 100% papyrus, a paper that was quite difficult to find at all and exorbitantly expensive when available. In addition, he didn't provide her with a recipe to help Hugo, he provided her with the finished product. Was he actually being thoughtful? Severus Snape? And as if this were not enough, he would be sending her a different potion each week, and he expected, in fact required, a reply with the results from her so he could modify the potion accordingly. Finally, after all these years, the correspondence would go both ways.
And what truly flummoxed her was the addition of the Secret Recipe fragrance, one of the finest and most expensive perfumes on the market. Never mind the money he must have spent. Had he actually remembered what it smelled like from her previous letters after all those many years? And if so, what did that mean other than that he had actually read them? How could he have detected the trace of scent on those letters much less known which perfume it was?
And he had signed it, "Your Humble Servant." Well, obviously he was serving her needs by fulfilling her request, but what an elegant way to sign the letter. No man had ever said such a thing to her much less put it in writing.
But what the bloody hell was Snape doing with an e-mail address?!
She remembered reading about them in the computer books from her parents' house. If he had an e-mail address, that must mean he had a computer. Her mind began to race. Perhaps one of her Muggle cousins could help her get that old computer at her parents' house up and running, and she could set up an e-mail address. That would require electricity. And if she was going to start spending time there, she may as well have the water turned back on... and some food in the place and...
Suddenly, for the first time in years, Hermione was excited and happy about her future prospects. And, finally, she had someone on her side again. Thank Merlin. Severus Snape... Who'd have thought?
It was time to leave work behind for another day. Little Hugo would be OK at his grandmother's house for just a little longer. Hermione quickly sent off her patronus with a message to Molly letting her know that she needed to stop by her parents' house to check on things. It had been over two weeks; no one would think anything of it. Then she sent another off to Ron, asking him to stop by and pick up Hugo. She gathered up her new box and the treasures it contained, and then she headed for one of the fireplaces in the lobby. Her parents' fireplace was still part of the Floo network. She could Floo home from there.
Once at her parents' house, she began to go through all of their old utility bills to retrieve the necessary phone numbers and have things turned back on. It was too late to deal with it all today, but she could find a pay phone at lunch tomorrow and make the necessary calls. Once that was done, she could spend her lunch hours at the house and learn about the computer and, if necessary, employ her cousin's help to set up an e-mail account.
*****
Later that night, as Hermione snuck two tablespoons of the precious potion into Hugo's warm milk, she felt a warm wave wash over her. Did the warm wave make her think of Snape? Or did thinking of him cause the warm wave? Was Snape at home right now thinking about her? She hoped so as she watched her son down the full glass.
"Sleep well, love," she said as she caressed his sweet face with one hand and took the empty glass away with the other.
"'Night, Mum," came his drowsy reply.
Yes, she thought as she quietly closed Hugo's door, things are definitely looking up.
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677 Reviews | 6.73/10 Average
I hope you stil intend to finish the story xoxo
Response from Buckshotwon1 (Reviewer)
No problems. Hugs
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Someday. I haven't forgotten. Now that I work full...
I can't fault you for making a working relationship between HG & RW. I think it's better that way and better for the kids. I never thought he was evil. Just self absorbed and easily misguided.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I tried to be realistic about their relationship. I have known married couples who werer terrible together, but after the divorce, they got along much better living separate lives. They were just not meant to share a house. In real life most people are not purely good or evil. They come in shades of grey. Thank you for reading. I still swear I will finish it someday.
SS's breaking heart made me cry!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi. Thank you for your review. Yes, the chapter was meant to pull on your heart strings.
Omg its been 5 years ago I started to read your fic back in 2008 and it was such an upset when you stoped updating the next year. And just today I was looking for my old e-books and saw your fic and immediatly went here:) It seems you keep on updating so you just ought to finish such an amazing story!;) may the muse be with you🙏🏻oh and sorry for my awful English:)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I am so bad to have not updated in such a long time. I feel really guilty for leaving everyone hanging at such a suspensful moment, but my life has been crazy since I stopped writing. I have a full time job with overtime, I go to school part time, and I spend a couple of hours a day in my car going from place to place because work, school and home are so far away from each other. I think often about my story and how I would like to finish it. I have an outline. I even have parts of it written, but not the next part. That one has kept me stuck because I want it to be funny, but the comic muse has deserted me lately. I guess I just have to force myself. But time steals away many of the things I would like to do. And I have to sleep in there somewhere. I have not abandon it. I will finish it eventually. Thank you for taking the time to remind me that people are out there that are still interested.
I am SO pleased you started updating again. I always did love this story. :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks. It has been a while since my last update but I hope to be writing again soon. Please continue to be patient with me. I will finish it. I promise.
But I want more! Drat. I rarely start works in progress b/c I can never contain myself enough to wait for updates on things I like. Somehow I didn't notice this wasn't finished, so here I am, all jittery, needing my fix. Next chapter plz?
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Next chapter still needs some work. Sorry. Much of it is written, but I really want it to be funny. Comedy is hard to write. Please be patient with me. My life is crazy right now. Too many irons in the fire.
Rose was very rude, but when all is said and done, she is daddy's little girl, and will stick by him nomatter what. As she grows older she may see that Severus is a good man, and accept him in their lives. I have been wondering, given the role both her parents played in the war why does she know so little, knowing Ron he would be more than willing to tell war storys, but Hermione said the children know very little of their parents ordeals at school.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I think you are right, that Ron would want to brag about their exploits at school, but I also think Hermione would advise against it. She wouldn't want her kids to think it was OK to go looking for trouble just because their parents did. I also took my cue from the epilogue in book seven. All the kids on the train are staring at Harry, but when one of their children asks what everyone is staring at, Ron says it's him, he's really famous. If he had told his kids about everything that happened, they would know that people were staring at Uncle Harry, not their father. So that makes me believe that at least at this young age, even Ron would keep his mouth shut about their adventures at school.
I am REALLY hoping that Umbridge gets what she deserves.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Things are not always what they seem. But don't worry, you'll get your wish.Thanks again for taking the time to read and review. It means the world to me.
Ron is learning that age old lesson " Kama is a BITCH " and who better to teach it than Lav Lav.
Severus' dream was wonderful, I hope it comes true in the end.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Many of my readers wanted something horrible to happen to Ron as a result of his cheating on Hermione and trying to keep her children away to get her back. I'm not a vindicative person, and I find that usually these things work out without me taking revenge on my own. So I let Hermione stay out of it. Karma does have a way of making a person pay, and I'm glad to know that you enjoyed the way things back-lashed at Ron.Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Well, that was just a mean place to leave things! He is so going to kill her. I'll let you decide if "her" means Rita or Hermione, lol. I really have no idea what is going to happen now. Perhaps they can run away and become teachers at Possum Pouch. :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Most of the next chapter is written, but it is not quite finished yet. Do have patience with me please. I know where this is going, I just have to take the steps to get there.Thanks so much (again) for reading and reviewing. Your's is the only review for this chapter after a whole week. I used to have a following... Oh well. Don't worry, I'll finish it, even if you, I and my betas are the only ones who read it!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I don't know what keeps people from reviewing. It takes very little time (unless you are on your phone and it keeps erasing you note!), and it keeps authors writing. I would hate to see people stop posting for lack of reviews.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Most of the next chapter is written, but it is not quite finished yet. Do have patience with me please. I know where this is going, I just have to take the steps to get there.Thanks so much (again) for reading and reviewing. Your's is the only review for this chapter after a whole week. I used to have a following... Oh well. Don't worry, I'll finish it, even if you, I and my betas are the only ones who read it!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I don't know what keeps people from reviewing. It takes very little time (unless you are on your phone and it keeps erasing you note!), and it keeps authors writing. I would hate to see people stop posting for lack of reviews.
I'm on my phone and it is a pain in the ass to review here, so suffice it to say that this chapter was excellent, Ron and Hermione included.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I usually read on my phone as well, so I know just where you are coming from. I thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. The reviews spur me on to scrape the moments together that I need to finish this, although from the look of the reviews, I don't have many readers left. My own fault for waiting so long to get back to it. One cannot force inspiration to strike, however, so I do the best I can with the time and muse that I have.Thanks again for the complement.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I usually read on my phone as well, so I know just where you are coming from. I thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. The reviews spur me on to scrape the moments together that I need to finish this, although from the look of the reviews, I don't have many readers left. My own fault for waiting so long to get back to it. One cannot force inspiration to strike, however, so I do the best I can with the time and muse that I have.Thanks again for the complement.
Really liking the mystery as it is coming together now. ;)+the hints of the future are such a tease!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks for the encouraging comments,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I appreciate the review and the fact that you are hanging in there with me.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks for the encouraging comments,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
. I appreciate the review and the fact that you are hanging in there with me.
I'm having several ideas about the culprit and that development was something I was sort of hoping for. Verrry interested about next chapter.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
It takes a while before all is revealed, but all will be answered eventually. I like plot twists. Hope this keeps at least some of you guessing for a while.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
It takes a while before all is revealed, but all will be answered eventually. I like plot twists. Hope this keeps at least some of you guessing for a while.
I am interested to see what Severus and Kingsley come up with for the restaurant. And, are they really seeing the future somehow in their dreams? And Rita ... If she had any sense at all, she would have approached Hermione who proved to be trustworthy in the past. But alas ...
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Rita doesn't have the luxury of approaching anybody. As you know by now, she is under someone elses influence... someone not very nice. It is easy to hate Rita, but things are not always as they seem.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Rita doesn't have the luxury of approaching anybody. As you know by now, she is under someone elses influence... someone not very nice. It is easy to hate Rita, but things are not always as they seem.
I don't suppose there is any chance that Snape is a feline animagus? Just where are they?!?! * is nervous*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
As far as I know, Snape has no Animagus form. Where he and Harry ended up is answered in the next chapter, as you already know by now. Nothing to be nervous about, although I do feel sad for Hermione.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
As far as I know, Snape has no Animagus form. Where he and Harry ended up is answered in the next chapter, as you already know by now. Nothing to be nervous about, although I do feel sad for Hermione.
I had forgotten what a cliffhanger this is. I am so glad you are back to posting. I have to say that while I am with Hermione that Umbridge is definitely involved, I don't have a clue how this is going to end up. I suppose as long as Severus gets the girl and stays out of Azkaban, the rest will fall into place.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
That is the best reason for writing, to be sure he gets the girl in the end. They both deserve to be happy.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
That is the best reason for writing, to be sure he gets the girl in the end. They both deserve to be happy.
Rita disappearing is very concerning, indeed. Poor Winky, so frightened. Poor Snape is probably still floored as to how she escaped. I am as well. *is nervous*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
By now you have read ahead and know that Rita escaped up the chimney, a place Severus didn't think to ward. Oh well. He doesn't know that she is an unregistered Animagus.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
By now you have read ahead and know that Rita escaped up the chimney, a place Severus didn't think to ward. Oh well. He doesn't know that she is an unregistered Animagus.
I had intended to stop and review each chapter while I reread since I didn't do so the first time around, but I am reading on my phone while I await the repair of my computer and it is a bitch to do so. But, I had to drop in here for a moment because this chapter has one of those scenes that has always stuck with me since I read it. That is the healing scene between Severus, Rose, and Hugo. It is such an intense yet wonderful moment of bonding. Love it!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks so much
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
, that is one of my favorites as well. I read alot on my phone. I have read all of your reviews as you posted them, but I can't respond on my phone. Sorry you had to wait for my responses.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Thanks so much
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
, that is one of my favorites as well. I read alot on my phone. I have read all of your reviews as you posted them, but I can't respond on my phone. Sorry you had to wait for my responses.
Oh, how awful! I had sort of hoped that Severus was being too cautious, but he was spot on. I suppose at least Hermione has no reason to keep Rita's secret now. Or perhaps she can use it as a bargaining chip to get Rita to spill about the blackmail. Or perhaps Severus will be so pissed off that he will kidnap Rita all over again, and this time she wil be lucky if she gets away in one piece.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
No one gets dissected in my story. I'm a peaceful person. All will eventually end happy. It will get rougher before it gets better, but it will end happy, don't worry.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
No one gets dissected in my story. I'm a peaceful person. All will eventually end happy. It will get rougher before it gets better, but it will end happy, don't worry.
Well, that was unexpected (and wonderful). I must have more!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
More coming soon. Thanks for sticking with me. Glad you enjoyed it the second time around too.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
More coming soon. Thanks for sticking with me. Glad you enjoyed it the second time around too.
Draco may be A slytherin, but Severus is THE Slytherin. As for Hermione and Severus, it seems to be, two steps forward, and one step back with them.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I agree - Severus is THE Slytherin. Draco has such an ego. I very much wanted Severus to beat him at his own game. That was a very fun chapter to write.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I agree - Severus is THE Slytherin. Draco has such an ego. I very much wanted Severus to beat him at his own game. That was a very fun chapter to write.
Poor little Winky, how heartbreaking for her, I'm so glad that she is safe with Severus now. I am a little suprised at some of the comments about the situation between Viktor and Hermione, even women who have been highly trained in martial arts have been known to be paralised with fear, in those circumstances, Hermione did manage to fend Viktor off, but that dosen't make it any less traumatic for her, rape happens in the mind first.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I was surprised by the one girl's comment as well. I feel like Hermione thought she knew Viktor and was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt - in other words, she thought he would have taken "no" for an answer. Obviously she was wrong. When she realized this, she became hurt and confused, wondering if she had done something to warrant such behavior on his part. Most women feel sullied under such circumstances, even though she was not raped. She was still grabbed and groped, and that is not pleasant under any circumstances. Caressing and foreplay are one thing, unwanted grabs and gropes are another.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I can only speak for myself, as a survivor I can tell you that I am nither small nor frail,but was still unable to fight off my attacker { someone I knew } it was the inferance that power would keep her safe that I found disturbing, this implys that the woman is at fault,if she for whatever reason can not fight back. I know that it is inposable to fully understand, unless one has lived through such an event, so I pray that no one reading this, will ever fully understand.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
I was surprised by the one girl's comment as well. I feel like Hermione thought she knew Viktor and was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt - in other words, she thought he would have taken "no" for an answer. Obviously she was wrong. When she realized this, she became hurt and confused, wondering if she had done something to warrant such behavior on his part. Most women feel sullied under such circumstances, even though she was not raped. She was still grabbed and groped, and that is not pleasant under any circumstances. Caressing and foreplay are one thing, unwanted grabs and gropes are another.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I can only speak for myself, as a survivor I can tell you that I am nither small nor frail,but was still unable to fight off my attacker { someone I knew } it was the inferance that power would keep her safe that I found disturbing, this implys that the woman is at fault,if she for whatever reason can not fight back. I know that it is inposable to fully understand, unless one has lived through such an event, so I pray that no one reading this, will ever fully understand.
I have always had a soft spot for Winky, and you write her so well. As for Viktor, there is nothing as sad as a former jock, that still thinks he is a catch, he's lucky that Winky was there to pull Severus back from the edge. Looking forward to finding out more about, Otto, Rita and Lav Lav .
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
This is sort of the "part 2" of my story. We'll get to the bottom of it all eventually.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
This is sort of the "part 2" of my story. We'll get to the bottom of it all eventually.
I'm very happy that Ron has been sorted out, and the children are now able to see their mother.Severus is being very nobel, but I hope that he and Hermione get together, sooner or later.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Sooner or later... I promise. Keep enjoying those dreams they share. I put them in there to hold the readers over, and to give hope to our favorite couple.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Sooner or later... I promise. Keep enjoying those dreams they share. I put them in there to hold the readers over, and to give hope to our favorite couple.
I am wondering how Ron would react to someone using the book on Rose, forsing her into a marriage she doesn't want, these spells are the equivalent of a date rape drug. Even if Hermione goes back to Ron "for the sake of the children" what does he think wil happen when they grow up, Hermione will have no reason to stay once they are of age { seventeen in the wizarding world } she will leave anyway, all he is doing is postponing the inevitable, but what can one expect from someone who takes realationship advice, from Malfoy and Nott.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Just as Harry chided him. Ron listed to the advice he wanted to hear. He would have done anything to get Hermione to stay with him. He was holding on to a dream that he had kept since adolescence. It was so very hard to let go. Many people stay in a bad marriage because they remember the way it "used to be" and hope to get that original feeling back. Sometimes it's just really hard to move on.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
As a wise man once said"you can't go back to OZ" but it must be so hard not to keep trying.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of Secret Recipe)
Just as Harry chided him. Ron listed to the advice he wanted to hear. He would have done anything to get Hermione to stay with him. He was holding on to a dream that he had kept since adolescence. It was so very hard to let go. Many people stay in a bad marriage because they remember the way it "used to be" and hope to get that original feeling back. Sometimes it's just really hard to move on.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
As a wise man once said"you can't go back to OZ" but it must be so hard not to keep trying.