The Plight-Trothed Bride
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Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
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Very nice and totally worth the wait! Great job! I really like how you had Severus and Hermione handle their miscommunication problem...very realistic. I also thought it was interesting that Severus tried to seduce Hermione into coming back to the manor with him. I love your writing!! Keep up the awesome work and update again soon!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. Well, they tried to have better communications, they still need practice, but they tried. I think Severus was hoping for a little more than a kiss, but he chose wrong. Oh, well. It will happen - Hermione at the Manor. Thank you so much for the compliment and the stars. *hugs*
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. Well, they tried to have better communications, they still need practice, but they tried. I think Severus was hoping for a little more than a kiss, but he chose wrong. Oh, well. It will happen - Hermione at the Manor. Thank you so much for the compliment and the stars. *hugs*
When is he going to get that Malfoy Manor is not where he needs to take her? Great chapter, this story gets better and better.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I would like to say he will, but Hermione and Malfoy Manor are going to appear in a chapter... well, she is... You'll see. BUt Severus will have to start to respect her and Hermione be seen in the manor. Eventually.
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I would like to say he will, but Hermione and Malfoy Manor are going to appear in a chapter... well, she is... You'll see. BUt Severus will have to start to respect her and Hermione be seen in the manor. Eventually.
I still don't like his attitude...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
That's okay, I don't either. But it's a little better than before.Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
That's okay, I don't either. But it's a little better than before.Thank you for the review.
Wow. Okay...I know that Severus has been an immature, overbearing jerk about this, but I seem to recall that all of this began because of Hermione and her thoughtless use of a spell that she didn't know the total parameters of.Having said that - I feel her own immaturity is starting to show. Not that I'm defending Snape's abrasiveness, but did she ever bother to think about how he'd feel when he couldn't reach her? As poorly as he has managed, he IS attempting to court her.I realise that she is young and that she really needed the break, to get away from it all, so to speak, but she has a responsibility to this until they either work things out or separate for whatever reason/duration. She needs a responsible female adult that understands custom and tradition to sit her down and explain things to her in a way that will help her understand.Now, as for Severus - I really wish he had confronted her about Godric's Hollow and the fact that he captured the DE's that attempted to attack her and her friends. The war may be over, but until all of the DE's have been captured, precautions need to be taken. He had the perfect opportunity to let her know how proud he was that she was able to defend herself and how frantic he was about her well-being when he still couldn't locate her and hadn't heard from her. Instead, he allows his jealousy to guide his actions and he mind rapes her. What a total idiot. She rightfully should have hexed him for that.I know that he feels that he needs to have control of the situation because it was not of his consent or making, but he manages to allow his temper to ruin every meeting between the two of them. I just want to kick him. *headdesk*It should be obvious to him by now that Hermione will not return to the Malfoys, so if Spinner's End is not an option, he needs to find somewhere else. I think it is unfair of Hermione to keep suggesting Grimmauld Place for the same reason. Too bad Luna or someone can't point out that out to her.I know that I'm rambling, but what I'm trying to say is this: I feel that the bulk of the onus is on Hermione. She created this mess and she can't decide that her time with her friends is more important than resolving the situation. She's no longer a free agent. She needs to take the time to do the research, talk to others that understand the traditions and customs, and stop operating in the blind. Her friends aren't old enough to advise her. Yes, she needs their emotional support, but its not the same.I'm not feeling very hopeful for them right now, I suppose. It would almost be better for them to register the bond and then for Hermione to go away for about 5-10 years and do some growing up. Return and meet Severus on more equal footing, with a career and adult living behind her. Bleh, I'll just stop here...This was another great update. Happy writing! *waves*
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, all of this came about because Hermione created a potion, said a rhyme and did a spell, to confirm who her soul mate is… and it wasn’t Ron. But in regards to her immaturity, she is still only 18, and he’s 38 in this story. I’m trying to remember what it’s like at 18, sometimes you just do things, even though Hermione is a planner, there are no parents to report to. She just didn’t stop to think. And, Yes, she should have told Severus, it was inconsiderate of her, but she didn’t think they had definite plans – or she would have told him. Communication still not too good here, on either side.
In regards to Severus confronting Hermione about Godric’s Hollow, he was shocked and disturbed by the bikini, too much so. I think seeing her in it kinda made the other things slip his mind. And because of that, and his anger that she was ‘missing’ he wasn’t in the best frame of mind for a ‘talk.’ Dysfunctional. I know.
Actually, you will see ‘locations’ play a big part in the development of the relationship. So, I can’t really say much about it.
Oh, I don’t mind the rant! I love it actually. Yes, Hermione needs to make decisions, (so does Severus) and they both need to learn how to talk to one another and form a relationship. (I’m working on that) Yes, Severus is trying to court her, but he’s making mistakes, too. So give me a bit of time. This will eventually work out. Thank you for the review. I loved it. *hugs*
aeron's response: *hugs you back*I justt want you to know that you are one of the few authors I read who's characters make me forget they are fictional at times. It's pretty bad when you want to reach through the screen and knock their heads together, LOL!I really have more patience than I'm showing. Looking forward to your next update.Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, all of this came about because Hermione created a potion, said a rhyme and did a spell, to confirm who her soul mate is… and it wasn’t Ron. But in regards to her immaturity, she is still only 18, and he’s 38 in this story. I’m trying to remember what it’s like at 18, sometimes you just do things, even though Hermione is a planner, there are no parents to report to. She just didn’t stop to think. And, Yes, she should have told Severus, it was inconsiderate of her, but she didn’t think they had definite plans – or she would have told him. Communication still not too good here, on either side.
In regards to Severus confronting Hermione about Godric’s Hollow, he was shocked and disturbed by the bikini, too much so. I think seeing her in it kinda made the other things slip his mind. And because of that, and his anger that she was ‘missing’ he wasn’t in the best frame of mind for a ‘talk.’ Dysfunctional. I know.
Actually, you will see ‘locations’ play a big part in the development of the relationship. So, I can’t really say much about it.
Oh, I don’t mind the rant! I love it actually. Yes, Hermione needs to make decisions, (so does Severus) and they both need to learn how to talk to one another and form a relationship. (I’m working on that) Yes, Severus is trying to court her, but he’s making mistakes, too. So give me a bit of time. This will eventually work out. Thank you for the review. I loved it. *hugs*
aeron's response: *hugs you back*I justt want you to know that you are one of the few authors I read who's characters make me forget they are fictional at times. It's pretty bad when you want to reach through the screen and knock their heads together, LOL!I really have more patience than I'm showing. Looking forward to your next update.Nice chapter, enthralling as usual!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much.
Whoop you updated!!I'm not sure whether i believe Severus, does he truly have feelings for Hermione? When he goes on about what her kisses do to him, are they true? hmmm.. x.x
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Yes, I did! 
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AS for our guy...
He's decided to make a go at this, but as far as his feelings... you'll see.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, I did!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
AS for our guy... He's decided to make a go at this, but as far as his feelings... you'll see.
Severus is really starting to piss me off. I hope he learns how to let Hermione live her own life soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Oh, I'm sorry. He's still being a bit of a prat, I know. I haven't really gotten him sorted out yet. Yet. I will. Eventually. I promise.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Oh, I'm sorry. He's still being a bit of a prat, I know. I haven't really gotten him sorted out yet. Yet. I will. Eventually. I promise.
Hermione handled the initial confrontation very well. She wasn't aggressive or too apologetic. That would have seemed a weakness, and Severus would have taken advantage. great chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Nah, she is just starting to stand up for herself, and not allowing him to cower her. You'll see her standing up to him more. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Nah, she is just starting to stand up for herself, and not allowing him to cower her. You'll see her standing up to him more. Thank you for the review.
Really enjoying this! 
It's annoying that he seems to take Skeeter at her word and makes Hermione prove she's innocent, 
but then he does have to worry about appearances (to some extent at least) considering his job... Since he has to answer (to some degree) to the Board who answers to the parents, it is possible for him to lose his job over a perceived scandal... 
Glad he and Minerva didn't get into a huge fight like he seemed to expect. I can see why Hermione doesn't see a problem with her actions. Everything has been taken out of context and she was friends with them beforehand, so she doesn't see why anything should change now that she's (sort of) married. She doesn't seem to get that the Wizarding World is still 'behind the times' as far as her muggle viewpoint would see things, especially the high-society and older generations... Severus thoroughly embraced that world as soon as he was able and had been a part of it since before she was born, so he would naturally see things a lot differently than she does. 
Am somewhat surprised that she hasn't figured out the cultural gap between them yet (or at least that there is one and it's partly the cause of their problems). 
Seems like someone needs to give her a book on wizarding manners (or something). Even if she doesn't agree with it, if she knew how she was expected to behave at least she'd be prepared when Severus accused her of doing something wrong... 
Also, am glad that the finally saw the house. 
Looking forward to the next. 
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm so glad that you are. It's not so much Rita that Severus is 'taking at her word' as much as the pictures. You know, worth a thousand words... And he is trying to make an effort at this Bonding. Severus isn't so concerned about appearances as Lucius and Narcissa are, but more in that he wants Hermione to make a decision, him or Ron. Yep, most of everything was taken out of contex, and misquoted, maligned... Hermione is reacting to her friends as she always has - the Weasleys are like her wizarding family, at least everyone by Ron. He's one of her best friends, and their friendship is only on a bit of rocky ground, that will sort out eventually, in her opinion.Minerva had a visit from Hermione and already knows a bit of what's going on. She would take Hermione's side, but as there is no reason to force them apart, (Minerva knows about Bondings) oaa she wanted to do was determine Severus' feelings and intentions. Hermione was not taught the 'ways of the pure-blood society' because as a Gryffindor, Muggle-borns are accepted as they are. She hasn't learned the subtleties that say Draco was raised with. Yes, she saw the house, but is too wrapped up in things to give much notice other than to comment on how much work he'd done to clean the place. LOL She didn't even catch the 'like an elf' comment!Thank you for the amazing review. I love the icons and really enjoied the comments. Hugs~
Well Severus is going to get snotty with Hermione about her "inappropriate intimacies" with Ron, even though they weren't inappropriate, and she really needs to lay down the law with him about that, I think.When's Severus going to see Spinner's End that Narcissa fixed up for him? ;)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
THey will talk about this, believe me. Return to Spinner's End is coming up in a few.Thank you for the review.
You spelled it Aston towers at least once, and I thought Snape had a doe patronus earlier? Now he has a hawk and then an eagle?In any case, I am loving the story, loving how Hermione went out with her friends and loving how Snape's relationship is developing in his own mind.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. Didn't catch that but it's fixed now. Thank you for the review.
I believe that he's "released on his own recognizance", not "reconnaissance". But neither am I a lawyer.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Oh, oops. Thanks. I'll check and fix it.
Oh my Hermione is going to have some serious explaining to do
sI hope Severus isn't too mad! Well his history is enough to tell us all how he will react.
And he really should know how Hermione feels about Malfoy Manor...but she should respect him when it comes to Grimmauld Place, though ther is a difference.I hope Maggie gets hers in the end...starting gossip like that.
As always great update and hopefully you are less busy now and can get to updating soon.Thanks!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yep, Hermione will have to explain and they will talk about this, and several other things. Grimmauld Place, Malfoy Manor, and Spinner's End will be part of the forthcoming talks, eventually as well.In regards to Maggie, I'm using her, but she will have a serious crimp in her wings, so to speak. eventually. I'm working on the next chapter, but I had to move a few things around today to get what I want and ended up with 3 chapters worth that still needs refining to be what I want. (If that makes any sense) Sorry, but that means I'll have 3 chapters written. Thank you for the review. I love the faces. hugs~
Oh dear! Hermione is going to get in trouble now! *sigh*
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
LOL WEll, she will have to explain herself. Thank you for the review.
Egads! With Severu's temper and jealousy, this will obviously go over very badly. Although, at some point I hope Sev learns that Skeeter's articles are rubbish. You'd think he'd know that by now. Still, I'm sure they'll be words about Hermione's lunch 'date'.
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LOL Oh there will be words, plenty of them. But at least they will talk. You'll see...Thank you so much for the review. Hugs~
I do wish Severus would realize why Hermione would never want to be in Malfoy Manor again. Even Lucius understands. Why can't Severus get it into his thick head? He has his reasons for not wanting to go into Harry's house. At least they both have actually voiced their "whys." The relationship was looking very doomed until Ginny had a word with Hermione and brought up some excellent points, looking at the argument logically and removing the emotional element. However, more trouble is on the horizon because of the lunch and the hug and the gossip. All will surely be in the newspaper.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Severus was just assuming that given the fact she would be there with him, and that Narcissa assured him Hermione would be well recieved, he didn't take into account that Hermione wasn't ready to forgive the Malfoys for years of torment (Draco) sneering (Lucius) and snide comments (Narcissa - and Bella) that she wouldn't trust them. I have a comfession - I did a tiny mary sue - I was engaged on e and we moved in together. I was really disappointed in what was available (appartment) as I wanted to live in a house like I grew up in. Reality of what we as a couple could afford really shocked me. I think I just wanted to have Hermione face the same realization. Sorry for the teeny mary sue prt of this, but I thought it was a good lesson and fit nicely int her growth. Having Ginny tell her the facts - opened her eyes to what is real.In regards to the paper, Hermione wil have to explain herself. er action to Severus and hopefully he will listen this time. Maggie serves a purpose for now, as does Rita but they will get their wings cut soon. Thank you so much for the review. Sorry for the long reply.
Love this fic! 
Hate that idiot gossip. Now Hermione is going to get in trouble with Snape (again) over something completely innocent. 
It'll be interesting to see what happens with his great-grandfather... And glad Ginny talked some sense into Hermione about Spinner's End (even if they don't end up living there in the long run). Looking forward to the next!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
awe thank you.I know I hate old biddy gossips too. But she serves a purpose, even if it's hard to see. and actually, Hermione is going to have to explaine herself to Severus - again. Isn't that where communication not miscommunication begins? In active listenng/talking.Great-grandfather Pince - Me to. Ginny is a level headed young lady here, but yes, I remember when I frist moved out - I was amazed at what I could afford to live in - it wasn't like the home I grew up in at all, but I did expect that I could do better - what a rude awakening that was. I suppose I put a bit of my self there. *blushes*Busy working on the next. Thank you for the review.
Guess who is going to get the wrong end of the stick?
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LOL cute. Thank you for the reivew.
I'm glad to see you are updating again. Now I just need to get caught up on some of my reading.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
It's good to be updating again. I'm already working on the next chapter. Hugs~ and happy reading!
Poor Severus, he tried so hard to make it a good date. He deserved everything Hermione gave him and more, though! I'm glad Hermione stood up for herself. Thank you for another great chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, he did try and plan a nice date at a place that held good memories for him. But yes, things didn't go well because of their stubborness and hard-headed hurt feelings. It was about time Hermione swallowed her fear of him and his temper, and stand up for herself. I appreciate the supportive reveiw, thank you. I hope you like what I put them through in the next chapter as well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, he did try and plan a nice date at a place that held good memories for him. But yes, things didn't go well because of their stubborness and hard-headed hurt feelings. It was about time Hermione swallowed her fear of him and his temper, and stand up for herself. I appreciate the supportive reveiw, thank you. I hope you like what I put them through in the next chapter as well.
yay, another chapter! *does happy dance* i can't wait to find out where he takes her on their 'date'! nor can i wait to see his reaction to narcissa's little gift of fixing up his house. i hope he has the sense to be grateful, but somehow i doubt it. ; )
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm so glad I made you happy. I just sent the chapter 'The Date' to my beta, so as soon as my betas and I finx all my errors - I'll up date. I hvent' typed his reaciton to Narcissa's 'gift' yet. I was going to work on that this weekend. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm so glad I made you happy. I just sent the chapter 'The Date' to my beta, so as soon as my betas and I finx all my errors - I'll up date. I hvent' typed his reaciton to Narcissa's 'gift' yet. I was going to work on that this weekend. Thank you for the review.
Wow! Wonderful starting chapter!! I can't wait to keep reading and see what happens! Great job!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I hope you enjoy the ride. Keep in mind though, the first four chapters are dearms - then reality hits! Have fun.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I hope you enjoy the ride. Keep in mind though, the first four chapters are dearms - then reality hits! Have fun.
Dude, you sure knowhow to string out a secret. Where is their not-a-date gonig to be? I'm thoroughly intrigued. And what will happen? All it takes is for one wrong word at the right time, and the whole thing could blow. Great chapter. Keep 'em coming.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I’m sorry for the suspense, well, actually, it’s kinda nice to know that I can write a suspenseful chapter. So thank you. Their not-a-date date will be somewhere from Severus’ past, a place that has meaning for him. It’s not a canon place or have I ever seen it used in fandom before, although I could be wrong. It’s a real place. I looked it up on Google Earth and the internet. What will happen? They will talk, Severus will divulge a little bit and open up a little bit. Don’t expect fireworks or revelations, I’m not there yet – but a decision will be made. Gosh, have I given too much? Well, I have to proof read it so I can send it to my beta. Thank you for the lovely review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I’m sorry for the suspense, well, actually, it’s kinda nice to know that I can write a suspenseful chapter. So thank you. Their not-a-date date will be somewhere from Severus’ past, a place that has meaning for him. It’s not a canon place or have I ever seen it used in fandom before, although I could be wrong. It’s a real place. I looked it up on Google Earth and the internet. What will happen? They will talk, Severus will divulge a little bit and open up a little bit. Don’t expect fireworks or revelations, I’m not there yet – but a decision will be made. Gosh, have I given too much? Well, I have to proof read it so I can send it to my beta. Thank you for the lovely review.
A date, a meeting, an interview... could be anything really, depends how it ends!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Well, it's a date actually. Dinner a walk - someplace from Severus' past. He's going to open up a little bit and yes, they are going to talk. The end, well... you'll see. But at least one decision is made. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Well, it's a date actually. Dinner a walk - someplace from Severus' past. He's going to open up a little bit and yes, they are going to talk. The end, well... you'll see. But at least one decision is made. Thank you for the review.
Nice chapter, why do you think Charis may have been kinder to a muggle born?I loved the girl talk and I wonder if Narcissia may be more of a help to Severus and Hermione than she thinks...I feel sorry for Hermione one again being taken with no mention of destination. Perhaps she may wish to speak to Severus about it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Hello, Sinbad,I simply thought that out off all the possible Blacks and Balck family members, Charis seemed nicer in a way. Bsides, Barty Crouch Sr. at least seemed to like Muggle-borns, I think. Ok, poor reasoning, but I love the idea of a talking portrait snickering at Hermione's date anxiety.I'm glad you enjoyed the girl talk, and yes, Narcissa's 'gift' results will come up in a chapter soon. I am giggling becasue I know how it plays out.Severus is simply trying to control the situation of the date, and still has a way to go in how a reconsiliation should be handled. Give me alittle time, I'm typing it out.Thank you so much for reading and the lovely review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Hello, Sinbad,I simply thought that out off all the possible Blacks and Balck family members, Charis seemed nicer in a way. Bsides, Barty Crouch Sr. at least seemed to like Muggle-borns, I think. Ok, poor reasoning, but I love the idea of a talking portrait snickering at Hermione's date anxiety.I'm glad you enjoyed the girl talk, and yes, Narcissa's 'gift' results will come up in a chapter soon. I am giggling becasue I know how it plays out.Severus is simply trying to control the situation of the date, and still has a way to go in how a reconsiliation should be handled. Give me alittle time, I'm typing it out.Thank you so much for reading and the lovely review.