Daddy's Girl
Chapter 26 of 27
potterbratDraco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
A/N: We are nearly there! Just an Epilogue left. Thanks so much to RobisonRocket. I have comma-use dyslexia, which I'm sure drives her mad!
Daddy's Girl
Chapter 26
Severus was pacing. Narcissa knew that when Severus was pacing, he was nervous. "What is it, darling? Aren't you happy?"
"Of course I'm happy, Cissa. I'm just, you know, worried. I don't know how to be a father. Mine wasn't much to learn from in case you've forgotten," Severus said vehemently.
"No need to snap," Narcissa retorted. "You have always been good with Draco, and you are quite attached to Violet. I've even caught you playing with Abigail and cooing baby James. Really, Severus, you don't fool anyone. You are a big softy."
"I am no such thing, Narcissa, and I don't coo. Violet is basically my own granddaughter, so naturally I would have a soft spot for her. Abigail looks just like Lily, and she's extremely intelligent for her age. No doubt she got that from her mother. And James, well, I've decided to reserve my opinion of him until he starts Hogwarts. Besides, as my own godson is godfather to both children, I feel that I must learn to adjust to them. But that doesn't change the fact that I have to figure out how to be a good father to my own child a daughter for that matter."
"Well, you'll figure it out. In the meantime, we need to pick out a name for her. I want to be prepared when she comes along. I know we still have six months to go, but I just want it out of the way so I can start calling her by her name."
Severus rolled his eyes. "You are a ridiculous woman, do you know that?"
Narcissa wrapped her arms around her husband and gave him a chaste kiss. "Yes, but you wouldn't have me any other way, would you?"
"Indeed, I wouldn't."
"So, have you thought of anything?" Narcissa asked, clearly not giving up.
"I have." When Severus told her, Narcissa hugged him tighter.
"Oh, Severus, that's perfect."
"But before we make it official, I need to get permission. I know that to some it's just a name, but it's important to me, and I believe it would be important to her as well."
"Yes, I understand."
"If you will excuse me, I believe I will be off. I need to have my dress robes cleaned before the wedding. And I also need to see a man about a name."
**********
Harry and Ginny were lying on their bed, playing with baby James. Abigail was visiting with her Uncle Fred and his new wife, Gwen, who worked with Ginny.
"I do believe he will be a great Seeker, Gin. Look how strong he is." Harry picked his hand up, with James' small hand still wrapped firmly around Harry's finger.
"Oh for Merlin's sake, you think Abby will be a great Seeker, too. Do you think that our children will only take after you, Potter? I'll have you know that they might both be wonderful Chasers."
"Right, Gin. You see the thing is, while you are at work, I will be teaching our children how to fly. And with that training, I will teach them to be Seekers like their dear old dad. And now that I'll be teaching Defense Against the Dark Arts, we'll have all that time at Hogwarts for their Uncle Ron to teach them the fundamentals of the game. They'll be playing for England before we know it."
"It's weird, isn't it?" Ginny asked with a faraway look.
"What's weird?
"Us going back to Hogwarts it's weird. Who would have thought that we would all be back? You, me, Hermione, Draco, Ron, and Pansy it's just weird."
"No, what's weird is Ron and Pansy getting married in a couple of months. Who would have thought that would happen? And now that Severus is gone, Ron said Dumbledore made Pansy the Head of Slytherin. I never thought I'd see the day when there would be a Professor Weasley as Head of Slytherin House." Harry laughed and kissed his son on the nose.
Ginny giggled. "Actually, Harry, I'm more surprised that they made a woman Head of Slytherin. But, she's already made a lot of changes. She's going to allow girls to play Quidditch."
"Oh, that's great. Maybe one day Severus and Narcissa's daughter will play for the team. You know she'll be a Slytherin."
"You never know," said Ginny.
They both started when they heard a voice from downstairs.
Ginny looked at Harry. "That sounds like Severus. I hope everything is alright with Narcissa. Go see what he wants. Let me know if I need to go over and check on her."
Harry raced down the steps and found Severus' head floating in the fireplace.
"Hi, Severus, come on through." Harry said jovially.
Severus stepped through and regarded Harry with a grin. "Wipe that silly grin off of your face. You are beginning to remind me of one of the Weasley twins."
"I can't help it. I'm a happy man. I have a beautiful wife and two beautiful babies. You just wait, old man, your time is coming. So, to what do I owe the pleasure of your visit? Is Narcissa alright? Ginny said she'd look in on her if you'd like."
Severus held up his hand. "That won't be necessary. Narcissa is fine. I need to talk to you about the baby, though. I don't know if you've heard, but we are having a girl."
"Yeah," said Harry. "Draco told us. Congratulations, really, you deserve it."
"Thanks. But I want to talk to you about her name. I need to ask you something."
Harry was surprised to see Severus flush. This wasn't like the snarky bat of the dungeons that Harry had come to know and respect. "Have a seat, Professor. I'll get you some tea, and then you can ask me whatever you want."
Just minutes after Harry left the room, he returned with a tray of tea and biscuits. Severus couldn't help the smirk that appeared on his lips.
"What?" Harry asked.
"You certainly are a domestic Defense instructor. Congratulations on that appointment, by the way. Now that Voldemort is gone, the position shouldn't be cursed."
"Thank you, sir. Now, help yourself to the spread and tell me what's on your mind."
"I have a request, Harry, and I really don't know how to ask except to just spit it out. I would like to name my daughter after your mother. I want to name her Lily Eileen Snape, if that is alright with you."
Harry was aghast. He gaped at Severus, who took his silence negatively.
"I would understand if you would not like to grant me this request," Severus said, slightly bemused.
"No, no. I'm sorry. I'm just shocked, that's all," Harry said. Harry knew how much his mother had meant to Severus, so he didn't need to hear an explanation as to why the older man wanted to name his daughter after her. Harry grinned.
"I believe my mother would like that, Severus. Of course I don't have a problem with it."
Severus gave Harry a rare, albeit genuine, smile. "Thank you, Harry. I really appreciate it."
They talked for a little while longer about the upcoming school year and Severus and Narcissa's plans when they get to Positano. An hour later, Severus bid Harry a farewell.
**********
May twenty-first
Her dress was made of the finest silvery-white silk. When she saw it in the shop, she knew it would be perfect for the occasion. Small beads of crystal encircled the bodice, which fit snugly against her breasts, and the bottom half of the dress danced around her loosely, like the shimmer of the ocean. She definitely felt like a princess...
Except, she had one small problem...
Hermione couldn't get her veil right. It kept sliding off of her head, and her hands were shaking so badly, she couldn't pin it to stay on. She finally gave up and pulled it off of her head. She realized she'd have to calm her nerves before she could do anything else. Suddenly, there was a small knock on the door.
Exasperatedly, Hermione told the visitor to come in. When the door opened, Hermione brightened immediately. It was her mother.
"Can I help you with something, sweetheart?"
"Can you ever! Mum, I can't get this veil to stay on my head. I do believe I am going to cut all of this mass off of my head."
Susan stepped up behind her daughter and took the veil from her. She spoke to her while she worked on the veil.
"You know, when I married your father, I had the same trouble with my veil. I had hair much like yours, you know, and I didn't have my mother to help me with it. I did give up on my veil. When I got down the aisle, John didn't even seem to notice." Susan stopped for a moment to blink away the tears that threatened to come. With her voice shaking just a bit, she continued.
"After the ceremony, while we were dancing, he asked me where the veil was that I just had to have. I told him I would have missed the entire ceremony if I had continued to try and put that veil on. He told me he was glad I didn't have the veil. He said that he actually loved the way my hair grew all over my head, and he didn't want a stupid veil to mar what he thought was pure beauty. And when you were a child, and your hair started to grow the same way, your father loved it. I'll never forget the time you were about four, you came out of the bathroom with a comb stuck in your hair. You were crying and your father picked you up and placed you on the counter top. He gently worked through all of those curls until he had gotten the comb out."
"I remember that day. I will never forget that comb getting stuck in my hair. I was angry that Dad wouldn't let me cut my hair," Hermione said wistfully.
"No, he would never have let you cut it. I even tried to talk him into it, but he stood his ground. He told me that your hair was just as beautiful as mine had been on the day we married. He also chuckled to himself and told me that maybe we wouldn't have to fuss with a veil for you, either. Your father would have been proud of you, Hermione. You have become a very strong young woman."
Hermione's mother gave her a small squeeze on the shoulder once the veil was firmly in place.
"Now, I have to go. Remus is on Violet duty at the moment. I daresay I should get some time with her before Narcissa gets here. I love you, darling."
Hermione hugged her mother. "I love you too, Mum."
Hermione showed her mother to the door. When she opened it, she couldn't help but laugh at what was waiting on the other side.
"I hope you don't mind, Hermione, but I told them they could probably see you if they would allow me to see you first."
"Mind? Absolutely not. I would have been extremely put-out if they hadn't come. Come in, boys."
Harry and Ron, shifting their feet, came into the room. Harry spoke first after kissing Hermione on the cheek.
"You look gorgeous, Hermione. I can't believe you're in a dress."
"Harry, you idiot, of course I'm wearing a dress. I am a girl, you know. I don't think Draco would want to marry me if I walked out there in dress robes for a wizard, do you?"
Ron's ears went pink. "I don't know, Hermione. I imagine he would marry you even if you were wearing Hagrid's old hairy suit."
They all three broke into laughter. "Seriously, did you two come to wish me well, or is there something else on your mind?"
Harry and Ron exchanged furtive glances. "You tell her, Ron."
"No, Harry. I told you, I won't do it. You know how I feel about it.
"Ron, it won't be that difficult. It's just standing and stuff."
Hermione cleared her throat. "Boys, as much as I have always loved trying to guess at this maniacal banter that you two call conversation, I really need to go down to the lake and get married."
They both looked at her like she had interrupted a really great Quidditch match.
"Harry wants us to give you away, and I flat out refuse," Ron said pointedly.
Hermione felt a small lump in her throat. "Why, Ron? I would be so honored. You know my father isn't here, and my mother needs Remus with her. I don't have anyone, Ron. Not unless you want me to call Severus." Hermione lowered her head to hide the tears that threatened. "Or I could just go alone."
Ron gave Hermione a hurt look. "Hermione, you don't understand. Harry said that Muggle tradition states that someone has to give you away. I can't do it. I care too much about you to take you down there and tell Malfoy, 'Well here you go, mate, she's all yours, you can have her, I'm giving her to you.' I'm sorry, I just can't do that."
Harry and Hermione stared at one another. "Is that what you thought I was telling you to do, Ron? I wasn't telling you to give her to anyone. We're basically going to escort her down the aisle, and when they ask who gives this woman to this man, we say that we do. It's just a way of saying that we trust Draco and as her family, we approve of the marriage."
"Oh," Ron said. "Alright, then, let's go."
But Hermione stood frozen in her spot.
"What's wrong, Hermione?" Harry asked.
"You two!" Hermione sobbed.
"Oh, no, Harry. I think she's about to hug us."
"She can't do that. Ginny will kill me if Hermione gets that stuff from her face on my dress robes. She'll probably even accuse me of making her cry."
"You boys are the best friends a girl could ever dream of having. I love you, I really do."
"Ah, come on, Hermione. We're going to be late. We can't keep the ferret waiting, now can we?" Ron jested.
Hermione rolled her eyes. "No, we can't. And, Ron, don't call my future husband a ferret."
"Now that's not fair. It's bad enough that I'm giving him to you. Can't I at least call him a ferret now and then?"
Hermione giggled. "Just don't let him hear you."
The three of them made their way to the entrance hall of the castle where Ginny was waiting in her baby blue bridesmaid gown. Harry swallowed hard. He didn't know how he was supposed to pay attention to the wedding when his own wife looked so incredible.
"There you are, Hermione. What's wrong? Did my prat of a brother or git of a husband do anything to you?" Ginny asked as she gave Ron and Harry a death glare.
It's amazing how someone can look like an angel and sound like a banshee at the same time, thought Harry.
Harry gave Ron an I told you so look while Ron mumbled something that sounded a lot like "mental."
Harry swallowed again. "You look stunning, Gin."
Ginny smirked at her husband while she waved her hand, putting Hermione right.
Harry stared open-mouthed at Ginny. "That was wandless magic! And where did you learn to do a cleansing charm without wiping off all of that stuff on her face?"
Both Hermione and Ginny answered, "Lavender."
Hermione allowed Ginny to smooth her hair out of her face.
Ginny looked at Hermione. "I thought you had your hair up."
Hermione ran her hand down the wild mane that fell down her back and shoulders. "I did have it up. I took it down."
Ginny lifted both eyebrows. "Alright, um, are you ready?"
Hermione nodded. "I am." She linked her arm through the arms of her best friends, and Ginny handed her the bouquet of fresh lilies and white roses. "Alright, Gin, let's go and get me married."
Before Ginny opened the door, she stopped. "Wait! Hermione, where is your veil?"
Hermione grinned. "I'm not going to wear it."
Gin frowned. "Hermione, I though you loved that veil. Why aren't you wearing it?"
Hermione gave Ginny a sad smile. "For my dad."
A/N: Ah, a little fluffy there, I know. Thank you for being patient with this chapter. I will try to get the Epilogue up by next week.
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180 Reviews | 7.8/10 Average
Great story, very well thought out. i do love the grandchildren at the end!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
LOL!! I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read. No, really, I had fun revisiting this story. It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.
You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before. Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
And, there it is!!! I knew you'd get there. That's okay. I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.
I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing her. We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.
I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise. I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Lucious, to me, is the weakest link. I actually like Lucius. I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power. But, Lucius was also quite mad here. I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did. Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?
Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon. He's less broken here.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken. Snape is the strongest character in HP. Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.
I really liked your version of Petunia. She seemed almost likable and very regretful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote. I know she had to have regrets. I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily. I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had. That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.
I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. I've gone back and read this and cringe a little. It was necessary at the time, though. Nobody was to know what she'd been through. She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.
Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco. Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ron will always be one of my favorite characters. He reminds me so much of my older brother. He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place. I think he was very clever, even in canon. I just don't think he really ever got the chance. He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.
I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry. Harry is right, no one would believe him.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev. But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.
Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love him. I need to write another hg/dm story.
I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!
Looking grim. I just love Draco as a good guy. Must be a phase I'm going through.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're so crazy. I know you've read this. However, I appreciate your second glance. I hope you still like it after all this time. Remember that tis was my first one.
Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss. I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm a lover... not a fighter. I don't know how to write really great war scenes. It needed to be clean. But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy. It's always been Draco and Hermione. I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.
I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think he finally got some nerve in DH. But, Harry had to grow up at some point. Right? Right?
This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic. I believe this one is the nicest one yet. Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~
Fantastic story! I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
First of all, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question: This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips. I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house. I view it as being a rather large place. But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped. Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~
Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)
Okay :) Makes sense. Great job for a first story!
Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~
That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you very much. Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart. I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~
Excellent story!
Loved the way you developed the characters through their years. Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.
Well done on such a brilliant story. I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you!! I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors. Bless them. Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him. Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know. I think JKR did that on purpose. It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be. I just love him. Thanks again!!~potterbrat~
Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!
OMG! I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!
Totally gripped by this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken. This was my first fanfic and it's my baby. I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind. I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.
Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!! Though you could always expand... wink, winkSuch a GREAT story. I feel content. Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I love writing Ron. He's so goofy and so much fun to write. I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy. So I gave him a protective edge. There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone.
Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)
I totally agree. And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone. And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover. Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron. Get a tissue.