Chapter 11 The Gala
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 12 of 15
blackeyedlilyHermione and Severus arrive at the Disney Gala event.
When Hermione and Snape arrived at Disney World Headquarters, Buena Vista, Hermione could not help but be impressed. Unlike the typical austere corporate office building of a mega-corporation, Disney gave one the impression of whimsy from the start. It was like walking through Alice’s looking glass, or a Muggle-born witch’s first visit to Diagon Alley.
For this evening’s gala, guests were honoured by the red carpet celebrity treatment as they exited their vehicles. Lights, camera, action – the only thing missing was the paparazzi, which Hermione was grateful for. Numerous Disney characters were on hand performing various tricks and entertaining the guests in general.
After their driver opened the car door, Goofy held out a giant gloved-hand to assist Hermione from the vehicle. Snape, in turn, glared so hard at the character that he stumbled backwards, almost losing his footing. Hermione was forced to turn her head to hide her fit of giggles.
“Minerva will pay for this,” Snape hissed in Hermione’s ear as they enter the front doors.
Once inside, Hermione took a proffered glass of champagne. Snape declined. They were soon approached by a gentleman, whose appearance and demeanour screamed CPA. “Hermione Granger, may I introduce Patrick Weathersby. He heads the Auditing Department and has been my primary point of contact,” Snape offered.
“My pleasure, Ms Granger. Mr Eisner has asked me to make sure you have everything you need this evening. He would like you to join him for dinner after the presentation,” Mr Weathersby announced in a very nasal twang.
“Tell Mr Eisner that it would be our pleasure,” Snape replied.
After Weathersby left, Hermione asked, “Doesn’t it seem odd that at an event of this magnitude, Michael Eisner wants to dine with us?”
“Indeed,” Snape replied.
At that moment, the guests were ushered into a room, which resembled an indoor amphitheatre. After welcomes and addresses from various corporate officers, Michael Eisner took the stage.
“Ladies and gentleman, it is my pleasure to introduce you to the future of Disney’s global corporation – Asia.”
For the next 45 minutes, the audience was wowed by a multimedia production, including live ethnic dancers from throughout Asia. By the end of the show, there was no doubt that the Walt Disney Corporation had a strong vision for their product placement in Asia.
“I’m convinced that this company won’t be happy until every child’s first words are Mickey Mouse,” Severus spoke darkly in a low voice that only Hermione could pick up. “Whether illegal or not, it certainly is criminal.”
“Like it or not, lots of people enjoy the Disney product, Severus,” Hermione replied, earning a dark scowl from Snape.
Exiting the presentation room, Hermione and Snape were met by a waiter who brought them to the Eisner table. Dinner was an elegant affair, and though they were not seated directly next to Mr Eisner, he did manage to pay them some share of his attention.
“Severus, I hope our staff have provided you with everything you need?” Eisner enquired. Before Snape had a chance to answer, Eisner continued. “Who is your lovely guest? I’m certainly glad that Severus convinced you to join us tonight.”
Snape introduced Hermione as a former colleague, and the chitchat continued. Eisner was skilled at making everyone seem important, being very attentive to each person, but at the same time not saying anything of real worth. In other words, he was a consummate politician.
Dessert consisted of a decadent chocolate torte, but Hermione was careful to not over-indulge in anything. She wanted to make sure she kept her wits about her. As the band began to change from dinner to dance music, Snape decided to make his move.
“During my previous visits to this location, I was quite impressed by the art galleries. Would you mind if I took Hermione on a bit of a tour?” he asked Eisner.
“Of course not. Collecting art for the company is one of my true joys. Would you like me to round up Weathersby to give you a guide?” inquired Eisner.
“That won’t be necessary,” Snape replied. “I’ve become rather familiar with this site over the past week.”
Snape rose from the table and held out his hand for Hermione. “This I could get used to,” said that little voice inside his head again.
“What do you have in mind?” asked Hermione as she found herself walking through a cavernous hallway by Snape’s side.
“There are several art galleries located throughout the building. I’m going to find you a secure location where it won’t seem odd if you are found alone. If you need to, you can tell them I had to use the facilities, and if things get really strange just use the Disney Dollar. Try to give me as much time as possible, and I will be gone no longer than necessary.”
As Snape turned to leave, Hermione called “Severus, good luck and please be careful.”
He turned back to face Hermione, taking in the concern on her face, and then he was gone.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.