Chapter 12 Surprises
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 13 of 15
blackeyedlilyHermione and Severus get down to the business which brought him to Disney, only to have a surprise or two thrown their way.
Hermione Granger was trying to be inconspicuous as she wandered the great art galleries of Disney Headquarters. She found herself in a room of Warhol-type paintings of famous Disney characters. The treatment of Minnie Mouse caused her to smile as she thought about the austere Minerva McGonagall being a childhood muse for Walt Disney. What sort of strange parallel universe had she been inhabiting this past week? She really hoped that Snape would reappear before anyone saw her by herself and wondered what she was doing away from the gala all alone.
Thoughts of Snape caused her to become reflective about these past few days. It was easy to see that her own life was in a rut. She was bored at work, and her social life was in the tanker. Being a favourite aunt to the Potter children was her most satisfying role lately. How could someone who had so many opportunities when graduating be in her position?
These past few days spent in Snape’s company had awoken something in Hermione. She hadn’t felt this alive in ages, but if she was honest with herself she knew that it wasn’t just the adventure, or dressing up like Cinderella. There was something about the taciturn man to which she was responding.
Free from the constraints of a student/teacher relationship, and with the perspective that a couple of years brought, she could see the man in a wholly different light. Yes, he still had a prickly demeanour, but his intensity was compelling. It made her want to see more of the man, and she wondered if that would be possible after tonight. Well, come what may, Hermione knew that it was time for some major changes in her life, whether they involved Snape or not.
Lost in her musings, Hermione had lost track of how long Snape had been gone. “Please hurry back,” she thought.
She thought she sensed movement in the shadows beside her. “Severus, is that you?” she asked in a quiet tone.
As she turned around to locate the source of movement, a wand was suddenly thrust under her chin, pointed at her throat. “You will accompany me quietly.”
It only took a split second to recognize the nasal twang of Patrick Weathersby. With his free arm, he pinned Hermione’s arms behind her and directed her to an unseen doorway at the far end of the room. Once inside, Hermione realized they were in a stairwell.
“What is going on?” Hermione demanded as Weathersby forced her up a stairwell.
“That’s what we’re going to find out,” Weathersby replied. “Your boyfriend has been poking around in the wrong places. I’ll bet he thought he was clever, using you as a decoy. Didn’t think we’d be watching him closely, huh. Well I’ve watched every move he’s made since he’s been here. I’ll bet he’s not feeling too clever now.”
Hermione didn’t say a word. She didn’t know what had happened since Snape had left and felt that it would be better to remain quiet until she could assess the situation. Before she knew it, Weathersby was forcing her through the door of an office. Once inside, she saw Snape tied to a chair with a troll guard on either side of him.
“Severus!” she couldn’t keep from exclaiming.
“Yes, Severus, look who I found downstairs in the East gallery,” Weathersby taunted. “Tie her up too, boys.”
The two security trolls forced Hermione into a chair and tied her hands behind her back like Snape’s. They set the chairs in such a manner that Hermione and Snape were now back to back and couldn’t look at each other.
“Are you ready to tell me what you were doing in Mr Eisner’s office?” Hermione heard Weathersby ask Snape. After a moment, during which Snape offered no reply, Weathersby said, “Well, it will get pretty interesting once Mr Eisner gets here. You’re gonna regret crossing us. You don’t know who you’re messing with. Boys, don’t let them move an inch while I fetch the boss.” With that, Weathersby left the room and the security trolls gave a cruel laugh. The one closest to Hermione began to leer at her.
“Hermione,” whispered Snape “Can you lean back far enough for me to reach your bracelet?”
“I can try,” she replied.
The trolls didn’t seem perturbed by Snape and Hermione speaking to each other. Hermione remembered from her studies that while trolls could be trained for some positions, such as security jobs, their understanding of human language was fairly limited and usually had to be part of the training for the situation. She hoped that was true of these two and was glad that Weathersby hadn’t asked them to keep her and Snape apart, or keep them from talking. Still, she followed Snape’s lead on speaking softly.
“On the count of three,” Snape instructed, “lean back as far as you can in your chair. One, two, three.”
Hermione leaned back and felt Snape fumbling for her wrists. After a moment he caught her hand and found the bracelet. Wondering what he was up to, she felt him move the bracelet around until he could touch the emerald. Suddenly, Hermione felt that now familiar feeling of a strong pull below her navel. Then the room disappeared in a howl of wind and a rush of colours. The bracelet had been a Portkey.
In no time at all, Hermione landed with a little stumble. Snape grabbed on to keep her from falling over. Shocked by the unexpected series of events, both the sudden onset of danger from Weathersby, then the quick escape act by Snape, Hermione felt very shaken. Closing the arms length between them, she hugged Snape as if he was a life preserver.
“Are you alright, Severus?” she asked in a tremulous voice.
“Of course,” he answered. “What about yourself Hermione? Weathersby didn’t manhandle you, did he? I never meant for you to be in any danger. I’m afraid my espionage skills are a bit rusty.”
As Hermione gazed up in Snape’s face, she saw real concern written all over it. She had never seen him look less guarded.
“Yes, yes, I’m fine. Just shaken up a bit. One minute I was waiting for you to return, and the next minute I’m being taken hostage at wand point. It was rather disconcerting. Why didn’t you tell me that the bracelet was a Portkey? Couldn’t I have accidentally sent myself here, and where is here?” Once Hermione realized she was safe, a million questions began to fire in her head.
Snape had the decency to look a bit sheepish about the Portkey. “I really didn’t think we would need it, but each piece of your jewellery is a Portkey. I am the only one that can activate them. As far as where we are, we are in the Amazon rainforest. Senor Raton’s home is just down this path.”
Because they were surrounded by tropical plants, Hermione had not known, until that moment, that the Portkey had taken them to a different continent. Snape pointed towards a narrow dirt road. Hermione could see lights twinkling in the distance.
“Shall we?” said Snape. Hermione took his arm. Her evening attire was certainly not made for traipsing along a dirt road in the Amazon. Plus it gave her the added advantage of staying close to him. She figured she could wait until they were safely inside to hear Snape’s story.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.