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From a Frog to a Prince
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Second Place Winner for the Anything Goes Challenge's Chaptered Category! Hermione comes home to find something she'd never expected. Her life will change--hopefully for the better.
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I'm glad Hermione could see Ron as her "best mate" and not as her "ex-husband." It's so much better for everyone that way once the disappointment and hurt feelings have bee accepted and worked through.And I truly believed Severus had made a good start on convincing Hermione that he really loved her for herself and not just because of the baby. But when she took a long time to get back in touch with him, and then showed up on his doorstep unannounced, he acted like a petulant child... and that probably won't sit well with Hermione, even if she was about to cry.I hope they can get past their fears and begin to talk to and LISTEN TO each other. This was a great chapter... an evil cliffie, but a great chapter. And now you simply must update soon or I'll have apoplexy.I love this story!!!!! Beth
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I actually like Ron, and I love the trio's friendship. I agree, if life could only be that way!He did act immature, but when you pour your heart out and then hear NOTHING, it tends to make one defensive. I would have been the same, I think. And, he believes she's there to end things, so he's trying to protect himself. I am over half-way done with the next chapter! So hopefully, I can send to my beta this weekend. So glad you're enjoying it!
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I'm so much like Severus that I would probably have been in a snit, too, just like him. The fear of something happening drives me crazier that coping with it if it does come to pass.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I actually like Ron, and I love the trio's friendship. I agree, if life could only be that way!He did act immature, but when you pour your heart out and then hear NOTHING, it tends to make one defensive. I would have been the same, I think. And, he believes she's there to end things, so he's trying to protect himself. I am over half-way done with the next chapter! So hopefully, I can send to my beta this weekend. So glad you're enjoying it!
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I'm so much like Severus that I would probably have been in a snit, too, just like him. The fear of something happening drives me crazier that coping with it if it does come to pass.
Hey when did Ron grow up?Hermione should not be surprised by her reception. When a man as strong, sensitive and damaged as Severus lays his heart in your hands you do not take a week to check out the garden.Irish
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
THANK YOU, IRISH!!!! That's it exactly! He's being defensive because he thinks she's there to refuse him!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
THANK YOU, IRISH!!!! That's it exactly! He's being defensive because he thinks she's there to refuse him!
I am really not comfortable with this Severus. He is acting just like an abusive mate. Its hurt, forgive, forgive, I will never hurt you again, and then hurt again, just because she didn't jump as quickly as he wanted. It sounds like a cycle to me. Hermione watch out!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Well, consider. He poured his heart out to her, and granted, five days may not seem like a long time to us, but when you're waiting for an answer to a life altering question, it can seem like forever. When she got there, he just assumes that she is there to refuse him, so he's building up a defense against the hurt.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Well, consider. He poured his heart out to her, and granted, five days may not seem like a long time to us, but when you're waiting for an answer to a life altering question, it can seem like forever. When she got there, he just assumes that she is there to refuse him, so he's building up a defense against the hurt.
Oh, Severus. You're killing me!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! He's scared of what she's going to say, so he's building up a defense against the hurt...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! He's scared of what she's going to say, so he's building up a defense against the hurt...
WHAT?? You're just going to LEAVE US LIKE THIS????OMG my cardiologist is just going to be so pissed!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Sorry! I am working on it! Promise! :-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Sorry! I am working on it! Promise! :-)
Hoo - boy ---- it sure looks like Severus is going to blow it - again! I loved the scene with Ron. It seems like poor Ron is always an ass in so many stories. It is refreshing when he isn't... Of course, that makes me think that Snape heard parts of their exchange and is now jealous and acting like an ass himself. Hmmm - don't keep us in suspense! I hope you update soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, it's been five days since he's seen her, and because it's taken her so long, he believes she's there to refuse him, so he's defensive...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, it's been five days since he's seen her, and because it's taken her so long, he believes she's there to refuse him, so he's defensive...
Another brilliant chapter. Well done.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
Well, it wouldn't be a story if it didn't have a cliffie!Thank you for giving me "Ron" and not "Imature Ron." I really do see him more like this. It think their interaction was well done and much more like the struggle of best friend vs. ex should be (in a perfect world).
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yeah, you know I had to leave you with one! ;-)I actually like Ron, just not with Hermione. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yeah, you know I had to leave you with one! ;-)I actually like Ron, just not with Hermione. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well!
AHHHH CLIFFIE! Love, love, love this fic. Can't wait for more, your story is wonderful.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it!
Well, I'm glad she's finally made up her mind. And I don't really blame Severus for being irritated. I know he told her he'd give her time, but in that time he's been just waiting without word of anything and after so many days I can see how he would conclude the worst. Hopefully Hemrione didn't blow it (though I doubt it ~snerk~) with her long indecisiveness.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
! Exactly! He's being defensive because he thinks she's there to refuse him. It's a hard situation for them both, I think!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
! Exactly! He's being defensive because he thinks she's there to refuse him. It's a hard situation for them both, I think!
All that begging he was doing and now he acts like an ass??? What's up with that? Can't wait to find out what Hermione's decision is. HURRY!!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
HA HA! Thanks! Well, it's been five days since he's poured out his heart to her without a word, and so now he automatically thinks she's there to refuse him, so he's being defensive. Almost done with the next chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
HA HA! Thanks! Well, it's been five days since he's poured out his heart to her without a word, and so now he automatically thinks she's there to refuse him, so he's being defensive. Almost done with the next chapter!
I'm now going to whinge about the cruelty of cliff-hangers! Really good though, and also love that Ron can still be her friend.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
THanks! Sorry, they are cruel, I know. Glad you enjoyed it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
THanks! Sorry, they are cruel, I know. Glad you enjoyed it!
I love to hate this situation you've created and you are making it very easy for me. She will say yes after this repeated "welcome" by him? Naturally. Life is a bitch. No surprise there. But why write fanfiction about it?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Remember, it's been a week with no word from her, so he's hurting too. He's very defensive right now.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Remember, it's been a week with no word from her, so he's hurting too. He's very defensive right now.
Bad author! Evil cliffie!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Sorry, my dear! I am working on the last now!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Sorry, my dear! I am working on the last now!
Nice one Severus! Very smooth... What an idiot talking to her like that.
I hope she still chooses him though, me and my SS/HG addiction lol!
Hope the next chapter isn't the last? is it!!!?
Don't be to long.. i don't like cliffhangers! lol
xox
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! You'll just have to wait and see! The next one is the last one... Not much longer; I'm almost finished!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! You'll just have to wait and see! The next one is the last one... Not much longer; I'm almost finished!
Nice one Severus! What a smooth way to show Hermione you have changed. NOT. The frog will remain a frog, and no kisses (just the thought of Hermione willingly kissing a Severus like this makes my skin crawl, I want her stronger and with more brain and selfrespect than that) will be able to turn him into a Prince!!! I hope she tells him goodbye and walk out that door he obviously didn't want to let her through, but I am quite sure you will have her declare her undying love for him instead:-(. It is so easy to put up a nice behaviour when you are prepared, at the moment she is just as inconviniant as she was in Italy and his true personality shows through. You almost made me vote for him during this chapter, but at the end I snapped out of it. She is obviously not welcome in "his" home, a "I am busy at the moment, show yourself in while I attend to stuff" would have covered the situation, his contempt and dislike of seeing her should give her a clue on his true feelings! I am so dissepointed in him, I actually don't want a "happy ending" that includes them being together. Severus having issues are a big part of his character, that is why he facinate us I guess, but he is really dissepointing in this story. He comes out as a man who obviously don't want to loose anything he has put his mind to have, but he doesn't have the selfcontrol to continue the charade of "loving" her until he has her under his control. At the moment I am more than willing to think that the fact that she left him motivates him a fat lot more than her carrying his child.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Well, you have to consider. Severus poured his heart out to her, leaving himself vulrnerable and his heart completely in her hands. Then he doesn't hear one word from her for five days. So, he assumes that she is there to tell him she doesn't want him, and he's being defensive, trying to harden his heart. It had already been broken twice, and he never meant to put himself in a position where that could happen again, and yet... here he is. He's trying to protect himself. He wasn't really busy, he was just making excuses. Its not about her being under his control,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
, its about him having control of his on feelings, and failing. He didn't want to love her, but he does, thus taking the control out of his hands.
Response from Sampdoria (Reviewer)
His heart were broken twice, once by the girl leaving him for someone else, then by loosing his love in an accident. But, how does that differs from Hermione? First Ron broke her heart, then Severus crushed it back in Italy, worse, he trampled on it and spit on the remains with full intent and knowlegde of what he was doing. Is her heart less valuable?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Well... I didn't say that it differed from Hermione. It doesn't. I was just saying that he wanted to control his feelings for her and when he was unable, he lashed out at her. He simply explained his reasons to her, and then left his fate completely in her hands, something he never wanted to do again because then it takes the control of his life out of his hands. After the life that he's lived, he never wanted to let anyone else control his fate again.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Well, you have to consider. Severus poured his heart out to her, leaving himself vulrnerable and his heart completely in her hands. Then he doesn't hear one word from her for five days. So, he assumes that she is there to tell him she doesn't want him, and he's being defensive, trying to harden his heart. It had already been broken twice, and he never meant to put himself in a position where that could happen again, and yet... here he is. He's trying to protect himself. He wasn't really busy, he was just making excuses. Its not about her being under his control,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
, its about him having control of his on feelings, and failing. He didn't want to love her, but he does, thus taking the control out of his hands.
Response from Sampdoria (Reviewer)
His heart were broken twice, once by the girl leaving him for someone else, then by loosing his love in an accident. But, how does that differs from Hermione? First Ron broke her heart, then Severus crushed it back in Italy, worse, he trampled on it and spit on the remains with full intent and knowlegde of what he was doing. Is her heart less valuable?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Well... I didn't say that it differed from Hermione. It doesn't. I was just saying that he wanted to control his feelings for her and when he was unable, he lashed out at her. He simply explained his reasons to her, and then left his fate completely in her hands, something he never wanted to do again because then it takes the control of his life out of his hands. After the life that he's lived, he never wanted to let anyone else control his fate again.
very nice cliffhanger. I was delighted that when Hermione saw Ron she saw her dear friend and not her ex-husband. That's a great touch. Thanks for the upate.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yeah, I like Ron, just not with Hermione!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yeah, I like Ron, just not with Hermione!
WTF? Is Severus back to sabotaging his relationship with Hermione? Considering what he put her through, he needs to shut up and eat humble pie, even if it takes her a month to get back to him. Given his unpredictable temperament, he's simply draining to be around. How can Hermione sustain the energy for a pregnancy while dealing with Bumblybutt's moods and petulant behavior?Great chapter! Glad to see Hermione finally call Severus on the "whore" comment.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! See, now I don't think his temperament is unpredictable! ;-) I would say that after he told her everything about Shannon and Lily, and her knowing how tender his heart is, it shouldn't be surprising. He's defensive. He never wanted to be in the position of loving someone like that again, and now that he is, it makes him feel vulnerable. Not that I'm excusing his behavior and chastizing hers. This is a major life-altering decision for her, and I say she should take all the time she needs. I can just see why he acted that way. He thinks she is there to end things, and that put his defenses up. Big time.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! See, now I don't think his temperament is unpredictable! ;-) I would say that after he told her everything about Shannon and Lily, and her knowing how tender his heart is, it shouldn't be surprising. He's defensive. He never wanted to be in the position of loving someone like that again, and now that he is, it makes him feel vulnerable. Not that I'm excusing his behavior and chastizing hers. This is a major life-altering decision for her, and I say she should take all the time she needs. I can just see why he acted that way. He thinks she is there to end things, and that put his defenses up. Big time.
I'd be ticked if I had a greeting like that. What was on the furniture invoice? Baby furniture? Of course I can hear the statement, "This is how Shannon did Liam's room before he was born." He really needs to watch what he says or she'll be out the door.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yep, if I were Hermione, I would be mad too. Remember, it was Liam's. He went to pick up the bedroom furniture for him.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yep, if I were Hermione, I would be mad too. Remember, it was Liam's. He went to pick up the bedroom furniture for him.
I'm not sure how Hermione managed to accept his invite into his home. I'd have collapsed in a small pool of tears outside his door.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Yeah, I feel for them both, actually! More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Yeah, I feel for them both, actually! More up soon!
After that greeting, I think I'd tell him to go to hell. But I loved the scene with Ron. It was a lovely chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, the greeting was a defense mechanism. He thought she was there to tell him it's over. I know that five days may not seem like a lot, but when you pour your heart out to someone and tell them the ball is in their court, and then they don't contact you AT ALL for five days... Well, that can hurt, and right now, he's hurt.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, the greeting was a defense mechanism. He thought she was there to tell him it's over. I know that five days may not seem like a lot, but when you pour your heart out to someone and tell them the ball is in their court, and then they don't contact you AT ALL for five days... Well, that can hurt, and right now, he's hurt.
GAH!!! Don't leave us hanging there!!!!! THat was a most evil cliffie, and if you don't update soon, I'll....I don't know, but definitely something!!!! Great chapter!gab
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Sorry! Sorry! I am working on it now!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Sorry! Sorry! I am working on it now!
Great chapter. I'm glad Ron and Hermione are still best mates. Severus, on the other hand, is in deep trouble I think for the way he greeted Hermione. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes, I like Ron... Well, she's not happy with him at the moment, that's for sure! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yes, I like Ron... Well, she's not happy with him at the moment, that's for sure! ;-)
~hugs hermione and glares at severus~ be nice! bad potions master! you should know better than to upset a pregnant woman!i hope everything does work out with them! can't wait for the next chapter
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
TEEHEE! Thanks! More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
TEEHEE! Thanks! More up soon!
So exciting fic!!I love your Severus, he is becoming a prince!Please up date soon.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!