All That Glitters
Chapter 8 of 27
potterbratDraco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
A/N: As always, I want to first thank my beta, RobisonRocket. I also want to thank the wonderful readers who have taken the time to review. The title to this chapter is from an old country/western song by Dan Seals called "Everything that Glitters is not Gold." It's a really sweet song, and I couldn't help but think of it while writing this. Pay close attention to this chapter. There are two places where "All that Glitters" comes into play. Can anyone guess what they are?
Everything that Glitters
Chapter 8
Severus Snape had been pacing back and forth for almost forty-five minutes when the door opened and Draco motioned for him to come back inside. Snape followed Draco into the room, trying not to appear too concerned for the girl. When he entered, he noticed that she had gone.
"Where is Miss Granger?"
"She's in the bathroom, putting your robes back on." Draco sat heavily back onto his abandoned bed and sighed, cradling his head in his hands.
"Is it... that bad?" Snape sat in the chair next to Draco's bed. He allowed Draco a moment's pause before he cleared his throat. "Draco, I asked you a question."
Draco looked up at his godfather, but before he could answer, Hermione reentered the room. "Draco, did you find anything?"
Draco shook his head. "I don't understand it. You appear to have been... Hermione, do you mind that we include Severus?"
"Of course I don't mind. Why else would I have wanted him to stay? But, Draco, you're starting to worry me. What did you find?"
Draco regarded her for a moment and sighed. "That's the thing. All my examination told me was that you were... uh... penetrated. You said you were a virgin. And I believe you. It's just that Hermione, I've seen rape victims before. They are usually heavily bruised. They are usually torn pretty badly. Other than the natural signs of one having sex for the first time, you don't have any marks. It's almost as if he was careful."
Snape looked puzzled. "I know Lucius. He's not careful. However, from what I saw in both of your minds, he was mad. I really don't know what any of this means. Draco, was there anything else that you could gather from your examination?"
Draco looked pensive for a moment. "No. I didn't see anything else. There is no sign of spell damage. There is no sign of anything other than penetration. I'm really sorry, Hermione. I'm sorry I couldn't do more to stop him."
Hermione sat on the bed next to Draco. With a trace of hesitancy, she patted him on the back. "I've already told you that I didn't blame you. I shudder to think of what I'd be doing right now if you hadn't taken that curse with me. I might not have even been alive right now. You saved me, Draco. For that, I will forever be grateful."
Draco was slightly uplifted by Hermione's words until the hard facts hit him. "I never should have asked you to help me. It was too dangerous for you to be at the Manor, and I should have recognized that."
Snape cleared his throat, standing. "I hate to break this up, but we really must be going. Miss Granger, I'm sure you'd like to take a shower and get into your own clothes. These last couple of days have been rather grueling for the both of you."
Hermione stood. "You are right about that. I'll ask Dobby if he'll have your robes cleaned for you."
Snape waved a hand, dismissively.
"Oh, I do hope that Ginny's had her baby." Hermione stopped dead in her tracks as a thought suddenly occurred to her. "Oh, Merlin, Harry! If Gin's had her baby, Harry has to... go. We will have to fight."
"You'll do nothing of the sort, Miss Granger. You and Draco will be in hiding until Lucius is apprehended. I'm sure you recall the discussion we had before our arrival here."
"But you don't understand, Professor. I'm supposed to be by Harry's side. Ron and I pledged our loyalty to him when we were first years. I'm meant to be there."
Draco put his hand on Hermione's shoulder in an effort to calm her. "Hermione, if Lucius sees you, he might try to finish what he started."
"But Draco, that's not possible. You said that you and I are bound by the curse. If we are bound, how can he bind me to him?"
Draco looked at Snape for some guidance. This is something he was hoping to speak to Hermione about after they had settled in at number twelve.
Snape took his cue. "Have a seat, Miss Granger."
Hermione sat down mechanically. "What are you not telling me?"
Snape took a breath. "You and Draco are bound to one another. However, Lucius being the caster of the spell, he is the only one who can remove the spell. The only way to seal the bond is for the two of you to become legally married and consummate the marriage, thus consummating the bond."
"You mean to tell me that Lucius can take this bloody thing off of us?" At the nod of both wizards' heads, Hermione continued. "Well, let's find the bastard and make him do it.
If Hermione hadn't been looking at Draco when she said this, she would have missed the flash of hurt in his eyes. Hermione hesitated for a moment. "Draco, it's nothing against you. It's just that I don't want to be married to anyone. What your fath Lucius -- did was wrong. You are just as much a victim in this as I am. Surely you don't want to be married."
Draco shook his head. "Of course I don't want to be married. But right now, we don't have much choice. You don't know him. It's not safe for us to be anywhere around him. And I am most certainly not going to go looking for him. Hermione, he can't be trusted. We can't make him do anything. It's useless. We're stuck like this."
Hermione stood up abruptly, throwing her hands up in the air. "So you're giving up? Just like that? I don't believe you! I don't care what it takes. We can put the Imperius on him for all I care." Hermione shot a look at Snape. "And, yes, I know it's illegal. After what he did to us, I don't rightly care."
If the situation weren't so delicate, Snape would have laughed at her outrage. "I wasn't going to comment. To be honest with you, if I ever saw the man again, I would probably use an Unforgivable myself. I might even use some that should be Unforgivable." Snape was lost in his own thoughts for a moment when Hermione cleared her throat.
"Right, then. I say we get you two back to Headquarters. Then we can discuss things further. And, Miss Granger, you are not going with Mr. Potter. Do I make myself clear?"
"But, Sir!"
Snape gritted his teeth. "Do I make myself clear?"
Hermione hung her head. "Yes."
Back at number twelve, the kitchen was full of redheads. Fred and George were sitting at the table with Bill and Charlie, describing their latest invention a snitch that disappears as soon as you catch it.
They were hysterical with laughter until the fire blazed green, announcing new arrivals. The brothers sobered immediately and stood, pointing their wands at the fireplace. When they saw Professor Snape, followed by Hermione and Draco, they lowered their wands.
Fred went immediately to Hermione and engulfed her in a crushing embrace. "Fred, I can't breathe."
"Oh, Hermione, I'm sorry." George was right behind him and gave her a quick hug.
"We heard you're married to this git. George pointed his thumb in Draco's direction.
Draco frowned indignantly. "Hey!"
Hermione shrugged. "It's a little more complicated than that. But if you don't mind, I really don't feel like getting into it right now. I want to take a shower, change clothes, and check on Ginny. Has she had the baby yet?"
Fred and George both swelled simultaneously with obvious pride. It was Fred who answered. "She did. She and Harry have a beautiful baby girl. She looks exactly like us, except for the darker hair. We haven't seen her eyes yet, so we don't know what color they are. I'll tell you this, though, she looks right mischievous, that one. We have so much to teach her."
George sighed. "Better not let Mum hear you saying that. She chucked us out when Fred mentioned it. She said we were already corrupting her perfect granddaughter. If my niece is anything like her mother, we won't need to corrupt her. We got blamed for loads of stuff that Ginny did. She has always made us so proud."
Hermione beamed. "A little girl? How wonderful. I can't wait to see her. I wonder if they would mind if I just peek in for a moment."
"I don't think they'd mind at all," George said. "Mum, Dad and Ron are up there now." George grinned. "You should have seen the look on ickle Ronnieken's face when Mum tried to hand the baby to him. He was terrified. Imagine that. Ron can survive McGonagall's chessmen, but he's scared of a tiny baby."
"Well," Hermione reproached. "You can't blame him. He was probably just afraid to hurt her. What did they name her?"
Fred and George sobered. Bill quickly took his teacup to the sink, and Charlie cleared his throat, not meeting her eyes.
"What on earth? It can't be that bad, can it?" Hermione was looking from one brother to the other.
Charlie, still not meeting her eyes, sighed. "They haven't named her yet, Hermione. They're waiting until... until Harry gets back."
Hermione looked at Draco and Snape and then at the other men as if they all had a secret. "Until Harry gets back? Back from where? Where did he go?"
Charlie looked at her, puzzled. "Back from fighting You-Know-Who. You knew he was going, didn't you? He hasn't gone yet, of course. He's waiting for his cue from Dumbledore and Snape." Charlie nodded his head toward Snape and continued. "He's ready, Hermione. He wants to get this over with so he can live his life. So we can all live our lives."
Hermione straightened. "Then I suppose I should go and see him now. I want to wish him luck. Draco, would you like to come with me?"
Fred and George exchanged amused glances, which Hermione caught. "What? What are you two smirking about?"
Instead of answering Hermione, George addressed Draco. "The little woman is already telling you what to do, Malfoy? How very domestic.
The corners of Snape's mouth twitched. That's exactly the sort of thing he'd say. Oh, Merlin, thought Snape, I'm comparing the Twin Idiots to myself.
Hermione merely rolled her eyes. She'd had enough of the Weasley twins' humor to last her a lifetime. Draco, on the other hand, gave a weak smile, not really knowing how to take them.
Hermione turned walked out of the kitchen, and Draco, not wanting to be the butt of anymore marriage jokes, followed her. Snape stayed behind. He wasn't very keen on meeting a new Potter, no matter how cute and cuddly she may be.
As Hermione and Draco approached the bedroom, Draco stopped her. She turned to see what was up and felt taken aback by the sadness in his eyes.
"Draco, what's wrong? Don't you want to see Ginny's baby?"
Draco sighed. "Yes, of course I do. It's just Hermione, we haven't had much of a chance to talk since all of this happened. After we see the baby and get cleaned up, do you think that maybe you and I can sit down for a cup of tea and talk? I mean, you and I have so much to discuss. I know we won't be able to iron out any details of what the future might hold in one evening, but I think we need to get started."
Hermione didn't answer; she just pursed her lips and nodded. Draco gave her a grateful smile and gestured for her to go in.
Hermione gave a light knock and said, "It's Hermione and Draco, can we come in?" Ginny squealed. "Yes, of course!"
As they walked in, the happiness in the room lifted Hermione's spirits more that she thought possible. She and Draco were both pulled into an embrace by Mrs. Weasley. "Oh, there you are! I have been so worried. You just missed Professor Dumbledore. He had to go back to the school for something. How are you? Come, come. Sit down and meet my wonderful granddaughter."
Mr. Weasley came over and kissed Hermione on the cheek and shook Draco's hand. "Draco, I can't tell you what it means to us for what you did for Hermione. She's like another daughter to us. We just... well, thank you doesn't seem to cover it. If there's anything you need, anything we can do for you, let us know."
Not knowing how to answer, Draco just smiled shyly and nodded. He then turned his attention to Hermione, who was already holding the baby.
Mr. Weasley whispered something to Mrs. Weasley and she nodded. "Arthur and I are going to go down to the kitchen and get started on dinner. You all are probably very hungry. Besides, we've left Fred and George too long without adult supervision."
"Mum." Ginny gasped. "Fred and George are both adults." Mrs. Weasley raised her eyebrows at her daughter. Ginny giggled. "Well, okay. But Bill and Charlie are adults, and they're down there. On second thought, perhaps you should go down."
Hermione looked over the top of the baby's head. "Actually, Mrs. Weasley, Professor Snape is down there, so I think the house is safe."
Mrs. Weasley chuckled. "Come along, Arthur. Let's leave them be. As they headed out the door, Hermione was reminded of what George told Draco: "The little woman is already telling you what to do."
The room was quiet for a moment after Mr. and Mrs. Weasley left. Hermione noticed Ron throwing furtive glances toward Harry and then Ginny, who exchanged looks with each other. Hermione felt uneasy. "What's going on?"
Harry walked over and took Hermione by the hand. "We, that is to say Ginny and I, would like it very much if you would be our baby's godmother."
Hermione looked from Ginny to Harry. "Do you really mean it? Oh, Harry Ginny. I would love to. Thank you so much. So is Ron her godfather?"
Harry and Ginny looked at Ron, and Ron shook his head. Hermione's face fell. "I don't understand."
Ron grinned. "Hermione, I'm her uncle. Harry's my best mate, but we decided that it wouldn't be fair to all her other uncles if I was made godfather, they weren't. It comes down to this: if anything Merlin forbid ever happened to Harry and Ginny, this baby would always be taken care of, no matter who her godparents are."
Hermione's heart swelled at Ron's maturity. "So, who's her godfather, then?"
Harry smiled. "Well, we were hoping that Malfoy here would take on that responsibility." Harry stood and clapped Draco on the back. Draco's jaw dropped.
"You want me to be her godfather? I mean, I would love to, but are you sure?"
Ginny smiled at him. "Yes. Hermione and Ron may be Harry's best mates, but you're mine. And besides..." Ginny trailed off. Harry finished for her. "After what you did for Hermione, I know that my daughter would be safe in your hands, Malf Draco."
Draco fought the blush that threatened to expose itself. "Thanks... er... Harry. That really means a lot to me. Hermione, my I hold my goddaughter, please?"
As Hermione handed the baby to Draco, he felt a surge of happiness and warmth. He cradled her in his arm for a moment, and his heart skipped another beat when she snuggled into him. This is what we fight for, thought Draco. The feeling of absolute trust and loyalty overwhelmed him as he fought to hold back tears.
Draco looked at the smiling faces around him -- the faces of his former enemies. He knew they would probably laugh at him, but he had to tell them how he felt. Hugging his new goddaughter closer to him, and knowing that everyone in the room was listening, he spoke quietly to her.
"I promise you, little one, I will look after you until my last breath. I never knew what it was like to have a good father, but I do know how to be a good godfather. You will have both. You are very lucky to be loved so much. How unfortunate for any boy who ever fancies you, though. He'll have your father, your uncles, and me... your godfather. I like the sound of that."
Wiping a tear that threatened to spill onto the baby's face, Draco looked up. He noticed that they all had tears in their eyes. Guessing that now would probably be the one and only chance he would give himself to be this emotional in front of a crowd, he addressed them all.
"I want you to know," Draco began. "I have touched the most expensive jewels. I have traveled to the most far away places. I have been exposed to vaults that would make a king cry. I have had and held riches beyond your imagination. I have always thought that I was worth something because of those riches."
Draco looked down at the baby again, who was sleeping soundly and holding tightly to Draco's finger. He went on with his dialogue. "Holding this baby in my arms, and knowing that she is my goddaughter, makes me realize that I have never held anything more valuable in my life. And I have never felt so unworthy. I promise you, I will do everything in my power to live up to whatever expectations she has for me. Ginny, H-Harry, this honor is the greatest gift I've ever been given."
Silence fell until Ron got up to retrieve the baby from Draco. "I take it back, Harry," Ron said jovially, wiping his eyes. "If it's that great of a feeling; I don't want to be her uncle, I want to be her godfather."
Everyone laughed at this and when Draco pulled the baby closer. "Get back, Weasley."
At that moment, there was another knock at the door, and Ginny, still half laughing, half crying said, "Come in."
The laughter died when Dumbledore came in, followed by Snape. Dumbledore was holding something, wrapped delicately in a sheet, and addressed Harry and Ron. "It's time." Harry looked questioningly at the package. Dumbledore pulled the sheet away, and Godric Gryffindor's sword blazed from the light of the candles that lit the room. Harry nodded his understanding.
Having already said their "goodbyes" in private, Harry kissed Ginny on the lips without a word. He stood resolutely and watched as Draco handed the baby to Ron. Ron hugged her close and kissed her on the top of the head. Harry took the baby from Ron.
Harry touched her cheek and whispered softly to her. "You, my little angel, are going to save us all." Harry held his breath as his daughter opened her emerald green eyes his eyes his mother's eyes. He knew, at that moment, that he would, indeed, hold his daughter again.
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180 Reviews | 7.8/10 Average
Great story, very well thought out. i do love the grandchildren at the end!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the best thing I can say is this story is still good second time around.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
LOL!! I did make a promise in my bio that I would answer every review... no matter how many times you read. No, really, I had fun revisiting this story. It was my first baby and I will always cherish it.
You know, it wasn't till your author's note that I realised I read this before. Well, it looks like I'm enjoying it again. TFF
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
And, there it is!!! I knew you'd get there. That's okay. I promise that I don't mind the extra reviews.
I had to laugh at the end of the chapter, I almost feel sorry for Pansy.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing her. We don't get enough of her in canon, so that leaves room for playing with her character more.
I was certainly surprised with Lucius's method of demise. I never took him to be a person willing to commit suicide.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Lucious, to me, is the weakest link. I actually like Lucius. I believe that his love for his son was the strongest part about him aside from his hunger for power. But, Lucius was also quite mad here. I think that anyone who looks at the world through rose colored glasses has the chance to lose their marbles like he did. Besides, it's never the ones you expect, is it?
Not bad, I liked your version of Severus's feelings better than canon. He's less broken here.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Funny that you would use those exact words when the title of my story is Broken. Snape is the strongest character in HP. Sure, he was weak when he took the Dark Mark, but it took a lot of strength to turn from the Death Eaters and become a spy.
I really liked your version of Petunia. She seemed almost likable and very regretful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I honestly believe that I DH had a post script for Petunia, we would find that she is quite close to the woman that I wrote. I know she had to have regrets. I think that her love for her sister just turned into jealousy and she never had the chance to make things right with Lily. I also think that shew viewed Harry as all of the mistakes that she'd made and all the regrets that she had. That made her pain more palpable in my eyes.
I'm surprised she let a man do this kind of exam in this circumstance let alone have a second with her.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I know. I've gone back and read this and cringe a little. It was necessary at the time, though. Nobody was to know what she'd been through. She didn't really know herself because Lucius took her memories and she knows that Draco is a pro and he's now a friend.
Interesting, I liked how Ron knew something that surprised Draco. Ron doesn't really strike me as a knowledgeable type.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Ron will always be one of my favorite characters. He reminds me so much of my older brother. He's a little hot-headed, but his heart is in the right place. I think he was very clever, even in canon. I just don't think he really ever got the chance. He's kind of the unassuming hero, you know.
I love Severus's sense of humor... it's so dry. Harry is right, no one would believe him.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There are so many fanfic authors out there that have cleverer ways of writing Sev. But, again, he is so much like someone that I know... I just write what I know about my friend and voila... MY Snape is born.
Good chapter, Draco certainly broke the news gently.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love him. I need to write another hg/dm story.
I always liked the idea of Severus hanging out in the background, even better that Hermione notices and appreciates his help.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I wrote this about the time that I was easing into my hg/ss stage, so I needed to take it slow and make him a friend in this fic before they got naked in another!!!
Looking grim. I just love Draco as a good guy. Must be a phase I'm going through.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're so crazy. I know you've read this. However, I appreciate your second glance. I hope you still like it after all this time. Remember that tis was my first one.
Not bad, Voldermort went down without much of a fuss. I'm more concerned with Lucius's statement about killing traitors.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm a lover... not a fighter. I don't know how to write really great war scenes. It needed to be clean. But then again, this story was never about Harry and Voldy. It's always been Draco and Hermione. I just love Harry so much that I had to get him in there.
I liked Harry's confidence, in canon he didn't seem sure of anything.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I think he finally got some nerve in DH. But, Harry had to grow up at some point. Right? Right?
This story was tantalizing, fun to read, emotional, well thought out and beautiful. It had so much humanity and you've really brought the characters to life. Though there were a lot of dark things that occurred; there was a reason for it. It wasn't horrible and horrifying for horror's sake. I think you executed this novel brilliantly and I am priveleged to be allowed to read it. I will recommend it to all my other Dramione friends. =)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have gotten some fantastic reviews for this little fic. I believe this one is the nicest one yet. Thank you so very much!!~*potterbrat*~
Fantastic story! I know it's finished, so I'm lucky that I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm just curious though, why did Ginny ask Draco if he and Hermione had stayed in the room if they've been there for 3 weeks already?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
First of all, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question: This was my first story, and as I was writing, I had the whole thing playing out in my head, but it got lost in translation somewhere between my brain and my fingertips. I wanted to convey that even though they'd been there for a little while, they haven't seen a whole lot of Ginny, because they were in another part of the house. I view it as being a rather large place. But, alas, it come out exactly as I'd hoped. Thanks again!~*potterbrat*~
Response from ladylynne9 (Reviewer)
Okay :) Makes sense. Great job for a first story!
Excellent story, everyone got to live happily ever after. Peacefully at that in all ways, with many, many children to love. Great job!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm a sucker for happy endings!
~*potterbrat*~
That was amazing!!! I adored this story!!! I enjoyed everything about it! The epilogue was so very detailed!!! Super job!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, thank you very much. Being my first fan-fic, Broken has a very special place in my heart. I've become rather attached to it, so when I get reviews from people who love it as well, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy... LOL!~potterbrat~
Excellent story!
Loved the way you developed the characters through their years. Particularily enjoyed the banter between Draco and Severus in the epilogue - I could just imagine them both as doting grandfathers.
Well done on such a brilliant story. I have to say that I am loving Saving Grace.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you!! I wanted Draco and Severus to keep their Slytherin ways even though they were surrounded by Gryffindors. Bless them. Sev is such a complicated character because there are so many facets to him. Even after DH, I feel like there's so much more to him that we don't know. I think JKR did that on purpose. It also makes him so much fun to write, because we can mould him into what we think he should be. I just love him. Thanks again!!~potterbrat~
Oh now I feel happier, even Pansy is turning out to be nicer and maturer.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I just want everyone to live in harmony... la lala la la!!!
OMG! I get to chapter 23 (without reviewing - sorry) and discover that they are NOT bound!
Totally gripped by this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Oh, I'm so glad you're reading Broken. This was my first fanfic and it's my baby. I was pleased with the turnout and the reviews were so kind. I won't take away your cookies for waiting until ch. 23 to review.
Okay, I take back my insistence on a sequel--you gave such a great epilogue, you really don't have to!! Though you could always expand... wink, winkSuch a GREAT story. I feel content. Sigh.My favorite lines:"If someone had told him two years ago that he would be standing by the lake on the school grounds, with an audience full of Gryffindors, waiting to marry the most Gryffindor of all the Gryffindors, he would have hexed someone. However, here he was, the Slytherin Prince, waiting for his Gryffindor Princess.""“We do,” said Harry. At Ron’s silence, Harry raised his eyebrows at him. Ron shrugged. “Yeah, alright, we do.” Hermione giggled when Ron gave Draco an ‘I’m not really giving her to you’ look."
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I love writing Ron. He's so goofy and so much fun to write. I wanted to relate his unrequited love for Hermione somehow without taking away from his love for Pansy. So I gave him a protective edge. There is no way he would ever GIVE her to anyone.
Response from mhaj78 (Reviewer)
I totally agree. And you did a great job of considering what "muggle" traditions wouldn't be a part of a wizarding ceremony--and how they would look at those, i.e., this example of Ron not "giving" her to anyone. And that is also why I HATE Ron and Hermione being together in JKR's books...he definitely is a great protector, but hard to see him as her equal or her lover. Ron and Pansy, though...I like that match the more I think about it!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you. Now, if you jot on over to my WIP which is called Saving Grace, you might see a different side of Ron. Get a tissue.