A Witch's Intuition
Chapter 7 of 27
potterbratDraco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
A/N: Once again, I want to thank my wonderful beta, RobisonRocket. I hope everyone enjoys this chapter. I moved quickly through the Harry/Ginny moments with this one, but that's because this is a Draco/Hermione story. And, thanks again for all the reviews. They are very encouraging.
A Witch's Intuition
Chapter 7
Once outside the gates of Hogwarts, Harry Apparated to number twelve, Grimmauld Place. He ran up the stairs two steps at a time. By the time he reached the bedroom door, he was clutching the stitch in his side. He opened the door with mixed feelings of fear and excitement.
Ginny was sitting up in the bed with Healer Roberts at her side. They were speaking quietly to one another, which confused Harry immensely. Wasn't Ginny supposed to be screaming her head off, sweating bullets, and calling him names? She looked fine.
"What's going on? Dobby said you were having the baby. Aren't you supposed to be yelling at everyone about how this is all my fault?" Harry took a tentative step inside and closed the door.
"Oh, believe me, Harry, I have been. I was having some pretty bad contractions earlier. Healer Roberts gave me a potion for the pain so the contractions wouldn't hurt so much." Ginny smiled at Healer Roberts, who smiled back.
"I thought you weren't supposed to take potions, Gin."
"Actually, Mr. Potter, the potion that your wife took is specifically made for contractions. She'll be alright. As a matter of fact, she should be starting another one in," the Healer consulted her watch, "about two minutes."
At that moment, the fireplace roared, and Harry drew his wand. Mrs. Weasley stepped out and waved her hand toward Harry, indicating him to put his wand away.
"Sorry, Molly," Harry muttered sheepishly. "Habit."
"It's alright, Harry, dear. I completely understand. Now, what's going on in here? Is my grandchild ready to greet the world yet?"
"Your grandchild is being right stubborn," replied Ginny. "I don't know what's taking so long. I was in quite a lot of pain. I had hoped this wouldn't take long."
Molly chortled. "Ginny, dear, you need to learn to have patience. These things take time. That precious grandchild of mine wants to make sure the timing is just right. Now, is there anything I can get you?"
"No, Mum. I'm Fiiiiiiine!" Ginny was suddenly hit with another contraction. Harry started for the door, but Ginny stopped him. "Oh, no... you don't... Harry... Potter. You got... me into... this mess... You will stay... where you... are." Ginny was panting hard at this point.
Half an hour later, Ginny was sitting up in her bed, holding a small bundle wrapped in a pink blanket. She was looking down at her daughter, tears in her eyes. Harry was sitting next to her, holding her hand. He had tears of joy in his eyes as well.
Ginny looked up at Harry and gestured for him to take the baby. Harry reached down and took his daughter from her mother's arms. She still hadn't opened her eyes, but she had a tuft of dark, auburn hair. Her little nose was slightly turned up, and her lips were pink.
"Gin," Harry ventured nervously. "You know what I have to do now, don't you?" He looked up from his daughter to his wife.
"Yes, Harry. But, I don't really want to talk about it right now."
"We have to, though. I will have to leave in a couple of days. And when I'm finished with him, I will have to go after Lucius Malfoy."
Ginny was puzzled. "Why would you have to go after Lucius? Is he a special Death Eater or something?"
Harry suppressed the urge to roll his eyes. "No, it's because of Hermione." As Harry went into the story, Ginny paled.
"Is Draco alright? He wanted me to go with him, but I had to work a shift. Of course, as soon as I got to St. Mungo's, Healer Roberts dismissed me to bed rest."
Harry let out a breath he didn't know he was holding. His mind raced at the thought of Ginny being in the same predicament as Hermione. He fought the wave of nausea that was creeping into his throat. He needed to change the subject.
"So, what are we going to call our little princess?" Harry was once again entranced by his daughter.
"Harry, I don't want to name her. Not yet, anyway. You are going to come back to me... to us. We'll name her together -- when you return."
Harry just stared at her for a moment and looked at his baby again. "Gin, I may not come back for a while. I don't know how long this is going to take. I don't even know how we'll find him. She can't go without a name for so long. What will you call her?"
"I'll call her 'baby.' And you will come back, Harry. I know you will. I know it like I know my own name. Anyway, until then, you can be thinking of something."
"Alright, Gin." Harry thought for a moment. "I think everyone expects me to call her Lily. I love the name, but I want her to have her own name. From the photographs and the stories, I know that my mother was a beautiful and phenomenal witch. She was one of a kind. I know that she would want her granddaughter to be her own person as well. I don't know why; I just feel it. I think my mother would have been a wonderful grandmother." Harry was suddenly overwhelmed by sadness. He never even had a chance to mourn his parents the way a child should.
Ginny, noticing the change in his emotion, raked her fingers through his hair. "Harry, I think your mother would have been a terrific grandmother. I also agree with you about giving Baby her own name. We can always honor your mother in a different way."
Harry looked at her, puzzled. "What do you mean?"
"Lily can be her middle name. So all we have to think about is what we'll call her for her first name." Ginny smiled sweetly at Harry.
Harry grinned back, feeling much happier. "You're brilliant."
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Snape and Dumbledore shared a quick glance before they bolted toward the door to the bathroom. Draco was trying to get out of bed, but he was still pretty weak. He managed to slide off of the bed, and he followed Dumbledore and Snape toward the direction of the scream.
As Snape prepared to blast the door off the hinges, it creaked open. All three men watched as Hermione walked toward her bed. She was stone-faced and silent, not noticing anyone else in the room. When she started to pass Draco, he grabbed her wrist.
"Hermione?" Draco asked tentatively.
Hermione's defiant chin jutted upward. Not meeting Draco's eyes, she whispered, "I need to get to Ginny. Lucius... he... I need to get to Ginny."
Draco looked inquiringly to the other two. Dumbledore was frowning, and Snape was showing no emotion. Snape stepped forward, and Hermione looked at him.
"Miss Granger, Mrs. Potter can't help you right now, I'm afraid. She went into labor a while ago, so she is currently incapable of giving you an examination. We cannot risk taking you to St. Mungo's either. We will have to try to get Madam Pomfrey back here."
Hermione looked from Snape to Dumbledore, then back to Draco. "You'll have to do it then."
Draco felt a chill travel up his spine. "I c-can't."
Hermione's mind was made up. "You're a Healer, aren't you? You are the only one who can check for any damage. I need you to do this for me, Draco. I trust you. After everything that's happened in the past couple of days, I need you. Please, Draco."
Draco looked at Snape and Dumbledore, hoping they could come up with some brilliant plan to get him out of this. At Dumbledore's nod, Draco knew he'd lost. "But, Sir, this is highly unethical."
"Why?" Hermione asked, frowning. "You're a Healer. If you were working a shift at St. Mungo's and I came in for an examination, would you turn me away?
"Well, no. I would have to do it. But this is different."
"How is it different? Is it different because we are here? Is it different because we are bound? Or..." Hermione's voice cracked a tiny bit, but she continued. "Or is it different because it was your father who did this to me?"
Draco looked down at his feet and whispered, "Don't call him that. He's not my father. I don't want anything to do with him ever again." Then Draco looked Hermione right in the eyes. "Okay. I'll do it. I'll give you the examination. But how do you know he did what we all think he did? Neither one of us remember anything."
Hermione's eyes never left his. With unshed tears, she gritted her teeth as she spoke. "Chalk it up to a witch's intuition, but I think I'd know when my virginity has been taken."
Draco took a step back. "Oh, Merlin, Hermione, I didn't know."
"Well, now you do. So, are we going to get started then?"
Dumbledore cleared his throat. "I think I am going to head to Grimmauld Place and check on the progress there. Mr. Malfoy, I'm assuming you have everything you need?"
"Yes, Sir, I believe Madam Pomfrey has everything on hand. Give Ginny my best. Severus, are you going too, or are you staying?"
Before Snape could answer, Hermione looked up at him. "Please don't go, Professor. I would really like for you to stay."
Snape narrowed his eyes at her. "I don't know how I could be of assistance. I'm not a Healer, and Madam Pomfrey's cupboard is packed with all the potions you would need for pain or discomfort."
"It's just that, well, you've been with me since the beginning. You are the only one who doesn't treat me... who doesn't treat me like I'm... broken."
Snape gave a slight nod. "I will be right outside the door."
Hermione thanked him and turned back toward Draco. Draco handed her a hospital gown and pointed toward the bathroom door once again. "I'll need you to... to... change."
Hermione took the robe and went into the bathroom, returning seconds later. Draco motioned for her to lie on the bed. "Do you want me to give you a potion to calm your nerves or put you to sleep?"
Hermione just shook her head, unable to speak.
"Let's get started, then," Draco said as he sat in the chair at the foot of Hermione's bed. Once he was seated, Hermione took a deep breath and spread her knees apart.
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180 Reviews | 7.8/10 Average
Great story, very well thought out. i do love the grandchildren at the end!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
LOL!! I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read. No, really, I had fun revisiting this story. It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.
You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before. Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
And, there it is!!! I knew you'd get there. That's okay. I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.
I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing her. We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.
I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise. I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Lucious, to me, is the weakest link. I actually like Lucius. I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power. But, Lucius was also quite mad here. I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did. Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?
Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon. He's less broken here.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken. Snape is the strongest character in HP. Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.
I really liked your version of Petunia. She seemed almost likable and very regretful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote. I know she had to have regrets. I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily. I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had. That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.
I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. I've gone back and read this and cringe a little. It was necessary at the time, though. Nobody was to know what she'd been through. She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.
Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco. Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ron will always be one of my favorite characters. He reminds me so much of my older brother. He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place. I think he was very clever, even in canon. I just don't think he really ever got the chance. He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.
I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry. Harry is right, no one would believe him.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev. But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.
Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love him. I need to write another hg/dm story.
I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!
Looking grim. I just love Draco as a good guy. Must be a phase I'm going through.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're so crazy. I know you've read this. However, I appreciate your second glance. I hope you still like it after all this time. Remember that tis was my first one.
Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss. I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm a lover... not a fighter. I don't know how to write really great war scenes. It needed to be clean. But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy. It's always been Draco and Hermione. I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.
I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think he finally got some nerve in DH. But, Harry had to grow up at some point. Right? Right?
This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)
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Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic. I believe this one is the nicest one yet. Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~
Fantastic story! I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
First of all, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question: This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips. I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house. I view it as being a rather large place. But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped. Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~
Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)
Okay :) Makes sense. Great job for a first story!
Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~
That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you very much. Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart. I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~
Excellent story!
Loved the way you developed the characters through their years. Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.
Well done on such a brilliant story. I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you!! I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors. Bless them. Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him. Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know. I think JKR did that on purpose. It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be. I just love him. Thanks again!!~potterbrat~
Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!
OMG! I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!
Totally gripped by this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken. This was my first fanfic and it's my baby. I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind. I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.
Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!! Though you could always expand... wink, winkSuch a GREAT story. I feel content. Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I love writing Ron. He's so goofy and so much fun to write. I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy. So I gave him a protective edge. There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone.
Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)
I totally agree. And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone. And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover. Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron. Get a tissue.