Chapter 8 The Invitation
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 9 of 15
blackeyedlilySeverus has an invitation for Hermione.
“What I require is tangible evidence. I’m quite certain that the Disney contract with the American Ministry of Magic is being violated. Yet regardless of my instincts, I want to have something concrete before I report to Walt, and I believe I know how to go about securing it.” Snape smirked.
Before he could continue their server returned. As Snape ordered another round, Hermione took the opportunity to take a really good look at him while his attention was not fixed on her. During her time at Hogwarts, Snape had been capable of producing terror in all but the bravest or most foolhardy of students. As a student herself, Hermione had a healthy respect for his power. Looking at him today, Hermione felt the raw power that he still emanated. She felt a responding jolt in her gut, which she could not deny as anything other than pure, physical attraction. “Well, this is unexpected,” she told herself.
“In an attempt to impress their ‘auditor’, Roy Disney and Michael Eisner have invited me to attend a gala event, which will conveniently be held at their corporate headquarters. If my instincts are correct, I should be able to find the type of evidence I need there. My success will most likely depend on the amount of time I manage to have alone in Michael Eisner’s office. While I was quite prepared to undertake this operation alone, your appearance today suggested that I could increase my odds of success.”
Snape paused at this point, giving Hermione a most serious expression, which nevertheless held a hint of mischief. “The gala is scheduled for the evening after next. My invitation allows for two attendees. Hermione, would you accompany me as my escort?”
It was lucky for Hermione that her experience with men at the ministry had allowed her to learn to school her expressions for the unexpected. Otherwise, she would certainly have goggled at Snape slack-jawed.
“You would like me to come as your escort?” Hermione asked, in a voice that she hoped hid her very real surprise.
“Yes, that is the general idea. I’ve always found that reconnaissance operations are made somewhat easier with assistance,” Snape replied. “You can cover my absences and alert me if there is any risk of discovering my actions. Simple, really, and we should be able to avoid any real danger, especially you. Compared to missions during Voldemort’s era, this will be a walk in the park.”
Hermione noticed how Snape now uttered Voldemort’s name with a careless ease. It put her in mind of how vehemently he had once chastised those who had dared to utter that name. In truth, she was realizing many subtle, yet pleasing changes in the man she had previously known as her professor and fellow Order member. She was finding the contrast quite fascinating.
While not receiving an immediate response from Hermione, Snape continued to explain. “The gala includes a presentation on planned Disney projects in the Asian market, followed by an evening of dining and dancing. Apparently, the purpose is to impress their top stockholders, and I believe they think it is an opportunity to get me in their pocket as well,” Snape finished.
“Yes, of course I will help you,” stammered a flustered Hermione, who hoped that Snape did not notice her odd behaviour. “I’m behaving like a silly schoolgirl,” she admonished herself.
Then an ugly realization dawned. “I have brought nothing on this trip that would be appropriate for a formal occasion,” Hermione blurted out without thinking.
“Ah, the proverbial Cinderella; merely an inconvenience, I assure you. Walt has provided a generous expense account. Please feel free to purchase anything you require for such an event. You have all of tomorrow and the next day to acquire what you need. Just bill any expenses to my room, and they will be approved.”
Then Hermione noticed Snape giving her an oddly appraising look. “Generous as my expense account is, I’m afraid I cannot authorize gemstones, but I do want to see that you blend in with the other attendees. If you will trust my taste in this matter, I think I can arrange the loan of some gems to complete the Cinderella transformation.”
“I’m sure whatever you arrange will be more than adequate, Severus.” There, she had finally managed to get his name out of her mouth. She treated Snape to her most triumphant smile.
It was now Snape’s turn to become flustered. For the briefest of moments, he stared at Hermione, as if seeing her for the first time. Then he regained his composure and reverted to type, managing to produce his trademark sneer. “I’m afraid the resemblance to a fairytale will end with your attire. You can be quite sure that no one will confuse me with Prince Charming.”
For the first time that evening, Hermione understood that the man sitting across from her was still the same Professor Snape that she had always known. She wondered why his disposition had changed so dramatically and so quickly.
“It would be advantageous to brief you before the gala,” Snape continued. “If we met in my suite at 7:00 p.m., we would have ample time to prepare. Could you meet that schedule?”
After finalizing their plans, Snape and Hermione exited the Nine Dragons. While Snape offered to escort Hermione back to the lodge, she had made other plans. “The Epcot fireworks display is going to begin in half an hour. I believe I’m going to stay and watch it, but you are welcome to join me,” Hermione offered.
“Thank you, but I have some things that I would like to attend to as soon as possible. If you require anything prior to the gala, just call my room. I do appreciate your willingness to attend the event with me, Hermione. Good evening.” And with that, Severus Snape turned on his heel and disappeared into the night.
Hermione sought out a good vantage point to watch the fireworks. She decided that she could definitely use some time to process the evening before returning to her room with the Potters. “What exactly have I got myself into?” she wondered.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.