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From a Frog to a Prince

523 Reviews | 523 Ratings, 0 Likes, 99 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 45,161 Words 13 Chapters Complete

Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Second Place Winner for the Anything Goes Challenge's Chaptered Category! Hermione comes home to find something she'd never expected. Her life will change--hopefully for the better.

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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10/10

sinbad

Let's hope Severus is more hard-headed than Hermione. I'm worried about Ron because he may cause Hermione quite a bit of aggravation before this is done.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! They're BOTH hard-headed! teehee! Hang in there with Ron, he may just surprise you!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! They're BOTH hard-headed! teehee! Hang in there with Ron, he may just surprise you!

10/10

sinbad

Nice, very nice. I'm really enjoying the history 'lesson' Severus is giving us, and how true it is that pregnant women have days that they just fall asleep.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying his past! Yep, I sure did when I was pregnant!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying his past! Yep, I sure did when I was pregnant!

10/10

sinbad

Very nice chapter, I'm thinking Shannon is another tragedy which colored his relation with Hermione up to this point.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Yes, it did.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Yes, it did.

10/10

sinbad

Boy some serious sparks flew in this chapter. Hopefully one of them will grow a few brain cells, calm down and think a bit more rationally.Fast paced and exciting.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

THanks! LOL! Yes they did! Glad you're enjoying!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

THanks! LOL! Yes they did! Glad you're enjoying!

9/10

sinbad

I see Hermione is serving up a similar dish to Severus that she felt was dished out to her. Good I hate women who act like doormats.I think I found 2 typos. When Vivian was talking to Severus about her husband's mistress she said 'she was tried...' I think you meant tired and another was 'take my from behind'

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Yep, me too! Thanks!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Yep, me too! Thanks!

10/10

sinbad

I wonder the same thing. I always thought Severus was curt for several reasons being a spy (which is not conductive to friendships), having a miserable time with his peers and lastly self protection. I wonder if Hermione would agree with me.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Right, me too...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Right, me too...

10/10

sinbad

A nice warm Narcissia? That was a shock, a pleasant one too. Very daring.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! I like her here. ;-)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! I like her here. ;-)

9/10

sinbad

I read somewhere that when it come to casual sex you take the side of the bed closest to the door. I don't know if that advice will help Hermione out or not...lol

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Good advice though!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Good advice though!

10/10

CrimsonFire

Great story!! I am looking forward to the next update!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!

9/10

sinbad

Well, dear old Severus is as cantankerous as ever. I had to laugh at their meeting it went pretty much as I would have expected.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Yes, he is! Glad you enjoyed it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Yes, he is! Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

Marble Meadow

I can see him being irritated at the end there.. but OH MY GOD GET OVER IT SNAPE AND BE SUPPORTIVE!Lol. I love this story. It's like one of those movies that you watch and yell at the screen, telling the characters what to do. I sit here screaming at the computer like a lunatic. Ok, not literally. But in my head. Does that make this review any better? Not doubting my sanity are you? =)This story is wildly entertaining, and chalk full of drama. I love it. But knock it off with the cliffy's.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Thanks! He's just defensive right now because he thinks she wants to end things, and he's protecting himself.Glad you're liking it! Teehee!Nope, not a bit! I do that too!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Thanks! He's just defensive right now because he thinks she wants to end things, and he's protecting himself.Glad you're liking it! Teehee!Nope, not a bit! I do that too!

9/10

sinbad

Interesting start. I'm not surprised that Ron is cheating with Lavender. I never thought Ron and Hermione really fit together no matter that JKR shoved that match down our throats. On to the next...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! I never thought that they fit either. I do like Ron, just now with Hermione.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! I never thought that they fit either. I do like Ron, just now with Hermione.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I really enjoyed Ron's visit. I wonder why Snape's in such a pissy mood at the end?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Because it took her so long to come around, or even get in touch, he thinks she's there to end things so he's being defensive.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Because it took her so long to come around, or even get in touch, he thinks she's there to end things so he's being defensive.

10/10

sinbad

Hmm alls quiet on the Weasley front. I don't like it one bit, for some reason my hackles are up.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Hang in there--you may be surprised!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Hang in there--you may be surprised!

10/10

mauvemagique

How evil is it to leave it hanging like that! Surely you are posting the rest tomorrow!I'm no less egar than Severus to know her mind...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Muahahahah! >:] Actually, I am working on the next now, and I hope to have it finished by this weekend.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Muahahahah! >:] Actually, I am working on the next now, and I hope to have it finished by this weekend.

10/10

beaweasley2

Well this will be interesting! If he'd been trying to woo her his 'opening bark' might just change her mind. I know he's probably upset that she waited/thought it through and took a week doing it, but geeze! *gulp* What a train wreck.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! He's defensive, positive that she's there to break things off...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! He's defensive, positive that she's there to break things off...

10/10

Hogwartslibrarian

Please don't let her take him back just yet! It's still too soon! He hasn't done enough to atone for all the horrible things he said and did before. He should be courting her, spoiling her, treating her like a princess. I'd like to see him go into her memories and FEEL how he made her feel. And maybe see Shannon and Lily in a less than perfect light, somehow. Thanks, and I love this story!!!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! I think at this point, what she has to decide is rather she wants to live with or without him, and go from there. He said all that he can and told her all that he can, so now she has to figure out her own feelings without taking his or his actions into consideration... She has to now look towards the future.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

10/10

empathicslytherin

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Goddamn it! why! *sobs* It was getting good and you had to go in and put a bloody cliffy!!! *grabs you by the shoulders and shakes you* what is her decision!!!? what what is it! nyahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

*Rubs shoulders* Okay, okay, calm down!! See, what she decided is...;-)

Response from empathicslytherin (Reviewer)

*sobs somemore* wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!...*hours later* so when is the next update?..

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Working on it now... Hope to have it sent to my beta by this weekend!

Response from empathicslytherin (Reviewer)

OH cool!!! Good luck! you are an excellent writer! I would like to put my two cents that hermione needs to meet severus' child. they need to somewhat bond together. ^^

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

*Rubs shoulders* Okay, okay, calm down!! See, what she decided is...;-)

Response from empathicslytherin (Reviewer)

*sobs somemore* wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!...*hours later* so when is the next update?..

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Working on it now... Hope to have it sent to my beta by this weekend!

Response from empathicslytherin (Reviewer)

OH cool!!! Good luck! you are an excellent writer! I would like to put my two cents that hermione needs to meet severus' child. they need to somewhat bond together. ^^

10/10

sinbad

And once again there is so much room for misunderstanding to grow and develop. I can certainly say you are giving them a rough way to go.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Yeah, their beginning has definitely been rocky so far.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Yeah, their beginning has definitely been rocky so far.

9/10

reets67

Honestly! Not again! Is he an Animagus because he's turning back into a frog...no make that a toad again? Perhaps he should remember the old Muggle proverb - you attract more flies (or is that bees?) with honey than vinegar. I can feel the stone that is settling in Hermione's gut settling in my stomach as well...Thanks for another great chapter.Cheers.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Well, not that I'm excusing his behavior, but he did pour out his heart to her and she has "left him hanging" for five days. He's thinking she's there to end things, so that makes him defensive. We'll see how that works out.... ;-)(It's flies!)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

8/10

Literary Fantasy

This is such a great story. I love that Snape is mostly his snarky self. I love a well-done snarky Snape.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it!

8/10

Literary Fantasy

This is such a great story. I love that Snape is mostly his snarky self. I love a well-done snarky Snape.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it!

0/10

kimjo2

i would have turned and left! thanks for the update and i'm looking forward to the next chapter

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Teehee! I bet most would have! More up soon!

10/10

jadedtalisman

All right, that's just mean! Am I gonna hafta come over there and whip those two in to shape? Sigh...please update soon. I can't handle to suspense.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! You might at that! More up soon! I'm over half-way finished!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! You might at that! More up soon! I'm over half-way finished!

0/10

sunny33

Why is he so grumpy? She didn't take THAT long to decide.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks, Sunny. Well, for a man like Severus, who is strong and had promised himself he would never be in a situation where his heart could be broken again, after pouring out your heart, five days without a word is long. He's made up his mind she's there to end things, so he's defensive. Let's see how that works out for him...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

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