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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge From a Frog to a Prince
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From a Frog to a Prince

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

From a Frog to a Prince

cocoachristy

523 Reviews   |   523 Ratings, 0 Likes, 99 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 45,161 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Second Place Winner for the Anything Goes Challenge's Chaptered Category! Hermione comes home to find something she'd never expected. Her life will change--hopefully for the better.

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13


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0/10

klschmidt

He almost should have paid her before he went to sleep.  Sheesh it was really cold.  I'm on board with what others are saying.  This was almost classic Bastard!Snape.  I'm anxious to see how things thaw as the story goes on.:-D

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

:) Thanks! Well, he told somewhat going in what he wanted from her in chapter 2 when they first met... but still, I agree that was cold!  Yep Bastard!Snape is right.

0/10

DanaPAH

Wow.  I don't know anything about fling etiquette, but Id think that even a fling might have the decency afterwards to at least walk the woman to the door. I look forward to seeing where you take this.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

TEEHEE! Thanks! Yep, you would think so, wouldn't you?

9/10

Shadow

Well, that was cold! I wonder what happened to him in those years that made him so impersonal towards the one he is shagging??Is Liam his son?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! I can't answer your questions... You'll have to keep reading! :D

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hgelman

Whew!  That was pretty hot!  Poor Hermione though - Snape really used her.  I can't wait to see what happens next - hopefully he will get what's coming to him...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Well... I don't really think that he used her per se. I do think that he made things rather impersonal, but she knew things going in. Perhaps she didn't realize how detached he'd be, but I still don't feel like he used her, I just feel like he was very cold to her.

Response from hgelman (Reviewer)

Ok - well - I guess you are right.  I think this then comes down to expectations.  And I would say that hers were certainly not met.  Still - I hope he has some kind of an attitude adjustment...maybe?  Well, either way, I am enjoying the story very much!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Oh, no worries! She will eventually get tired of the way he acts! :D

0/10

GinnyW

Snape was so cold, but... it's a fling. I mean, really, what could she expect from him? Though, I can understand, it's so cold and impersonal... enough to make her feel like a whore. The poor girl. I want to see what you have planned next, though!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Yep, he was cold and very detached. And too, with her only having ever been with Ron, she really has nothing to compare Snape to. They are polar opposites, and she's never had anything in between. More up soon! (I hope!)

10/10

floorcoaster

Haha! Enjoyed that banter there at the end! of all the gin-joints .... :)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Exactly! Now... I am going to be curious to see what you think of the next chapter, I've gotten mixed reviews...

10/10

floorcoaster

Okay, wow. This was such a refreshing read from the similar stories I've read recently (elsewhere). It was so nice for them to talk about it, to admit that it was a two-way street, and for you to ... well, not just Ron-bash. He gets the short-end of the stick too often in fics, and this made him seem mature and intelligent. Well, considering. :DWonderful start!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! See, I acutally like Ron Weasley. Just not with Hermione. And I also wanted to show that while I absolutely DO NOT condone cheating--I've been the victom of a cheating husband--that there are two sides, and it does take two to make a marriage work. Beyond that, Hermione knows deep down that she does not love Ron like she used to and though she truly is hurt, it wouldn't be fair to either of them to try and keep the marriage together. I am happy you liked my start!

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bellarossi

Interesting chapter! I want to see what happens next between our couple. I like how things aren't romantic and ideal right now; it's an interesting premise and I want to see what you do with it. More, please.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks so much! I am working on 4 now! ;D

10/10

notsosaintly

The mystery deepens. You've dropped a few hints, enough to have me following after, picking them up one by one . . . I wonder what's at the end?Definitely bookmarking this. And I've even decided not to peek at who's under the mask, even though I could do that.  I like that part of the mystery too. 

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! I like the fact that you're not going to peek because I want to know your reaction when you find out who it is!

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

I'm glad you said that, because that gives me extra incentive.  SW always marks all these with 'SW' in the queue and my eyes just skim past; I don't pay attention to those.  I will make extra sure I'm not tempted.My reaction?  *lol*  Now I am really curious.  I don't even know how long I have to wait until this is over. October?  I'm sure it'll be October before I know it.

10/10

notsosaintly

Wow.  I read the warning before I started.  I did.  Still, I was shocked ... not that he did that, but that little mental picture you drew when he stood before her naked.  I actually put my hands up in front of the screen and was crying, "Eww, ewww, ewww!"Brilliant, though. I think Ron's pretty much of a wanker normally, so this story is my cup of tea. 

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Thanks! Sorry about that mental image, though! Could you just imagine him? Ewww is right! Glad you like it so far.

10/10

StormySkize

While I was happy to have the update, and was pleased that they've finally started their fling, I have to say that I was very unhappy with the way Severus treated Hermione! 'Detached and impersonal' doesn't even begin to describe his actions.They didn't make love; they didn't even have sex, as far as I'm concerned. That was masturbation in a vagina!Oh, yes, she had an orgasm, but she would have gotten more out of it if she'd used a vibrator. One has no emotional expectations with a vibrator, after all.Yes, she agreed to a no commitment, no strings fling, but come on -- this act was so removed from intimacy that I had trouble wrapping my brain around it.I know things will get better, I know it ... but, man, this was so frigging cold!Sorry for the rant -- and this isn't a flame, honest! I like this story very much and I'm looking forward to reading more of it. You've raised a few questions that I sure hope will get answered.Who is Liam? Who is the woman in the picture? Even people who want 'no strings' generally get undressed when they have sex, so why won't he? Why won't he kiss her? As to the condom, well, I didn't think that was strange until Hermione starts ruminating about it, so that raises another question.And, of course, the biggest question I have is the same as Hermione's -- how did he survive?Again, I didn't mean to rant -- please believe that the ability to provoke such a strong reaction means that your writing is powerful.Take the stars as a form of apology!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! No, you're right, he was a bastard to her. He won't see that he was so much. He will understand that he remained detached, but...There will be an explanation as to why. (Not EXCUSES IMO, but an explanation.) There have been things that have happened that have made him decide that he never wants to have a relationship again, and he will try his best to stick to that....As for Hermione, she's only been with Ron, she she's a bit confused about things. She will write to Ginny and get her opinion, but after awhile, Hermione will stop going by 'fling etiquette' and with her feelings. She's also still very confused about her life right now, and though she won't admit it, still very hurt by Ron.All of your other questions will be answered later on! Promise! (Oh, as to why he didn't undress... AT THE MOMENT, he was so turned on by her he wanted her right then and didn't take the time to think of her needs.)

0/10

sunny33

Never mind Hermione, I'm sure he will get better. :)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

:D Thanks! You're right... eventually!

0/10

pookah

Thanks for the update. I hope she puts Snape in his place a bit! teaches him a lesson. although he's been honest with her, and has acted like a Snape, eh? I think that she should get a hot Italian lover. Italians are so beautiful.

One nit pick:
2nd sentence- "It had been one week since she’d ran into her old professor"

ran should be run - she had run.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! She won't for a bit because she is so confused right now. Not only about him, but about everything going on in her life right now. Yep, he acted just like a Snape! ;)

10/10

Valady

Hmmm one has to wonder what Severus is hiding... and who is that mystery woman in the picture?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! It will all come out... eventually! ;D

8/10

JoKK2

Well I can really see how Hermione is feeling -- a bit confused, but not really.  I wonder how long she can handle this type of non-relationship?  It will be interesting to find out.  Somehow I don't think Severus can keep his distance with with one.  Thanks for posting, JoAnne

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! You're right on most things  here. He will want it to just be sex, but....

0/10

sherekhankaa

Wow, he was certainly all talk when it came down to his prowess concerning the opposite sex.  I'm curious to see where this will lead. Skk

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! Well, he's trying to remain detatched, but...

10/10

blue artemis

That was amazingly impersonal. I know he has been hurt, but wow.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Yes, this first time was rather impersonal. He's been more than hurt, remember... Oh wait! I haven't gotten that far into the fic! :D More will be explained later on, I promise!

9/10

harrypotterwanter

Well, it appears as though he definitely wanted an impersonal affair. I wonder what he'll think of the sex after he wakes up. Will he want more? Or will he be satisfied with what she had. Hopefully Hermione is strong enough to insist that he remove his clothing next time. The affair isn't just for his benefit, after all.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! He tries to be impersonal as a defense mechanism, but you know what they say... Hermione will get stronger as she goes. She's very very confused right now, not only about Severus, but her life in general.

10/10

livvy6

It seems to be she's gone from a frog to a toad! When will women ever learn to trust themselves? Hermione wants to be cared for and she thinks she'll get it by allowing herself to be used. Who came up with the asinine theory that sex without connection was a good thing?I'm sure there is more to the story and I'm only seeing this from one side, however, this is just not good!I hope she tells him she doesn't want him again and he was a lousy lay! That'll get him!Sorry, just feeling Snape is a total asshole right now. Good Chapter!Livvy

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Well, it does seem that way NOW... Hermione is just so confused. Not only about how things are going with Severus, but her life in general. Her divorce, her job, ect... She's trying to find herself, and don't worry, she will! There is more that will be revealed later on where Severus is concerned....

10/10

Sampdoria

While I am happy both with the update and that the fling actually has started, I must admit that I found Severus rather unsexy, detatched and I am not sure what is the correct word; cold? Indifferent? I know they have agreed upon a fling and that is brilliant as long as they both know and agrees, but up until they actually had sex it seemed like he wanted Hermione. As soon as she was undressed, it was like she just as well could have been a hole in the wall, he treated her like one would have treated a whore. A fling would, for me, imply that though neither intend to propose marriage, they found each other attractive and had an affair in mutual agreement and respect. This was more like Severus getting a whore free of charge and as long as he got somewhere to put his dick, he couldn't care less who the "hole" belongs too. I do think that Hermione deserves, and needs, to have a wonderful fling without any attachments after her failed marriage to restore her faith in herself as a desireable woman. This, though Severus  manage to give her an orgasm, can hardly be the way to make any woman feel wanted and desired. So far it only tells her that she ain't worth being aknowlegded. Nope, give Hermione a hot Itallian lover in stead; someone who treats her like a queen, making her feel wanted and desired. They will both know that it is just a fling, but at least Hermione would have the mans attention also after her dress is removed. Severus may need sex, but one must wonder just what kind of relationships he has had when this is his way to treat any lover.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you! Yep, he was rather detached and impersonal, but there is more going on with him than we know right now. More will come out as the fic progresses. He's built up a defense, afraid to let anyone get too close. That will change with time. Hermione is so hurt and confused, not only about Severus, but her life in general right now. She needs time to heal...

10/10

mia madwyn

Wow, there's so much I want to know! The condom... has he lost his powers? (Trying to recall if he's used magic in this fic so far.) Liam? A son? Muggle, evidently. The woman with freckles? Liam's mother?

Oh my oh my oh my, you've got my brain whirling.

As for the sex, well yes he's a bastard but we know that.

And in any story, it's not where you start, it's where you finish.

And the worse the start, the more delicious the journey to the finish! I'm sure Hermione will teach him as much as he teaches her.

Eager for more!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thank you so much! ;-) See, now your brain is whirling like Hermione's! ~Snicker~ You're right. It's exactly where you finish! Working on more this weekend! Off Monday--squee!

9/10

missbluejuju

Ooo, Severus just pisses me off!  There's a difference between a summer fling and a sex with a prostitute, and he's definitely treating Hermione like a prostitute.  ::runs into story and jabs at Severus with a pitchfork as he sleeps::There, that'll teach 'im!  Well, regardless of Severus' behavior, I'm really enjoying your story, mystery author.  I don't typically go for "older Hermione stories" but this is really engaging.And also, I noticed that there might be a teensy spelling mistake.  It's the "whet your appetite" sentence, and "appetite" is spelled "apatite".  I'm not trying to nitpick; it was just something I noticed, and if I'm wrong, I apologize.But anyway, more please!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Yep, he is detached, I know. I tried to explain some of his feelings on that reguard in my first chapter, but it will be explained more as the fic goes on. He will be a bit of a basterd for awhile in this fic...

0/10

septentrion

Even for just a fling, Severus could have gone another way about it. He should have stick to a whore, it wouldn't have been different. And the worse was his rudeness: falling asleep like that! Well, I hope Hermione will be able to turn the tables somewhat.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

THanks! i know he was rather detatched. He's a bit of a bastard too, I know. I explained a little bit of that in the first chapter, but it won't be until later chapters that we find out why... Don't worry, Hermione will come to a point to where she gets... fed up. ;-)

9/10

Shadow

I had to laugh at the way Severus introduced himself to her chest first. How typically male!It is amaizing how when Severus sulks, he immediately go es on the offensive, miserable git!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

LOL! Thanks! It IS typically male, isn't it?Yep, I agree.

0/10

kimbee73

Oh, I love the flirting....keep up the good work!! I look forward to more..

Response from cocoachristy (Author of From a Frog to a Prince)

Thanks! Glad you are enjoying it! More up soon!

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