Hidden Passages
Chapter 24 of 43
beaweasley2Hermione discovers some secret passageways hidden inside Hogwarts walls and incorporates them into her memory palace. But Severus is furious over her disappearance, and Hermione makes a cold hard comparison that rattles Draco.
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Hidden Passages
Considering that almost all of Hermione's free time was devoted to hours of revising or working on her essays, she was thankfully current on all of her class work and reading. Even the six essays which had been assigned over the weekend were outlined, her quoted material copied or paraphrased and her footnotes complete. Hermione rose from her quick, early morning bath and returned to the bedroom, seeing her clothes laid out on the bed for her. She shook her head; she really missed the days when weekends meant slipping into comfortable jeans and a jumper. She dressed in her school clothes, leaving the robe on the bed, and pulled out the parchments of annotations regarding Occlumency and the book Luna gave her on the memory palace. She walked over to the windows and opened them, smiling at the Hufflepuff players on their brooms flying in the pitch. The sun was still low on the horizon, its soft, dawn glow making everything look fresh and new.
She turned and sat crossed legged on the rug on the space on the floor by the fireplace to read over her annotations, selecting the sheet with Severus' admonishments. '... similar memories can lie along similar threads associated by common emotions...' So, I have to be careful that the doors I make are not emotional entries. 'Memories are associated with feelings as well as sounds, sights, smells, and textures, even tastes.' Right. 'Legilimency doesn't utilize your five senses...' So, he can't actually sense them the way I do, but he can feel them, is that it? '... it uses your emotional connection to the memories ...' So, if I do shut my memories away in rooms, my rooms have to hold my feelings associated with these senses inside, encapsulate them... like putting things in boxes on a shelf.
That was where she'd get hung up she couldn't suppress her emotions. She could catalog them, sort them, and separate them, but that was different than suppressing them.
Hermione closed her eyes and mentally walked herself through her memory palace. The castle corridors were as clear to her as tangible as the castle itself. Sounds wafted from the windows: birds, the crack of a Beater's bat, the hum of the wind and rustle of the curtains. She forced herself to focus on nothing but the stone corridors and the main rooms of the castle. Now, what are my most dangerous memories... My Occlumency lessons keep them in the bedroom. My DA activities, keep in the Room of Requirement. My conversations in the common room...
She opened her eyes. She was going to have to create a false common room and dorm too much planning, too many discussions happened in the Gryffindor tower that could be very dangerous for the Dark Lord to see. The normal activities those weren't a problem, revising with Harry and Ron, helping them with their essays... he'd like seeing those times, but the planning no. I have to do something about those memories.
"What I need is a secret entrance to a Gryffindor common room," she mumbled with a sigh.
"Miss wants to know the secret entrance to the red and gold rooms?" Peren asked.
Hermione turned to look at her, confused, and saw two sets of ears peeking up from the other side of the bed. "I know; it's behind the Fat Lady," she replied.
Peren shook her head as she placed the fresh pillowcases on the bed. "The house-elves do not use the student's way, Mistress. We is not to be seen by the students when doing our duty, Mistress."
Hermione smiled as she recalled the route Peren and Trinna had taken her the day she tried yoga with Luna. "Do the house-elves have a secret passage to the Gryffindor Common room?"
"Oh yes, Mistress. We's have secret passages to all the rooms," Peren said with a huge grin.
One of the other house-elves peered at them from around the bed. "No, you can'ts tells her," the elf, possibly a male, hissed loudly.
Hermione ignored the other elf. "Peren, show me," she said excitedly, climbing to her feet. "Take me to the Gryffindor common room."
Peren pulled on her ear as she looked up at her, her forehead wrinkled, her eyes worried and her grimace askew. "I cannot, Mistress. Peren is not to let Mistress come to harm. The bad men is roaming the castle, and the mean teachers is watching the students. Mistress, it is not safe for mistress without master or mistress' follower to go in the castle today."
"Is there a way to go from the Headmaster's tower to the kitchens without being seen?" Hermione asked.
"Yes, Mistress. A tunnel, Mistress," Peren exclaimed, motioning for Hermione to follow.
"Peren is not to show students the tunnels," the elf said, stepping out with his hands up to block them.
Peren whispered something to the elf. The second elf, a female, shook her head while the first, definitely a male, tugged on his fingers. "We is not to."
"Miss gives Dobby clothes!" the male said angrily. "Miss is not to be trusted."
"I didn't understand about the symbiotic relationship that the house-elf servitude offers house-elves and what it means to you to have a home to serve. I thought that all slavery was wrong," Hermione said in her defense. "I didn't even know house-elves existed until my second year, and I was shocked when I found out that Hogwarts even had house-elves my fourth year. I was brought up thinking all slavery was bad I didn't understand."
"And you do's now?" the female asked.
"Mistress is the nicest mistress Peren ever has!" she said emphatically. "She gives Peren a pillowcase off mistress' own bed for Peren, and I has a pink pet, Peren's favorite color..."
"Miss is a student," the male interrupted. The elves all started talking at once, softly, heads close. Finally the female looked up. "Dustin and Kwink will show miss. But miss must keep tunnels a secret. Miss must promise."
"I promise," Hermione said, crossing her heart.
The elves looked at her action as if it was strange, then Kwink shrugged, leading the way. Hermione flowed behind the house-elves, down the stairs into Severus' office. Behind the pillar at the base of the stairs was a carefully concealed small door Hermione had to crawl into. The room was elf-sized, but much larger than the plastic dog house at Severus' house. It was immaculate, containing a nice bed and a table where the pigmy puff sat in the wicker cage. Hermione recognized Peren's tiny pillow and blanket on the bed.
"This ways, miss," Kwink said, leading her through a tunnel and down stairs that Hermione had to occasionally crawl or stoop low to pass. Surprisingly, the tunnels and stairs were as immaculate as Peren's tiny room.
Eventually she found herself stepping into the kitchen. She stood there, smiling as the elves clustered around her.
A squeal could be heard louder than the others, saying, "Her-my-ne, miss! Harry Potter's friend!" Dobby appeared before her, hands clasped in joy, his smile radiant. "What is Miss want of us?" He was wearing a pair of tan children's shorts with supports, Ron's old sweater, and two miss-matched socks with little trainers. He had one of her knit hats on his head with a 'Potter Stinks' badge pinned on his chest.
"Dobby, you look wonderful!"
"Thank you, Miss," Dobby said as elves handed Hermione a cup of tea, a sliced apple, and a fresh brownie still warm from the oven.
"My mistress wishes to know secret way to the red and gold rooms," Peren stated.
There were immediate gasps, grumbles, and squeaks throughout the assembled house-elves. "Dobby will shows Harry Potter's friend," he said, taking her hand.
Even though the majority of the house-elves seemed against it, Dobby opened the porthole behind Hermione. Unlike when she'd followed Kwink, Dobby explained which stairs and tunnels went where as they made their way up through the castle. Several times, they had to cross corridors, so Dobby and Kwink both peeked out around the edges of the tapestries before summoning Hermione and Peren to follow. Finally Dobby opened a small door.
Hermione crawled out of the doorway and into the Gryffindor common room. The house-elf entrance was in the far corner to the right of the fireplace opposite the room from the Fat Lady's hole. She turned around, amazed to find the room empty, and realized that from this side the small door looked like just one of the panels under the bookshelves. "Where else can you take me?"
Dobby smiled. "Dobby can show miss the swimming pool," he said in a delighted squeak.
With the excitement of her excursion, Hermione nearly missed lunch. Dobby and Kwink had shown her all over the castle, even letting her peek into the dungeons before taking her back to Severus' office. She ran into an irate Severus Snape on the stairs. "Where have you been?" he snarled.
"Peren was showing me her bedroom," Hermione lied, surprisingly convincingly enough.
His eyes narrowed as he thrust her robe at her. "I was about to send the portraits after you!"
She smiled, knowing that wouldn't have done him any good.
"Let's go," he snarled, indicating for her to go down the stairs. Considering his dark mood, she walked in silence until he said, "After lunch I'll escort you to the Quidditch match."
Hermione replied, "All right," politely, then bit her lip at his dark scowl and looked away. He was really fuming, and she hoped he'd get over it soon.
As Hermione and her friends finished eating, Hermione followed along with the conversation, listening to Ginny, Demelza, and Gryffindor's Beaters, Keith Kleith and Jimmy Peaks, speculate on the Quidditch match between Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw. As soon as the plates were cleared, everyone hurried out for the Quidditch pitch. Hermione found herself drawn along with the throng, arm in arm with Ginny, until Severus took hold of her other arm.
"I told you, you were to wait for me."
"What's wrong with sitting with my friends?" she asked, embarrassed to be treated like a small child in front of everybody. Ginny waited patiently, but Kleith and Peaks shifted nervously under Severus' glare.
"We can keep her safe enough in the stands," Ginny said and shied when Severus' glare turned on her.
Hermione saw VanHalal, Travers, and MacCavish making their way to the pitch. Apparently they were going to be sitting with the teachers, so now that was the last place she wanted to be, anywhere near them. "I'll be safer with my house mates than I would be in the teacher's stand, Severus," she said, pointing to the Death Eaters.
Severus's eyes narrowed, and Hermione turned her head, seeing Neville and Seamus waving at her to join them, along with Janilynn Waithe, Jenny Wang, and Breanna Enfield. Severus seemed to be watching her friends and the students filing into the pitch as well. "Fine, but you are to meet me immediately afterwards," he said sternly. "You got that? You are to be on the ground as soon as the Snitch is caught."
Hermione nodded and promised him, then hurried over to her friends. "Well that was close; imagine having to sit with the Carrows and her security goons during the game?" Ginny said as they started up the stairs.
"Good thing MacCavish wanted to be in the teacher's seats," Breanna said over her shoulder from the steps above Hermione.
"You'd've been hexed or worse for sure," Jenny added from behind Ginny.
Janilynn turned her head, squinting as they came out of the stands into the light. "Let's sit by Stephanie and Ernie," she said, pointing. "More wands."
Stephanie Adams, Jack Sloper, and Ernie Coppersmith all smiled as their group took the row above them, and Demelza, Keith and Jimmy filed in to sit on the top bench. Ernie leaned back to ask Neville, "You don't think they'd really do anything here, do you?"
"Keep wands handy just in case," Neville said, patting the sixth-year on the shoulder.
Hermione looked quizzingly at him, but he only smiled. "Better safe than sorry."
"What did you hear?" Hermione demanded.
Ginny shrugged as the whistle went off, and the Quaffle was released.
Garrett Shadwell, commentating for the game, announced that Zacharis Smith won the tip off.
"Charles, Sean, and Paul," Ginny said, pointing at the Hufflepuff Keeper and two Beaters. "They're in the DA now; and, well, they overheard MacCavish tell Rowle after breakfast that with Cillian away and Severus scheduled to meet with the governors this morning that you'd be easy pickings. Rumor was you were missing this morning, so we called everyone to search for you. But then you showed up for lunch with Severus so we knew you were all right."
"Yeah," Seamus said, leaning around Neville. "If you're going to go missing, could you at least warn someone? You do know how to make the coin work, right?"
Garrett Shadwell announced loudly, "Charles Swindlehurst, Hufflepuff's Keeper, hands off the Quaffle to Zane Seymour, and she's off, making a run for the goal. Oh, look, Sean Nauman blocked the Bludger from hitting her!"
"I was fine," Hermione said, now glad that she'd explored the house-elf tunnels with Peren, Dobby, and Kwink instead of going to the library as she'd planned.
The Hufflepuffs roared as Garrett Shadwell shouted, "... and Gerald Summerby scores!" and all her friends clapped or whistled as well.
"All I'm saying is that we were worried," Janilynn said. "Apparently the Headmaster has a meeting with the staff tonight as well or so we heard, so if you go wandering off tell us so we can come find you."
"... and Summerby pulls a Dementiva dodge, tosses the Quaffle to Zacharis Smith. Smith dodges a Bludger and Plansky rolls! Oh, he nearly collided with Koomer! He shoots... Yes, scores! The Quaffle got in the lower hoop before Christopher McCracken could block it."
"Good shot!" Janilynn shouted, jumping in her seat.
"Zach is taking a lot more chances this year," Ginny stated. "His aim has really improved as well."
The game moved swiftly. Garrett Shadwell gave a play-by-play as Zach knocked the Quaffle away from Koomer. Koomer flew half the pitch and made a wild throw intercepted by Summerby, who shot to the goal hoops and scored ten points for Hufflepuff.
Zach caught the Quaffle, but Plansky knocked it from his grip. Brigegman caught it, made a daring drive, shot for the goal posts and scored ten points for Ravenclaw. Zach caught the Quaffle and made an amazing pass to Summerby, but Sean Nauman collided into him, successfully keeping the Bludger from hitting him in the head. However, Koomer snatched the Quaffle only to lose it to Zane.
Zane chucked the Quaffle at the left goal hoop, but it was blocked effortlessly by McCracken. McCracken threw the Quaffle a fourth of the field to Anthony Brigegman, who caught it and flew the length of the field, making a diversionary dodge around Zach that set him up for the goal, giving Ravenclaw another ten points.
Charles Swindlehurst threw the Quaffle to Gerald who passed it to Zane. Zane managed to pass it back to Gerald to score just before Paul Peterson nearly ran into her, making her swerve as he stopped a Bludger from hitting her on her leg.
Hermione glanced up as the Ravenclaw Seeker, Stewart Ackerley, made a spectacular twisting roll and reversed his direction, making a steep dive straight for the teacher's stands.
Alecto drew her wand as she stood up, but Hagrid clamped a hand on her arm, making her nearly fall on her face. "Unhand me, you oaf," she screamed as Stewart swerved in time to miss the professors and raced down the wall of the pitch as Hufflepuff's Seeker, Owen Cauldwell, a lanky, speckled boy, turned sharply, colliding with the wall.
MacCavish and Rowle both stood up, wands pointed at Hagrid. Even from where Hermione sat, she could tell that Severus was obviously angry as he tried to get control to the situation. Travers and Amycus were also defending Alecto now, and Professors McGonagall, Sprout, and Sinistra all stood up to defend Hagrid.
Hufflepuff scored, and then Ravenclaw, both goals missed by the spectators since a majority of the students watched in shock as the teachers and Death Eaters squared off. Even Garrett Shadwell ceased commentating on the game as he stared at the commotion and had to be reminded to update the score. Finally, as Ravenclaw made another goal, the tension in the teacher's box settled down again, but Hagrid had left the box.
"Oh, my gosh!" Janilynn exclaimed. "They made Professor Hagrid leave?"
Hermione was distracted by another spectacular save by the Hufflepuff keeper.
As Garrett Shadwell announced, "Swindlehurst tosses the Quaffle down the field wow what a throw... and Yes! Gerald Summerby caught it!"
Hermione looked up and saw Hagrid take a seat in the Hufflepuff stand. Hagrid crossed his arms, looking dejected until Hufflepuff scored and then he cheered along with the students.
After what seemed like hours to Hermione, Stewart Ackerley made an astonishing move along the wall of the pitch directly under the Slytherins and caught the Snitch, giving Ravenclaw a hundred and twenty point victory over Hufflepuff.
Hermione leaned over to Ginny to whisper in her ear as the students around her burst into applause. "I have to get on the ground, now!" she shouted over the roar as she rose to her feet. Ginny lightly smacked Neville to get his attention and indicated to Hermione. Neville nodded and nudged Seamus' shoulder as he moved to lead Hermione out of the stands. Janilynn Waithe and Jenny Wang saw them leaving and nudged Breanna Enfield, who tapped on Stephanie's arm to get her and Ernie to follow.
Hermione felt ridiculous, having nearly all of Gryffindor's sixth- and seventh-years leaving the stands with her. She was even more surprised to see Terry Boot, Michael Corner, Claudia Ramirez, and Geraldine Smothers emerging from the Ravenclaw stands and heading their way. "The DA stands by their own," Seamus said with a sharp nod of his head. The group marched Hermione over to the celebrating Hufflepuffs. "You weren't the only one they wanted to get their hands on."
Her inquiry of "Why?" was lost amongst the cheering and laughing as Hermione was engulfed within the Hufflepuff students. She happily congratulated the students she bumped into, wondering who was being singled out as well.
Luna appeared in Hermione's line of sight, standing next to Swindlehurst and Ackerley, holding a small rock in her hand. "You're improving on your dive, but you still don't trust your broom," Luna stated dreamily to Stewart Ackerley.
He looked at her, his forehead wrinkled and his eyes narrowed, but Luna was examining the shell-shaped rock she'd picked up. "I look forward to the Quidditch game between Hufflepuff and Slytherin. Draco doesn't like plunging dives for the ground, and he tends to break out to hard. But he flies fast so I think you're well matched."
"Er, thanks for the tip," Ackerley said, his attention diverted by a housemate.
Janilynn Waithe pointed to the Carrows walking away from the pitch. "I think it's safe to go now."
Ginny hooked her arm with Hermione's. "We're going up with Hufflepuff, so act like you were favoring them to win. Besides, with the majority of the school watching, and surrounded by a hundred students, it'll be hard to get at you."
"Ginny, surely," Hermione stated to say, but Janilynn cut her off.
"They threatened to get you," Breanna stated. "So don't say it isn't anything to worry about. Besides we're only going in for dinner, so what's the big deal?"
Hermione hoped they were right, but another quick glance at Severus told her that he was still angry.
When they reached the castle, her friends started guiding Hermione to the Great Hall for dinner. She turned around, looking for Severus as she sat down, and saw him watching her with a scowl on his face.
Severus approached Hermione just as the plates cleared for pudding. "You're coming with me," he said in a tone that made her cringe inside.
She said good night to her friends and followed him from the hall, surprised when Draco caught up to them on the stairs. Great. "Going to the library?" she asked Draco, mentally chanting, say yes, say yes...
"Nope, I'm spending my evening insulting you," he said with a smirk that faded when Severus scowled at him.
"I'd rather you chose the library," she mumbled.
"He's going to be in the tower with you and you will get along," Severus snapped.
He'd been in a bad mood all day, and Hermione wondered if it had anything to do with her being gone all morning or what Ginny mentioned about the Death Eaters.
Peren approached her as soon as Hermione entered the sitting room. "What would Mistress like Peren to gets her for pudding?" she asked with hopeful eyes.
Remembering the brownie, Hermione asked for one, topped with ice cream and chocolate fudge.
Peren disappeared before Draco opened his mouth. "Well, that was..." He was cut off when Peren returned with two plates with ice cream sundaes atop fresh baked brownies. "That looks good."
Hermione sat down at the coffee table, frowning when Draco joined her on the floor. He shoved his bag over by the sofa and helped himself to one of the brownie sundae treats.
"Merlin, this is good," Draco commented after a few bites.
"Typical Muggle treat," she chided him, closing her eyes as she took another mouthful. When she opened her eyes, he was staring at her, his expression unreadable. They ate in silence, Hermione watching the fire more than Draco. When she'd finished, she pulled out her Dark Arts essay.
Draco snatched the parchment. "'Maleficium, the Latin term meaning wrongdoing or mischief, is used to describe malevolent, dangerous, or harmful magic, such as evildoing or malevolent sorcery. In general, the term applies to any magical act intended to cause harm or death to people or property. This type of magic would be invoked to kill, more specifically, the Avada Kedavra or Killing Curse, or to cause extreme pain, such as the Cruciatus Curse. Other acts of maleficium include: to steal, to injure, to cause misfortune, or destruction,'" Draco read aloud and smirked as he handed it back to her. "Droll. Not your usual standard, I'm sure."
"He only wants a straight definition and examples," she pointed out. "No point writing anything too complicated it confuses him."
Draco smirked at her comment. "Okay, that's part of it. Your basic categories are: sharp, pointed or pointy, prickly, caustic, severe hot or cold, love or sexual spells, binding spells, and illusions."
"Oh yes, I forgot, you're quite proficient in the Dark Arts," she said mockingly with a sideways roll of her eyes.
"I'm adept in them, yes," he said snidely, setting his spoon in the dish.
She studied his calm mannerism critically. "How much experience do you have?" she asked, curiosity getting the better of her. She knew that Severus had taught him Dark Arts over the summer, but wondered just how excessive those lessons went.
"Much more than you," he said, bending his leg and resting his arm on his knee.
She waved her hand dismissively. "That's not saying very much; I've only used what I've learned in class."
"And that's not much at all. You and your Gryffindor friends are simply target practice for those of us who are on the right side," he stated, smirking at her.
Hermione jumped slightly and turned to face him more squarely. "What do you mean target practice?" she asked alarmed.
"Haven't you noticed that Breanna Enfield and Charlene Weston are rarely singled out? Yet you, Longbottom, Finnigan, Brown, and Patil well, she's not picked on as much as you other four."
Hermione narrowed her eyes at him, trying to divine why he'd mention that. Surely they're not siding with Voldemort? Breanna was part of the group protecting me... but...? Weston?
"Which one shocks you? Patil? Engaged or will be this Christmas hols. Weston as well, but she doesn't wear her ring. Miss Enfield is already betrothed, I believe, but nothing will be said until June when it will be made formal."
Hermione sucked in her breath. "To whom?" she breathed, unable to find any strength to her voice.
Draco laughed. "They haven't said anything? Aren't you close to your own dorm mates? Oh, that's right; you're here in your tower, married to Severus Snape, Death Eater and one of the Dark Lord's favorites."
Hermione simply stared at him not daring to taunt him, because it might make him too angry to tell her. "Charlene Weston is betrothed to Egmont Bole he was a Beater on the Slytherin house team. His family is good friends with the Warringtons and Flints," he added when Hermione didn't recognize the name.
She still couldn't remember him. "And Parvati?" she asked softly, hoping for a better match for her.
"I'm not really sure, but I think its Edgecombe's eldest son," he said offhandedly. "But then I don't follow the social register like my mum does."
Hermione picked up her quill and tried to concentrate on listing the curses, by category as directed by Amycus. He didn't even want more than the name, incantation, and the wand movement for each one.
Pointed: Needling Hex Compunxi; wand movement is a stabbing poke.
Knife-Edge Curse Mucronis; wand movement... point and cut downward, like a knife.
Stabbing-Pains Curse Punctim: a pointed thrust movement, opposite of Caesim which is a thrust and cut movement.
Piercing-Pain Curse Perfigo, another thrusting point movement.
Shooting-Pain Curse Valdacus; again, a thrusting slash movement...
Hermione set her quill down after finishing all the ones she found in her assigned book. None of these were especially hard to remember. In fact they were downright simple; the incantation was usually close to the equilivent Latin word for the name or affect of the spell, and the movement, as one might expect from the name, as if using a knife or a sword to do the act. She started on the category prickly, realizing that she knew most of them already. Stinging Hex, Itching Hex, Tickling Hex, Tongue Blisters... Lingua vomica blisters on the tongue! The accompanying picture on the page made her sick to her stomach, the huge blisters, several oozing pus and blood on a grotesquely swollen tongue. "And he's going to let them use this on us?!"
"Which?" Draco asked, looking up.
She saw him swallow hard and exhale from his mouth as he looked at the picture, then shoved it away.
"You've seen this one, haven't you?"
"Yes, it's not pretty." He turned to look at the window. "The counter curse only works in the first few seconds before the boils start to burst. It's Lingua mederi, but it's nonverbal, and you end up swallowing... you don't want to know."
"Swallowing what?" she asked, feeling a panic that it had to horrible if he couldn't even say it...
"The scabs," he admitted, looking sick and wrinkling his nose. "It's better than the alternative."
"The alternative?"
He refused to look at her as if refusing to respond. She stared at the picture and noticed that the sores did appear to be on the inside of the mouth as well. She looked down at her parchment, counting how many she'd done so far. She had all twenty, thank Merlin. "Draco, do you think we could quit for now. I'm not feeling so good, and I'd like to... take a bath."
Draco nodded in understanding. "Sure, too much for you, eh? It's all right." He collected all his things. "Remember about the Tongue-Healing Charm. It's easy as long as you think your mouth, throat, and tongue, and really want it to heal and you can't panic it won't work if you panic."
"Draco, who...?"
"Leave it. It's none of your business who," he snapped as he stood up and walked away. "I'll see you in class. Enjoy your bath and think of something else, okay."
Hermione watched him hurry past Severus without saying good bye. She turned and headed for the stairs, wondering who'd he'd seen cursed with the Tongue-Blisters Curse.
Severus reached out and touched her arm. "Are you all right?"
"Yes, I just finished my Defense well, Dark Arts assignment," she replied dolefully.
His eyes narrowed suspiciously. "What upset Draco?"
"The Tongue-Blisters Curse," Hermione answered. "He's seen it, but didn't tell me on whom."
"The Dark Lord used it on Narcissa when Draco and I returned to the Manor the night Dumbledore died," he said, his voice strained to maintain a smooth aloofness.
He'd witnessed Mrs. Malfoy... The picture of the woman gagging on her blistered tongue, the thought of the blood and pus running down her throat haunted her. "Why did he do that?"
"She came to my house."
Hermione looked up at him, her mouth agape. "He did that to her because she paid you a social call?"
"I can't tell you why," he added sternly and let go of her arm. "Why were you looking that particular curse up?"
"Amycus Carrow his assignment he gave us a list of spells to write out the incantation and the wand movement... so we could do it in class." She covered her mouth and stepped back. "So they could do it on us!"
Severus' eyes narrowed, darkened, and grew cold. "Not if I have a say in it he won't," he snarled and turned. "You are to learn the counter curse for each curse you wrote about tonight. Do you understand me? Each one. If you cannot find them ask me."
Hermione's hands were clasped together against her lips as he turned around, her breath making her finger warm with each breath. "Of course," she said, watching him go. She had nervous knots in her stomach. If he reacted like that just because... and Draco... She turned and hurried up to the room to write Draco's warning and counter spell on a slip of parchment.
She could hear Peren filling the tub for her. "Peren, I need you to take this to Ginny or Neville. It's really important."
"Yes, Mistress," Peren said, taking the parchment and disappeared.
She sank down into the hot water and tried to calm her racing heart. She closed her mind and forced herself to picture her memory palace, mentally constructing new tiny elf-sized doors, many concealed behind tapestries, statues, a section of stone, or a panel, much like the real house-elf doorways to hide her secrets behind. Eventually she relaxed, absorbed in the process of organizing and rearranging her mind.
It took time to selectively organize her thoughts into new classrooms replicas of the larger ones for the memories she didn't want anyone, specifically the Dark Lord to find, putting all her personal memories into places she could now easily hide.
The water cooled and she drained some of it, turning on the hot water tap with her toe. She could calmly imagine her hidden passages: the corridors, all the duplicate rooms, and the small concealed doors, mentally mapping it all out carefully, like a secret Hogwarts inside her Hogwarts. All the tapestries, statues, paintings, suits of armor, and windows she knew so well in the real castle, hiding all the secret entrances and carefully concealing them from view. The only room that remained the same in her memory palace was her library her ever increasing library.
As the water cooled again, Hermione's memory palace was a solid to her as the real castle and as definite in her mind. She dried off, slipped into the green night slip Peren had laid out for her and crawled into bed.
"Your hair is wet," Severus stated from his side of the bed.
"I dried it the best I could with a towel," she replied, knowing that only did half the job on her curls.
"Sit up," he demanded.
Sighing, she complied and turned her back to him. A warm heat engulfed her head. "Thank you." She pushed the covers off to go get her hairbrush.
"Where are you going now?" he asked in the darkness.
She turned, confused. "To get my brush." The door slammed closed before she reached it, and she whirled to face the bedroom. "What...?"
His hands landed on the door and wall on either side of her, making her press her back against the door. "You are not to hide from me, ever. Is that understood, Hermione?" he asked, his voice cold and low, making shivers run down her spine. "You are not to leave this tower without my knowledge, nor are you to wander from this castle, for any reason, without my consent. Do. I. Make. Myself. Clear?"
She tensed, her lips quivering at the anger in his tone. It became hard to breathe normally at the forcefulness of his words. He hadn't spoken to her like this since her first days of her capture. "Y-y-yes," she managed to croak out audibly. She tried to move away and he stopped her.
"If I have to I can and will apply the same wards on the stairs going up to the sitting room as in my house," he warned her. "It is not safe for you to wander around the castle and grounds unescorted."
"I wasn't wandering around the castle, and I wasn't alone, I was with Peren!" she said petulantly, even stomping her foot. "Now, it's late and I'm..."
"Not done with you," he snapped. She crossed her arms and sighed stubbornly, her eyes now fully adjusted to the exceptionally dim light. He slapped his hand on the wall by her head and stood back, standing with his arms crossed glaring at her. "I want to know where you were. And don't' lie to me, I know you were not in this tower."
"No, I wasn't, not really. I went with Peren to see where she goes when not in the room I was curious." She leaned against the door waiting.
"And that is all you're going to tell me?" he asked, and for a minute she thought she'd won.
"Fine, have it your way," he growled, his teeth barred as he exhaled. "You will not be able to open the door from now on." He grasped her arm, yanking her with him to the bed.
She noticed that the covers were pulled slantingly across the bed to the floor from his hasty exit, but his grip on her arm as he thrust her toward the bed made it impossible not to trample on them. As she tried to turn to sit on the bed, she slipped on the corner of the sheet and fell, crashing into him. He caught her, sort of, tumbling onto the mattress in a heap, his hand landing on her breast. Hermione tried to sit up as he extracted his hand, putting her foot on the mattress, and her head collided painfully with his collarbone. "Ouch!"
"Well, you shouldn't have tripped me," he snarled as he tried to right himself while she squirmed to find a seating position, accidently knocking his arm in the process. He fell on top of her again.
"Stop struggling," he snapped as she started to laugh. "Only you would find this amusing." He was now straddling her on all fours but she still had one leg hanging off the mattress. "Scoot up and try to avoid banging into me." He shifted as she brought her leg up and tried to move toward the headboard. Now he was straddling her legs, his hands on either side of her waist, staring at her chest intently.
She realized what he was staring at the night slip had pulled down, revealing her breasts above the neckline.
"What am I going to do with you?" he asked. His tongue flicked her nipple once before he sucked it into his mouth as his hand slid slowly down her side, making her move slightly toward the center on the bed.
Hermione forgot about his anger as she closed her eyes, enjoying the attention of his mouth on her breast and the feel of his hands sliding under the slip on her skin. "Anything," she groaned.
"Anything?" he asked as he raked his fingernails down her sides, making her arch her back from the tantalizing tickle. His nose bumped her abdomen as he descended down her body.
"Yes," she replied, raking her nails wherever she could touch him.
"Good answer," he replied and flicked his tongue at her groin. "Open up for me, Hermione."
She complied as he raised her legs, bending her knees to open her fully to his gaze.
"Lovely." He thrust a finger into her as the tip of his tongue made circles on her sensitive spot.
"I thought you were mad at me," she said with a moan, fully enjoying the attention he was lavishing on her. He was such a complicated man; first he was furious with her, being rough with her, and now he was ravishing her as if nothing had happened.
All he said was, "Hmmmm," against her clitoris as his fingers stroked her, and she gasped from the sensations, immediately feeling her orgasm build. He shifted, making the feeling ebb, and repeated the action, exciting her again and frustrating her at the same time. A soft chuckle escaped his lips, doing the same thing to her as his hum, but he ignored her squirming and pleading as he continued to ravish her core and clitoris. Her orgasm hit hard, making her scream and thrash, pleading for him to stop stimulating her with his fingers and tongue.
Instead, he flipped her over and pulled her to her knees, entering her from behind and repeatedly thrusting into her hard and unrelenting strokes.
She was still sensitive from her orgasm, squeezing down on him with each thrust, her breasts bouncing to his rhythm. Hermione tried to relax, but his fingers found her clit, and he flicked it as he thrust, increasing the tension inside her. She grasped one breast, trying to keep them from swinging, and he bent over her, making her shoulders collapse onto the bed.
"That's it, play with yourself," he urged her.
She could barely respond; the sensations from his fingers and the way he moved brought her to orgasm again.
"That's it. Scream it, Hermione," he said, pulling her up against his body, still stimulating her roughly. "I want to hear you scream."
She clutched at him, her nails digging into his flesh as she pleaded for him to relent. "Too sensitive, Severus, please... too much..."
"Say it," he demanded, bending her forward, holding her to him with one arm as he pounded into her, his fingers still manipulating her below. "Scream for me."
"Severus, please, please," she pleaded, getting louder and louder, the sensations never ebbing, the last orgasm seeming to build again as if never ending. "Severus, I I can't I...stop. Oh, gods, Severus, stop too much SEVERUS, NO! GODS, NO!"
"Say it," he growled. She could tell by the huskiness of his tone that he was close to his own orgasm. "Say my name."
Her body seemed to explode and melt at the same time, all coherent thought except his name escaping her. "SEVERUS OH, SEVERUS GODS, SEVERUS! HOLY SHITE, SEVERUSSSSS!"
He grunted, growling in her ear as he made one last thrust and pulled her down on his shaft with both hands, burying himself deep while holding her so tight he was hurting her. He was shaking as much as her own body, the pounding of her heart even seeming to skip a beats as her labored breathing made her lightheaded. She felt limp in his crushing embrace, unable to move or collapse. She could feel his hot breath on the base of her neck and the heaving of his chest.
He finally moved, half collapsing, half stretching as they both lay out on the bed, his arms still tight around her. She felt his penis slip from her as he snuggled her to him, his body wet with sweat, and knew that he'd fallen asleep.
Hermione lay in the dark, listening to his breathing until sleep took her as well.
~o0o~
Sunday morning, hundreds of owls flew into the Great Hall during breakfast, each dropping several copies of The Quibbler on the house tables. Ginny snatched the publication before it landed in her eggs. "Oh, get this!" she exclaimed, holding the paper for Hermione to see the headlines.
It was hardly necessary, all around the Great Hall, on every table, a bright yellow band bore the words, Support Harry Potter, in huge black letters. 'It's your duty as free wizards to support Harry Potter,' was in strong, bold, neon print across the middle.
Hermione leaned close to Ginny and read the read the article with a grin. "His articles certainly are bold." However, as she read, certain phrases and statements popped out at her, veiled sentences of the truth, scattered throughout the paper.
"Luna's dad must have a new journalist," Ginny remarked, turning the paper over.
"Why do you say that?" Janilynn asked on her other side.
Ginny turned her head to look at her. "It's the answers to one of the quizzes in the column titled, Mystic Crosswords."
That was not the answer Hermione was about to give, and she looked at Ginny questioningly.
Ginny put the paper down and looked at Hermione and Neville. "Have either of you got a quill on you?" Neville handed her his. "A friend of prince hamlet," Ginny said aloud.
"Horatio" Hermione answered, thinking that an easy clue for a crossword puzzle.
"The color of sapphire? Blue. How to eat an orange? Peel it," Ginny rambled on. "These are really easy... wait." Ginny tapped the paper with her wand, saying, "Horatio's blue peel," and gasped. Some of the words on the paper turned blue.
"'Need a way out, go to the street near Cresant Park in Heathfield or St David's Station near Muggle University in Exeter noon. Will provide transport. Magnolia crossed south. Baines all out of house fine. Burns ten all six r fine now.'"
"Burstein could that be the Burnsteins?" Janilynn asked softly. "I read about them. Their house was the target of a raid; it was burned down and the family was killed."
"'Kennel and drew gates in hid 'ing hiding.' Kenneth and Drew Gates? Really?" Ginny said, her mouth falling open. "The Quibbler is hiding messages about friends and families. Oh! 'Carmichael wife freed. Hordes escaped Ministry free, not a lie. Weasley and Potter accused of breakout.' Ron and Harry!"
Neville frowned at his copy of The Quibbler. "'Thomas boy wanted for robbery at Ministry it's now confirmed that Mr. Dean Thomas, wanted for confirmation of his Muggle-born status, took part in the mass escape from the Ministry of Magic late Thursday, apparently aided by two other wizards one confirmed as the notorious Harry Potter! The other wizard suspected to be Ronald Weasley' they are alive!" he said and looked up at Ginny with a huge grin.
Hermione was elated.
"It says, that 'the subjects were all awaiting their hearings before the Muggle-born Registration Commission regarding their eligibility to carry a wand and use magic'" Seamus read aloud. "'... During the mass breakout, a locket was stolen from Dolores Jane Umbridge ..." He looked up confused. "Why would Dean steal a locket from Umbridge?"
Hermione quickly grabbed her cup to hide her shocked expression. They did it! They have the locket!
"What do you know?"
Hermione turned to stare at Ginny, knowing that she couldn't tell her or try lying.
"What do you know?" Ginny repeated, now turned in her seat to face Hermione.
"Gin, I'm not sure, really only a well, I hope... Without asking Dean, I can't be sure. We've got to get mirrors, and then we'll know for sure. But the article in the Prophet about the progress of the Muggle-born Registration Committee blood status trials they lied."
"Oh course they lied!" Ginny exclaimed. "Where have you been? The Prophet is as slanted and riddled with Voldemort's propaganda as it was my third year after Cedric Diggory died, and Harry announced that Voldemort was back!"
Hermione saw MacCavish rise to his feet. "Gin, stop it!" Seamus warned. "Travers and Rowle are glaring at you, and they're getting up, too."
Hermione turned to look at Severus, surprised to see him striding toward her.
"You are not to say his name you spawn of blood traitors," MacCavish snarled, pointing at Ginny from across the table. Jenny Wang and Stephanie Adams, sitting across from Janilynn and Ginny, tried to move down the table from MacCavish as he loomed over them to glare at Ginny and Hermione.
Ginny paled slightly, but raised her chin to look up at the Death Eater. "But Dumbledore said "
"Miss Weasley, on your feet now," Severus said coolly, his expression furious. "Hermione, you too. Now!"
Hermione scrambled to her feet and faced Severus. He was glaring at Ginny. "Follow me," he snapped. "MacCavish, I have this under control."
"Yes, sir," Hermione mumbled, feeling sick of being cloistered away in the tower when the morning had begun so promisingly.
Severus led them outside and down the path. "Where are we going?" Hermione whispered.
"To serve a detention of hard labor," Severus said softly.
Hermione looked at his back, not understanding what he could possibly mean.
Severus stopped once they reached the school's greenhouses, opened the door to greenhouse five, the one never used for lessons, and ushered the girls inside. The garden greenhouse was huge inside, with rows upon rows of every kind of vegetables in all stages of growth. Hagrid looked up as Severus approached. "Hagrid."
"Headmaster," Hagrid replied formally, standing straighter.
"These two have violated the Dark Lord's taboo. They are to weed the entire greenhouse as a detention," Severus stated. "I shall be back to collect them before lunch."
"Yes, sir, Headmaster. I will be glad to supervise their detention, sir," Hagrid replied as if speaking to a commanding officer.
Severus nodded and drew Hermione aside. "Call for Peren if MacCavish or Rowle enters."
"Yes, sir," Hermione said as she nodded. "Severus, why ?"
"When you say his name, we feel it, Hermione. There is a Tracing-Tracking Spell on the name as well he feels it. Now I have to send him a report that the students abusing the right to speak his name, a right not even his closest followers are allowed, have been properly punished. Not in a manner he'd have chosen, but effective in my own opinion," he said softly. "Now, if either MacCavish or Rowle come in here, have Peren take you to my office immediately."
Hermione nodded again and watched him leave. Hermione could see MacCavish standing outside the door when he opened it, and she heard Severus order him to return to the Great Hall as the door closed. Hermione rubbed her hands on her upper arms as she walked over to Ginny and Hagrid, examining the neat and weed-free rows of green beans, tomatoes, peppers, and broccoli.
"So what are your plans today? Well, besides enforced gardening," Ginny asked, pouring herself pumpkin juice into a glass where a wide path of flat dirt separated one garden patch from another. "Here, want some?"
"I don't get it?" she asked, looking around. "What weeds?" The rows of leeks, cabbages, carrots, and beets were neatly laid out with freshly laid manure.
"There aren't that many, wha' with all yeh kids being sent ta me for their detentions," Hagrid said, sitting on a sturdy bench with his ankles crossed. Hermione sat down next to him. "This is me garden," he said proudly with a wave of his hand. "When the weather gets bad, I grow everythin' in here. Well, me and Professor Sprout, o' course."
"We either come in here or the animal paddock, well, the older students do, and occasionally we have to go into the forest with Hagrid. But mostly, we visit er, do our detention in here," Ginny said, smiling up at Hagrid. "Beats the alternative."
"Such as?" Hermione asked, sipping on the pumpkin juice.
"Detention with them Carrows," Hagrid replied with distaste. "Don' wan' any of yeh with them." Hagrid stood up. "Now then, 'cause yeh have to have dirt under yer nails or them Death Eater's will think I wen' soft on yeh... we can... pick tomatoes and leeks for dinner." He picked up two huge baskets. "Now just pull 'em up, cut off the roots and stack 'em in the basket."
It didn't take as long as Hermione thought it would. Halfway through, Zane Seymour and Farrah Chambers, a fourth-year Hufflepuff, joined them. The task Hagrid gave them was dividing sweet potatoes, dipping them in Root-Starting Solution and planting them.
"So what is your plan this afternoon," Ginny asked, wiping her forehead with her sleeve.
"Most likely sequestered in my tower, revising and working on my essays," Hermione said with a heavy sigh.
"Great, some of the girls will come up and see you," she said with a grin. "At least I will."
Severus came to collect all the girls before lunch, sending the Hufflepuffs and Ginny running for their common rooms to clean up. Severus waited in his office as Hermione washed up, and escorted her to the Great Hall. By the time she'd finished eating, he was waiting to escort her back to their tower.
"Where is Cillian?" Hermione asked, hurrying beside him to keep up with his long stride.
"Out on personal business," Severus said coolly without even turning his head. Only when they were in his office did he bother to look at her, frowning, arms crossed, and his feet planted firmly a shoulders-width apart. "So are you going to tell me where you were for four hours yesterday?"
Hermione stared at a design on the cover of a book lying on his desk. "I was with Peren," she replied and waited, her hands clasped in front of her. He was silent, his body rigid, watching her. Hermione simply stood patiently for the inevitable questions. The bell on his desk broke the silence. "That would be Ginny."
"You're expecting her?"
Hermione looked up and shrugged. "She's my friend. Friends do things together talk, you know"
"Enough! Fine. Allow," he snarled. "This isn't over. I don't want you lying to me."
Her head lilted to the side as she sighed. "I wasn't hiding!" she implored, knowing that he'd be even more furious if he knew the truth. "I wondered where Peren went to at night, and she showed me." A sharp knock on the door gave her a moment reprieve. "You do know that I detest house-elf mistreatment, don't you?"
"Oh, really. You think I was unaware of your pathetic attempt with spew." Whoever was at the door knocked again. Severus waved his had dismissively in the direction of the door, wandlessly making the door open, and barked, "Enter."
Hermione was not pleased to see Draco Malfoy. "You may revise in the sitting room," Severus said and walked around his desk.
Draco smugly indicated for her to show him the way. Hermione glared at him, went up stairs and picked up a book to read, opening the book to the marker. He watched her, leaning casually against the bookshelf with his arms crossed. She kicked off her shoes so she could curl up on the sofa. Draco walked over and sat down next to her. Hermione turned to lean against the armrest with her knees bent so she could rest the book on them. He turned sideways, one arm on the back of the sofa.
She turned the page, wishing he'd stop staring at her. "What?" she finally asked.
"You're ignoring me. It's rude."
She sighed and starred at the book, forcing herself to concentrate. "I wasn't expecting you. Don't you have some revision to do elsewhere?"
"We could do some spell work," he offered as he angled his head to try to catch her eye.
She finally finished one paragraph. "I am not allowed a wand."
"We could practice wandless."
She exhaled and looked up at him, then back at her book. "I'm not able to do wandless."
"You're not really reading," he stated.
She looked up at him again. "Not with you jabbing away." She let the book slide down her thighs. "Why? What could you possibly want to talk about?"
He rested his head against his hand. "We could talk about class."
"Which one?" she asked, feigning interest as she turned the page.
"What interests you?" he asked.
"Magical flora and fauna, gossip regarding the interpersonal relationships of my classmates, hair and fashion trends of the teenage witch, Quidditch guys on brooms, and makeup tricks to make my lips and eyes look fuller," she said and started to chuckle. "You?"
"Personally, I like the female Quidditch players," he said with a smirk. He picked up a Potions journal Severus had been reading. "Besides, you don't wear makeup."
"I have, but only for special occasions," she replied, picking up her book.
Draco snickered actually snickered, lowering his head as if to conceal his derisive laugh behind the journal. Hermione bristled at the action, lifting the book and tried to tone him out. They sat in silence for a while, the only sounds in the room, the turning of a page or the snap and crackle from the fire.
"You like magical flowers," Draco said softly, shaking his head. "Who'd have thought?"
"I'm intrigued by them, all right," she said curtly, burying her nose in her book. "So why are you here, besides to annoy me?"
"What? Can't a guy just want to hang out with you? After all, you're used to hanging out with guys, aren't you?" he asked, still holding the journal open on his lap. "I thought you were best mates with Potter and Weasley. Heard from them lately?"
Hermione bristled and lowered her book. "No, and even if I did, I'd not tell you about it. You'd just go and tell your Master. So bugger off, Malfoy."
"Unfortunately for you I've agreed to keep an eye on you," he said and turned so he could prop his feet up on the coffee table.
"I don't need you keeping an eye on me, thank you very much, so you're free to go. Oh, and tell your father when you see him next that even his money can't buy my friendship."
This struck him; Draco's turned and glared at her. "My father wouldn't stoop so low."
"You'd like to think so," she replied, wishing he'd leave. "That's not what was said at the Halloween party. Even your master wanted to know how we were getting along." She thought of going up to the bedroom, but he'd probably follow her there.
"Of course the Dark Lord wanted to know how we are getting along because he wants to know if you're behaving yourself. You have a tendency to get mixed up in stuff you should've left well enough alone, and involve yourself on the wrong side of things. You don't have that privilege anymore this is his school, or haven't you noticed?"
Although his tone didn't have any of its normal bite it was condescending. "I am well aware of that, thank you," she replied tersely. "I am reminded of my precarious position on a daily basis."
Draco looked up. "I didn't mean... Merlin, you are a pain in the arse, you know that?" he asked with a roll of his eyes. "What's wrong with trying to get along, anyway? Why is it so difficult for you? It's not as if you have better options."
She ignored him, shifting slightly and returned her attention to her book.
"Why is this so hard for you?" he asked, closing the journal and holding it on his lap. She looked up at him quizzically, and he frowned. "Us. Why do you fight me all the time?" His frown deepened when all she did was raised her eyebrows at him at the ridiculous question. "I'm trying, damn it! I don't know what to do to get you to see that I'm trying."
Hermione set the marker in place and put her book aside. She stretched out her legs as she leaned forward and gently took his left hand. She tightened her grip as she shoved his sleeve up exposing the lower half of his Dark Mark. He tried to pull his hand free, but she had a good grip on him.
"Because of this! I know you don't mean any of it, Draco. You are only being nice to me because you've been told to." He jerked his hand away, and she smirked at him. "If it weren't for my situation here the fact that I am your Lord's captive you'd still be calling me a Mudblood and hexing me any time you could get away with it. That's why. Don't think I'm oblivious to reality. You don't like me anymore than I like you."
"You're wrong," he mumbled, barely audible.
"Pardon me? What was that?" she asked, sure that it was some snide remark.
"You were at least tolerable at Severus' house," he snapped, reaching for the journal that had fallen on the floor. He stood up and walked around the coffee table.
"Leaving?" she asked, hopefully.
"Looking for a better book," he snapped.
She turned back to her book.
"What are you reading?"
She looked up. "A wizard's account of World War II. Apparently, some wizards joined the armed services during the war."
"Mostly the Muggle-borns," Draco stated, sitting in the chair nearest her, "although there were some wizards who took an active role in the war. When they lived in Holland, the Pendlehursts smuggled Jewish wizards into their basement."
"I'm reading about a man who hid Jews in his attic," Hermione stated, now curious. "The Reeders had a home in Amersfoort, Holland in 1942. His parents hid Jews at the request of the Dutch resistance movement. Did you know the Pendlehursts?"
"No," Draco said, leaning forward to rest his arms on his legs. He stared at his hands. "Aunt Andromeda knew them. I just knew about it."
"You know this war has a lot of similarities to that one," she said brazenly.
He sat up sharply. "It's not the same at all!"
"Really? Then you should be the one revising your history. There are a lot of similarities; Death Eaters very much like the SS. A charismatic dictator bent on the genocide of people simply because of their bloodlines I'm surprised I'm not sporting a star or something on my chest. And the Muggle-born Registration Commission trials to prove who worthy to carry a wand, people being sent off to prison for having the wrong parents... just like what was done to the Jews. Nope, nothing in common at all."
He sat back, and a tick flickered in his cheeks as he regarded her through narrowed eyes.
"Do you really think that this war is so different? Do you really think that Hitler's ideals are any less twisted than your Master's? Are you really that blind, Draco?"
"I don't have to listen to this," he said, jumping up and turning to go.
"Deny it all you want you're a member of the wizarding Schutzstaffel, the Death Eaters are little more than the Dark Lord's SS. The Gestapo, secret state police, kept a close watch on activities," she said over her shoulder, "just like you and those Security wizards, MacCavish, Travers, VanHalal and Rowle, have been enlisted to keep a close watch on activities here at school and elicit new recruits. Amycus Carrow is trying to sway the students into accepting and using the Dark Arts, training up new recruits. The Daily Prophet and Alecto Carrow are promoting the Dark Lord's propaganda. The Death Eaters have taken over the government and the media, started segregating the population, segregated the school, just like Hitler did in Germany. Surely you know your European history, Draco?"
The room became very quiet. Hermione even began to think that maybe Draco had left while she'd been talking. She turned around, surprised to see Draco still standing in the room staring at her. "You're wrong," he said again.
"I happen to know that all the history books are still in the library, Draco. If you don't believe me, go read them yourself." She knew that she was taking a huge risk pushing him like this, but he couldn't deny the facts.
Draco turned and slowly walked out of the room. Hermione shrugged and turned back to her book.
~~~o0o~~~
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Where can I read the rest of this story? I love it so much!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
My comouter dies and I'm saving for a new laptop, hopefully by July. When I do star back on this it will be posted at ff.net. you can email me and I'll let you know when I start posting the new chapters. put together: workingforweekends @ yahoo .com
Don't give up! I love all your stories!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I'm not... gads, Rl has been a kick at me, and I had to focus on one story at a time. Consequences is written now and I'm trying to get it beta'ed, So I can go work on finishing this one. But thank you for the compliment and the thoughtfully sweet nudge.
please finish this
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Just waiting for chapters back from my betas. =:-)
One of the best things about this has been the way that Hermione has matured as her relationship with Severus has deepened. A fascinating and thoughtful story - thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. In this one I'm really going just for that - her growing up even under such adversay and darkness in school, they are going to need each other. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Thanks for the update! I have read several of your stories and am a fan of your writing. I'd like to see this one through!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
It will be. Given time and RL. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I adored the opening and had to come back to reread the story. I just realised though that I found Hermione here a bit irritating - she seems unable to pretend to go along to find out what's going on.She's still asking too many questions, not thinking enough.Maybe that's just me.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
She's startled, shocked, scared and thought that Severus would help her or let her go. He's in the Order after all, isn't he? and Yet instead of making her invisible or sending her somewhere (like Dumbledore did with Harry's trunk in HBP) he puts her under the Imperius. So, yes, she might be spinning, wondering why? I'm sorry if she seems a bit irritating, but even Harry and Ron find her to be irritating occasionally in canon. Thank you for reading, and I'm delighted that you enjoy thin one. Hugs for the review and pretty stars.
Response from kittyperry (Reviewer)
That is so well thought out that I'm convinced now that the irritation is right :) You are so fabulous a writer.
I like Hagrid's half Irish wolfhound-half dragon-like Patronus. It just fits him, doesn't it?Severus' plan to hide Cillian's mother and Mr. Bentley and her house-elf at Beauxbatons is brilliant! And as inconvenient as the timeing was, it finally offered the time and circumstances for Severus and Cillian to finally speak about Cillian coming over to the other side as Hermione has been urging him to do. I can see how what has been happening to his parents (on top of that Dark Revel) would tip Cillian's determination to work against Voldemort, especially since he finally know for sure that his best friend has been doing that for years. I wonder what Draco and were thinking as they watched Hermione?Happy birthday, bea! I hope it's been a wonderful day.Hugs, Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Hi Beth, Yes, well, I sort of saw his Patronus being a wolfhound, but since he loves dragons so much it's morphing - well, a continual stage of half-morph. But yes, I'm delighted that you think it's uniquely him. Yes, the timing was well, carefully done on my part. It all adds up, pusing him over to disgruntled Death Eater, and will make his 'loosening the shackles' on Hermione that much easier. But he's not a stick neck-in-noose kind of guy, it will take something to make him take a active 'put-himsel-out-there' action. You'll see. He's so used to being cutious. You'll find out what Draco's thoughts are soon, I promise. Goyle's - that will take a while unless you've picked up on the clues. There will be more clues coming, too. He has a crush - shhhhhhOh sweetie, thank you very much. It's been a odd birthday. Was taken out to breakfast. bought a dining room table with money from family. (no chairs as of yet. lol) and then had dinner out and was embarrassed by singing. But this from you means a lot. Thank you.Thank you for stickign with me and for all your wonderful reviews. Hug~
Looking forward to Cillian actually joining forces with Severus and Hermione. Curious as to what Draco and Goyle are thinking now. Excellent idea to hide Cillian's mom and Professor Grubbly-Plank at Beauxbatons! I just hope Hagrid can keep quiet. Thank you for updating!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Cillian is a stubborn one, but things are looking good. You'll find out soon what Draco is up to, Goyle, he will/has been tipping his hand a bit. lol You'll see soon enough with those two. Hense the name changes for Elsbeth and ol' Ben - so, even if Hagrid blabs, it's not a big deal. And Professor Grubbly-Plank was on a 'notice' list, not yet a target but getting attention. Now she's on 'loan' to Beauxbatons, she's out of the picture and not where A & A Carrow can be concerned about her spreading her 'lies' anymore. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Excellent news for Cillian, and can't wait to see Severus & Hermione continuing with their subtle (and not so) insurrection. >:D
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, as long as his mum and caretaker lay low in their new 'jobs' they will be fine. But then again, Ben, er Mr. Bently wants to contact Tanis and Riorden, so there may be a hiccup? Oh, yeah, Severus has been a bit obvious, hasn't he? And Hermione is not at all subtle, lol. More to come, I promise. Thank you for reading and for the review.
The L-twenty slips of parchment Muggles used, the tellerphone, and nothing smoking in the room cracked me up. I love it when references to Muggle things are described from the POV of a wizard who has little experience with the Muggle world. Good job!I don't know how much more Severus, Cillian, and Draco can take. The one bright spot in all the horrendous things the Dark Lord recently perpetrated on his followers is that I think Cillian and Draco might be moving closer to wanting to find some way to make sure Voldy doesn't win.Now I have to go and find out what else Cillian and Severus are going to talk about.Great chapter, bea, as always!!!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Beth, hello. How are you, doll?I'm delighted that you like how Cillian viewed the room. I was worried that the L20 would not pass through the admin checking, but it was vital that it be written in numbers and not written out as twenty. and yes, it was horribly fun playing with the stressed out guy, checking over his mum's room. lol I'm delighted you enjoyed it. I'm not at all sure how much they can take either, but with our guys returning to Hogwarts, at least they will be out of the scheming for a while. Not that life in school will be all that grand, and Hermione is becoming anxious to act, do something to help Harry and Ron, especially after seeing them. It will be a toss up who switces first, but there is a surprise 'switcher' or two in the list. One you should be able to guess/suss out. Cillian and Severus are now talking about a great many things, mostly clarifying (some you see - some you won't and some inplied) Thank you for the compliment. I always look forward to your opinions. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~
Can't wait for this to be updated again! Excellent work, I got through all 41 chapters in two days...definitely have me hooked!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
wow all of them in two days! I'm flattered. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
wow all of them in two days! I'm flattered. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ok. I've violated my own rule of not reading WIPs, and now I'm at the end of what you've written so far. I really like this story. The OCs are well characterized, and the plotline is well done. I especially like Cillian and that Severus has a good friend that he can trust. It's interesting to see a take on what was happening at Hogwarts that year. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you for giving my story a try. I promise you that I will not abandon this one or my other WIPs. I'm delighted that you like Cillian. He's basically Snape in my mind, who grew up in a different enviroment. And Belinda - you're supposed to hate her. lol This is my dark fic - Hogwarts under Voldemort and I used every line in DH there is as my basic fromat. (and added another Prophecy. Too bad Sybil had a cold.) More is coming, I promise. Thank you so much for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you for giving my story a try. I promise you that I will not abandon this one or my other WIPs. I'm delighted that you like Cillian. He's basically Snape in my mind, who grew up in a different enviroment. And Belinda - you're supposed to hate her. lol This is my dark fic - Hogwarts under Voldemort and I used every line in DH there is as my basic fromat. (and added another Prophecy. Too bad Sybil had a cold.) More is coming, I promise. Thank you so much for reading and for the review.
Cillian is such a tough nut to crack--such a hardened soul, so I'm enjoying these glimpses of hope and compassion and remorse that are sparingly shining through here and there-- saving his mother and Ol' Ben was a redemptive deed (yes, I've grown quite fond of Cillian;-) ) Love the tension and dilemmas of Severus & Hermione, and Draco having to confront his identity & reality again and again--lovely mounting of tension building and building
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I think Cillian just has so much responsibility toward Dianne and her family that he thinks it's best to be steadfast and survive. But yes, this with his mum is pushing him over. I'm glad you like him, he's actually a good guy caught up on the wrong side. I'm gad that you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I think Cillian just has so much responsibility toward Dianne and her family that he thinks it's best to be steadfast and survive. But yes, this with his mum is pushing him over. I'm glad you like him, he's actually a good guy caught up on the wrong side. I'm gad that you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and for the review.
It broke my heart that Severus had be an active participant in this Dark Revel (Voldemort is a real sicko), but I felt even worse for Hermione. This could bring their relationship to a screeching halt. I know I would have a difficult time getting past it if I were her. I was pretty happy with the way the night turned out for Miss Belinda. Her husband could have beat the shit out of her all night long, and it would have pleased me to no end.At least Severus was able to help Lucius and Narcissa. With the Sperm-Stagnation Draught she would not have conceived with Severus, but this way she will become pregnant and everybody except Severus, Lucius, and Narcissa will think it's Severus' child. That's making the best of a bad situation, I say.After the night Severus has had, I can't say I blame him for going back to the castle for the night... I think having to face Hermione right now would be more than he could stand. And now I think I'll just go cry with Hermione.You really know how to write heartbreak and angst!!!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, the Dark Lord is a sicko. He wants followers and a new generation of loyalists, and doesn't think about this will affect his Death Eaters. I hope you're going to be all right with how I have Hermione handle this situation. I don't want the relationship to crumble, and she has Dianne to talk to - both of them in the same boat, so to speak. In love with Death Eaters.Yes, poor Belinda. teeheheI'm glad you liked how clever Severus was and how kind to Narcissa. You're absolutely right in this. Commiserate away, for now, it's really hard, but there is a pragmatic and mature way to see this too - blame where it's due, and talk. No, Severus isn't ready to face her, but he will have to soon enough. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I hope you're going to be all right with how I have Hermione handle this situation. I will be fine with how you have Hermione handle it... she's head over heels in love with Severus (and he with her), but both of them know the sort of "game" they have to play until the time is right to rid the world of Voldemort. Just because two people are in love with each other doesn't mean they don't see the reality of their situation in war time. They will get through this, and so will I. :^)
This chapter is so well written, with both feet firmly planted in reality, that I just felt a bit overwhelmed. I know that Hermione still has her clever brain, and eventually she will see beyond what had happened to how it can be used against the Dark Lord—putting the blame on him and not Severus. Perhaps Voldemort has just handed her what she needs to turn Cilian to the Light.
I'll be on tenter hooks waiting to see what you have in mind for the next chapters. (((hugs)))
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, the Dark Lord is a sicko. He wants followers and a new generation of loyalists, and doesn't think about this will affect his Death Eaters. I hope you're going to be all right with how I have Hermione handle this situation. I don't want the relationship to crumble, and she has Dianne to talk to - both of them in the same boat, so to speak. In love with Death Eaters.Yes, poor Belinda. teeheheI'm glad you liked how clever Severus was and how kind to Narcissa. You're absolutely right in this. Commiserate away, for now, it's really hard, but there is a pragmatic and mature way to see this too - blame where it's due, and talk. No, Severus isn't ready to face her, but he will have to soon enough. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I hope you're going to be all right with how I have Hermione handle this situation. I will be fine with how you have Hermione handle it... she's head over heels in love with Severus (and he with her), but both of them know the sort of "game" they have to play until the time is right to rid the world of Voldemort. Just because two people are in love with each other doesn't mean they don't see the reality of their situation in war time. They will get through this, and so will I. :^)
This chapter is so well written, with both feet firmly planted in reality, that I just felt a bit overwhelmed. I know that Hermione still has her clever brain, and eventually she will see beyond what had happened to how it can be used against the Dark Lord—putting the blame on him and not Severus. Perhaps Voldemort has just handed her what she needs to turn Cilian to the Light.
I'll be on tenter hooks waiting to see what you have in mind for the next chapters. (((hugs)))
Oh, Severus! What a good book to metaphor for the story & chapter! Hermione already knew the position she was in, but now a new twist. Too sweet of Severus to help Narcissa and Lucius the way he has!
Mean of me I know, but I rather enjoyed Belinda's 'punishment' from her husband.
Is the next chapter going to be Cillian's turning point?
Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I'm glad you liked the book reference. Not that it will help Hermione, but in a way he's not lying to her either. Hermione knows what position they are both in. absolutely. I'm glad that you liked Severus' cunning solution for Narcissa, and his friendship can stay intact. Not mean at all, I wrote her to be hated and this is a punishment. lolNext chapter will - you'll see his childhood home. Where he grew up and a bit of his 'history/story' as well as see his brother, Marc. and Cillian will ahve a problem to cope with... hope that's not a horrible spoiler. But yes, he's turning, slowly and accepting. You'll see.Thank you for reading and for the review. I have the next one in the queue. Hugs
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I'm glad you liked the book reference. Not that it will help Hermione, but in a way he's not lying to her either. Hermione knows what position they are both in. absolutely. I'm glad that you liked Severus' cunning solution for Narcissa, and his friendship can stay intact. Not mean at all, I wrote her to be hated and this is a punishment. lolNext chapter will - you'll see his childhood home. Where he grew up and a bit of his 'history/story' as well as see his brother, Marc. and Cillian will ahve a problem to cope with... hope that's not a horrible spoiler. But yes, he's turning, slowly and accepting. You'll see.Thank you for reading and for the review. I have the next one in the queue. Hugs
Please hurry back! I can't get enough of this story!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
That is vcery fratifying to know, and I promise not to go far. I have the next in queue (Christmas at Cillian's) and as soon as it validates, I'll submit another, all right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
That is vcery fratifying to know, and I promise not to go far. I have the next in queue (Christmas at Cillian's) and as soon as it validates, I'll submit another, all right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
What a story!!! Thank you for this amazing chapter. So much is going on now, and I think Draco and Cillian are both close to the tipping point. I don't think it will take much more for Draco to change, but I do think Cillian will be a harder nut to crack. Lucius appears completely undone and close to madness, Narcissa is being tortured every night, and Draco had to stand there and watch as his own father further embarrass himself by begging his own son to do something— anything— to get the Dark Lord to favor him once more. As for Cillian, I think it's going to take something much more harrowing for him to risk changing sides. Still I do understand why Severus can't say anything to him now. Perhaps later when the situation gets worse, he will see an opportunity to bring Cillian over to the Light. So much depends on this, doesn't it?I'm fascinated by the presence of a ghost at Cravenweld House. With Severus brewing the potions for Marc and Sherrilyn in the basement, I'll bet Igraine will show herself. And if Hermione is with Severus when she does, maybe she will get a chance to talk to her and learn some things that will come in handy later on.I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. Yes, there is a lot happening, and much more to come. Draco is closer than Cillian. Cillian needs a little shove yet, something that will rock his earth and that will come, I assure you. Yes, Lucius is a bit undone, isn't he - but then in the movies (and yes, I'm using the way Jason protraid Lucius in DH as my mental picture) he was a wreck, wasn't he. Narcissa is being abused, although nightly? so-so - but frequently enough. Mostly she is being treated as a dominant (sick one at that) slave. Not that the Dark Lord follows the normal rules of the BDSM world - he sets his own rules, and she is helpless but to obey. and Yes, having to witness all of that and everything else going on in his childhood home is unnerving Draco - Home used to be a haven, a place to be pampered and loved. Not any more.Yes, you're right, there has to be something more dramatic, some elemnt of proof to what Hermione is saying to push him over. Something personal... and I've worked it out, so you'll see some 'breathe-into-the-paper sack' moment for him, as well as some personal crisis. Some need a big push to get them to act. I've had a few mention Igraine. Igraine is extremely shy and didn't become needed to the plot forwarding of the story. In reality where the island is isn't a big deal, at least in Hermione's part - it's to show you more about Cillian, and his duplicity. And if you've noticed, with the exception of the basement room, Hermione is kept out of the rooms Igraine haunts. She, Igraine, doesn't haunt the whole house, keeping to specific areas: her bedroom, the Lake View Room or Long Gallery (upstairs floor) which is directly over the Garden Room or the Long Salon (which is downstairs) - the room with the wicker furniture... which you'll see Cillian and Hermione in the Long Salon later.More is coming, and I'm getting the chapters cleaned up presentable. I hope to update soon, I have 40 ready-ish. Just a few corrections to be made. Thank you for reading and for the review, Beth. As laways, I love your insightful reviews. thank you for each and every one of them.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. Yes, there is a lot happening, and much more to come. Draco is closer than Cillian. Cillian needs a little shove yet, something that will rock his earth and that will come, I assure you. Yes, Lucius is a bit undone, isn't he - but then in the movies (and yes, I'm using the way Jason protraid Lucius in DH as my mental picture) he was a wreck, wasn't he. Narcissa is being abused, although nightly? so-so - but frequently enough. Mostly she is being treated as a dominant (sick one at that) slave. Not that the Dark Lord follows the normal rules of the BDSM world - he sets his own rules, and she is helpless but to obey. and Yes, having to witness all of that and everything else going on in his childhood home is unnerving Draco - Home used to be a haven, a place to be pampered and loved. Not any more.Yes, you're right, there has to be something more dramatic, some elemnt of proof to what Hermione is saying to push him over. Something personal... and I've worked it out, so you'll see some 'breathe-into-the-paper sack' moment for him, as well as some personal crisis. Some need a big push to get them to act. I've had a few mention Igraine. Igraine is extremely shy and didn't become needed to the plot forwarding of the story. In reality where the island is isn't a big deal, at least in Hermione's part - it's to show you more about Cillian, and his duplicity. And if you've noticed, with the exception of the basement room, Hermione is kept out of the rooms Igraine haunts. She, Igraine, doesn't haunt the whole house, keeping to specific areas: her bedroom, the Lake View Room or Long Gallery (upstairs floor) which is directly over the Garden Room or the Long Salon (which is downstairs) - the room with the wicker furniture... which you'll see Cillian and Hermione in the Long Salon later.More is coming, and I'm getting the chapters cleaned up presentable. I hope to update soon, I have 40 ready-ish. Just a few corrections to be made. Thank you for reading and for the review, Beth. As laways, I love your insightful reviews. thank you for each and every one of them.
I need not tell you what an amazing story this is. You have certainly kept me on my toes as I try and follow everthing that is happening. As always, I am looking forward to the next update. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story and that I can keep you on your toes. There is more coming, but I'm in the 'cleann up' beta part and hopefully will have it ready soon. Thank you so much for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story and that I can keep you on your toes. There is more coming, but I'm in the 'cleann up' beta part and hopefully will have it ready soon. Thank you so much for reading and for the review.
Thank you for the update! Great to see for sure that Cillian is willing to turn, but believes his best friend to be completely and totally loyal. I wonder what will be the revealing factor?If Cillian has visited his home since childhood, won't his sister know where it is and be able to access it?Looking forward to seeing what happens next, as well as to whom else Voldy bestows his latest lioness hunting trick upon!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
You are most welcome. Cillian is almost there, and has been (since Dianne is so worried about his turning) but yes, he really needs to know that Severus is too. Oh, I have a huge upheaval for Cillian coming. You'll see, and eye opener and self berating will happen... and Hermione's words will help him see clearly.
Belinda can't see the island because none of the women in the family know about it. It was Cillian's grandfather's hide-away, and he had a lady friend there. Cillian's grandfather showed it to Cillian ( can you say favorite - 'the one most like me' you'll hear him say at some point.) But as far as Bell is concerned the 'island' is a myth. you'll see.. The childhood home is not in the Lake District.
Oh you caught that did you. Well, lets see if you can guess who they are... Draco and ___ I'll give you a clue, he's Crabbe or Goyle, has lessons with her, and he's already protected Hermione twice, but not necessarily in a nice way. He was clever and cunning, and sly in how he did it, but the clue is he was there both times. The answer will not show it's self for a few chapters, sorry.
Thank you for reading and for the reivew. Hugs.
Thank you for reading and for the review. Thankyou
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
You are most welcome. Cillian is almost there, and has been (since Dianne is so worried about his turning) but yes, he really needs to know that Severus is too. Oh, I have a huge upheaval for Cillian coming. You'll see, and eye opener and self berating will happen... and Hermione's words will help him see clearly.
Belinda can't see the island because none of the women in the family know about it. It was Cillian's grandfather's hide-away, and he had a lady friend there. Cillian's grandfather showed it to Cillian ( can you say favorite - 'the one most like me' you'll hear him say at some point.) But as far as Bell is concerned the 'island' is a myth. you'll see.. The childhood home is not in the Lake District.
Oh you caught that did you. Well, lets see if you can guess who they are... Draco and ___ I'll give you a clue, he's Crabbe or Goyle, has lessons with her, and he's already protected Hermione twice, but not necessarily in a nice way. He was clever and cunning, and sly in how he did it, but the clue is he was there both times. The answer will not show it's self for a few chapters, sorry.
Thank you for reading and for the reivew. Hugs.
Thank you for reading and for the review. Thankyou
Ha! Voldie has given Severus and Cillian the perfect way of finding Hermione in an emergency. Top bloke! :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yep, he sure did. (and there are 2 more ... You'll see) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yep, he sure did. (and there are 2 more ... You'll see) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Harry needs to get that locket off. It's really screwing with his mind. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, he does - but they now have the sword. And yes, it was messing with his mind, I'm glad you realized that. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, he does - but they now have the sword. And yes, it was messing with his mind, I'm glad you realized that. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Sounds like the resistance is well organised. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, much more so than in the books. I'm glad you like it. Thank you for the review, sunny. Hugs~
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, much more so than in the books. I'm glad you like it. Thank you for the review, sunny. Hugs~
Wow! Hermione remembered what Severus said, and I hope she keeps after Cillian. This could be it! But now that we've met his girlfriend and her parents, I wonder if Dianne's fears are also holding him back - that Dianne doesn't want to be brave like Hermione. She and her parents could still keep hidden but she needs to let Cillian do the Severus thing. Go, Hermione!Ahem... does Voldy do something else to Belinda and Bellatrix now that he has seen Hermione's memory of that night?Thank you for updating!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
JuneW, you are right on quite a few of your assessments, only thing is that Dianne’s fears are more to the fact that if the Dark Lord found out, he’d kill Cillian, and then her parents would be trapped forever on the island. She can pass through the barrier, but they cannot. And if she left she could be spotted, arrested and then they’d be stuck without anyone to aide them. It’s a horrible situation to be in. But yes, her fears are holding him back. And Cillian suspects that Severus is secretly on the other side, but he’s still unsure and afraid to ask. Turning turncoat is not an easy thing, especially when your leader is a very accomplished Legilimens. You’ll see more of this inner conflict brought to test in the next chapter. Sorry, a bit of a spoiler.
Oh, as for Belinda and Bellatrix, maybe yes or maybe no, hard to say what frame of mind the Dark Lord will be in. In a way he was pleased with her, and that her slipping away helped unsettle Harry. Harry was greatly agitated and the Dark Lord was able to give Harry all sorts of ‘information’ some even fabricated. So he might let them go, although Belinda has serious injuries. I strongly hinted at internal injuries as well as bruises. The Dark Lord doesn’t like losing his prized possessions, especially after making a grand demonstration that same night.
You are most welcome for the update. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
JuneW, you are right on quite a few of your assessments, only thing is that Dianne’s fears are more to the fact that if the Dark Lord found out, he’d kill Cillian, and then her parents would be trapped forever on the island. She can pass through the barrier, but they cannot. And if she left she could be spotted, arrested and then they’d be stuck without anyone to aide them. It’s a horrible situation to be in. But yes, her fears are holding him back. And Cillian suspects that Severus is secretly on the other side, but he’s still unsure and afraid to ask. Turning turncoat is not an easy thing, especially when your leader is a very accomplished Legilimens. You’ll see more of this inner conflict brought to test in the next chapter. Sorry, a bit of a spoiler.
Oh, as for Belinda and Bellatrix, maybe yes or maybe no, hard to say what frame of mind the Dark Lord will be in. In a way he was pleased with her, and that her slipping away helped unsettle Harry. Harry was greatly agitated and the Dark Lord was able to give Harry all sorts of ‘information’ some even fabricated. So he might let them go, although Belinda has serious injuries. I strongly hinted at internal injuries as well as bruises. The Dark Lord doesn’t like losing his prized possessions, especially after making a grand demonstration that same night.
You are most welcome for the update. Thank you for reading and for the review.
OMG! I thought Hermione's mind was going to split wide open with the Dard Lord's intrusions into her memories. For good or ill, she, Severus, and Cillian are bound together.I like Dianna and her parents. It's going to be interesting to see how Cillian comes to terms with the fact that he is going to have to change his allegience. The Dark Lord would destroy everything he holds dear, and I don't believe Cillian will allow that to happen.Bellatrix and Belinda seem to "be in a bind" of their own. And of their own making. I can't wait to see what's next in store for these two crazy witches.Derwent Isle is a beautiful place, and it's a very useful "hideout" to have as a retreat if it's needed. I think it will play an important role in future events.Thank you for yet another wonderful and clue-filled update!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Brayer, Yes, the Dark Lord is not as gentle in his intrusion as Severus had been. He forces his way in, while Severus can slip in and look, much like Dumbledore could do. and Yes, the three of them are connected… and there will be two more. One volunteered, to make it his ‘mission to watch the Mudblood’ and one summoned and told he was to – you’ll see whom soon enough. (I bet you can guess who if you tried. They have both tried to ‘save’ Hermione, in their own way, last term.)
I’m delighted that you liked Dianne and her parents. Unfortunately, once Hermione leaves the island for school, you’ll only see mention of them until after the war.
As for Belinda and Bellatrix, you’ll see what Hermione/Severus or Draco sees, which won’t be much. I really didn’t want to type the torture. It’s hard to say what the Dark Lord will do. In a way he was pleased with Hermione’s visions and her confession, he likes that she doesn’t lie to him and offers herself up freely (or so he thinks) and that her slipping away helped unsettle Harry. Harry was greatly agitated and the Dark Lord was able to give Harry all sorts of ‘information’ some even fabricated. So he might let Bellatrix go – after all she was just an opportunist. Belinda, on the other hand, has serious injuries. I strongly hinted at internal injuries as well as bruises. The Dark Lord doesn’t like losing his prized possessions, especially after making a grand demonstration that same night, but she’s likely to simply remained chained beside him for a while. I dunno. Humiliation works on the prideful.
Yes, the Lake District is and I have spent a lot of time on Google Earth and on the internet looking at it. Proulxes took her family there for me to take pictures and sent me long descriptions. Thanks to her, I can accurately describe the village and lake. Her hubby even like the fact that I asked her to pick a pub that Severus was likely to eat at – and he really appreciated the fact that he got to do the pub search. Bless him. If I ever get to go to England it’s one of the places I sooo want to see. The idea that an island could be magically hidden was fun to play with as well. I’m delighted that it worked for you. It may come up, it may not. I needed a place for her to ‘get away to’ with Severus, and it was going to be a romantic retreat. lol
You are most welcome for the update. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Brayer, Yes, the Dark Lord is not as gentle in his intrusion as Severus had been. He forces his way in, while Severus can slip in and look, much like Dumbledore could do. and Yes, the three of them are connected… and there will be two more. One volunteered, to make it his ‘mission to watch the Mudblood’ and one summoned and told he was to – you’ll see whom soon enough. (I bet you can guess who if you tried. They have both tried to ‘save’ Hermione, in their own way, last term.)
I’m delighted that you liked Dianne and her parents. Unfortunately, once Hermione leaves the island for school, you’ll only see mention of them until after the war.
As for Belinda and Bellatrix, you’ll see what Hermione/Severus or Draco sees, which won’t be much. I really didn’t want to type the torture. It’s hard to say what the Dark Lord will do. In a way he was pleased with Hermione’s visions and her confession, he likes that she doesn’t lie to him and offers herself up freely (or so he thinks) and that her slipping away helped unsettle Harry. Harry was greatly agitated and the Dark Lord was able to give Harry all sorts of ‘information’ some even fabricated. So he might let Bellatrix go – after all she was just an opportunist. Belinda, on the other hand, has serious injuries. I strongly hinted at internal injuries as well as bruises. The Dark Lord doesn’t like losing his prized possessions, especially after making a grand demonstration that same night, but she’s likely to simply remained chained beside him for a while. I dunno. Humiliation works on the prideful.
Yes, the Lake District is and I have spent a lot of time on Google Earth and on the internet looking at it. Proulxes took her family there for me to take pictures and sent me long descriptions. Thanks to her, I can accurately describe the village and lake. Her hubby even like the fact that I asked her to pick a pub that Severus was likely to eat at – and he really appreciated the fact that he got to do the pub search. Bless him. If I ever get to go to England it’s one of the places I sooo want to see. The idea that an island could be magically hidden was fun to play with as well. I’m delighted that it worked for you. It may come up, it may not. I needed a place for her to ‘get away to’ with Severus, and it was going to be a romantic retreat. lol
You are most welcome for the update. Thank you for reading and for the review.
My! Hermione took quite a risk to push Cillian so far. You've done a great job in portraying Cillian's inner conflict.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes she did, but then she promised Seveurs she would help turn him to the good side. I'm so glad you liked Cillian's darker side, and his innerconflicts. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes she did, but then she promised Seveurs she would help turn him to the good side. I'm so glad you liked Cillian's darker side, and his innerconflicts. Thank you for reading and for the review.