Oh, Brother
Chapter 23 of 27
potterbratDraco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
A/N: Please enjoy this fun little chapter. I am already writing the next one, so hopefully it won't take very long. Again, to RobisonRocket -- without you, I'd be lost.
Oh, Brother!
Chapter 22
"My goodness, I'm exhausted." Hermione sat heavily on the sofa in her flat. Draco came in behind her, carrying his infant daughter. After depositing her in her basinet, he sat heavily next to Hermione.
"It was quite a long ceremony. Do you think ours will be that long?"
Hermione stretched out and laid her head in Draco's lap. "Oh, I don't know. I think it will be different with us. It will be our ceremony then. I think the only thing we'll be anticipating is the honeymoon."
Draco smirked. "And why is that?"
Hermione looked up at him with her eyes twinkling. "You, sir, are incorrigible. Oh, but I hope ours is at least half as beautiful as your mother's. And I can't get over how incredibly handsome Severus looked. I've never seen him with his hair pulled back and looking so happy."
Draco chuckled. "True. Severus and happy don't usually go in the same sentence. He seems to make her happy though, doesn't he?"
"Yes, he does. But enough about them, we need to discuss arrangements for our own ceremony. Where would you like for it to be? Where are we going to live? I would suggest you move in here, but it will get awfully cramped after a while."
Draco sighed. "You're right. I think I have that worked out. But there are some details I want to take care of first. I would like to get married at Hogwarts. I don't know if that's possible, but I was thinking we could do it by the lake."
Hermione threw her arms around Draco and squealed. "Oh, Draco, that's perfect. I hadn't even thought of that. We could do it in the spring. You know how beautiful it is there in the spring."
There was a tapping at the window, and Draco extracted himself from Hermione to retrieve the parchment that was tied to the large Tawny owl. Violet stirred at the sound, but didn't wake.
"What is it?" Hermione asked, rewarding the owl with a treat before it flew away.
Draco read over the parchment with his eyes smiling. "The details I have been waiting for. Look, I need to take care of a few things. I will be gone for a while, but I won't be gone long. Perhaps we could ask Gin if she'll watch Violet tonight. If everything goes according to plan, I want to take you to dinner."
"Why? What plan are you talking about?"
"Nope, I'm not going to tell you. I promise that you won't be disappointed. Just trust me?"
Hermione giggled. "Trust a Slytherin. Isn't that kind of an oxymoron? I don't know if one can trust a Slytherin."
Draco wiggled his eyes at Hermione. "You don't really have a choice."
Before Hermione could give her rebuttal, Draco Disapparated away.
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"Ah, Mr. Malfoy, there you are. You didn't waste any time."
"No, Mr. Johnson. I didn't want to wait another second. Do you have the papers drawn up for my mother?"
"Yes, Mr. Malfoy. I had them sent to her by owl this morning. I believe she will be delighted. However, I do wonder what she and Mr. Snape will do when the new term starts."
Draco grinned. "Mr. Johnson, don't worry about that. If everything works out like it should, things will fall into place."
Just then the door to the solicitor's office opened. "Ah, there you are Theodore. Mr. Malfoy, you remember my sister's son, Theodore Nott."
Nott stuck out his hand. "Hello, Draco. It's been a while."
"Yes, it has been. You stayed out of Azkaban, I see impressive," Draco sneered.
Nott grinned. "That's the beauty of staying neutral in a war. You win either way."
"Yes, well, that's very brave of you. Listen, I'll be on my way. Thank you, Mr. Johnson. Let me know the moment my mother's owl sends a reply. I'd like to have things taken care of before term starts."
"Yes, of course, Mr. Malfoy. I'll stay in touch."
Draco made his way out the door and into the streets of Diagon Alley. The streets were alive with children readying themselves for the new school term, and Draco took a moment to enjoy the excitement in the air. "Not long and it will be Violet's turn," he said to himself. The thought alone was enough to make him happy, but with a slight bit of dread. How on earth would the other children react to the child of Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger?
Before he could get lost in the crowd, Nott appeared from the building Draco had just vacated. "Hey, Draco, care for a drink? I was just on my way to the Leaky."
Draco didn't really want to spend much time with him, but thoughts of Violet growing up and leaving home drove him to need some relaxation. "Sure, why not?"
As they started walking, Nott spoke up again. "So, Draco, I hear you've been getting your hands dirty."
Draco stopped dead in his tracks. "What are you on about?"
"Oh, come on, Draco. Don't pretend you don't know. I heard a rumor that you and the Mudblood Granger were getting hitched because you knocked her up. What's that all about? She got you under some kind of spell or something? You can tell me. What's she really got hiding under those robes? I'll bet the little know-it-all swot has some pretty good stuff. I wonder how Lucius would feel about a little half-blood grandchild."
They were just passing Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes when Draco grabbed Nott's arm and pulled him into an alleyway. He slammed Nott against the wall and had his wand out and digging into Nott's throat before Nott ever knew what hit him.
"It's interesting," stated Draco, "the kind a training one gets when they fight for the right side. Training with Harry Potter you remember him, right? Dark-headed bloke with the scar? The one who defeated the Dark Lord? We became pretty good friends, he and I. I trained with him. Amazing the sorts of things we learned."
Draco's voice dropped the casual tone. In a deadly whisper, Draco dug harder into Nott's throat and spoke very plainly. "If you ever so much as whisper her name again, I will not hesitate to practice every curse I ever learned. I will not kill you, you sodding bastard, but I will make you wish you were never born."
A pair of hands grabbed Draco's shoulders. "Come on, mate, he's not worth it."
It was Ron. He had just emerged from the twins' shop when he caught the commotion in the alleyway.
Draco pulled away and pocketed his wand. He turned to leave with Ron, when Nott got his nerve to speak again.
"You think you're one of them now, don't you, Malfoy? You think you're better than everyone because you're in with the bloody Chosen One and his bloody friends? Well, you aren't. You are just like me, Malfoy. You are just like your father. You will always be a Malfoy. A leopard can't change his spots, and you will always be a Slytherin."
Draco was seething. Nott had been speaking to Draco's back as Draco was retreating. When he turned back around, he felt a bit of triumph to see Nott flinch.
"You're right, Nott. I am a Slytherin. And while a leopard can't change his spots, a snake can shed his skin. I'm not sure you've notice the world changing around you, Nott, but it has. You don't deserve to even know Hermione. You will never speak of her again. Do you understand me?"
"You're just like us, Malfoy. I don't care how much time you spend with the Mudblood."
Draco pulled his wand again, stepping closer. Ron had pulled his wand as well.
Nott snorted. "Going to hex an unarmed man, gentlemen?"
Neither Ron nor Draco made a move.
"I didn't think so. Now, Malfoy, why don't you run along to your new little friends? I'm sure Potter needs someone to polish his wand for him. And then you can change the nappy on that brat that he had with his little whore--."
Nott didn't get another word out. Ron had dropped his wand and punched him.
"What the fuck was that for, Weasley?" Nott was on the ground holding his jaw.
Draco was doubled up, laughing. "You IDIOT! Harry Potter's wife is Ron's sister. Don't you know any better than to insult Ginny Potter?"
"Something the matter, mates?"
Ron and Draco swirled around to see Fred and George entering into the alleyway.
Fred gestured toward Nott. "We heard a noise; what's going on?"
Ron, still furious and nursing his hand, said, "That git broke my hand with his face."
Draco grinned. "I've something for that back at Hermione's flat. I'll fix you up."
"So," George continued. "Why did you let him use his face to break your hand?"
Draco shook his head at Nott. "You're in for it now."
Ron grimaced at the pain in his hand again. "First, the idiot called Hermione a Mudblood."
Draco smiled again at the look of pure hatred on the twins' faces.
"Then, he called Gin a whore," Ron finished.
Draco and Nott both looked toward the twins to gauge their reaction. Draco almost felt sorry for Nott when he saw identical grins spread before him.
"It's sad, really, isn't it, Fred?"
"Too right, George."
"I've never known anyone so stupid, have you, Fred?"
"Nope. Never in my life, George."
"W-who's stupid?" Nott asked, trying but failing to hide his creeping fear.
"Well," said Fred.
"You insulted our Hermione," finished George.
"That was pretty stupid, seeing as how she has loads of people who love her. Why, even Snape is rather fond of her," continued Fred.
"But, the funniest thing is," George started again. "You insulted our sister. That was really, really stupid."
"I'm not afraid of you," Nott said with a little less vigor than he had meant.
"No, you may not be afraid of us, but you see, Gin has six brothers," replied Fred.
George looked quizzically at Fred. "Can we really count Percy? I mean, I know he's our brother, but he's not very scary."
"There is strength in numbers, George, focus."
"Right," George said. "You have a point there. Besides, there's always Harry. You can't just piss Harry off and get away with it. He's loved Ginny for ages. She's our sister, so we have to protect her. It's the law or something. Harry, though, he chose her. That's some scary business, mate."
Nott pulled himself off of the ground and winced at the pain still in his jaw.
Fred took a step closer. All the amusement left his eyes, and he spoke quite seriously to Nott. "I'll tell you this once and only once. If you ever insult or go anywhere near Hermione or our sister, you will have the whole lot of us come down on you." Then Fred gave him an evil grin. "And when we're finished with you, we'll hand you over to the witches in question."
George snorted. "Oh, I wouldn't want to be in your shoes. Hermione's reputation precedes her. But, Gin can bring all six of her brothers and Harry to our knees just by pulling her wand out. She's right wicked with charms. I'd watch your back if I were you."
"Well," Draco said. "I think our work here is done. Come on, Ron, I was just on my way to get a drink. Oh, and Nott, don't forget that these two," Draco said, indicating Fred and George, "were the wizards behind Umbridge's departure from Hogwarts."
Just as Ron and Draco were heading down the street, talking animatedly about the things that Fred and George would do to Nott, an owl landed on Draco's shoulder.
"Oy, what's this?" Draco called. Noticing the parchment tied to the owl's leg, he pulled it off. The owl was gone before Draco could even worry about not having a treat to give him.
He opened the parchment and read. With a grin he looked up at Ron. "This just turned into a celebratory drink, my friend."
**********
Hermione had just closed the Floo connection after talking with Ginny and making arrangements to drop Violet off at Harry and Ginny's for the evening. She was now pacing about the room, getting worried. Draco had been gone for a while now, and Hermione didn't know if she should start getting ready for their evening or not. Before she could think on it any longer, there was a knock at her door.
Hermione gave a sigh of relief. Opening the door, she said, "Finally." Then she halted when she saw who it was.
"What do you want?" Hermione asked, not letting the visitor in.
"I'd like to talk to you."
"You can state your business here, Parkinson."
"Please, Granger. I have something important to say to you."
Before Hermione could protest any further, Violet started to cry. Hermione left the door opened and went to the baby. Pansy took the opportunity to come inside the flat.
Hermione heard the door close and looked up. "Why are you still here? I didn't invite you into my home."
"I'm sorry, Granger, I just need to talk to you." Then Pansy looked closely at the baby. "She's really very beautiful. I only got a glimpse of her at the wedding."
"Well, the only reason you got to go to the wedding was because of Ron. Severus and Narcissa wouldn't have invited you. Anyway, that's not why you're here, so get on with it. I want you gone by the time Draco gets home."
"So, he's living here, then?" Pansy asked, looking around for signs of Draco's habitation.
"Not exactly, but that's not really any of your business. We are waiting until after we are married if you must know."
"What's the point?" Pansy asked her. "Everyone knows that Draco is that baby's father."
"Well." Hermione blanched. "I'm sure Ron has shared the circumstances of her birth with you, seeing as how you two are so close and all." Hermione did nothing to hide the sarcasm in her voice. She was still furious with Ron for hooking up with Pansy and daring to take her to the wedding.
"Look, Granger, what if I told you that there is information that could change your circumstances? There is new evidence that could change things for you and Draco."
"What are you talking about, Parkinson? Is this just another one of your schemes to get Draco away from me?"
"It started out that way, yeah, but my own circumstances have changed. I don't want Draco for myself anymore, Granger. I know he's happy with you, and to be honest, I have fallen in love with Ron. So do you want to know or not?"
Hermione stared at Pansy, looking for any traces that the girl was lying. Finding none, she gestured for Pansy to sit down. Pansy did so and squared her shoulders. She was caught off-guard by the beauty of the baby before her for a moment, and words failed her.
Hermione made a coughing noise, which shook Pansy out of her thoughts.
"Alright, Parkinson, this had better be good."
Pansy gave Hermione a timid smile and said, "You and Draco are not bound."
A/N: Ooooh! That nasty Pansy is such a trouble maker.
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180 Reviews | 7.8/10 Average
Great story, very well thought out. i do love the grandchildren at the end!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
LOL!! I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read. No, really, I had fun revisiting this story. It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.
You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before. Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
And, there it is!!! I knew you'd get there. That's okay. I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.
I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing her. We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.
I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise. I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Lucious, to me, is the weakest link. I actually like Lucius. I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power. But, Lucius was also quite mad here. I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did. Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?
Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon. He's less broken here.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken. Snape is the strongest character in HP. Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.
I really liked your version of Petunia. She seemed almost likable and very regretful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote. I know she had to have regrets. I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily. I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had. That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.
I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. I've gone back and read this and cringe a little. It was necessary at the time, though. Nobody was to know what she'd been through. She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.
Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco. Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ron will always be one of my favorite characters. He reminds me so much of my older brother. He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place. I think he was very clever, even in canon. I just don't think he really ever got the chance. He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.
I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry. Harry is right, no one would believe him.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev. But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.
Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love him. I need to write another hg/dm story.
I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!
Looking grim. I just love Draco as a good guy. Must be a phase I'm going through.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're so crazy. I know you've read this. However, I appreciate your second glance. I hope you still like it after all this time. Remember that tis was my first one.
Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss. I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm a lover... not a fighter. I don't know how to write really great war scenes. It needed to be clean. But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy. It's always been Draco and Hermione. I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.
I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think he finally got some nerve in DH. But, Harry had to grow up at some point. Right? Right?
This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic. I believe this one is the nicest one yet. Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~
Fantastic story! I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
First of all, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question: This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips. I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house. I view it as being a rather large place. But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped. Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~
Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)
Okay :) Makes sense. Great job for a first story!
Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~
That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you very much. Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart. I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~
Excellent story!
Loved the way you developed the characters through their years. Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.
Well done on such a brilliant story. I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you!! I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors. Bless them. Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him. Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know. I think JKR did that on purpose. It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be. I just love him. Thanks again!!~potterbrat~
Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!
OMG! I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!
Totally gripped by this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken. This was my first fanfic and it's my baby. I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind. I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.
Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!! Though you could always expand... wink, winkSuch a GREAT story. I feel content. Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I love writing Ron. He's so goofy and so much fun to write. I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy. So I gave him a protective edge. There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone.
Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)
I totally agree. And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone. And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover. Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron. Get a tissue.