Oh, Severus.  What a wanker you are.  You treat your friends with so much charm and respect, and heaven knows you must be the perfect host... wanker.Even after you realize you've mistreated Hermione, you still fall far short of any kind of apology or tenderness.  Yes, you kissed her.  Yes, you slipped her tongue.  But other than "I want to hear you say my name," what sweet nothings did you whisper in her ear?Not a single word that approached the charm you used on Vivian.Wanker.(Great story!)

He should have left a note :)  Then we could avoid all this mess... oh wait, I like the mess.  Where would stories be without it?  This Hermione is a bit of a drama queen and a little too quick to jump to conclusions for her own good, I think :)

Tsk-tsk, he should have stayed. Hopefully things work out for them and I wonder where Hermione went.

WOW! She still left even after....Update soon. Great chapter!

ARGH!  You are going to KILL ME! I hope you update soon because I am going NUTS!Great  chapter. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon

Severus...Low blow....comparing her to a prostitute! I hope he knows how to beg and plead. Good job!

Oh dear. I think he may just have gone too far this time. Equating her to a whore when she had put so much of herself into him.... I think if he waits till after the party, it will be too late!

Poor Hermione...trying to make things work, only to find that she doesn't have a snowball's chance in he11.Very well written.

Ugh!  Stupid men!  I want to punch Severus for his thickheadedness (is that a word? LOL).  I'm quite eager to see what's going to happen; it really does seem like Severus f*cked up.  More, please!   

I will be checking up on this one obsessively for an update. *hits refresh* Awwww... :(

Great story, I can't wait to learn about Severus' past and his son!  Will his son be comming into the story at any time?  Can't wait to read more!  Thank you!

I like Bea's idea about him going to find an Italian guy!  He deserves a little punishment.  What a wanker.  Looking forward to him digging himself out of his hole.  Idiot man!



rdholmantx's response: oops, that was supposed to be HER going to find an Italian guy.  DUH.  That would be a wholly different thing...

Author's Response: HA HA! Sshh! You guys are going to totally ruin my next chapter which is almost finished! ;-)

Oh geeze the man is being a complete sodding wanker! Calling her a prositute! He's going to loos her.Herminoe should disappear on him. Leave a little clue, but go, find a nice villa and meet a nice tall dark Italian. Maybe THAT will help them both see the truth of thier feelings.

Goodness, after the way he's treated her he should have to chase her half way round the world to get her back.One other thing, try as I might, I can't imagine Snape ever using the word "shindig."I'm looking forward to more. 

Hmmm...I wonder if antibiotics mess-up wizarding birthcontrol like they do muggle birthcontrol...that could be interesting.  Hurry up!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!  Please.   :)

Oh, my my ... he's really fighting it, isn't he?You just know it's a losing battle, but it's fun watching him struggle.Great chappie ... looking forward to more!

Oh his walls need some major knocking down soon, and maybe Narcissa is just the one to man the wrecking ball (with a little help from Lucius, of course).  :-)

Please don't drag this out too far - the angst is painful!

Wow, no wonder she feels a bit used. What a cold way to go about things!

"except stay with a man who’d betrayed her in the worse possible way" - typo here - should read "worst possible way"I like how Ron wants his children there when he remarries... my XH didn't show the same courtesy to my children. Tosspot.Interesting first contact with the decidedly not dead Snape. Looking forward to what happens next!

Wow, nice long first chapter! This is an interesting take on 'let's get rid of Ron'. He's still an idiot, but at least he feels bad about being an idiot. I appreciate that. I agree that they don't belong together, but I don't think he's Ever So Evil.

Hehehehe I think I can see where this story is going.  I won't tell you though, cause I want to see if I'm right.  Great chapter! Please update soon.

Oh your Severus is a cold one, although do I sense a little boiling in his blood? and that almost kiss - he'd have had a melt down if he'd gone through it! very nice read. Thank you.

She's right. Ron's not wasting any time, is he? Wow. Snape's a prick so far. I look forward to when he might be the one getting treated like shite, turning tables and such.

The poor man is so scared of letting her in. Great chapter, I like your Narcissa.