Chapter 4 Magic Kingdom
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 5 of 15
blackeyedlilyHermione and the Potter family take their first trip into the Magic Kingdom. Hermione slips off on her own and runs into someone she would never expect to see there.
The following morning found the Potter family, plus Hermione, breakfasting on their balcony while watching a grazing herd of giraffes breakfasting as well. They had discussed the various parks (the Magic Kingdom, Epcot, MGM Studios, and Disney's Animal Kingdom) the previous night and had decided to start with the Magic Kingdom.
"We need to go and meet Mickey Mouse straight away," said Ginny. "Then Molly will be much more agreeable to other suggestions."
The boys voiced a bit of objection, wanting to appear too old to be interested in Mickey.
"There's plenty of time for all of us to do what we really want. Remember, it's our first day," Harry stated.
"But why does Molly get to choose first?" questioned James.
"Because she is the youngest and has the least amount of patience. You big boys are old enough to understand that," Ginny replied.
"Maybe, but it doesn't mean we have to like it," Evan added, which earned him a reproachful look from Harry.
"You'll never believe who I thought I overheard yesterday," Hermione said, to change the topic. She had felt so silly about the incident that she had not mentioned it yesterday when the Potters had returned from the pool.
"You ran into someone you know?" asked Ginny, who was confused by Hermione's odd statement.
"No, I overheard a voice that was eerily familiar," Hermione tried to clarify.
"Okay, I'll bite. Who did you think you heard?" Harry asked.
"Well, I was walking down the corridor on this very floor, and there was a door ajar just enough to hear conversation." Harry and Ginny were looking quite puzzled by Hermione's lengthy description. "Out of the blue I heard a voice that stopped me dead in my tracks. I swear, I thought I heard Professor Snape," she finished. Harry and Ginny looked at each other and then back at Hermione. For a moment or two they appeared speechless, and then they both broke out in hysterical laughter. The children didn't know quite what to make of this, as they had no idea what was so funny. Hermione sat there, red-faced, as she waited for Harry and Ginny to regain their composure. When they stopped laughing, tears were running down their faces and Ginny had the hiccups.
"That's a good one, 'Mione," Harry uttered. "I've never heard of anything more ridiculous. Imagine, Snape at Disney World."
"You have to admit, Hermione," Ginny added, "the chances of that are slim to none."
"I know," Hermione agreed. "That's why I didn't say anything about it yesterday. Yet, whatever anyone thinks of Professor Snape, he possesses a very distinctive voice."
"True," admitted Ginny. "It was his one redeeming quality."
"What's that supposed to mean?" Harry asked with a degree of horror. "That man has no redeeming anything! I couldn't care less about irrefutable evidence. That man will always be evil through and through, as far as I'm concerned."
"Who are you all talking about?" Evan asked.
"Just a mean, old professor who used to teach at Hogwarts when the three of us went there. You lot are lucky. He won't be there when you go to school. If he was, I might consider sending you all to Beauxbatons," Harry finished. Ginny proceeded to roll her eyes at her husband's pronouncement.
"As if you would ever consider anywhere but Hogwarts for our children. Well, let's get going. We don't want to keep Mickey waiting all day," Ginny added, smiling.
To get to the Magic Kingdom, they hopped on a bus to the Grand Floridian Hotel and then took the monorail to the park entrance. As Cinderella's Castle began to grace the skyline, the children's level of excitement rose. Once inside the park, they headed straight to the area called Mickey's Toon Town Fair, and the resident home of Disney's top celebrity. Due to their early morning arrival, the lines were still amazingly short, and in no time at all they were face to face with the main Mouse.
"Mickey, Mickey," squealed Molly as she ran forward and threw her arms around the person dressed in the enormous plush costume, Harry dutifully filming it all on his video recorder. "I couldn't bring Nibbles (he's my pet rat) but I can show him to you. This is a magic marble," Molly explained as she produced the marble from her pocket. "If you look inside you'll see Nibbles in his cage. He's back home with my Grandma Molly. I'm named after her." The child continued to ramble on as the person in the suit nodded and tried their best to inspect the marble the child was holding out.
"That's enough, Molly," Ginny interceded. "Mickey has to have time for everyone now." They all posed for various shots with Mickey and then moved on.
"I think Mickey liked Nibbles," Molly remarked as she patted her pocket where the marble resided.
"I'm sure he did," Hermione answered, hoping the person in the suit was used to all sorts of odd comments from small children.
The remainder of the morning was spent on rides in Fantasyland. This was the oldest part of the park and contained rides familiar to most guests. They rode the spinning Tea Cups twice, went on Peter Pan's Adventures, took Mr. Toad's Wild Ride, and to the horror of all but Molly, rode It's A Small World. When they decided to move on to Tomorrowland, Hermione had an idea.
"You lot carry on. I'm going over to Cinderella's castle. There's a shop there that carries a line of crystal my mum collects. I'll meet you all in two hours. How about at that pub in Liberty Square? We can have lunch, and then head over to the Haunted Mansion."
"Okay 'Mione," replied Harry. "Just keep an eye out for Prince Charming at the castle." Hermione waved in reply and headed off.
As she traversed the park, Hermione found she was truly enjoying herself. The park was beautiful, and it was fun to watch all the wide-eyed children amazed at their surroundings. Crossing the moat, she entered the castle. The walkway that crossed the ground floor was surrounded by beautiful murals from the fairy tale, made up of intricate tiles. As Hermione stood admiring the murals, a door opened from the passage that led to a restaurant at the top of the castle, and out stalked Severus Snape, in all his glory.
Hermione stood transfigured to the spot as Professor Snape exited the doorway, surrounded by six members of the Disney staff, judging by their uniforms. Two staff members were scribbling furiously on clipboards, while the group's leader was speaking to Snape in an imploring fashion. It was obvious to Hermione that Snape was not listening to a thing the young man was saying, but from the sneer on his face, and glint in his eyes, Hermione could tell that Snape was enjoying whatever was going on. As his eyes swept over the mostly vacant walkway, they alighted on Hermione. For a moment, an odd expression passed over his face, a mixture of recognition and confusion. Hermione thought she must look like the proverbial deer in the headlights. Snape turned and spoke to the young man at his side.
"I believe I will continue to tour on my own now. You can tell your employer that I will meet him in his office at 3:00 p.m. sharp. You're dismissed." At this pronouncement Snape's entourage left at lightning speed. He turned to watch them retreat with a look of satisfaction, then turned back to Hermione. Hermione found that she was still rooted to the spot as she watched Snape approach. "Ms. Granger, what an unexpected surprise," Snape uttered as he reached her side.
"I believe the surprise is more mine than yours, Professor," Hermione replied as she found her voice. "Whatever are you doing here?"
"A matter of private business, Ms. Granger, and may I enquire the same of you?" Snape snapped.
"I'm here for the most obvious reason, Professor. I'm a tourist."
"All alone, Ms. Granger?" he inquired with a raised brow.
"No. I'm travelling with Harry, Ginny and their children," Hermione replied.
"Still attached at the hip to Potter, and now his brood as well? Does that mean the esteemed Mr. Weasley is lurking around here somewhere as well?" Snape's features had arranged themselves in a look of distaste, which Hermione's memory associated with Snape's distinct hatred of Harry.
"No, Professor, Ron plays Quidditch for England these days, and none of us are attached at the hip," Hermione replied with the hint of a challenge in her voice. Snape appeared slightly startled by the sharpness in Hermione's tone. Whatever had transpired between Professor Snape and his students, whether at Hogwarts or during Order of the Phoenix business, Hermione had always maintained at least the appearance of respect toward the professor.
"Pray tell, what vocation is the pride of Gryffindor involved in these days?" Snape queried. This was a question Hermione really did not want to answer. She did not want to admit to Snape of all people that she was little more than a glorified clerk.
"I'm currently employed by the Ministry," Hermione offered with a great deal more bravado than she was feeling. Snape appeared to ponder her response as if he were considering something.
"How long will you be staying in the Walt Disney World area?" he asked.
"We arrived yesterday and are here for an entire week," Hermione answered. The response appeared to please Snape, as he nodded thoughtfully before continuing.
"Would you consider joining me for a drink this evening? It seems that my meeting you here is somewhat fortuitous. I'll elaborate on my business, and then seeing that you will be here over the next few days, you may be interested in assisting me in the matter. I would certainly compensate you adequately for your time and effort."
To say that Hermione was stunned by this invitation was an understatement. However, she was equally intrigued. After her brain had processed what had just occurred, she responded with hands on her hips, "On one condition, Professor. If I meet with you, I do not want to put up with any insults, veiled or overt, directed at me or my friends."
Snape folded his arms over his chest, and after a lightning quick, wry smile, he replied, "I believe I can concede to your request. You, however must stop referring to me as Professor. It has been several years since I deserved that title. We are both adults now and have been acquainted longer than I care to remember. Please call me Severus."
"Alright then, but you must call me Hermione. When and where would you like to meet, Sev ... Severus?" Hermione stumbled over his name.
"Are you familiar with the Epcot part of this monstrosity?" Hermione nodded and Snape continued. "Epcot is divided into pavilions they want people to believe are representative of different nations. In China, they have created a supposed replica of the Temple of Heaven." The tone in Snape's voice left Hermione no question what Snape thought of Disney's version of the Temple of Heaven. "Meet me in the front of the Temple, on the bridge over the Koi pond, at 7 p.m. Any questions, Hermione?" Snape apparently had no trouble with her given name.
"Yes, I do have a question. Are you staying at Disney's Animal Kingdom Lodge?"
This time it was Snape's turn to look unnerved. "How did you know that?"
"Let's call it a hunch. We're staying there as well. I must be going then. I'm supposed to meet the Potters for lunch. Until this evening then, Severus."
With a sly smile of her own, Hermione turned on her heel and walked off. To have actually got one up on Severus Snape was priceless, and she had to savour the moment.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.