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From a Frog to a Prince
cocoachristy523 Reviews | 6.17/10 (523 Ratings, 0 Likes, 99 Favorites )
Second Place Winner for the Anything Goes Challenge's Chaptered Category! Hermione comes home to find something she'd never expected. Her life will change--hopefully for the better.
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Severus is such an idiot, for someone who we like to believe is intelligent. He couldn't leave a note, nooo, he had to tell a sleeping person where he was going.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL~ I think in this instance, he was just being a man... Not thinking!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL~ I think in this instance, he was just being a man... Not thinking!
Well Snape, what do you expect? She never actually heard you tell her that you were coming back! Shame on you! I love your Snape - he's such a bastard! Great job!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
i can't wait for the next chap!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! It won't be long!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! It won't be long!
wOW. Gone. I don't blame Hermione, not one bit. I wonder if she was too inebriated to remember Severus kissing her or if she thought that she was with the man from the bar? I hope they work things out!I'm bouncing in my seat over here! Please update soon! This is such a wonderfully entertaining fic!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! No, by the time things got going, she was sobering up.More up soon, the next chapter is finished and with my beta! Glad you're enjoying it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! No, by the time things got going, she was sobering up.More up soon, the next chapter is finished and with my beta! Glad you're enjoying it!
Poor Hermione. I don't know why he thinks last night was so special. In her mind, he used her just to prevent someone else from playing with his toys. Big deal that he kissed her, she begged for it. He was gone when she woke. Nope, hardly any difference between this and their previous encounters except what's going on in his head, and she wasn't privy to any of that. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to see how long it takes him to get out of this mess. He really did a number on her.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yep, because she is not privy to his thoughts, she doesn't know how he really feels about her. At this point, she'd just had enough. More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Yep, because she is not privy to his thoughts, she doesn't know how he really feels about her. At this point, she'd just had enough. More up soon!
Aaarrgghhh...as if kissing her is going to make everything okay. He's got some serious explaining to do. I'm still wondering about mixing contraceptives and antibiotics...that would throw quite a money wrench in the machine. Lav is certainly a piece of work. Sending a picture sure sounds like something her character would do. So, when do we hear more about Shannon and Liam? Does Cissy butt in and talk to Hermione once they're back home. Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Yes, he does! But when he tried to talk to her, she kept iinterrupting, so he thought he'd show her instead. The only problem with that is that she does know what what he's thinking... LOL at Lav trying to stake her claim! More on Shannon and Liam in a couple more chapters!
As soon as Sev left I had a sinking feeling that Hermione would not be there when he returned. Is she thinking he jsut wanted a quick shag and then left her there? - Maybe. ... Probably, I suppose. Well I do hope our couple can get their heads out of their respecitve arses and get back on track. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Partly, but part of it is the fact that she just feels like she needs to start over--alone--and decide what she wants.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Partly, but part of it is the fact that she just feels like she needs to start over--alone--and decide what she wants.
well of course! i don't blame her a bit. loving this story. thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you like it so far!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Glad you like it so far!
In the words of Henry Higgins: "Ha, ha, ha, HA!" I'm sorry, I just have an evil feeling of smug satisfaction that she up and left him. It's going to take more than a kiss and a shag to change the fact that he treated her terribly.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Teehee! Thanks! You're right! It sure is!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Teehee! Thanks! You're right! It sure is!
I really do like this story. Love the reality of the situation. Nice going!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it!
What! What! Well, can you blame her. I don't think it's "to little to late" yet but......hurry please with the next chapter!!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I have started it the next one...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I have started it the next one...
Hmmm. truly bad behaviour there, I suppose we should be grateful that he started to realise what a pillock he has been. but then Gone? She can’t be gone! Not after last night… for a smart wizard he really should start thinking with the head that is not in his trousers. Hermione must be in a really grim place emotionally and I can see that it will get worse before it gets better due to the after effects of her encounters with Snape not the least her feeling lousy the cold light of morning. Plus drinking and sex with strangers could lead to further complications. Great chapter and I will be looking forward to the next chapter/s. I'm expecting that Hermione will get a 'surprise' visitor soon! (Tee Hee!)Cheers.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, look at it this way. The main complaint from her is that due to the way he treats her during sex, and the fact that he never talks about anyting to her, he must equate her with a whore.Well, she wouldn't let him get a word in edgewise, so he tried to use the 'other' thing she complained about and SHOW her rather than TELL her, only that blew up too. Teehee.She is depressed, but at this point, I think she should pull herself out. Oh yeah, she'll get a couple surprise ones! :D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, look at it this way. The main complaint from her is that due to the way he treats her during sex, and the fact that he never talks about anyting to her, he must equate her with a whore.Well, she wouldn't let him get a word in edgewise, so he tried to use the 'other' thing she complained about and SHOW her rather than TELL her, only that blew up too. Teehee.She is depressed, but at this point, I think she should pull herself out. Oh yeah, she'll get a couple surprise ones! :D
To be honest, what saved this chapter was that Hermione had gone in the end. I was so dissepointed when she so easily let him have sex with her, I almost stopped reading. Don't get me wrong, I am somewhat glad that she didn't find someone else that evening, I don't want her to get so low as to Severus level, that would only have confirmed his view of her as a cheap whore. I also more than anything want a happy ending for the two of them, but I am still so mad at Severus, I want to roast him above an open fire. He is walking a very thin line in my eyes, one more of his hurtful words and actions and there would be nothing that would make me forgive him or want anything good for him. I don't care about his regrets or motivation for his actions; it doesn't change what he has done and said. Herminoe let her self be treated like a whore for way to long, that blame she must take upon her self, but it doesn't change the fact that he treated her like crap and neither does it change the words he said. It doesn't matter that he didn't like his guests, they were obviously good enough to be invited, it doesn't matter that he turned that woman down, he didn't have any problems with her kissing him. Yup, still red hot glowering mad about Severus, I wan't him to hurt, I want him to feel just as cheep as he made Hermione, I want him to really, really work to get Hermione back; no sloppy "sorrys" and all is forgiven! When all this is said, my sincere compliments to you as the author! I just love it when a author manage to intrigue, enrage and entrails me into the story in such a way as I am to this story! Keep up the good work and update again soon!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Well, for one thing, she craved that type of attention from him, and though she was not drunk, she was on her way to being so. Severus does have a lot of making up to do... No, it doesn't change those things, but he knows he messed up big time. Now we just have to see if she is willing to forgive him at all after she talks to him. Well, Vivian only very lightly kissed him, as a friend. He'd been avoiding kissing Hermione because to him, that is extremely intimate, and at that point, he was trying to avoid any intimacy...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Well, for one thing, she craved that type of attention from him, and though she was not drunk, she was on her way to being so. Severus does have a lot of making up to do... No, it doesn't change those things, but he knows he messed up big time. Now we just have to see if she is willing to forgive him at all after she talks to him. Well, Vivian only very lightly kissed him, as a friend. He'd been avoiding kissing Hermione because to him, that is extremely intimate, and at that point, he was trying to avoid any intimacy...
Ha! Serves him right! Who does he think he is - treating her like that and then thinking that one shag makes up for everything!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! That's right! He's got a lot to make up for!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! That's right! He's got a lot to make up for!
Severus should have forgotten his guests and stay with Hermione. Now, he'll have to start over.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Exactly!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Exactly!
For the moment I am glad she is gone. Though, she should have gone before the fuck with kissing, that is, without it. My guess is she will take a teaching position where Liam will go to schoo, Hogwarts or someplace else. And my guess is also that you will let her do the same thing (not able to resist him) over and over again. And I am already angry.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes, she needs to think things through! I love it when people try to guess things, but you're wrong on both!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes, she needs to think things through! I love it when people try to guess things, but you're wrong on both!
Snape is an idiot. Where did he think Hermione would be when they slept together and he left and she woke up alone?Men....Great story although I hate that Ron and Lavender are together.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks~LOL You're right! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks~LOL You're right! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
sigh. he should of left a note.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes, but at that point, I don't think even a not would have helped...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Yes, but at that point, I don't think even a not would have helped...
Boo
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
:) Keep reading!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
:) Keep reading!
Go Hermione! I really like this story. The "kiss" scene made me blush :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I'm glad I could make you blush!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! I'm glad I could make you blush!
Another great chapter! Figure Hermione woke up and figured Snape was after one last shag so she left. He better go after her. Looking forward to a new chapter soon.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, it was a little more than that, though that did run through her mind. More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! Well, it was a little more than that, though that did run through her mind. More up soon!
I'm hoping she only gave in because she was drunk because his behavior was reprehensible in so many ways. The sex scene was hot, but pretty much too late, I believe. You know, I'm guessing this has a happy ending, but I kind of wish she'd just tell him to go to hell and find someone else.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Well, she was not totally drunk, but getting there. Also, I think part of it was that he was finally treating her as she wanted to be treated. And yes, for her, at this point, it was too late.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thanks! Well, she was not totally drunk, but getting there. Also, I think part of it was that he was finally treating her as she wanted to be treated. And yes, for her, at this point, it was too late.
awww...I feel sorry for them both! Moreso for Hermione though...Severus has a lot to make up for, I hope he chases her down! hehe Great chapter, can't wait for more! :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! I do too! ;) More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
Thank you! I do too! ;) More up soon!
Now that was not good thinking on his part. Fancy leaving! Who cares about the guests, Narcissa would have seen to them.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Thanks! No, he wasn't thinking clearly right then! (Narcissa and Lucius were part of the guests that he wanted to see off...)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Thanks! No, he wasn't thinking clearly right then! (Narcissa and Lucius were part of the guests that he wanted to see off...)
Argh now that is a cliffie and a half. What an evil little vixen you are. Write more soon....please. Irish
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Thanks, and... sorry! More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)
LOL! Thanks, and... sorry! More up soon!