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Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 1 of 15
blackeyedlilyWritten for the SS/HG Summer 2007 Exchange, which was prior to Deathly Hallows. Hermione joins the Potters for a Disney family vacation. Little did she know what surprises she would find there.
Hermione Granger awoke to the sound of giggles. She opened one sleepy eye to the bright sunshine of her bedroom. Standing by her bed was Molly Potter, a vivacious five-year-old, with a head of bright red curls and startling green eyes.
“Get up, Auntie Hermie,” she pleaded. “I want to go to Disney World.”
Hermione rolled onto her back and groaned. “What have I got myself into?”
As the Wizarding world had expected, Harry Potter married Ginny Weasley after the war had ended. Harry had been quite surprised to actually find himself alive. For so long, he had been sure that Voldemort’s demise would spell his own. It took a little getting used to the fact that life would go on and that he could plan for a future. Indeed, it seemed that the whole Wizarding world could now move forward without fear.
Once Harry had realised he was going to live after all, he got very busy. In fact, it seemed that he was trying to make up for lost time. He took a job with the Ministry as an Auror and married Ginny post-haste. Within a year they were the parents of twin boys – James Sirius and Evan Remus – named for Harry’s parents and their best friends. Then two years later, they were blessed with Molly Rose, a fact that made Grandma Molly Weasley ever so proud. After Molly’s birth, Ginny said that that was enough children for the time being. She was in no hurry to compete with her mother over who could contribute more to the Wizarding world birth rate.
Harry felt that it was very important that his children were as comfortable in the Muggle world as in the magical one. He and Ginny bought an old farmhouse close to Godric’s Hollow. The Hollow was a small rural community where Wizarding families lived anonymously among Muggles. This allowed enough privacy to live a magical lifestyle, instructing the children in magic without the prying eyes of close neighbours. Yet it was close enough to the Hollow to let the children attend the local public school with the Muggle families. All in all, Harry thought it was perfect, and he and Ginny christened the farm Potter’s Place.
While Harry had ploughed full speed ahead with after-war life, Hermione’s life seemed perpetually on hold. Nothing, not even the war, had been able to prevent Hermione from sitting for her N.E.W.T.s on schedule. With record-breaking scores in hand, she had her pick of apprenticeships. Charms, Arithmancy, Potions, or Astronomy, the choices made her dizzy. Hermione chose not to choose and took a position with the Ministry reviewing experimental magical patents. She reasoned that this position kept her abreast of advancements in several fields until she could decide her own true calling. She just couldn’t believe that six years had passed since she had joined the Department for Experimental Patents. Where had the time gone? She was no closer to deciding which direction to take. The decision seemed so important to Hermione that fear gripped her every time she thought of making a decision she would later regret.
On the personal front, Hermione had fared no better. Her sixth- and seventh-year romance with Ron Weasley had gone nowhere. They were just too different. The finer points of Quidditch would always escape Hermione, and Ron’s desire for a family life similar to his own was not even in her forecast. In the end they had gone their separate ways amicably. Ron went on to secure a plum position as Keeper for a reserve Quidditch team, and the golden trio remained the best of friends.
Hermione had dated a bit, and she still kept up her correspondence with Victor Krum. Yet no one ever gave her that weak-in-the-knees feeling she was looking for. Sometimes, she wondered if it was purely a fantasy that she sought. Then she would catch Harry and Ginny looking at each other, when they thought no one was watching, and she knew that true love did indeed exist. She comforted herself by thinking that if she just stopped focusing on it, then love would find her when she least expected it. Yet she couldn’t stop the nagging fear that she was just not destined for true love.
Every summer, the Potters took a Muggle vacation. Auntie Hermie usually joined them for the fun. That way, if Harry was called away on urgent Auror business, Hermione could help Ginny navigate the Muggle environment and behave as a typical Muggle family. This year they were headed for the world capital of familydom, Walt Disney World. They were leaving that day and would travel as Muggles to Florida on a trans-Atlantic flight. With a tremendous sigh, Hermione rose to face the day.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.