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Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
blackeyedlily75 Reviews | 4.97/10 (75 Ratings, 0 Likes, 58 Favorites )
Written for the SS/HG Summer 2007 Exchange, which was prior to Deathly Hallows. Hermione joins the Potters for a Disney family vacation. Little did she know what surprises she would find there.
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Wonder how long a transatlantic broom flight would take??
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
I wouldn't want to imagine. Remember how Harry was frozen on a ride from Privet Drive to Grimmauld Place in OOTP? Of course he wasn't dressed properly. Thanks for your comments. Feedback on fics is much appreciated.
Auntie Hermie.. who would have thought she would allow that ?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Only for Harry's children I expect. Thanks for your comment.
Wow, this is certainly getting interesting. I love dinest soooo much!A few mistakes though: As of January, it is not longer called MGM studios. it is not Disneys Hollywood studios. Mr. Toads Wild ride has been out of commission for quite sometime, and has been replaced with a Winnie the Pooh ride (on the same track of course, only the cars are hunny pots), although if you look closely, you can see a picture of Mr Toad in a picture frame in one of the rooms you go through (I think owls).I can't wait to read some more!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks for your feedback. This story was originally written for the 2007 SS/HG Summer Gift Exchange. So at the time it was written MGM Studios had not gone through the name change. However, I did not know that Mr. Toad's Wild Ride had changed. Good thing there, they need to update some of Fantasyland. I'll have to calculate what year this fic ought to be in with the ages I've set for the characters. I'll change it a bit if I think it would be more accurate. One of the things I enjoyed about writting this story was that many people could envision the scenes from their own Disney experiences. I'm glad your reading along. The story is complete and it is just a matter of getting each chapter through TPP's approval process.
Hmmmm, wonder what Severus is doing in Florida? And in an amasement park lodge at that? Does he have relatives that invited him or something? Man, I love a story that keeps me guessing. Thanks
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
It does seem like the last place in the world you would find Snape. Doesn't it? I'm glad your intrigued. Thanks for your comments!
That just goes to show that wizarding children are no different then muggleborn children. They all get bored and get into mischief. And I think it's a wonderful ideal what Ginny has planned for her future career. It's just too bad that Hermione can't make a choice.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks for your feedback. I could see an overachiever, like our Hermione, having trouble commiting to a career. Primarily because she wants to be sure she picks an area where she will shine. It's a fear of making a bad decision that she will regret, or missing out on that next great opportunity. Never fear she will have some ideas by the end of the tale.
Lol... Snape in Disneyworld? I saw the category listed as "potions Under Duress" and was hoping that Snape wasn't making his living playing Jafar in the Disneyland Street Parade. I am definitely looking forward to how this plays out.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Never fear, but I can see the resemblance to Jafar. Hadn't thought of that. I'm glad your enjoying the story. Thanks for your comments.
I can see Mickey fainting at the sight of a wizards rat. Or wizards for that matter. lol. Who knows The Magical World of Disney could be ran by wizards.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Lol. We have pet rats, so it felt like a good thing to incorporate.
Oh man I have always wanted to go there. Last year my sister took my son and now he wants to live there. I wish we could. Oh well. I am liking this story so far.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
I grew up less than two hours from Disney and have made many treks there over the years. Thanks for your comments!
I'm loving the plot to this story so far! Hopefully awaiting the next chapter!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. The story is completely written, as it was part of last summer's SS/HG Exchange. So the chapters will keep coming as soon as Administration approves and posts them. It is my first fic with lots of room for improvement. So your kind words are much appreciated.
Nicely written. Interested in seeing where you go with it. :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. It was based on a prompt from the 2007 SS/HG Exchange. So it is complete and will post as each chapter is approved.
I love Disney!!!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Me too! That's why I chose this prompt for the summer 2007 SS/HG Exchange. The story is complete and will post as soon as each chapter is approved.
Well, it was good as an introduction, but... where's the rest? Please do update soon... I can't wait to see what happens on this vacation to the happiest (and most expensive, lol) place on earth!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for your kind words. The story is complete and will post as soon as each chapter is approved. I live close to Disney and agree with the cost factor.
I know this seems very late but I just read your story tonight for the first time. I'd like to say I'm terribly sorry for your loss...and impressed with the fact you finished the story at all. I would love to see a sequel to it but it was lovely just as it was. The tiny touches, such as when Snape put the necklace on Hermione and when he knelt down to be eye to eye with little Molly were particularly sweet moments. Nicely done. :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! Reviews are welcome at anytime. This was my first foray into writing a chaptered fanfiction. I've since written two more, both for subsequent SSHG Gift Exchanges. The one written for Winter 2008 is archived in my account here, and I have one in the current SSHG Exchange going on at Live Journal. I like to think I've improved with practice. If you aren't familar with the SSHG Exchange you should check it out.
Cute,cute story.
Aw! He got all flustered at her smile! I wonder how he'll react to seeing her all spiffed up? As if I didn't know.... Can't wait for the next update.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
I'm glad your enjoying it. That's the most important thing.
Severus Snape PI...
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! I think it's an apt fit.
Minnie !!! LOL
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
It just came to me Minnie/Minerva. I couldn't resist.
Oooo, intrigue! I can't wait to see what all this cufuffle with Disney and Eisner is. And how things will progress between an atypical Cinderella and a very uncharming Prince.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks for the response. I hope you'll enjoy how it plays out.
So u must have either been part of the college program, worked for Disney World, or just go to Disney way too much. Haha, I was a CP and I had never been to the animal kingdom lodge, sad as it is. Next time i will try, but u must know that it is one of the more expensive disney hotels, and most disney employee's can not afford that cuz we get paid almost nothing.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
I'm afraid it's the latter. Growing up in the Tampa Bay area, and now having my own children has made for many trips as both a child and now as an adult. Thanks for the comment. I hope your enjoying my bit of silliness and that it has more context due to your experiences.
LOL Didn't we always suspect Eisner was evil? I know I did!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
He made a convenient villian. He, he.
Minnie Mouse!!!! That is hilarious, I never would have thought of it, but now that you mention it....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Minnie, Minerva, I just couldn't resist.
What a wonderful idea, how clever of you to mix the Magic Kingdom with JKR's magical world. What fun! I am SO looking forward to more!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for your lovely comments. I'm glad your enjoying the story. It was a prompt for the Summer 2007 SS/HG Exchange where someone wanted Severus and Hermione to meet up at an amusement park. Growing up, and still living, near Disney made it impossible to resist.
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This is the first chapter of this story that I've managed to catch, but it has me intrigued. I always like when people construct their own 'canon' like this with new wizards, etc.!
Author's Response: Thank you. As an Admin, your positive comments mean a lot to an inexperienced author like me. Of course everyone's comments mean a lot and it is a thrilled to hear from people who are enjoying the story.
I'm loving this fic! Please post more soon!Sincerely,Slytherin Girl
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. Your comments made my day. The next chapter just went through the submissions process and should be posted anytime. The entire fic is complete. So it is just a matter of have each chapter get approval for posting. I hope you continue to enjoy.
Response from SlytherinGirl_260489 (Reviewer)
Yay! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
Cute and fluffy in just the right combination. very nice
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! This was my first fic and it is nice that the SSHG Quiz gave it notice in their current quiz.I'm glad you enjoyed it.