Chapter 10 The Big Night
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 11 of 15
blackeyedlilyHermione and Severus meet prior to the gala to discuss strategy.
When the big night arrived, Hermione found herself standing outside Snape’s suite at the appointed hour. She drew a deep breath, gathered her courage and knocked. The door flung open, as if Snape had been waiting on the other side. Snape took in Hermione’s appearance from head to toe. She felt oddly self-conscious under his scrutiny and stuck out her chin as if daring him to find fault.
“Right on time, Ms Granger,” greeted Snape as he opened the door wide to admit her.
As Hermione entered the room, she noticed that Snape was dressed in a Muggle tuxedo. It was the first time she had seen him without any vestige of his wizarding wardrobe. Due to the unusual environment that Disney provided, his wizarding robes had not looked amiss during their previous encounters. While swirling black robes were part of the Snape mystique, Hermione found that the black tuxedo also suited Snape in a different way. There was still something about his appearance; that wiry physique, those penetrating eyes, and the way he held himself, spoke of danger. The tuxedo enhanced the total package, in a 007 manner, just as much as the wizarding robes did.
“Is something amiss, Hermione?” questioned Snape. The question made Hermione realize she was staring at him.
“No, Severus.” Hermione had told herself sternly that she was going to say Severus as often as possible, until it no longer felt as though his name became bottled up in her throat as she tried to get it out. “I’ve just never seen you without your wizarding robes. The tuxedo suits you.” She hurried to get out this last statement in order to prevent Snape from thinking she found his appearance wanting.
With an odd expression on his face, as if he didn’t know what to make of her words, he replied, “Thank you. You look very nice as well. You should have no trouble blending in tonight.” His own words sounded as if he was unused to complimenting another on their appearance. Hermione realized it was doubtful he’d ever had much practice at that sort of thing.
With these pleasantries exchanged, Snape turned to the business at hand with a sense of relief. Hermione took a seat at a small dining table, where Snape had laid out a set of blueprints.
“These are the plans for Disney’s Corporate Headquarters here at Buena Vista. Once we arrive I expect we will be under a bit of scrutiny. I will introduce you, and we will join those assembled for the presentation. After dinner should be the easiest time for me to slip away. After studying these plans, I have decided on a route to Michael Eisner’s office that should keep me from encountering anyone. I don’t feel that it would be wise to attempt to Apparate in. I have no idea of what type of defences they may have to protect against magical intrusion.”
“Your job will be to keep any interested parties from getting suspicious about my absence. If you determine that anyone might come looking for me, I have Charmed this Disney coin as a way for you to reach me.”
Snape handed Hermione a gold Disney coin roughly the size of a Galleon. This coin was embossed with the head of Mickey Mouse and used commonly around the parks for tourist currency.
“I have a similar coin in my pocket. If you decide I need to leave any sensitive area where I may be located, simply hold the coin and think of me. My coin will heat up and warn me of the potential situation. I believe you have used something of this fashion in the past,” said Snape with a typical smirk.
Hermione coloured slightly, knowing that he was referring to her Protean Charmed Galleons, which had been used by Dumbledore’s Army. She wished that she had trusted Snape back then. Things could have turned out so differently for so many people. Lives may have been saved, injuries avoided. Well, that was water under the bridge now.
“Once I have acquired what I need, I will rejoin you. We can continue to play whatever social role is required, but I promise you, Hermione, I will not abuse your generosity any longer than necessary. We will leave as soon as we are able to,” Snape finished.
“Don’t worry on my account, Severus. I am happy to help. I’m finding it enjoyable to be back in clandestine operation for a time. I’m afraid Ministry business can be dreadfully boring, and a girl can’t help but enjoy dressing up like this for a change,” Hermione replied with a smile.
Snape stared at Hermione for a few moments as if not believing what he had heard. Then he regained his composure as he stood up from their meeting space. “Yes, regarding your attire, I believe I promised to provide the jewellery.”
Snape left the room, returning shortly with several boxes in hand. Upon their opening, Hermione found herself gazing at the most beautiful set of emeralds she could imagine. The necklace consisted of an exquisite emerald teardrop, hanging from an intricate gold chain, wrought with diamonds and smaller emeralds. Matching teardrop emerald earrings set off the necklace. Finally, an emerald-cut emerald and diamond ring completed the set. Hermione gasped. She had rarely seen gems of this nature outside a museum, let alone worn something of such value.
Not knowing quite how, she found herself facing a mirror while Snape fastened the necklace around her throat. “It suits you,” Snape exclaimed in a low voice that sent shivers down her spine. He handed her the earrings and ring to put on, mumbling something to the effect that she needed to put them on herself as he turned away.
Truly feeling like Cinderella, she exclaimed, “Wherever did these come from?”
Snape turned back to face her and Hermione was rewarded with a most mischievous expressions, as Snape uttered “Malfoy.”
“Malfoy!” exclaimed Hermione. “This jewellery belongs to Lucius Malfoy! Does he know whom you borrowed it for?”
“Indeed,” Snape replied. “I think you would find Lucius much changed these days. He is quite aware of his good fortune in avoiding Azkaban. Although I doubt he will ever be able to reclaim his standing in society. Voldemort’s final demise caused a significant change in many of his attitudes, and the man owes me innumerable debts. He seemed almost eager for the chance to loan you those gems.”
“Well, I hope he doesn’t expect any favours in return from me,” Hermione exclaimed in a rather heated fashion.
“You have nothing to fear, Hermione. Lucius understands that the favour was mine alone. It carries no debt for you,” Snape assured her.
Once everything was sorted out and Snape was certain that Hermione had no questions about the evening, he called down to the valet for a hired car.
“There has really been no reason for me to have my own vehicle here, but we need a driver tonight,” he told her as they approached a black Cadillac. A uniformed driver got out as they approached to hold the back door open for them. Once inside the car, Snape gave the driver directions.
“No matter what the purpose of our evening is, Severus, I admit that I do in fact feel like Cinderella tonight,” Hermione spoke in an almost whisper. “And don’t sell yourself short, Severus. You make a very fine Prince Charming.”
Snape stared again at Hermione as if he couldn’t believe his own ears. Then, sensing their driver peering at the odd couple in the rear view mirror, he turned one of his most withering glares ever on the unfortunate man.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.