It's Over
Chapter 10 of 27
potterbratDraco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
A/N: HBP Warning! If you haven't read the 6th book yet, there are some references to it in this chapter. Thanks again to my excellent beta, RobisonRocket. All these characters belong to JKRowling, not me. However, if she would let me have Snape for a couple of hours... ahem... sorry. Enjoy!
Chapter 10
It's Over
Harry, along with Ron, Snape, and Dumbledore, Apparated into the graveyard near Little Hangleton. Harry took a deep breath. He couldn't help having flashbacks of this place. His eyes quickly found the spot where Cedric Diggory's lifeless body hit the ground. Harry squeezed his eyes shut. Now is not the time, Potter. Get yourself together.
Harry's thoughts were broken by Snape's voice. "He's here. I can feel him. Albus, you need to get out of sight. Where are the others?"
Dumbledore stood tall behind Snape. "Severus, I will fight. I may be an old man, but I think I can handle myself. The others are awaiting my signal." Dumbledore reached into his robes and pulled out his loyal phoenix, who perched himself on his master's shoulder."
Snape sighed. "Albus, I am fully aware of the fact that you can handle yourself. However, you've already had your fight. This is ours. Please, if something were to happen to you, old man, I "
Dumbledore put up his hand. "I understand, Severus. However, I'm not going anywhere."
Harry was listening to the banter between the older men until he heard something. Noticing the halted voices of the other two, he knew they heard it as well. Harry looked all around him until he spotted it on the ground. Without making a sound, he pointed to the rat scampering up the walk toward the Riddle house. He looked at Snape, who mouthed, "Wormtail." Harry nodded, and Dumbledore sent Fawkes with the signal.
Before they could make a move, they heard small pops all around them. They were surrounded. Harry looked all around him. He looked at Snape and whispered, "I guess your cover's blown."
Snape smirked. "It's about time."
They stood back to back, with their wands raised, but nobody made a move, not even the Death Eaters. Suddenly, from out of nowhere, Voldemort appeared in front of Harry.
"Well, well, well. It looks like you found me, Potter. It was nice of you to drop by. Oh, and you brought your little red-headed friend, I see." Voldemort gestured toward Ron. "How is your little sister?" Ron's face burned red with anger, but he didn't speak. Voldemort turned his attention back to Harry. "I was actually on my way to see you. It seems like we've left some things... unsaid."
Moving to Harry's right, Dumbledore held his wand at the ready. When Voldemort saw Dumbledore for the first time, he had the slightest intake of breath. Then, noticing Snape, he hissed, "I see you have decided to fight against me, Severus."
Snape glared back, but didn't answer. Before Voldemort could say another word, the members of the Order appeared, surrounding the Death Eaters. It was Bellatrix Lestrange who started the battle. She fired the first shot at Dumbledore, who effortlessly deflected it. While the battle was raging behind them, Harry and Voldemort simply stared at one another.
It wasn't long before Dumbledore had conjured ropes to secure most of the Death Eaters. The remaining Death Eaters were dead, including Wormtail. There was one that was missing: Lucius Malfoy.
Remnants of spells filled the air, and Harry and Voldemort raised their wands. "Harry," Voldemort started. "You know you can't kill me."
"Sure I can, Tom. And I'm going to kill you. I'm just surprised you let all your mates get caught or killed."
Anger rose up Voldemort's spine at the use of his given name. "It's no matter. I would rather get this over with without the distraction. If they let themselves get caught or killed, that's their problem. After I do away with you, I'll take care of the rest."
"I don't think so, Tommy," said Harry. "You know all those little pet Horcruxes of yours?"
Voldemort's eyes widened. Apparently, he didn't know that Harry knew anything about them.
Harry smiled. "You do remember those, don't you? You shouldn't have neglected them for so long. Don't worry, my friends and I have been playing with them. You know what that means, don't you?" When Voldemort's eyes started to dart around furiously, Harry added, "We got your slithery little friend yesterday. I must say, she was hard to get. It took us some time finding her, but we have our ways. I'll give Snape the credit for that one."
Without taking his eyes off Voldemort, Snape smiled wickedly. "It was my pleasure, Potter. I never liked that snake."
Voldemort laughed maniacally. "Do you really think you can beat me, boy? You are no match for Lord Voldemort. I will have two new Horcruxes when we are finished here. And once I get Dumbledore, I shall have yet another. You think you are all powerful because you have my traitor with you? I'm not alone, Potter. My only loyal servant is here. I've kept him safe until now."
Harry and Snape exchanged furtive looks. Snape eyed Voldemort. "Your little rat is dead. He tried to run poor thing but he didn't make it."
Voldemort laughed again. "Do you think I give a damn about that little piece of vermin? Lucius, you can come out now. Come and join our friends."
Lucius Malfoy pulled off an Invisibility Cloak and walked toward the group with his wand drawn. He looked thin and pale. His eyes had dark circles under them. "Hello, Severus," he sneered.
White, hot anger rose within Snape, but he quickly buried it. "Lucius, how nice of you to join us from your hiding place. We've been wondering what happened to you. Have you been living under a rock?"
Harry couldn't believe his eyes. He wanted to get this over with, but he wanted to deal with Lucius personally. Though he didn't know the depth of injury that Lucius had caused, he knew Hermione was viciously attacked, and that was enough. Turning his attention back to Voldemort, he smiled again. "Good of you to bring another guest, Tommy. I'd think it rather unfair for this to be two against one."
"Oh, I'm not going to fight you, Potter," Lucius said. He turned to Snape and for the first time, Snape caught a glimpse of the man Lucius used to be. "I'm not going to fight you either, Severus, my friend."
Voldemort turned red eyes toward Lucius. "What are you talking about, you fool? You will kill the traitor. Potter... is... mine."
Lucius, whose wand was pointing at Snape, turned it toward Voldemort instead. "You bastard... You have turned me into a monster. You have destroyed me, and everything that has mattered to me. I may not be able to kill you, but I will take pleasure in watching Potter do it. This boy, who has thwarted you over and over again, will finally get rid of you."
Voldemort hissed. "Lucius, don't be a fool. Kill the traitor."
Lucius raised his wand and shouted, "Incarcerous." Long, thin ropes flew around Voldemort, knocking his wand out of his hand. Harry and Snape were stunned.
Lucius yelled at Harry. "Kill him, Potter. Do it now."
Harry raised his wand and then he froze. Lucius gaped at him. "What is wrong with you, boy? Kill him, and be done with it." But Snape knew what the problem was. One of the reasons Potter wasn't a Slytherin was because he was too noble. He pointed his wand at Voldemort. Harry shook his head, but Snape just said, "I'm not going to kill him." Then, turning back to Voldemort, he whispered, "Finite."
When the bonds fell, Voldemort was ready. He Accio'd his wand in a flash. After throwing the Sectumsempra curse at Snape, he turned his wand on Harry, and hit him with the same. Harry hit his knees. Voldemort stood over him with his wand raised.
Meanwhile, Lucius had ended the curse put on Snape and cast a healing charm on him. He then cast the Finite on Harry. But before he could stop Voldemort from finishing Harry off, they heard singing from above. They all stopped and looked up. It was Fawkes. He was clutching something in his talons.
When he reached Harry, he dropped a dagger onto the ground next to Harry's knee. Voldemort didn't see the dagger because he was too focused on the bird. Voldemort hissed. "Really, Potter, you should get better friends."
But Lucius saw it. The moment Fawkes dropped it, Lucius said, barely above a whisper, "Dumbledore's bird."
Voldemort turned his attention toward Lucius and said, "What?"
Although Harry was weak from blood loss, he still had his wits about him. While Voldemort had his attention turned toward Lucius, Harry grabbed the dagger. The moment his hands touched the dagger, it turned into Godric Gryffindor's sword.
Harry looked up at Voldemort and grinned. "Let's dance." Voldemort turned back to Harry, who was still on his knees. "What did you say, Potter?"
Without wasting another second, Harry drove the blade through Voldemort's heart and said weakly, "Amo Subvertio Pravus."
Voldemort screamed and hit the ground. He was dead.
Harry was still sitting on his knees, panting. He grabbed his fallen wand and pointed it at Voldemort, just in case. Steam rose from Voldemort's body. Harry knew he was dead because in all the times he thought he'd killed Voldemort, there had never been a body.
Harry looked around him. Snape was trying to stand. Lucius walked over to Harry and performed a healing spell on him. "Potter, all I can do is heal the open wounds. You've lost a lot of blood." Harry looked up at Lucius, unable to focus, and he said, "I don't understand. Why? Why did you do it?"
Lucius didn't answer him. He turned to look down at Snape. Snape didn't have the strength to speak. Lucius gave Snape a small smile. "I have to kill the traitor." Without another word, Lucius Disapparated.
Snape crawled over to Harry. "Potter, can you stand? We have to get out of here. This place will be crawling with Ministry officials as soon as that bird of Dumbledore's gets the message out."
Harry noticed Dumbledore and Ron walking toward them. He knew they had been just beyond the perimeters, holding the captured Death Eaters.
"I think I can stand." Harry made to get up, but his head started swimming, and his eyes became unfocused. A moment later, Harry collapsed.
A/N: I know this was a shorter chapter, but I had to move on. This chapter was really used to get rid of Voldemort. He's such a pain. Amo Subvertio Pravus will be explained in the following chapter.
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180 Reviews | 7.8/10 Average
Great story, very well thought out. i do love the grandchildren at the end!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
LOL!! I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read. No, really, I had fun revisiting this story. It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.
You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before. Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
And, there it is!!! I knew you'd get there. That's okay. I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.
I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing her. We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.
I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise. I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Lucious, to me, is the weakest link. I actually like Lucius. I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power. But, Lucius was also quite mad here. I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did. Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?
Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon. He's less broken here.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken. Snape is the strongest character in HP. Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.
I really liked your version of Petunia. She seemed almost likable and very regretful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote. I know she had to have regrets. I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily. I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had. That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.
I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. I've gone back and read this and cringe a little. It was necessary at the time, though. Nobody was to know what she'd been through. She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.
Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco. Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ron will always be one of my favorite characters. He reminds me so much of my older brother. He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place. I think he was very clever, even in canon. I just don't think he really ever got the chance. He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.
I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry. Harry is right, no one would believe him.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev. But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.
Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love him. I need to write another hg/dm story.
I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!
Looking grim. I just love Draco as a good guy. Must be a phase I'm going through.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're so crazy. I know you've read this. However, I appreciate your second glance. I hope you still like it after all this time. Remember that tis was my first one.
Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss. I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm a lover... not a fighter. I don't know how to write really great war scenes. It needed to be clean. But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy. It's always been Draco and Hermione. I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.
I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think he finally got some nerve in DH. But, Harry had to grow up at some point. Right? Right?
This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic. I believe this one is the nicest one yet. Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~
Fantastic story! I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
First of all, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question: This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips. I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house. I view it as being a rather large place. But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped. Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~
Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)
Okay :) Makes sense. Great job for a first story!
Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~
That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you very much. Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart. I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~
Excellent story!
Loved the way you developed the characters through their years. Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.
Well done on such a brilliant story. I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you!! I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors. Bless them. Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him. Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know. I think JKR did that on purpose. It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be. I just love him. Thanks again!!~potterbrat~
Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!
OMG! I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!
Totally gripped by this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken. This was my first fanfic and it's my baby. I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind. I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.
Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!! Though you could always expand... wink, winkSuch a GREAT story. I feel content. Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I love writing Ron. He's so goofy and so much fun to write. I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy. So I gave him a protective edge. There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone.
Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)
I totally agree. And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone. And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover. Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron. Get a tissue.