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Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 15 of 15
blackeyedlilyThe morning after the Gala finds Hermione with much on her mind.
The following morning found a very reflective Hermione back at her suite with the Potters. She was thinking over the night before, the beautiful gala with all its glamour, the capture and escape from Disney headquarters, and the visit with Senor Raton, a.k.a. Walt Disney. Her mind strayed most of all to Snape and how his company thrilled her. He may have underestimated their opponent last night, but he did get them out of a sticky situation in the end.
“Hermione, we are headed to the Blizzard Beach water park this morning. Are you sure you don’t want to come?” Ginny asked. They had two days left on holiday and wanted to continue to make the most of their Disney experience.
“The water slides look awesome, Aunt Hermie,” piped up Evan. “James and I can’t wait to race the Downhill Double Dipper.”
“It sounds great,” assured Hermione. “I’ll join you lot this afternoon. I’m just a bit tired this morning. I need a bit of rest first.”
Ginny looked at her friend with concern. Hermione had seemed pensive since her return last night. Ginny wondered what had happened to give her friend such a heavy aura. Had something happened between Hermione and her mystery date? It seemed that if Hermione had enjoyed herself she would have been more cheerful.
At that moment, there was a knock on the door to the suite. Harry opened the door to find Severus Snape looking him directly in the eyes. “Snape!” exclaimed Harry.
“Severus!” exclaimed Hermione.
“Severus?” repeated Harry.
“Really, Potter, I hope you haven’t regressed to one word utterances,” Snape quipped.
In spite of herself, Ginny couldn’t help but laugh at the incredulous look on her husband’s face.
“Mrs Potter,” addressed Snape, “I do apologize for barging in on your holiday, but I was hoping to have a few words with Hermione before I leave. I’m afraid I’m due back in Paris as soon as possible.”
“Just give me a minute,” said Hermione, who stepped into her bedroom to change out of her bathrobe.
“Come in, Professor Snape,” uttered Ginny. “You don’t have stand in the doorway. I’m sure Hermione will take a few minutes.”
“Would you like to see my pet, Nibbles? He’s a rat.” Molly Rose Potter unabashedly walked up to Snape, explaining about her Charmed marble and how it allowed her to keep tabs on her pet back home. To Harry and Ginny’s great surprise, Snape knelt down to Molly’s level and gave the child his full attention.
Hermione reappeared dressed in a summer shorts set and sandals. “Severus, where would you like to go to talk?”
“There is a garden just outside this building, Hermione. I won’t keep you long from your day's plans,” Snape seemed to speak to the room at large.
“Excuse us,” added Hermione.
They walked down the corridor in silence, and passing the elevator, Snape opted for leading Hermione down the stairs and through a door to a lovely tropical garden that Hermione had not seen before. He ushered her to a bench by a large Koi pond, surrounded by blooming Birds of Paradise.
Once they were seated, Snape began to talk, staring straight ahead, as though avoiding eye contact.
“I felt the need to speak to you before I left today,” he began. “Having your assistance was most valuable, and I thank you.”
“I’m sure you could have done the whole thing without me. To tell you the truth, I’m not quite sure I was any help at all,” answered Hermione.
Snape turned to face her. “You’re wrong, Hermione. Your help was very necessary.”
Hermione saw a questioning look in Snape’s face. “Hermione, I need to know, are you happy working at the Ministry?”
“Well, no. I didn’t really explain my job to you because I was a bit embarrassed. I took it right after graduating while I was trying to decide what to do. I never imagined that I would still be there after all this time.” The words just began spilling out of her mouth.
Snape interrupted. “We have a small potions research community in Paris. I’ve never had the need for an apprentice; however I do know a couple of Masters who are always looking for good talent. I seem to recall that you had a certain aptitude in potions. Would you mind if I passed your name on to them?”
Hermione felt a happiness bubbling up inside of her. With Gryffindor boldness, she grasped Snape’s hands in her own. “Yes, Severus, I wouldn’t mind that at all.”
She was rewarded by the warmest expression she could ever recall seeing on Snape’s face.
Upon returning to her suite, Hermione found Ginny and the children still there. “Where is Harry?” she inquired.
“Harry is having a lie down,” Ginny replied. “I believe he is in a state of shock. This whole time, you have been telling us the truth about Professor Snape, and we thought you were joking. You really pulled a good one on us this time, Hermione.”
Hermione laughed “Well, that’s what you get for doubting me.”
“I’ll have to admit, Hermione,” Ginny continued," He may be a bit rough around the edges, but there’s Prince Charming material there after all.”
“Indeed,” responded Hermione with a wry smile. “Indeed.”
The End
A/N: My thanks and appreciation to everyone who took the time to read my first fic that is longer than a drabble. I must give a special thanks to my beta, Lucy Lupin, who helped me use the correct British words and spelling. Plus my gratitude to the patient mods of the SS/HG Exchange, Shiv5468 and Ginny W. My getting this fic into final form became a challenge as real life stepped in after I had taken the assignment. Two family members passed away during my writing. The closest, my brother Jimmy, died right at the time I was trying to get the last few chapters done and submitted by the deadline. So the story did not have quite the depth I had originally hoped for. It has taken me close to a year to post it at an archive. Yet the numerous lovely comments I have received have encouraged me to try again. Maybe next time I can get Severus to actually kiss the girl. Finally, my story is not meant in anyway to imply that Micheal Eisner is a nefarious Wizard. It is just a bit of fun, and in the world of Disney he made a very convenient target.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.