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From a Frog to a Prince
cocoachristy523 Reviews | 6.17/10 (523 Ratings, 0 Likes, 99 Favorites )
Second Place Winner for the Anything Goes Challenge's Chaptered Category! Hermione comes home to find something she'd never expected. Her life will change--hopefully for the better.
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Well, I really hope he'll win!!! Great chapter, saaaad story!gab
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! It is sad.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! It is sad.
Gads, I thinkI'd be just like Hermione. After the way he used her, treated her like a toerag, and now he expects her to marry him? He has some serious atonement to do! So good for Hermione to stand you to him like that.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Right, because it's not just her now, and she's been through one failed marriage already.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Right, because it's not just her now, and she's been through one failed marriage already.
I like that Hermione is taking a firm stance (so far) against him getting his way. I think he'd have to prove to her somehow that he does love her.And... stupid Ron!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes. She won't just fall into his arms this time.LOL @ Ron!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes. She won't just fall into his arms this time.LOL @ Ron!
I like that Hermione is taking a firm stance (so far) against him getting his way. I think he'd have to prove to her somehow that he does love her.And... stupid Ron!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes. She won't just fall into his arms this time.LOL @ Ron!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes. She won't just fall into his arms this time.LOL @ Ron!
I certainly do appreciate Severus's tenacity. Unfortunately, he doesn't seem to fully understand just how much he hurt Hermione. He's not very good at placing himself in her shoes and imagining how he would feel and react if he were her. I will say, though, that he's getting better at it. Narcissa seems to get through to him somewhat. Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story. Great job!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I think he knows tht he hurt her deeply. Right now, he's just trying to get her to see why he behaved like he did... wanting to give her a better understanding of him. In a way, it's like a child who says I'm sorry and expects that to make it better. Glad you're liking it so far.
Response from color (Reviewer)
Yes, he knows that he hurt her, but I'm reading him as understanding this more on an intellectual level than on an emotional one. He seems to experience his own emotions quite well, but he lacks true empathy. However, that's a skill he can improve on with practice. In his case, constant practice. BTW: I completely agree with Sampdoria's comment.One more thing--I should have commented on this in the appropriate chapter--the scene where Severus more-or-less calls Hermione a whore was incredibly power. You wrote of her rubbing her chest and physically feeling the pain in her heart. You did a great job writing that. As I read that scene, you made me feel the same thing right along with her! Upsetting as all get-up, and fantastic writing. We don't always read fiction for pleasure, but for intensity and experiencing another's life. You certainly make us live it. Love it!!! Now where's the chocolate?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I think he knows tht he hurt her deeply. Right now, he's just trying to get her to see why he behaved like he did... wanting to give her a better understanding of him. In a way, it's like a child who says I'm sorry and expects that to make it better. Glad you're liking it so far.
Response from color (Reviewer)
Yes, he knows that he hurt her, but I'm reading him as understanding this more on an intellectual level than on an emotional one. He seems to experience his own emotions quite well, but he lacks true empathy. However, that's a skill he can improve on with practice. In his case, constant practice. BTW: I completely agree with Sampdoria's comment.One more thing--I should have commented on this in the appropriate chapter--the scene where Severus more-or-less calls Hermione a whore was incredibly power. You wrote of her rubbing her chest and physically feeling the pain in her heart. You did a great job writing that. As I read that scene, you made me feel the same thing right along with her! Upsetting as all get-up, and fantastic writing. We don't always read fiction for pleasure, but for intensity and experiencing another's life. You certainly make us live it. Love it!!! Now where's the chocolate?
He really has no clue. I'm guessing he wears her down, though. And I want to punch Molly in the nose.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I think he does know that he really hurt her, at this point, he's just trying to get her to see where he's coming from. LOL @ Molly! Always in someone's business!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I think he does know that he really hurt her, at this point, he's just trying to get her to see where he's coming from. LOL @ Molly! Always in someone's business!
A battle of wills indeed. I cannot help, but hope Severus pervails. He has lost so much and deserves happiness.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes, he has.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes, he has.
The man doesn't know how to take no for an answer. Great!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Teehee! Don't you just love that about him?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Teehee! Don't you just love that about him?
Ahhhhhh.... She has a right to refuse to go to dinner with him, but I hope his powers of persuasion will win her over.I have an idea that Ron is going to be hard to get along with since Severus Snape is the father of the child that his ex-wife is carrying, and that said ex-wife is the mother to his children. But I have faith in Severus' ability sort things out in the end.This is a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it!!!Beth
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you!Ron is upset, but mainly his mom has him worried more than anything I think.Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Severus has made a very good start in mending fences with Hermione. And now I can't wait to find out about Shannon and Liam, so I'm off to read the next chapter!Well done.Beth
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy it!
I'm so happy that Severus had a change of heart about involving the barrister before he and Hermione had a chance to try to sort out their situation on their own.I love this story!Beth
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes, he just needed to calm down and think things through.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes, he just needed to calm down and think things through.
GREAT chapter! I really love this story and am glad that Severus has finally gotten his head out of his ass and is doing what's right. I hope he has to grovel *lol* Really looking forward to reading what happens next.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! So glad you like it! She won't just jump into his arms, don't worry!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! So glad you like it! She won't just jump into his arms, don't worry!
What a sad story!! It was beautifully told, however. Can't wait for the mental war between Mione & Sev!!! Well done.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you're liking it so far.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you're liking it so far.
loved his respose to no! that seems so in character. thanks for this great update and i look forward to the battle of the stubborn ones!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Wow. This Hermione has developed some really tough qualities now that she has a baby to think of. I really do like this story and am interested to see where it's going.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yep, she had to I think. Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yep, she had to I think. Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Why do I think Hormones will win out?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Don't they always?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Don't they always?
I'm glad Hermione's not giving in too easily. :)
Can't wait for the battle to begin!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! No, she won't give in too easy...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! No, she won't give in too easy...
Well, at least he's making forward progress for a change!
But Hermione's tough (now) so I'm wondering how much harder he's going to have to work to win her.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Right, now that there's more at stake than just her, she's a lot more cautious.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Right, now that there's more at stake than just her, she's a lot more cautious.
Wow! That's a huge about-face for Severus! Let's hope he continues behaving!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes, it is, but then he's realized that if he doesn't do something drastic, he'll loose her!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes, it is, but then he's realized that if he doesn't do something drastic, he'll loose her!
Although a few things in your tale, Severus' recounting are a bit off from canon, I really enjoyed reading it. He's a bit more occ than before, but still, he's trying to woo her. You're dialogue is well done, too, and flows nicely.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :-)I do wonder though about OCC (Not just right here with you saying, but anytime ANYONE says that in any story) because we basically see Snape from Harry's POV, never from an adults and certainly never in an adult 'relationship.' IMHO, we have no idea how he would act in an adult relationship.Honestly, I couldn't imagine the Snape I had pictured in my mind loving one woman who basically left him for another man (that was no longer living, no less) all of his life. When I get the image of him at Gryffindor, begging her to see him, that is not 'OCC' to the git Snape Harry paints for us. That is a very love-sick Snape. And then there's the crying... LOL Anyway! Thanks!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :-)I do wonder though about OCC (Not just right here with you saying, but anytime ANYONE says that in any story) because we basically see Snape from Harry's POV, never from an adults and certainly never in an adult 'relationship.' IMHO, we have no idea how he would act in an adult relationship.Honestly, I couldn't imagine the Snape I had pictured in my mind loving one woman who basically left him for another man (that was no longer living, no less) all of his life. When I get the image of him at Gryffindor, begging her to see him, that is not 'OCC' to the git Snape Harry paints for us. That is a very love-sick Snape. And then there's the crying... LOL Anyway! Thanks!
dun dun dun dun.... :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Thanks!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Thanks!
Snape's got such a short fuse. I cansee his point about the Malfoys keeping quiet though. I hope Hermione doesn't take his shit.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! If it were me, I'd be mad if my best friend thought that someone was carrying my child and didn't tell me! HA HA HA! (He should've kept in better touch with her, eh?)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! If it were me, I'd be mad if my best friend thought that someone was carrying my child and didn't tell me! HA HA HA! (He should've kept in better touch with her, eh?)
Good work here. At least she's not falling all over him like I usually see in stories. Like the backstory.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed that part!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed that part!
Excellent. Poor both of them, really. I'm glad Severus is making an effort and I think Hermione is compassionate enough to understand his compulsion to push people away in order to avoid getting hurt, but she needs to be *very* firm with him to avoid any future repetitions.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes. Oh, she will be firm--perhaps too much so! LOL
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes. Oh, she will be firm--perhaps too much so! LOL
I can almost hear the sound of him swallowing his pride. Excellent chapter! I can't wait to unravel the mystery of Shannon.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Yes. He is very proud in this fic, but is learning not to be so proud at the expense of his own happiness.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Yes. He is very proud in this fic, but is learning not to be so proud at the expense of his own happiness.