Sleeping Beauty
Chapter 4 of 27
potterbratDraco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
A/N: Thank you again to my wonderful betas, Juliannanight and RobisonRocket!
Sleeping Beauty
Chapter 4
Hermione made her way down to the hospital wing at the same time Madam Pomfrey was leaving.
Madam Pomfrey gave Hermione a sad smile, which Hermione returned. "How is he?" The nurse smiled again and said softly, "He'll be alright. He's sleeping very peacefully right now. He should be up and about in a couple of days."
"A couple of days? What do you mean, 'a couple of days'? What's the matter with him? If he's just sleeping, he should be up in a few hours, shouldn't he?" Hermione was in a state of shock.
"Oh, it will take at least a couple of days in order for his magic to be replenished. Mr. Malfoy is a pureblood wizard, Miss Granger. The hit he took, although not fatal, was very powerful."
Hermione nodded her head and asked, "Madam Pomfrey, may I see him? I won't disturb him. I just -- I need to see him."
"Of course you may see him. You won't bother him. He won't wake until his mind is ready."
"Thank you, Madam Pomfrey. I hope everything goes well with your sister."
"Thank you, dear. She'll be fine. She just got into a nasty bit of Bubotuber pus. I should be back by the start of term. Take care of yourself, Miss Granger."
Hermione entered the room quietly. She looked around the room to see if there was anything out of the ordinary to contradict what Madam Pomfrey had said. There weren't empty potion bottles around his bed. There were no vials littering the trash can. There was only Draco.
She stood stock still for a moment. Slowly, she walked over and took the chair next to his bed. Gone was the sneer that was usually in place even though they were friends now. Gone was the look of superiority that he had held in their school days. Also gone was the laughter in his face and the light in his eyes that she had grown to adore in their recent years. Hermione sighed sadly and whispered, "Oh, Malfoy, what I wouldn't give to see that superior sneer that you once graced us with."
"I can't call you Malfoy now, can I? No. You stopped being Malfoy the second you stepped between your father and me. If I were being honest with myself, you stopped being Malfoy the day you came over to our side. When you wake up, we'll talk. I need to understand what motivated you to do what you did."
"You have to be alright, Draco. You have to be. You have to wake up and be alright so I can hit you for putting your life in danger just for me. You knew what Lucius was capable of. Why would you take that curse? You have to wake up because I need answers. You know me, 'little miss know-it-all.' I have to know what he did to you -- what he tried to do to me."
Hermione didn't realize when the tears had started to pour out of her, but when she did, she couldn't stop them.
Hermione was being shaken. "No. Not again. Please."
"Miss Granger, you need to wake up. Come now. You need to lie down properly so you can get some rest. This has been a most stressful day for you."
Hermione raised her head and looked around. She had cried herself to sleep, and her head was lying on the mattress next to Draco. She didn't even remember taking his hand, but she was holding it with her fingers interlaced with his. She didn't let go immediately as Professor Snape's face came into focus.
"Professor, I don't want to leave him. I need to be here when he wakes up. Can't I stay?"
Snape eyed her for a moment and then nodded. "You may sleep in the empty cot next to Draco." When Hermione didn't move immediately, Snape looked at her questioningly. His eyes darted to their clasped hands and then back to her. "Miss Granger, may I ask you something? Why did you refer to Mr. Malfoy by his given name? I understand, until recently, that you and Draco were still on a surname basis. I know it's trivial and somewhat juvenile that I would be interested, but I am curious."
Hermione stared directly into the professor's eyes and answered, "After everything we have been through together, it would be trivial and juvenile for me to continue to call him 'Malfoy.' It's just right, isn't it? It's just seems right for me to call him by his name."
Snape regarded her for a moment and then nodded. "Indeed. Good night, Miss Granger." Then he swept out of the room.
Getting into her own bed, Hermione sighed. Speaking to an absent Professor Snape, she muttered, "And one day, Professor, perhaps you could call me 'Hermione.' After all, you've seen me naked."
Just outside the entrance to the hospital wing, a very tired Professor Snape cursed himself for actually blushing at the young woman's words. What am I...a first-year? With his scowl properly in place, he left the corridor and headed to his own quarters. A nice glass of Firewhiskey was in order. He needed to prepare for what tomorrow would bring.
Sometime during the night, Draco stirred and opened his eyes. He looked around him and felt a wave of relief hit him when he realized he was at Hogwarts. As he replayed the events of the previous day, his mind raced. He heard a muffled cry and turned to see Hermione asleep in the cot next to him. Instead of waking her, he turned his head back to stare at the ceiling.
Draco almost woke her, but thought better of it. She would wake soon enough, and when she did, he would have to tell her everything. He knew this wasn't going to be easy; he just hoped she wouldn't hate him. "Oh, bugger. What have you done?" Draco was speaking to himself.
At the sound of Draco's voice, Hermione woke with a start. She looked around her, and her eyes landed on the boy in the cot next to her. It took a moment for her to realize that he had his eyes open, staring at the ceiling. As she looked closer, she noticed that he had a single tear falling from the corner of his eye into his hairline.
Before Hermione could react to his waking, Draco spoke. "There's something... something I have to tell you. You need to know... " Hermione finally snapped out of her daze.
"No, Draco. Shh! Don't talk. I need to get the Headmaster and Professor Snape."
"Granger, wait... "
"I will just be a moment. I can Floo call them."
"But, I have to tell you something important."
"It can wait."
"Damn it, Hermione. Just listen to me." Hermione stopped in her tracks. In all the years she'd know him, he'd never used her first name.
"You just called me Hermione." It wasn't a question.
Draco looked at her, confused. "I had to get your attention. Besides... " He managed a slight smirk. "You called me Draco earlier. I heard you."
Hermione schooled her features. "Yes. Well, you saved my life. I couldn't very well keep calling you by your surname." Hermione looked at her hands and added, "I owe you my life."
"You don't owe me anything. I, however, owe you an apology, and I also owe you an explanation."
"You want to apologize for saving my life?" Hermione was appalled.
"No, no. You see, there's more." Draco tried to sit up, but he was very weak.
"No. Lie back down. I really need to get Professor Snape."
"I'm fine. I'm just a little tired. I really need to tell you something important." Draco sat up and turned to look at Hermione. "Do you have your wand? We need some light in here."
Hermione hesitated for a moment and spoke softly. "Draco, your father broke our wands when he attacked us."
Draco sighed. "No problem, this might be easier to say in the dark. It's about the spell he used. I know what the spell was, Hermione. I think I knew what it was going to be even before he cast it."
"Are you sure we don't need the professors?" Hermione was beginning to get nervous and impatient. She wanted to know what it was, but at the same time, she was terrified to find out.
"No. Just let me finish this, please. I may not have the nerve to tell you later."
"Okay. But budge over, will you?"
Draco furrowed his brow at her, but did as she asked. Hermione sat down on the edge of the bed, facing him.
Draco didn't comment on this sudden move. "The curse Lucius used on you is an ancient curse that was once used by some of the oldest pureblood wizards. They don't use it anymore. It is a curse that binds a house-elf."
Hermione was a very captivated audience. Her eyes widened at the thought of a house-elf being hit with such a curse. Then it struck her as odd. "Why is it not being used anymore?"
"They don't use it anymore because most house-elves are already bound to a family."
"What about the ones who are free, like Dobby?
Draco hid a wince at the thought of his childhood friend. Losing Dobby still hurt. "Actually, I was getting to that. Believe it or not, the Department for Control of Magical Creatures lobbied against this practice because was too barbaric."
"I remember hearing Lucius' reaction to your campaign against the mistreatment of house-elves. He mentioned something about wishing he could turn you into a house-elf. When he sent the curse at you, I knew what it was the second I saw it come out of his wand. He wanted to turn you into his house-elf, Hermione."
Hermione had gone pale. "He wanted to make me his slave? And you knew?" Hermione stood abruptly from the bed. She turned toward the window and just gazed out, lost in thought.
"Hermione, I'm sorry. I know this upsets you, but I couldn't let him do that to you. That's why I jumped on you. That's why we are in the situation we are in now."
Hermione rounded on him. "What do you mean we? The curse hit you. Now you're his slave -- because of me!" Tears were streaming down from her eyes now, but she didn't have the strength to wipe them away.
"No, Hermione. We are in this together. Don't you get it? I didn't take the curse. We took it together. However, the circumstances are not the same."
"What do you mean? Am I your slave now? Or do we both belong to your father?"
"We don't belong to anyone except each other. That's the other part of this being an ancient curse. When it's cast on two humans, it binds them together. It was sometimes used for arranged marriages to make sure the spouses stayed faithful to one another."
"You mean to tell me that you and I are slaves to each other?" Hermione sat down hard. She couldn't believe what was happening.
"We aren't slaves to anyone, Hermione. Didn't you listen to what I just said? The curse was used for arranged marriages."
"So we're... I mean, you and I are... married?"
Draco didn't answer her because at that moment, the door banged open, and they were greeted by two very worried men.
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180 Reviews | 7.8/10 Average
Great story, very well thought out. i do love the grandchildren at the end!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
LOL!! I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read. No, really, I had fun revisiting this story. It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.
You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before. Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
And, there it is!!! I knew you'd get there. That's okay. I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.
I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing her. We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.
I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise. I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Lucious, to me, is the weakest link. I actually like Lucius. I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power. But, Lucius was also quite mad here. I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did. Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?
Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon. He's less broken here.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken. Snape is the strongest character in HP. Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.
I really liked your version of Petunia. She seemed almost likable and very regretful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote. I know she had to have regrets. I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily. I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had. That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.
I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. I've gone back and read this and cringe a little. It was necessary at the time, though. Nobody was to know what she'd been through. She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.
Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco. Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ron will always be one of my favorite characters. He reminds me so much of my older brother. He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place. I think he was very clever, even in canon. I just don't think he really ever got the chance. He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.
I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry. Harry is right, no one would believe him.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev. But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.
Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love him. I need to write another hg/dm story.
I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!
Looking grim. I just love Draco as a good guy. Must be a phase I'm going through.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're so crazy. I know you've read this. However, I appreciate your second glance. I hope you still like it after all this time. Remember that tis was my first one.
Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss. I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm a lover... not a fighter. I don't know how to write really great war scenes. It needed to be clean. But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy. It's always been Draco and Hermione. I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.
I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think he finally got some nerve in DH. But, Harry had to grow up at some point. Right? Right?
This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic. I believe this one is the nicest one yet. Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~
Fantastic story! I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
First of all, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question: This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips. I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house. I view it as being a rather large place. But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped. Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~
Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)
Okay :) Makes sense. Great job for a first story!
Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~
That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you very much. Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart. I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~
Excellent story!
Loved the way you developed the characters through their years. Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.
Well done on such a brilliant story. I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you!! I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors. Bless them. Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him. Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know. I think JKR did that on purpose. It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be. I just love him. Thanks again!!~potterbrat~
Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!
OMG! I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!
Totally gripped by this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken. This was my first fanfic and it's my baby. I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind. I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.
Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!! Though you could always expand... wink, winkSuch a GREAT story. I feel content. Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I love writing Ron. He's so goofy and so much fun to write. I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy. So I gave him a protective edge. There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone.
Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)
I totally agree. And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone. And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover. Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron. Get a tissue.