Broken
potterbrat180 Reviews | 7.8/10 (180 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )
Draco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
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Member Since 2007 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 28 | 176 Reviews Written | 444 Review Responses
I've been posting on here for a while and have decided to update my profile. I'm 30ish... I have a husband... I have two daughters... and other various creatures living at my house. My real life consists of work, fanfiction (which sometimes supercedes work), and chasing after my teen and tween.
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Reviews for Broken
*Cringe* Gyne exam by Draco?! Yikes! So now we know who screamed and why. I just hope she hasn't been impregnated too. (I know, the possibility is there. But still...)Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. Continue the good work... Cheers!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Like Hermione said -- Draco is a Healer. I thought about letting someone else doing it, I just thought it would be fun to put Draco up to the task. I'm working on chapter 8 right now. I'm going to let Hermione and Draco have a little private talk about the examination. Snape doesn't have to know everything, does he?... LOL!
Response from mmesnape (Reviewer)
Geez, if Snape got to know everything... *shakes head* I'm happy that Draco and Hermione get to talk without any witnesses. I'm just curious to see what the conversation will include. Hermione will most probably want Lucius' 'jewels' on a platter... I'm guessing here. If she doesn't get him, Draco will. *rubs hands enthusiastically* This should make some good reading...
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think you might be satisfied with the turn of events. Rest asured, I will NOT abandon this story. It's my first fic, so I'm rather attached to it. Thank you again for the review.
Well, I'm not the biggest HG/DM shipper, but you do tell a great tale. I am impressed how you got my attion and held it. Please let me know when you update!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you so much. That's exactly how I feel about HG/SS fics. I used to hate them, but the more I read, the more I loved. I appreciate your taking the time out. I am working on chapter 8 right now. I have the best beta in the world, so I usually don't have to wait very long for a return.
Such a thrilling story so far, cant wait to read the rest. (And I will, its just too late now and I am exhausted)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I have Chapter 7 off to my beta, so this story is running smoothly.
This is a fascinating story.? I can't wait to see where you take it.?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I have finished it in my head. I don't think you'll be dissapointed.
Whoa! who's screaming?? And what about? Oooo, a cliffy to think about... I hope we will get the answer soon? Very soon? Very, very soon perhaps? *grin*Great job, looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm so glad you like it. I should have the next one up this week. I have a fantastic beta, so outlook is good. Thank you so much for the review.
AHH! a cliff... a cliff!!! Evil author....or maybe very clever author? Great chapter... Hermione's scream filled the castle I'm guessing... me thinks she knows why an exam is needed!~*~SeleneAngel~*~
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Very clever reader. Another gold star for you, SeleneAngel! I shall have another chapter up by the weekend. I'm also working on a one-shot for Hermione and Snape. It's hard to come up with something that hasn't been done before.
Wow. A different side of Snape to have faith in Harry. I hope that Ginny will be alright while Harry is away. Looking forward to an update.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have sent the next chapter to my beta. She is really quick, so hopefully you'll have it this week. There will always be bad blood between Snape and Harry. They don't like each other and they never will. But they trust each other. Thank you so much for the review.
Excellent read! I hope you can update soon.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I've already sent the next chapter to my beta and I'm working on chapter 7. I try to get at least 2 chapters a week posted.
Why didn't anyone check out Hermione to see if the rape did damage?This is an interesting story... you have the Hermione/Draco situation on top of the Snape/Granger tension... are Snape and Hermione going to be friends then?(Okay silly question... nevermind it)Thanks for sharing!~*~SeleneAngel~*~
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
YEA!!! You get a gold star! There are reasons why no one has checked her out yet. You will understand in the next couple of chapters. Another problem has to be taken care of first. Thank you so much for the review.
Response from seleneangel (Reviewer)
yay! A golden star!!! lol... thanks.
This is such a great chapter... 
I like the uncertainty of the Lucius/Hermione incident. You get a feeling of knowing what happend but then again is seems as if somthing is missing...What curse did Lucius use and what are the consequences ? Why is Severus feeling soft for the know-it-all Hermione? Those are just some of the unanswered questions! Keep up the great and brilliant work.Hugs Carmille 
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
The answer to the curse is coming up in chapter 3, which is being beta'd right now. The answers to exactly what happened to Hermione and why Snape is so soft are coming up in later chapters. I love suspense. Thank you SO much for the kind words. I'm inspired!
I must say it's a dark beginning. Really nice!!! LOLI do hope Hermione will be all right, though.Hugs Carmille
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, Hermione will have a lot to endure, but she's strong. Thank you for the review.
Very dark, angsty beginning. That was quite the nasty curse Voldemort threw at Lucius!
I am looking forward to reading more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have some corrections to make, but I should have the next 2 chapters up soon. Thanks for the review.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have some corrections to make, but I should have the next 2 chapters up soon. Thanks for the review.
loving the story! like the new generation of malfoy, weasley, snape & potter..
love the cute ending.. love hermione/draco, ginny/harry, the other are one big family, even their kids & grandkids are family, too. overall love the story to pieces...
happy that lucius end his life.. how could he did that to his own son & hermione.. u wrote this chapter beautifully..
saying it's not so.. that draco rape hermione... why didn't he say something earlier!!!
love happy chapie.. love that remus & hermione's mom are dating...
draco is so evil, at the end.. what did lucius meant?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. Sorry. I started to miss the old Draco for a while.
what a shocking cliffie!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I had to go back and re-read it to know what you're referring to. I love cliffies!
touching chapie.. love draco's speech..
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ha-ha!! I appreciate it.
love reading scene between severus & the headmaster..
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I've always liked their relationship. Thank you for the review.
severus tell hermione the truth at the end.. love the details..
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. Wow, I wrote this about 4 years ago–my first fic!! It makes me smile to see that it's still being read.
what a wonderful story! Had me laughing and crying from laughing...keep up the good work!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I appreciate the review.~potterbrat~
Anonymous
hej!
i was nothing but giggling throughout the whole chapter! it really was amazing and sweet and ...
hoping to hear of you soon,
yours, veronika
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I've got 2 new fics in the works. One is called Tale of Two Fathers. It's an SS/HG fic, and the other is a H/G called Debt to No One. It shouldn't be long before I have the first chapter of these put up.
Ginny on bedrest again and striking back with emotional invitations! J/K...Well back! I can't wait for the finish of this story...though I'll miss it.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. I appreciate that. I have loved writing it and I've loved getting positive reviews. Thank you for posting.