Promises
Chapter 5 of 27
potterbratDraco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
A/N: I only own the plot. Thank you to RobisonRocket for getting this beta'd and back to me so quickly. I bow to your greatness. Please, if you read... leave a review. I hope you like this chapter. It is longer than the others, and it was a bit hard to write. I love Harry and Ginny. With not further ado...
Promises
Chapter 5
Harry Potter was sitting in his study at number twelve, Grimmald Place when he heard a tapping at his window. He looked over his shoulder and saw Hedwig with a scroll tied to her leg. That's odd, thought Harry. He had let Hedwig out the night before, but he expected her to come home with a mouse, not a letter. Who would be sending his owl to him?
"Well, come in, girl. Let's see who's put you off your hunting and used you for post."
Hedwig nipped Harry's finger affectionately, appreciating his indignation on her behalf.
Harry unrolled the parchment and read the familiar handwriting of his former Headmaster.
Dear Harry,
I do hope this letter finds you and Mrs. Potter in good health...
Harry smiled to himself. He imagined he would love the term "Mrs. Potter" after being married for one hundred years just as much as he loved hearing it after only a year.
I need to speak with you and Mr. Ronald Weasley about some rather personal issues. I have already sent a notice to him. If Ginevra is available, please have her accompany you. I understand, however, if she isn't feeling up to it. If that is the case, please do not disturb her.
If you find yourself unable to attend, please send a reply with Hedwig. I hope you do not mind that I asked her to bring this to you. I spotted her this morning, hunting the grounds. She gets lots of attention from the staff and the students. I would like to think she has a loving connection with Hogwarts, but I believe it's more to do with the abundance of owl treats that she receives from her admirers. Nonetheless, she seemed very pleased to deliver this letter to you.
Sincerely,
Albus Dumbledore
Harry penned a quick reply, stating that he would be there at seven o' clock the next morning, and made his way to the bedroom to see Ginny.
As Harry entered, he took in the sight in front of him with well-concealed amusement. Ginny was sitting up in bed with her arms crossed over her chest, pouting like a five-year-old. "This is ridiculous, Harry. I don't understand why I have to stay in bed. My mother had seven children, and she was never put on bed rest. Besides, I'm eight months along already. It's not like I'll be doing strenuous activity anyway. I mean, honestly... what in Merlin's name is stressful about checking charts and delivering potions?"
Harry just stood there. He wasn't sure if that was a rhetorical question or if she really wanted an answer. "Gin, come on. You're a Healer now. You know you have to do what they tell you. You don't want to put yourself or the baby at risk. Please try to understand."
She knew he was right, but that didn't change anything at the moment. "What's in your hand? Is that a letter?"
"Oh. Yeah! Sorry... it's from Professor Dumbledore. He needs to see me and Ron. I'll Floo your mum and ask her if she will come and stay with you."
"I don't need a babysitter, Harry Potter!"
"I know you don't, Gin." Harry knew the only way to calm her down was to let her win. Or at least to let her think she'd won. "I think you are perfectly capable of taking care of yourself, and me, for that matter. But this isn't about your needing a babysitter, Gin. I just don't want you to be left alone in case you need anything."
Ginny didn't seem to be satisfied by that answer. "I'll tell you what...how 'bout I get Dobby to hang around until I'm back. You won't even know he's here, and if something happens, he can help you. Will that be alright?"
Ginny huffed. He was trying so hard, and it made her heart flutter, but there was no way she was going to give in so easily. It just wasn't her style. Besides, he looked so cute when he was practically begging her to agree. So she let him sweat...
"What does Dumbledore want to see you for anyway?"
Harry just glared at her. He knew she was changing the subject, but he would get back to it... eventually. "I'm not sure. He didn't say in his letter, but he sent for Ron as well. It probably has something to do with Voldemort. And it didn't say anything about sending one to Hermione, but I think she's off helping Malfoy pack his stuff." Harry suddenly felt uneasy. Shaking it off, he continued, "He wanted to see you too ..."
"Then I need to get dressed," Ginny interrupted.
"But... he said that if you were unable to make it, that would be alright with him. And, Ginny, you are unable to make it. You know what your Healer said. And I won't hear another word on the matter. You are to stay in bed and take care of yourself. Besides, you can't travel by Floo, Portkey, or Apparation. You know that."
He looked even cuter when he was taking charge. "Alright. Fine! I'll stay here... with Dobby. And I'll ready Witch Weekly... again! I won't be happy about it, mind."
"Of course not, Love."
"But I'll stay. On one condition." Ginny grinned.
"And what's that?" Harry asked, a bit frightened of what her one condition was.
"You go into Hogsmeade and bring me back some Chocolate Frogs."
"You're on."
"Now, just because I'm imprisoned by this bed and this house, it doesn't mean that my husband can't join me for a snog. It's time for bed anyway, so stop talking and come here."
Harry couldn't argue with logic. He made his way over to the bed with a devilish grin plastered on his face. Ginny turned so that she was on her side. Harry lay down beside her and removed his glasses. Then he proceeded to snog the daylights out of her.
After a few moments, he pulled away from the kiss, but not from her. "You know, this is sort of how we got into this mess in the first place. It all started with a kiss that was an awful lot like that one."
"Mess, Harry? I hardly think our child would appreciate you calling her existence a mess!" Ginny was amused.
"You know -- what did you say? What do you mean by her existence?"
"Caught on, have you? I know we wanted to wait until the baby was born before we found out, but while I was being examined, Healer Roberts let it slip. She said, 'Your baby is doing well. She is turned and ready to go any day now.' You should have seen the look on her face after she said it."
"Anyway, I didn't feel right being the only one who knew. I was just waiting for the right time, and the right time seemed to present itself."
Harry was completely gobsmacked. A girl... a baby girl... a beautiful little girl with long red hair just like her mother's... a clever and beautiful witch who won't be able to keep the boys away from her. GITS! I'll kill them if they hurt her. She's mine. I'll make sure they'll wish they were never born!"
"Harry? Are you alright?"
Harry was cut off from his reverie by Ginny's voice. He shook himself mentally and smiled at her.
"Ginny..." Harry's sudden change to seriousness took Ginny by surprise.
"Ginny, I want to promise you something. And I want to promise her something." Harry put his hand on Ginny's belly.
"I will do everything in my power, and the power of whatever gods will help me, to destroy Voldemort so that you and our little girl will have a happy life. I will do everything I can. Do you understand me?"
Ginny suddenly had tears in her eyes. The sincerity of Harry's words put her off her guard. Bloody hormones. "Harry, you forgot to include yourself in that mix. You take care of old Voldy, and then you live! That is the only way to ensure our happy lives. Now, do you understand me?" Ginny said this with a conviction that Harry had never heard before.
"I love you, Gin," was Harry's very passionate response. Moments later they were both lulled to sleep, holding tightly to one another.
The next morning, Harry woke and moved gently out of bed so he wouldn't wake his wife. Closing the bathroom door after his morning ritual, he tiptoed over to a still sleeping Ginny. Harry brushed his lips across her forehead and whispered, "I love you."
Before he made it to the bedroom door, he heard a soft, "I love you, Harry." When he turned toward her, she was already back to sleep.
Harry tumbled out of the Floo at exactly 6:59 a.m. As he stood, he noticed that the only people present for this little meeting were Snape, Professor Dumbledore, Ron, and himself. He assumed they were waiting for others, so he moved to stand next to Ron and clear the way for anyone else who was traveling by Floo.
"By her absence," Dumbledore began, "I would venture to guess that Mrs. Potter couldn't join us?"
"No, Headmaster. She's been put on bed rest. Healer's orders." Harry almost revealed that he was having a daughter, but decided against it. He didn't have his wife's permission after all.
"Is my sister alright? Is there anything wrong with the baby?" Ron asked with wide eyes.
"No, no. Not at all. Healer Roberts just wants her to stay off of her feet. And you know Gin. The only way to keep her off her feet is to keep her at home. There's no way they could keep her at a desk."
Ron smiled at the thought of the hospital having to make such arrangements because they couldn't control his sister's spirited temper. That's my girl!
"Well, then, everyone is present. Let's be seated," Dumbledore said.
"Professor, where's Hermione? I thought she would be joining us?" Ron asked, perplexed.
"Actually, Mr. Weasley, Miss Granger is one of the reasons we are here. She is currently in the hospital wing," answered Professor Dumbledore.
At that moment, Ron and Harry both started for the door. They were stopped by Snape.
"Mr. Malfoy is the one who is injured. Miss Granger is holding vigil at his bedside. And before you star questioning why he's there, that's what we are here to discuss. So sit back, relax, and try to keep your mouths shut until we're finished."
Harry and Ron gave Snape matching glares, but did as they were instructed.
Dumbledore cleared his throat. "Now, I think the best place to begin is at the beginning. You know that Miss Granger had gone with Mr. Malfoy to the Malfoy Manor. While there, they were surprised by Lucius. Needless to say, he wasn't a very... er... welcoming host."
"What happened?" Harry's heart was pounding in his ears.
"They were attacked, Potter." Snape said simply. "Lucius came home early."
Ron had his head in his hands, and Harry sighed deeply. Ron looked up with unshed tears. "Where is he?"
No one needed to ask who he was.
It was Dumbledore who spoke this time. "We are not sure, Mr. Weasley. Professor Snape informed us that Lucius had been punished by Voldemort, so he wouldn't have gone back voluntarily. Which brings me to our next order of business; Harry, I understand that your baby is due any day now. Are you sure that you want to continue with the plans?"
"Yes, Professor, we are both sure. And I am ready to get this over with. I want to get on with my life. I'm tired of looking over my shoulder. I'm tired of always wondering if I'm going to go home to an empty house ... that he took my Ginny and our baby." Harry concluded in a soft, but firm, voice.
While trying to find the right time to confront Voldemort, it was Ginny who came up with the ultimate plan. Remembering something that Dumbledore had said to Harry regarding Lily's sacrifice and that Harry's greatest power over Voldemort was his ability to love, she thought the best time for the final confrontation should be after the birth of their child.
"Your wife was right, Potter," Snape provided. Everyone looked at him for his most un-Snape-like comment. "If it is love that will win this war, and there is no greater love than a parent for a child, then she is right. When it comes down to it, your heart, like your mother's, will be full of love. The Dark Lord won't stand a chance."
Silence descended on the room. It was probably the most profound statement the Potions master had ever made.
Dumbledore finally spoke up. "Well, Severus, that was very well said. You have my permission to go back to being dark and gloomy for another twenty years."
"Now back to Mr. Malfoy and Miss Granger ... Harry, would you be so kind as to allow them houseroom in the unoccupied portion of number twelve?"
"That would be fine, Headmaster. Ginny and I have separate living quarters, so they are welcome to use the Order's portion of the house. Does this have something to do with the attack?"
Dumbledore sighed. "I'm afraid Lucius might try to find them. And that could be a much larger threat than Lord Voldemort."
There was silence again as everyone was awash in their own thoughts. Then Dumbledore stood and clapped his hands together as if preparing to get them dirty. "I believe that is all. You are welcome to go to the hospital wing and visit with your friend. I daresay she would be more than pleased to see the two of you."
"Professor," Ron started, "what exactly did Lucius do to Hermione? You said she was attacked, but you didn't tell us what he did."
"Mr. Weasley, the exact circumstances of what happened remain locked away in a memory that has either been buried so deep that we can't get to it, or it has been stolen from her. We believe it's the latter since Miss Granger had Professor Snape perform Legilimency on her. However, we can only speculate. And it is her story to tell when she is ready."
"And Malfoy? What's happened to him?" Ron asked.
Professor Snape answered this question. "My godson took a curse thrown at Miss Granger. He is currently sleeping so that his body can replenish his magic. He will be alright. He is magically exhausted."
As Dumbledore walked out of the room, Ron followed. Harry was about to follow Ron out when Snape stopped him. "Potter." Harry turned and saw something akin to weariness in his former Professor's eyes. He didn't answer; he just allowed Snape to finish.
"I don't know how long Mr. Malfoy will need to stay with you. Even when you defeat the Dark Lord, he might need to remain until the apprehension of his father. I trust that Miss Granger will be in good hands, but with the history that you and Mr. Malfoy have..."
Harry put up a hand. "After what he did for Hermione, I will protect him with my life. I owe him my life. Professor, you said when I defeat the Dark Lord. Do you really think I can beat him?"
Snape regarded him for a moment. "Potter, if you tell anyone I said this, you will pay dearly..." Harry nodded, and Snape continued. "I believe, with my last breath, that not only are you able to beat him; you are the only one who can beat him -- Prophecy be damned."
To Snape's great annoyance, Harry grinned. "Professor, nobody would believe me if I told them what you just said." Harry turned to leave, missing the twitch at the corner of Snape's mouth.
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180 Reviews | 7.8/10 Average
Great story, very well thought out. i do love the grandchildren at the end!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
LOL!! I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read. No, really, I had fun revisiting this story. It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.
You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before. Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
And, there it is!!! I knew you'd get there. That's okay. I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.
I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing her. We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.
I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise. I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Lucious, to me, is the weakest link. I actually like Lucius. I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power. But, Lucius was also quite mad here. I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did. Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?
Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon. He's less broken here.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken. Snape is the strongest character in HP. Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.
I really liked your version of Petunia. She seemed almost likable and very regretful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote. I know she had to have regrets. I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily. I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had. That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.
I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. I've gone back and read this and cringe a little. It was necessary at the time, though. Nobody was to know what she'd been through. She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.
Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco. Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ron will always be one of my favorite characters. He reminds me so much of my older brother. He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place. I think he was very clever, even in canon. I just don't think he really ever got the chance. He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.
I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry. Harry is right, no one would believe him.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev. But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.
Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love him. I need to write another hg/dm story.
I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!
Looking grim. I just love Draco as a good guy. Must be a phase I'm going through.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're so crazy. I know you've read this. However, I appreciate your second glance. I hope you still like it after all this time. Remember that tis was my first one.
Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss. I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm a lover... not a fighter. I don't know how to write really great war scenes. It needed to be clean. But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy. It's always been Draco and Hermione. I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.
I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think he finally got some nerve in DH. But, Harry had to grow up at some point. Right? Right?
This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic. I believe this one is the nicest one yet. Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~
Fantastic story! I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
First of all, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question: This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips. I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house. I view it as being a rather large place. But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped. Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~
Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)
Okay :) Makes sense. Great job for a first story!
Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~
That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you very much. Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart. I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~
Excellent story!
Loved the way you developed the characters through their years. Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.
Well done on such a brilliant story. I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you!! I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors. Bless them. Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him. Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know. I think JKR did that on purpose. It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be. I just love him. Thanks again!!~potterbrat~
Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!
OMG! I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!
Totally gripped by this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken. This was my first fanfic and it's my baby. I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind. I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.
Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!! Though you could always expand... wink, winkSuch a GREAT story. I feel content. Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I love writing Ron. He's so goofy and so much fun to write. I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy. So I gave him a protective edge. There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone.
Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)
I totally agree. And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone. And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover. Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron. Get a tissue.