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The Self-Writing Parchment
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Hermione finds a mysterious piece of self-writing parchment in Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes that writes: Tell me your deepest desire. Thinking it’s a trick, she says, “I wish to see my soul mate?” and she suddenly finds herself at Severus’ feet.
This is my response to the Potter_Place Summer 2007 Prompt – #23
The warnings I have listed for this chapter are implied. I chose the rating of MA (NC-17) due to the story’s overall content.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for The Self-Writing Parchment
I know this is a HG/SS fic. but could you put a little 3-some in there? lolvery excelent chapter can't wait for the update!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
LOL - Oh, thanks for the thought. But no- not so far...
Ohhh this is getting good!! Looking forward to the update!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I'll submit as soon as I have it proofread!
I think Hermione is having a miscarriage, or did Snape think of giving her potions to prevent pregnancy? I really hope Wormtail will get his for his horrible acts.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
All your answers are in the next chapter - but in a nut shell: yes, no - he didn't think of that, and oh yeah.
Poor Hermione. Brings new meaning to being in the wrong place at the wrong time. I also like that she can still kind of remember some things. Proves to him she's a bit more than what he'd expected. I'm glad she doesn't remember the actual deeds. :(
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. There is quite a bit more to Hermione than Severus expected... What woman isn't? As to the abuse – I didn’t want to type it, so I had it Obliviated.
I like the tone of your story. Snape isn't very lovely, but shows enough care, though very discreetly. I have the feeling that their relationship will build faster than what Severus would wish.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. How very perceptive, and yes, eventually...
That was a good chapter. Poor Hermione.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. She will come out just fine - Severus will see to that!
Oh this is good too! (I also like Water Demon). I ADORED "Traitor," it was a completely addictive story. I'll will probably enjoy watching where this goes too. My, you've been busy! I'm still trying to finish my latest chapter of fan fic... and have been for about 3 months.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yes, I have my hand in more than one cookie jar. I'm glad you liked this chapter... More to come. I just have to go through the steps to get it out to you...
A really fantastic beginning.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you.
Powerful beginning.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you.
I was enjoying myself very much until the author's notes. I personally hated the companion piece to "Traitor" (which to me was the real "end" of the story), although I had liked "Traitor" a great deal up until the last part. Now I'm alarmed! I'm a happy ending junkie and don't like endings with Severus dead, in Azkaban, a second-class citizen in the power of the Ministry, or Hermione married to that idiot Ron, etc. I'm tempted to wait until the story is complete so I can check the ending before reading it! However, the category list has "Romance" rather than "Angst", so may I hope? Regardless ofwhat you choose to do with your story, I appreciate the work you've put into it. Thanks!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much for your review. Please don’t worry – this is a romance. However, Severus is in a difficult place at the beginning of this story. First, he still sees Hermione as a student, a girl and now as a problem. Severus is fully ensconced in the Dark Lord’s camp without Dumbledore to back him or turn to. Second, as things progress he is being forced into things with Hermione by the Dark Lord and others. Emotionally Severus will have to deal with more than Hermione, and do things to maintain his 'role' as a Death Eater. All will be exxplained - in time.
That said, there are scenes that are reflective and similar to Traitor and I felt compelled to credit the author, simply because I was greatly influenced by her story. However, I am on a different track …
I enjoyed this prompt and hoped someone else would take it up. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. It really stood out for me too. I’m grateful that I’ve been given the chance to take this one out and give it a spin.
Loved Hagrid's patronus and the idea of hiding professor grubbly-plank and Cillian's mum.
Looking forwards to seeing Cillian join forces. Can't be long until the final battle!
I need to know what happens next. Did you ever finish writing this story?
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the reivew. I stopped posting here due to the strict rules and rejections and comments ... but chapter 44 is up on Ashwinder and on ff,net. I'm working on chapter 45, when I can, but it will be posted on ff,net
Squee! I have been waiting for an update for this story for ages!This is a nice development in Hermione's and Severus's relationship. I'm glad they both have friends to support them.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I know and I was so remiss in giving you one! I'm so sorry. Yes, she finally tried taking a risk and initating with him, one step to a real realtionship. Thank you so much for sticking with me and for the review. hugs~
My dear beaweaslley 2 , I am so , so gratefull that you put another chapter to your story . I will have to read it again because so much is hapening in this chapter wich I think is crusial . Thank you, and update soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Lora, you are very welcome. I know it's been wayyyy to long over due. sorry. Yes, there are s few big things in this chapter: Cillian's confession... Hermione using Severus' name finally and initiating... but yes, there are some things that are esculating and building. I hope to update soon. Working on the next chapter to get it ready for clean up. lol Thank you so much for reading and for your review.
Cillian is a cool character, bea! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I like him too! Thank you for the review, sunny. Hugs~
This is definitely one of my all-time favorite fanfics, and Cillian is one of my favorite OCs. I do hope you'll use him in a future story or stories. He's such a great character, it would be a shame to waste him.May there be a hex on anyone or anything that keeps you from updating more often. "grins"
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Cillian is a great guy to write. He's like Severus in many ways. Dunno about future stories, I tend to make what I need to fill in gaps when writing. No, it was getting my chapter ready for posting. RL and challenges got in the way too. Sorry. I'm back to work on it though. Thak you so much for the support and the review.
This has to be amazingly stressful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I would think it is quite stressful in the castle. For everyone. Thank you so much for the comment. Hugs~
oh yay for the update. Great chapter. I just re-read the entire story the other day and was thrilled to see you updated. Can't wait for more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Wo, you reread it? I'm amazed. Yes, I finally updated. Yep, still working on it. Hope to give you another chapter soon. Thank you so much for reading and the review. Hugs~
Bravo, bravo! Great chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you, sweetie. I appreciate it. Hugs~
Yay! I agree and early christmas gift, I love this story so much! And I really love that you write such nice long chapters! That Belinda is a real Bitch with a capital B, I think she is the one who slipped Hermione the book. And how will Severus protect Hermione if the Dark Lord decides he has other plans for her? Both Belinda and Lucius have hinted that her time is limited and only at the Dark Lords Whims. I really loved that it is Luna who is able to give Hermione insite on how to establish are groundwork for successful Occlumency. Luna is one of my very favorite characters. Thanks so much for the update and I will try to patiently wait for more. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
LOL sometimes long chapters are good and other ways they are a hinderance. Especially in the clean up phase. Yes, Belinda is a B!tch. I wrote her to be that way! lol sh, she did. But since the book was destroyed, Severus can't prove it. Yep, Hermione is at the Dark Lord's whims. He thinks he can use her as a pawn. Lucius and Belinda are right. Severus only has her because the Dark Lord allows him to have her. But they were handfasted in August. The handfasting lasts only one year and a day. It made sence back when I started having Hermione start Occlumency with Severus that she would build a memory palace. If you recall, Hermione has the foundations for a memory palace already in her mind - the corridors she uses and books. Now she has books on how to make a memory palace. I like Luna too. Remember the 'stretching scene? Loved typing that one. Luna to me is really smart, and sees things as they are - no distortions. You'll see more of her as time goes on.You are very welcome for the update. I hope to have another chapter out soon. dunno how soon, but working on it. Hugs~
I feel like Christmas has come early! This is my favorite story! So did Severus know she was going to be given to Lestrange? He might need to reconsider getting her pregnant. Not that a pregnancy would last long given the jinxes sent her way. I'm guessing Belinda put the book in the bag when she moved it? And poor Cillian. I know he's a Deatheater, but nobody deserves a sister like that. But I really like him.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Well, then you are very welcome. I'm deeply flattered that you like this one so much. No, I bet the fact that Hermione might be give to Lestrange was a bit of a shock, but then he knows how the Dark Lord opperates. No, he won't get her pregnant. He will not trap her anymore than she has to be for now.If he did get her pregnant, yes, the abuse (and it's going to get rough) would be a problem.Shhh. yes. Only Severus will never be able to prove it since he destroyed the book.Cillian has a DE brother and one who is a supporter. Belinda is so much like Bellatrix in her devotions, only she's bored with her husband. I have plans for Cillian. Thank you so much for the review. Hugs~
I wonder if Calming Draught is addictive? I'm thinking that's probably Severus' best bet for the handfasting and the 'year-and-a-day' that he's going to have to be with her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
ROTFL - he won't need it. He just has to kiss her - remember?
A bonding and a hand-fasting? For a year? Will it last longer?
Severus is playing a dangerous game here. And will Hermione go to Hogwarts with him? It'd be interesting to read the reaction of the others like Luna, Ginny, etc.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
It's a romance... hummmm?Isn't that an aspcet of Severus, the danger he faces - the role he plays, part of what makes him so dreamy?Ginny, Luna, Neville and other Gryffindors. That is a good point? hummmm?
Response from septentrion (Reviewer)
LOL you "hummmm" a lot and don't answer much. I'm curious of what's to come even more now.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Did you want me to answer ad give things away?
Response from septentrion (Reviewer)
Not really, but you answer made me smile. Actually, the best answer will come in the form of the next update. ;)