Chapter 5 Temple of Heaven
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 6 of 15
blackeyedlilyHermione prepares to meet Severus for drinks.
Hermione met up with the Potters at the Liberty Tree Tavern for lunch. Designed to resemble a Colonial American tavern, it was a nice alternative to the various cantinas around them. “Auntie Hermie, you missed Space Mountain. It rocked!” greeted James.
“Yeah, it’s almost as much fun as Quidditch,” added Evan, which earned him a pointed look from Ginny. “Sorry, Mum. Mum says we can’t talk about Quidditch around strangers,” explained Evan in a conspiratorial whisper. Hermione placed her order of a garden salad and iced tea with the waitress, who was dressed in Revolutionary garb.
“Did you find something for your Mum, Hermione?” Ginny queried. Snape had driven crystal shopping clear out of Hermione’s head. She mumbled an excuse about having to try later as Ginny’s question reminded her of the errand.
“Was Prince Charming hanging around the castle?” Harry continued to tease.
“No, but I did run into Professor Snape,” Hermione responded, recovering her composure and her bravado.
“Really, Hermione, enough already. You’re not going to wind me up about Snape. It was funny yesterday, but if you think I’m going to believe Snape is at Disney World, you’re getting daft in your old age.”
“Alright, whatever you want to believe, but I’m meeting him for drinks this evening,” Hermione quipped back, while mentally deciding it would be a whole lot easier if Harry and Ginny thought she was making it all up.
“Well, I’m not sure why you’re trying to take the Mickey out of me, but if you need some time on your own, you just need to say so,” Harry continued in a good natured tone.
“Yes, Hermione, if you have your own plans for this evening, don’t feel like you have to tag along with us. We’re heading back to the hotel after lunch to swim and relax. Then we’ll come back here later for the night parade and fireworks. Just be careful, whatever you do,” Ginny cautioned.
“Oh, don’t worry. You two know I would never let my guard down around Snape,” Hermione continued to tease, which caused Harry to roll his eyes at her and Ginny to giggle at the two of them.
After returning to the hotel, Hermione decided that a swim, followed by a short nap sounded perfect. When she joined the Potters at the pool, Hermione was again impressed by the level of luxury and attention to detail at the lodge. The pool area was a tropical paradise, complete with a long and winding water slide, to the children’s endless delight. After cooling off and romping a bit with the younger Potters, she returned to the room by herself and drifted off to sleep, completely relaxed in her luxurious guest bed.
When she woke a little later, Hermione could hear that the Potters had returned. However, Molly was not in their room and must have been playing with her brothers. Suddenly, Hermione remembered what her evening plans entailed. This whole thing was so surreal. Yet her encounter with Snape had left her so curious; she would not miss this for anything. If she was totally honest with herself, life had become a bit boring lately. She missed the excitement of working with the Order of the Phoenix; not the fear, death, or pain that were also part of war, but the excitement that came from doing something with great risk and reward. Plus, her opinion of Professor Snape (how was she going to manage to call him Severus?) had never matched Harry and Ron’s. Sure, he could be brutally unpleasant, and much of the time his expectations were nearly impossible. Yet she admired his brilliance along with the way he had challenged her.
While showering, Hermione puzzled over what she would wear to meet Snape at the Temple of Heaven. Such an exotic name added to her intrigue for the evening. In the end, she settled on a linen sundress with a batik print. The dress had put her in mind of the tropics when she had been shopping for the trip to Florida. She added a pair of Italian leather sandals. Heels were out of the question for getting around Disney. After she had fixed her typically unruly hair into a casual twist, she inspected her appearance in the mirror. Only those closest to her would recognize the confident young woman in the mirror as the same awkward child she had been when she’d entered Hogwarts. She tucked her wand into the specially sewn pocket she had added to the side seam of her dress. It was then that she noticed that the bedside clock read 6:15 p.m. So she grabbed a lightweight silk shawl to guard against the evening chill and, with a deliberately vague explanation to Harry and Ginny, ran out the door.
Hermione had decided that since she would be alone, she could chance travelling by Apparation. After studying a tourist map of Epcot, she chose a quiet, out of the way corner and closed her eyes to concentrate. When she opened them, she found herself in a small alcove behind a ladies’ washroom. After a quick peek in the washroom mirror, to make sure her hair had survived the trip, she headed out, walking briskly toward the Epcot World Showcase.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.