Chapter 3 Arrival
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
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blackeyedlilyHermione and the Potters arrival at there destination - Disney World.
Finally, the plane’s arrival was imminent. The children had awoken just before land became visible through the clouds upon their descent to Florida. Evan had swapped seats with his father and was watching out of the window, fascinated, as the tiny images of homes, roadways and cars became larger and larger.
“This is just like magic!” Evan whispered in awe.
Hermione smiled as she thought about how different her seven-year-old self’s frame of reference to the word ‘magic’ had been from Evan’s.
It was a relatively smooth process getting through customs. The adults had carefully stored their wands up their sleeves in specially designed wand pockets and were careful to not carry any items which might set off alarms, resulting in closer scrutiny.
After acquiring a rental car, they braved the American highway for the short drive to Disney World.
“It feels so odd, driving on the wrong side of the road,” remarked Harry. “It’s a bit like trying to use my wand with my left hand.”
“Dad, why do they call Disney World the ‘Magic Kingdom’ when its not part of the Wizarding world?” asked James.
“Well, for Muggles magic has a different meaning than it does for us,” explained Harry. “You know that Muggles don’t believe magic is real. When they describe something they think is a fantasy, or make believe, they say it is like magic. Also, when they have a really special experience, something really out of the ordinary, they might call it magical. For most Muggles, Disney World is just like that.”
“I was just thinking about this when we were landing and Evan said it was like magic. If Muggle passengers had heard him, they wouldn’t have thought it an odd thing to say, yet I knew that Evan meant it was like other magical experiences he has had, maybe like flying his broom. Your father and I grew up in Muggle households, and magic meant something very different for us as children than it does for us today,” Hermione added.
Just then Molly erupted with, “Look, look, it’s Mickey Mouse!” as Disney billboards began to appear. From that point on, the children were consumed with excitement as they discussed what they already knew of the theme parks.
Everyone whom Harry had spoken to about their trip had advised them to stay on site at one of the Disney hotels. This provided many benefits and would make life easier during their stay. They had chosen the Disney Animal Kingdom Lodge. The Lodge was built on the edge of an enormous wildlife reserve full of exotic African animals. Their suite included a balcony with a view that made them feel like they were looking out across the African Savannah. The suite was very well appointed and designed in an African motif. Harry and Ginny had the master bedroom with a private bathroom and balcony. Hermione shared the other bedroom with Molly. It too had a private bathroom. The boys would camp out in the main living area, which included a sofa sleeper and had the largest balcony facing the reserve. On this first day, they would not venture into any of the theme parks.
“We need to adjust to the new time zone and figure out where things are,’” Ginny had told the protesting children. However, once they saw the hotel and got a view of the fantastic pool area, they decided they could live with the adults’ scheduling idea.
After they unpacked and had a light lunch from room service, the Potters got ready to head to the pool.
“I can’t wait to try the slide,” exclaimed James. Due to Harry’s own lack of swimming instruction while living with the Dursleys, Harry had made sure that his own children learned to swim as early as possible.
“Do you want to join us, ‘Mione?” Harry had inquired.
“No, you lot go ahead. I want to explore some shops,” Hermione had replied.
Once the Potters had gone, Hermione freshened up and headed down to the main lobby. As she walked through a covered walkway toward the lobby, Hermione admired the riotous colours of plants in the grounds around her. The main lobby itself opened up with several stories overhead. The attention to detail in every part of the architecture was phenomenal. The majority of the workers were from one African nation or another. Many were students. With their brightly coloured uniforms and the sights, sounds and smells in the lobby, Hermione felt transported to the Dark Continent in a way that was not unlike magic. She spent some time browsing in various shops and reading the menus outside restaurants.
After some time had passed, Hermione decided to return to their suite. While heading down one particularly long corridor, she heard a voice that made her stop short. She knew that voice. She would never forget that voice. Even now, she felt a thrill of fear as she heard the unmistakable voice of Professor Snape.
Hermione determined that the voice was emanating from a guest room where the door was cracked open. As she crept closer, the door slammed shut. She almost went up and pressed her ear to the door before she collected her thoughts. What was she doing? She couldn’t go eavesdropping at another guest’s hotel room door. Plus, the more she considered it, the more ridiculous it sounded. Professor Snape at Disney World? The mere thought was crazy.
The last she had heard, Professor Snape had moved to Paris after the War. She occasionally saw signs of his research in the patents office. It must have been some other man with a deep, silky baritone behind that door. She must be more tired from the journey than she had realized. Her feet began to move again, and she proceeded back toward her room with a determined pace.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.