Chapter 2 Travel
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 3 of 15
blackeyedlilyHermione and the Potter family travel by plane to Disney World.
The trip to Orlando, Florida was as uneventful as possible for any party of six travellers that included three young children. Once on board the plane, the children proceeded to do all the ritualistic things children must do on their first flight. They visited the cockpit, where they had a million questions for the pilot. “What do all those buttons do? How do you know which way to fly? What spells do you use to keep the plane in the air?” Upon which Ginny and Hermione ushered the kids back to their seats.
Next, the children proceeded to adjust their seats to every position possible, play with their tray tables and try out the headphones.
“Mum, why can’t I hear you?” Molly squawked over the sound of the radio emanating full blast from her headphones. Ginny removed the headphones and Molly rubbed her ears. “That’s better,“ she said, blinking really hard. After a snack of soda and airline pretzels, James and Evan got bored, which resulted in Molly being found crying in a locked washroom.
“Well, I think it’s time for the children’s Dreamless Sleep Draught. The village Healer assured me it’s perfectly safe for occasional use and may help them recover better from the jet lag and continental time change,” explained Ginny.
“Plus, the rest of us can have a bit of peace and quiet,” added Hermione. “Sounds good to me. Is there any extra?”
The boys were eventually settled into their seats next to Harry, while Molly was tucked in a seat between her mother and Hermione. Once the kids were sound asleep, Harry busied himself reading reports. Hermione turned around in her seat to ask him, “Any news from the Front?”
“No new Dark Lords on the rise, if that’s what you mean, but there’s always enough nutters to keep us busy,” Harry replied. “What about you ‘Mione? When are you going to leave the patents office? It’s a waste of your talents.”
“I know you’re right, Harry. I always seem to find a reason to turn down opportunities that come my way,” Hermione offered.
“Nothing will ever be perfect ‘Mione, but you’re wasting that brilliant mind of yours, waiting for perfect to come your way,” Harry offered in a solicitous tone.
“I know, I know, and I swear I will do something before the year's end,” she replied.
“How about the romance department?” Harry continued. “Are you waiting for Mr. Perfect there as well?”
Hermione glanced at Ginny who was quietly watching the exchange between her and Harry. “No, Harry. That’s totally different. When it comes to men, Muggle or Wizard, I will never lower my standards. All I have to do is look at you and Ginny, and I know I don’t want to settle for anything less than what the two of you have. The problem is, no one has ever made me feel like that, and I’m not such a desperate girl that I need a man just to make me feel whole. No, I’ll settle back and wait, and hopefully The Fates will see fit to grant me love. Until then, I have my family, great friends and Crookshanks. That will just have to do. Are you done playing busybody yet?”
Harry caught Ginny’s eye and they shared a smile. “You're right, ‘Mione, don’t settle for less. It’ll be well worth the wait. And you know I only ask these things because I love you like a sister, and I want to see you happy.”
Harry returned to his reading, and Hermione noticed a faint blush grace Ginny’s cheeks. Her hands were in her lap and she was admiring her wedding ring. It pleased Hermione to think that even with a few years of marriage under the bridge, Harry and Ginny’s love appeared stronger than ever. After all, if anyone deserved happily ever after it was Harry Potter.
“Well,” Ginny began, breaking the introspective silence, “I’ve been giving some thought to my own future. Even though Harry would be happy to have several more children, even the proverbial Quidditch team, I really don’t want to follow in my Mum’s footsteps. Don’t get me wrong. I love being a mother,” she explained, as she glanced at Molly Rose with a smile. “I just think three children are enough, and I’m ready to think of my own career, after James and Evan start Hogwarts. Do you realize that’s only four years away?”
“Four years! That’s amazing. Have you decided what you’d like to do?” Hermione tried not to appear too surprised by her friend’s news.
“Yes,” Ginny continued, “and you’re the first person I’ve discussed this with, besides Harry, of course. I’ve been thinking about starting a school to teach basic flying and Quidditch skills to pre-Hogwarts age children,” Ginny explained.
“That’s brilliant! You’d be perfect for that,” Hermione added. “What does Harry think?”
“Oh, he loves the idea. And just think, with the famous Harry Potter available for some advance tutoring, the school is sure to be a hit. Plus, Ron can’t play professional forever. Even though I haven’t discussed it with him, I’m sure he’d like the prospect of something to keep earning gold after his pro-Quidditch days are done,” Ginny added.
“Indeed,” Hermione replied. “Would Harry quit working as an Auror?”
“Oh no. He loves the excitement too much. This would just be to help me make a name for the school, having him available for some privates lessons. However, Harry does like the idea of an alternative to the Ministry. If Ministry politics get too crazy, he could walk out the door without a second thought,” added Ginny.
“I just love this idea, Ginny,“ Hermione gushed. “Plus you, Harry and Ron working together. It’s brilliant. I, however, won’t ever be working for you. Unless you need a crack administrator, but I think you more than have that covered.” Both girls shared a laugh at Hermione’s last statement.
“Why wait until the boys are at Hogwarts?” Hermione inquired. “As much as James and Evan love flying, I think they could live at a flying school.”
“That’s true,” Ginny replied. “I’m going to move ahead with the planning straight away, but it is so much easier to parent one child round-the-clock than three. I just can’t envision opening the school with all three underfoot.”
“Fair enough,” answered Hermione. Since the plane was less than full, no one had sat directly adjacent to their seats. Nevertheless, they were gathering their share of odd looks. Hermione wondered which Wizarding words had reached the ears of their Muggle co-passengers. She decided it would be good to have some quiet time of her own. To pass the time in peaceful bliss, Hermione pulled out her dog-eared paperback version of ’Hogwarts, a History’. She had carefully covered up the book in a plain brown wrapper to create anonymity. With a warm feeling of familiarity, brought on by her well-loved tome, she felt herself relax and was soon well on her way to sleeping for the rest of the flight.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.