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Broken Chapter 6: Love from Friends
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Broken

1: Punishment for a Malfoy

2: Memories

3: The Musings of Dumbledore

4: Sleeping Beauty

5: Promises

6: Love from Friends

7: A Witch's Intuition

8: All That Glitters

9: Silence

10: It's Over

11: Lily's Legacy

12: Snape's Confession

13: The Joy of the Father

14: Memories on Hold

15: Slytherins!

16: Hermione's Heartache

17: A Stroll in the Moonlight

18: Learning to Live Again

19: Violet

20: Pensieve Tales

21: Madness

22: The Aftermath

23: Oh, Brother

24: A House-Elf's Story

25: Cordially Invited

26: Daddy's Girl

27: White Roses -- Epilogue

Love from Friends

Broken

Chapter 6 of 27

potterbrat

Draco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Malfoy Manor 67,874 Words 27 Chapters Complete
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A/N I would like to thank my beta, RobisonRocket for her help with this story. She is the BOMB!! I also want to thank all the people who have reviewed so far. I really appreciate the interest you are taking in this story. You should like this chapter and the cliffy at the end.

Love from Friends

Chapter 6

As soon as Harry and Snape emerged from Dumbledore's chamber, all four men made their way down to the hospital wing. When they rounded the corner, and the door to the hospital wing was in sight, Harry and Ron broke into a run. Regardless of the early morning hour, they burst through the door.

As soon as the door opened, light penetrated the room. Draco only got a glance at Hermione's face before her friends got to her.

"Hermione!" Ron was the first one to her. Hermione spun around and wrapped her arms around her friend. Not waiting for them to let go, Harry stepped in and wrapped his arms around both of them. Hermione couldn't speak. This was exactly what she needed.

Entering the room, Dumbledore gave Snape a knowing glance that clearly stated, "I told you so." Snape rolled his eyes accordingly. They waited for the emotions to die down before anyone spoke.

Ron pulled back and looked at her. "Is that what that bastard did to you, Hermione? I swear I'm going to kill him." There was no venom in Ron's voice, just honesty, which seemed more frightening.

Hermione just nodded and pulled away from her best friends. Although she was still crying, she gave them a genuine smile. "You two... have... no idea... how happy... I am... to see... you." Hermione sat down and buried her face in her hands. She shook with suppressed sobs.

Clearing his throat, Dumbledore spoke up. "Ah. I see you are awake, Mr. Malfoy." Snape jerked his head in Draco's direction. He was so caught up in the scene before him that he didn't even notice that Draco had awoken. He rushed over to Draco's side. "How are you feeling, Draco?"

But Draco was staring at Hermione. It had been so dark in the room that he couldn't see her before. "I'm fine, Severus. I'm just a little weak. I want to see what he did. Hermione, I want to see your face."

Hermione raised her head and looked at him. Draco winced and said softly, "I'm sorry. I'm so sorry."

Hermione gave Draco a weak smile. "You know it's not your fault."

Snape looked somberly at Draco. "No, it's not your fault. Draco, we need discuss... things."

"I don't really remember much."

Snape furrowed his brows. "Miss Granger seems to be missing some of her memories as well. I performed Legilimency on her, and there is a hole in her memories. I wonder... "

"Go ahead. I don't have anything to hide from you. It would be easier than trying to explain things."

Snape turned to the headmaster, who gave him a nod. That was all the encouragement he needed. Snape looked into Draco's eyes and then entered his mind.

Draco wasn't as generous with his memories as Hermione was. Snape saw, from Draco's perspective, the same memories that he had seen in Hermione's mind. When he came to the moment of the curse, he got quite a shock.

Snape pulled himself out of Draco's mind and exchanged a look with his godson. "Well, the two of you seem to be missing the same memories. I'm not surprised, actually. I had a feeling that Lucius did something, but I don't really understand why. Why would he not want you to remember?"

As Snape sat in thought, something clicked with Ron. "Hermione... what, exactly, did Lucius Malfoy do to you? What is so bad that he didn't want either one of you to remember it?"

Hermione looked surprised by the question. "Well. I don't know. Obviously, I can't remember. All I know is that he tried to send a curse at me that would turn me into his slave."

Ron and Harry both drew an audible breath, but Snape was in complete shock. "You mean you know what he did? Miss Granger, do you understand the consequences of Lucius' actions? You and Draco are bound."

"WHAT?" Ron yelled in outrage.

Harry looked at Snape. "What are you talking about, Snape?"

Draco had had enough. "Will you all stop shouting? I'm not going to explain things in detail because I've already done that once this morning. I'll give you the gist of things though, with Hermione's permission."

Draco glanced at Hermione, who nodded in affirmation. Ron and Harry exchanged a look at the mention of Hermione's first name, but didn't say anything.

"Alright, there is a lot in between, but in the end, Hermione and I... um... we're married – sort of. My father used the binding curse for a house-elf."

Ron paled. "You mean to tell me that your father used Necto Infinitas?"

Everyone gaped at Ron except for Dumbledore and Draco. Draco and Ron shared an understanding look.

Hermione was visibly shaken. "Ron, how do you know what that means?" Before Ron could answer her, Draco did. "He knows because he's a pureblood."

"My great-great uncle had an arranged marriage. My mum told me. I just don't understand why Lucius would want to hit Hermione with it."

"That's an easy one, Weasley. He would want to physically harm her whilst he psychologically harmed her. It was his way of being clever." Draco spoke with obvious discust.

Harry's eyes were darting from Draco to Ron. "Hang on. What is this Nito Infito?"

"Not 'Nito Infito.' It's Necto Infinitas. I'm surprised that you don't know what it is, seeing how close you are with MY house-elf." Draco tried to keep the bitterness at bay. "It means eternally bound."

The room was silent for a moment. Harry walked over to Hermione and put his arm around her. She buried her face in his neck, but didn't cry. Ron came over and put his hand on her back. "Hermione, we're here for you. You know that. You don't have to be alone. No matter what happens, we'll always be here for you. We're your family."

At Ron's words, Hermione did start to cry. Harry wrapped his arms tighter around her, but didn't say anything. He just made soft shushing noises and rocked her a little.

"Oh, this is so sweet." Snape was back in prime form. "I think what Miss Granger needs is a nice hot bath and an examination. She and Draco need to get hidden as soon as they can."

Harry and Ron both turned angry glares at Snape, ready to protest.

Dumbledore raised his hand, and the room went silent. "Miss Granger, you and Mr. Malfoy will need some time to talk things over. I'm sure you can come to some sort of arrangement. For the meantime, Harry has kindly offered for the two of you to stay in the rooms of the Order's headquarters. I think, as Professor Snape suggested, it would be best if you could get there immediately. I know that Mrs. Potter has to stay in bed, but perhaps she could give you an examination whilst you are there."

Hermione gave Dumbledore a strange look. "What is this business about an examination? I told you that I'm fine. Professor Snape healed my wounds when he found me. I would like a shower though. And I'm sure you'd like your robes back, Professor Snape."

Professor Snape exchanged a very confused look with Dumbledore.

"Miss Granger, you do understand why you need to be examined, don't you? After what Lucius did to you... don't you remember?"

The look of confusion on Hermione's face was all the answer he needed. He would speak with her about it in private. "You and Draco need to get going."

"We will. I just need to go to the bathroom. I'll be right out."

As soon as door to the bathroom closed, Snape turned to Dumbledore. "She acts like nothing happened. But, when I found her... she must know."

"Perhaps she blocked it out, Severus."

At that moment, Dobby the house-elf popped into the room.

"Dobby!" Harry and Draco both shouted together.

"Dobby is sorry, sir. But Harry Potter must come now. Harry Potter's Ginny is having a baby."

Harry paled. "I have to go." Harry was out the door, closely followed by Ron.

Dumbledore and Snape exchanged glanced. With no twinkle in his eyes, Dumbledore sighed. "It seems we have some plans to make."

Snape nodded. "Indeed."

There was silence once again. Then a bloodcurdling scream filled the castle.

A/N: I got "Necto Infinitas" out of an English-Latin Dictionary on the Internet. Necto means "bound" and Infinitas means "eternity."

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Latest 25 Reviews for Broken

180 Reviews  |  7.8/10 Average

9/10

angelunderthesun

wonderful!    

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you so much.

10/10

Madame DeFarge

Great story, very well thought out.  i do love the grandchildren at the end!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you very much.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

sinbad

I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

LOL!!  I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read.  No, really, I had fun revisiting this story.  It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.

9/10

sinbad

You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before.  Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

And, there it is!!!  I knew you'd get there.  That's okay.  I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.

10/10

sinbad

I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I love writing her.  We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.

9/10

sinbad

I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise.  I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Lucious, to me, is the weakest link.  I actually like Lucius.  I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power.  But, Lucius was also quite mad here.  I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did.  Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?

10/10

sinbad

Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon.  He's less broken here.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken.  Snape is the strongest character in HP.  Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.

10/10

sinbad

I really liked your version of Petunia.  She seemed almost likable and very regretful.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote.  I know she had to have regrets.  I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily.  I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had.  That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.

10/10

sinbad

I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I know.  I've gone back and read this and cringe a little.  It was necessary at the time, though.  Nobody was to know what she'd been through.  She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.

10/10

sinbad

Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco.  Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Ron will always be one of my favorite characters.  He reminds me so much of my older brother.  He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place.  I think he was very clever, even in canon.  I just don't think he really ever got the chance.  He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.

10/10

sinbad

I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry.  Harry is right, no one would believe him.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev.  But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.

10/10

sinbad

Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I love him.  I need to write another hg/dm story.

10/10

sinbad

I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!

10/10

sinbad

Looking grim.  I just love Draco as a good guy.  Must be a phase I'm going through. 

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

You're so crazy.  I know you've read this.  However, I appreciate your second glance.  I hope you still like it after all this time.  Remember that tis was my first one.

9/10

sinbad

Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss.  I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I'm a lover... not a fighter.  I don't know how to write really great war scenes.  It needed to be clean.  But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy.  It's always been Draco and Hermione.  I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.

9/10

sinbad

Nice flow to the chapter.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thanks

10/10

sinbad

I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I think he finally got some nerve in DH.  But, Harry had to grow up at some point.  Right?  Right?

10/10

Marble Meadow

This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic.  I believe this one is the nicest one yet.  Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~

10/10

ladylynne9

Fantastic story!  I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted.  I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

First of all, thank you so much for the review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  As for your question:  This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips.  I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house.  I view it as being a rather large place.  But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped.  Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~

Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)

Okay :)  Makes sense.  Great job for a first story!

10/10

Nessann

Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~

10/10

Alikat

That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Oh, thank you very much.  Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart.  I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Excellent story!

Loved the way you developed the characters through their years.  Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.

Well done on such a brilliant story.  I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you!!  I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors.  Bless them.  Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him.  Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know.  I think JKR did that on purpose.  It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be.  I just love him.  Thanks again!!~potterbrat~

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!

10/10

Merlinsbeard

OMG!  I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!

Totally gripped by this story. 

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken.  This was my first fanfic and it's my baby.  I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind.  I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.

10/10

mhaj78

Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!!  Though you could always expand...  wink, winkSuch a GREAT story.  I feel content.  Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you so much.  I love writing Ron.  He's so goofy and so much fun to write.  I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy.  So I gave him a protective edge.  There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone. 

Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)

I totally agree.  And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone.  And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover.  Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you.  Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron.  Get a tissue.

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