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Malfoy Manor Broken
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1: Punishment for a Malfoy

2: Memories

3: The Musings of Dumbledore

4: Sleeping Beauty

5: Promises

6: Love from Friends

7: A Witch's Intuition

8: All That Glitters

9: Silence

10: It's Over

11: Lily's Legacy

12: Snape's Confession

13: The Joy of the Father

14: Memories on Hold

15: Slytherins!

16: Hermione's Heartache

17: A Stroll in the Moonlight

18: Learning to Live Again

19: Violet

20: Pensieve Tales

21: Madness

22: The Aftermath

23: Oh, Brother

24: A House-Elf's Story

25: Cordially Invited

26: Daddy's Girl

27: White Roses -- Epilogue

Broken

potterbrat

180 Reviews   |   180 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Malfoy Manor 67,874 Words 27 Chapters Complete
Draco Malfoy Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Draco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.

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Chapters (27)

Chapter 1: Punishment for a Malfoy

Chapter 2: Memories

Chapter 3: The Musings of Dumbledore

Chapter 4: Sleeping Beauty

Chapter 5: Promises

Chapter 6: Love from Friends

Chapter 7: A Witch's Intuition

Chapter 8: All That Glitters

Chapter 9: Silence

Chapter 10: It's Over

Chapter 11: Lily's Legacy

Chapter 12: Snape's Confession

Chapter 13: The Joy of the Father

Chapter 14: Memories on Hold

Chapter 15: Slytherins!

Chapter 16: Hermione's Heartache

Chapter 17: A Stroll in the Moonlight

Chapter 18: Learning to Live Again

Chapter 19: Violet

Chapter 20: Pensieve Tales

Chapter 21: Madness

Chapter 22: The Aftermath

Chapter 23: Oh, Brother

Chapter 24: A House-Elf's Story

Chapter 25: Cordially Invited

Chapter 26: Daddy's Girl

Chapter 27: White Roses -- Epilogue


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Member Since 2007  |  7 Stories  |  Favorited by 28  |  176 Reviews Written  |  444 Review Responses



I've been posting on here for a while and have decided to update my profile.  I'm 30ish... I have a husband... I have two daughters... and other various creatures living at my house.  My real life consists of work, fanfiction (which sometimes supercedes work), and chasing after my teen and tween.


~*potterbrat*~


"Don't just survive the storm; learn how to dance in the rain!"    authur unknown

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10/10

carmille

Hi again.Sorry for my lack of reviewing these couple of months, but I have been on a month length journey to Thailand and haven't passed remarks on any fics since my arrival back home. Been too busy with work and preparations for my wedding. I'M REALLY SORRY.   You have to be one of the more brilliant writers out there, because you keep exceeding yourself. The chapters just keep getting better and better. You have a way to paint a really 'colourful' picture with words only. This is a nice gift of yours and it made me wince in pity to what torture Lucius have been through.Please never stop writing stories. You are too good. Big Hugs, Carmille 

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

My goodness... I am all of a flutter.  That was such a nice thing to say.  I just got back from Ireland myself, so I haven't had a chance to update.  I have missed you guys.  And congrats on your upcoming wedding.

10/10

Gardengirl

Awwwww. That'll put their minds to rest then, won't it? Well done, Cissy. Now I wanna know what's in that pensieve... but I'll be patient. Thanks for updating on a holiday weekend - I surely do appreciate it!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Will their minds be at rest?  I don't know.  I guess we'll see.  The Pensieve will present itself in the next couple of chapters, along with Hermione's and Draco's memories.

0/10

Chocolate Chip

things are being revealed about the baby; interesting indeed. I can't wait to read more to find out what the crescent moon mean and also the baby having her great great grandmother's eyes. Update soon.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I will probably write some more on Tuesday, since it's Memorial Day weekend.  I'm planning to take my girls to see Shrek the Third, so I'll be pretty busy tomorrow.  But the good thing about this story is that when I start writing, I can't stop.

10/10

sinbad

Oh, how nice!  It'd Draco's.  Much easier for everyone involved.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

HMMM!  Is it going to be easier?   By the way, you can check out my SS/HG one-shot now.  Don't forget to read the A/N.  Happy reading!

10/10

seleneangel

Well welcome to the fold Narissa! psht Cissy... you shouldn't have said that to Draco and Mione... they don't know anything about that! HEHEHE....Not too sure about Narcissa and Severus... but I'm sure you can make it work! *wink*I'm delighted that the new babe is special. I'm hoping hell isn't about to break loose... if it is add a warning... I want to be prepared! LOL!Great addition to the tale!~*~Selene~*~

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thanks so much.  I will make sure to add the warnings just for you.  It will all be just for you.  Look for it in the next couple of chapters.

Response from seleneangel (Reviewer)

Thanks!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

You are most welcome.

10/10

blue artemis

I knew the baby was Draco's!  Yay!  That was wonderful.  

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you so much.  I hope you liked the way I brought the realization.  I loved throwing Narcissa into the fire.

10/10

togspled

so she's really Draco's? hmm an interesting twist and turn!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

You'll have all the answers you need in the next couple of chapters.  It's really getting interesting now.

10/10

seleneangel

“Well, obviously so I can get the one that goes with it.”HEHEHEHE... Go Hermione!So Snape is off to reclaim his one true love.....wait is Narissa still alive in this story? It would make sense that she would be in France. Hrm... I shall have to wait on that.Susan the Slytherin... along with Harry the half-Slytherin... getting Draco the born Slytherin to admit he is in love... yay for team work. Thanks for the update!~*~Selene~*~

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

THERE YOU ARE!!  I have been patiently awaiting your response to this chapter.  I knew you'd like it.  I have the next one with my beta now.  You will find out what Snape went to retrieve in the that one.  There is also be a revelation we've been waiting for.  Oh, I also have an HG/SS one-shot that is in queue.  I'd love to know what you think of that one.

Response from seleneangel (Reviewer)

Sorry it took me soo long... I've been sick the last couple of days... I'm still not a hundred percent but my fever has gone down. I love SS/HGs I'll have to look it up.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

In all fairness, it was only posted yesterday.  I hope you feel better soon.

Response from seleneangel (Reviewer)

Yes... but that does mean you had to wait all that time... hehehe... kidding.... Thanks.

0/10

Chocolate Chip

Awww this was a very sweet chapter. I think Harmione is going to heal nicely with Draco by her side and I am glad that they are going to finally make their bond offical. Update soon.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I have the next chapter with my beta, so hopefully you won't have to wait long.  In the meantime, check back for my HG/SS one-shot that is in queue.  Let me know what you think.

10/10

Gardengirl

*whew* At last! Thanks for resolving all this for me. I was hanging on tenterhooks! Still loving your story ~

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I'm so glad you're still with me.  There is still some loose ends to tie up in this story, but it shouldn't be long until we see the end.  I have an HG/SS one-shot in queue.  Check back later, it might be up.

10/10

sinbad

yea! a happy chapter.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

You know me -- I'm just full of happy chapters!  LOL!  I decided to throw one in for fun.  Thanks for the review.

10/10

blue artemis

I love that last line.  That was cute.  Thanks for giving Hermione a break.  

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Yeah, yeah -- whatever!  Thank you so much.  By the way -- I have a one-shot HG/SS in queue right now, so it should be up tomorrow.  Keep checking, and when you read it, don't skip the A/N.pb

10/10

LuthienCelebrindal

another evil little cliffy!!  you are very good at those.  I do love Remus and Susan's little thing they have going on here.  update soon!!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you so much for the sweet compliment.  I will be updating today, so maybe the next chapter will be up this weekend.~pb~

10/10

sinbad

Wow, I need to do a re-read on this story too, I had to leave the tate for a few days and all my email is backed up.  HELP!!!!   Great chapter, now go save Hermione....

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

AHH!!  Come on -- do I have to?  She's so spoiled.  Just kidding.  I think you will be pleased with the next chapter.  Thanks agan,

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

.~pb~

10/10

seleneangel

What a nice chapter... sorta sad that it had to end on a down note.Remus deserves a good woman. hehehe!You should really look into Hermione's suicidal tendencies. I think she might need councelling... *wink*~*~Selene~*~

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I promise, promise, promise -- I'll be nice to her.   (potterbrat smiles innocently,while crossing fingers behind back.)  Don't you worry a single hair on your head.  She'll be just fine in my capable hands. 

Response from seleneangel (Reviewer)

Hrmm... You know I usually like fiction that puts Hermione thru a little(or a lot) of hardship... it's payback for her getting Severus... and Draco... and Lucius... and on occassion Remus....... *mumbles "damn her" then wanders off*LOL! I'm sure she and Draco will be fine in the end.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank goodness SOMEONE out there understands my need to put that girl through a little hell!pb

10/10

blue artemis

Tonk's koolaide?  Hee.  I like that chapter, it was good.  I'm glad they found Hermione. 

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I was hoping I didn't lose anyone with the "koolaide" reference.  I have a 12-year-old daughter, so I hear her say that all the time.  I will write another one soon.  I've been drifting over to coloured-grey for some HG/DM inspiration. 

0/10

Chocolate Chip

Wow this is so different from the other stories that I have read. Susan Granger and Remus Lupin as a couple; I think they would make a beautiful couple. I enjoyed their romantic day/evening out. I hope Harmione is alright and that she will recover. Maybe Remus will send her back to St. Mungus. Update soon

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I don't know why, I just SAW Hermione's mom with a wizard.  It works for some reason.  Thanks for the review.

10/10

Gardengirl

Oh, mercy. Now Mom's gonna have all sorts of guilt that she wasn't there when Hermione got there, isn't she?

Beautifully done, as always. Just please don't leave me hanging too long?

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I'm so glad you liked this chapter.  It's actually my favorite so far.  I started to get nervous that nobody would like it as much as me.  I am currently writing the next 2, so hopefully, they'll be up by the beginning of next week.

0/10

Chocolate Chip

Poor Harmione. It was definitely too eary for her release. I hope Severus, Draco, Ron, or Harry find her and take her right back to St. Mungo's hospital. Update soon.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I have the next chapter in queue.  I have to say that, so far, Chapter 17 is my favorite.  I think it's going to be a pretty big surprise, and I don't think it's been done before.

10/10

Gardengirl

You wicked, wicked writer! The poor girl. Get her mother home, chop chop!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I'm sorry.  I just can't do that.  You'll see.  The next chapter will be a pretty big surprise.  I will upload it as soon as I'm finished with this response.  Hopefully TPP will have it up pretty soon. 

Response from Gardengirl (Reviewer)

I'll be waiting with great anticipation, then ~

9/10

blue artemis

Poor Hermione.  That is getting to be a bit much.  But still, a good chapter.  And I'm glad Draco could see where she was upset. 

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I know.  I battled with myself on whether or not to have her fall again.  But I need to make her understand how important it is to take care of herself.  She's going to come to some realizations pretty soon, and all of this will have needed to happen in order to get her there. 

10/10

sinbad

Yes, I can see you are into torture, especially of me lolo!  I love what you are doing keep it up & think of me when you do a romantic happy ending scene.

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I am posting the next chapter today.  I just got an email from RR, saying she's done with it.  I have a lot of stuff I want to write, so I'll probably write a couple of chapters today.  But, just to get you a wee bit out of your misery, I'll tell you this -- I believe in happy endings.

10/10

LuthienCelebrindal

whew........ the ending.  I am in love with this story.  I can't wait for more!

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

I really appreciate that!  I have my next chapter with my beta and it should be up this week.

0/10

sheedy

Ohhh now you will HAVE to update soon. I've been quietly following this fic since the first post and this EVIL cliffie was just too good. Please update soon. 

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Thank you so so much for the review.  If you'll read some of the others, you see that you're not the first to comment on my "evilness."  Of course, others have dubbed me twisted.  I should have the next chapter in queue this week.  It's with my beta, now. 

10/10

seleneangel

HEHE! Oh wait... one should be sad at a death(suicide)... but Lucius was the traitor!!! I love that Snapey and Harry put aside there differences... I also love that Severus wasn't in love with Lily. (I think in fanon that is a bit over done... sure she was beautiful and I think most of her year had atleast a crush on her... but crushes don't lifetime devotion make.) I'm glad that Draco and Hermione are going to know the truth... but I am afraid of what the Imperio rape by Draco of Hermione is going to do to their budding friendship. Can't wait for the next chappy!Great Work!~*~Selene~*~

Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)

Oh, my darling Selene, I think you more than anyone are going to love the next few chapters.  I am determined to pull one over on you, and I believe I have something in the works that will throw you completely off the mark!  Thank you, again, for you review and loyalty.

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