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Broken
potterbrat180 Reviews | 7.8/10 (180 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )
Draco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
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I've been posting on here for a while and have decided to update my profile. I'm 30ish... I have a husband... I have two daughters... and other various creatures living at my house. My real life consists of work, fanfiction (which sometimes supercedes work), and chasing after my teen and tween.
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Reviews for Broken
WOW! This is well written. I really like how you've incorporated Lilly's eyes. I can only hope JK comes up with something like this for DH. It was a nice touch having Petunia save Harry. I think I can see the happy ending coming for Drace and Hermione. But who is the only person Snape will love? Hermione?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much for the kind words. Snape's love will be revealed in about 3 or 4 more chapters. Draco and Hermione have a few things to work out first. Chapter 14 is with my beta, so it won't be long now. Pssst... check out the response I gave to Sinbad a couple of reviews ago. You'll get a hint on Snape's woman.
Oh Jeez! What a corker for this chapter. I really didn't expect it. What will happen now? Standing by for the next installement, cheers!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank Merlin you didn't expect it. I love being unpredictable. Chapter 14 is with my beta, so it shouldn't be long. Thanks so much for the review.
Ok I can't say I am going to miss Malfoy, I hope you got a way to give Hermione her memories back. I also liked Harry and Ginney's daughter's name.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I stumbled on the meaning of Abigail by accident. I think Lily as Harry's daughter is overdone, not that I don't love it. But I stand by what I said -- the child will have enough to live up to. Thank you so much for the review.
That was a lovely name Hermione came up with. That chapter made me tear up. I can't wait for more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Tee hee! I love tears. I have the next one with my beta now.
However, my heart has always and will always belong to only one woman. HEHE... Snapey loves Mione!!! He shall forever pine away because this is a DM/HG story... ~shrugs~ Great chappy! ~*~Selene~*~
Response from seleneangel (Reviewer)
~stops cheering and rereads the Snape quote~ "always and will always"? Not HG... crap!Oh WELL vc
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
OH, I am sooo sorry. (potterbrat pats
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
on back). I know you are sad. See review from Sinbad, and my response. I didn't give it away, but I did say it wasn't Hermione. I can't break Sevy's heart. Never fear, little Selene, I am currently working on a SS/HG fic. I just needed to get Hermione and Draco out of my system.
Wow what a confession from Snape. Lily was truely a kind hearted person easy to befriend anyone. I am glad that Harry and his aunt made up for the better. It is good to see his aunt in a new light. Update soon.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm a very optimistic person who wants to find good in people. As crazy as she is, I think that JKR's Petunia really does have regrets. I have the next chapter back from my beta and will be in queue today.
That was an amazingly sweet chapter. I really did enjoy that, and I loved Severus' story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I love writing Severus. He is such a twisted character, which is probably why I like him. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Chapter 13 will be in queue today.
very good
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Why thank you. I'm all of a flutter for the stars. More soon.
Yea, another update! I didn't feel as much forward motion in this one, though Draco did essentially declare his intentions. As always, looking forward to more. Glad if I've provided even a smidgen of inspiration
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Draco is going to be going through some existential issues very soon. Look for some more familiar faces to pop up in later chapters. I will have the next one in queue by the end of the day.
Great chapter, but who is Severus"s secret love? Any hope of a reconcilliation? In this case I hope it's not Hermione, since you have her and Draco hooked up. I'd just like to see a happy ending for him too.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I will not tell my secret. Not yet, anyway. I will tell you that it isn't Hermione. His words were: My heart has always and will always belong to only one woman.
Silly thought: Wouldn't it be great if Lucius was the "traitor"?I loved this chappy... Ron knocks some sense into Hermione(very ironic)... Harry is saved by Snape(normal)... Draco is sad for Hermione(great new development)...Ginny goes on a mission(that seems normal to me)... and I end up feeling sorry for Petunia(odd...disturbing... but somehow okay)... Can't wait for the update...~*~Selene~*~
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I have the update in queue right now. I'm so glad you liked this chapter, I enjoyed writing it. The traitor will be revealed in Chapter 13, which is with my beta. Snape finally spills his guts in Chapter 12. I don't think you'll be dissappointed. potterbrat
Oh, I didn't expect Ginny to have any luck with Petunia. Though I'm pleased to see she managed to convince her to help Harry. Can't wait to see what happens next at the St. Mungos Hospital. I'm just bursting with joy over Hermiones recovery. I hope she and the baby will be all right. I have to confess, though... This chapter should need a warning so you know you'r in for a tearful moment. Hugs Carmille
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You just wait. I have a nasty little plan for the next couple of chapters. This story won't be all about the tears, though. Thanks again for your loyalty.
Finally it is over. I was momentarily 'lost' because of the strange and mad Lucius but hey, I'm pretty sure I know where he is going now and who the traitor is... Well according to Lucius ... LOLIt's a great chapter. Keep going and please don't stop using your fabulous twisted mind. It's so precious to me. Big hugs, Carmille
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
OH Carmille, I'm so glad someone appreciates my "twisted mind." Thanks again for your wonderful review.
Oh, that was a sweet chapter. It made me reach for a tissue.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'll admit it, I did have a little tingle in my eye when I wrote it. What can I say ~ I like the drama.
This was a touching chapter. I have seen a side of Harry's Aunt that I have never seen before. It was touching and sad. I hope this draws Harry and his Aunt close together. As for Harmione, I hope that she gets well and that the baby even though it is Lucius survives. I am looking forward to another update soon.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much for the kind review. The next chapter is with my beta, so you should get it soon.
*loves updates with breakfast*
Thanks! Good stuff here.
Who's the traitor Lucius needs to kill???
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
OOH! You're trying to get the inside scoop, aren't you? You will find out soon enough. I think you'll be very surprised at who it is. Unfortunately, you won't find out until chapter 13. I have chapter 12 with my beta, now. Harry needs to deal with his auntie first, then we'll get to Lucius. Sorry... the devil made me do it.
Response from Gardengirl (Reviewer)
Naah, I'm not trying to cheat, just thinking out loud. Or online. Whatever.
Harry and Petunia... that should be interesting. Potentially volatile, but I'm guessing not, based on how you've written her.
The devil, eh? A likely excuse
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You're catching on...
Well, I'm glad Hermione snapped out of it, Ron certainly knew what to say; and Ginney was so smart in how she handeled Petunia. Perhaps there can be a reconciliation...
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You should find out very soon. I have the next chapter off to my beta, who happens to be fabulous. As soon as I get it back I'll post it and wait for admin to approve. Thank you again for your loyalty.
Oh dear lord!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'd be afraid of this review if it weren't for the stars. Thanks so much. I LOVE to make my readers speechless.
Well, I kind of expected you to deal with Hermione's news, but this was good too. I like how Lucius tried to help, but Harry's innate nobility made it a fair fight. I can't say I'd do the same, but then again, I'm no Harry Potter. LOL.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I didn't deal with Hermione's news yet, because I'm a bit twisted. I like to keep you guys on your toes. Don't worry -- I have more on the way. I'm hoping to get the next 2 chapters posted next week. But, you just wait to see what I have in store for Lucius and the "traitor" that he's after.
Isn't Lucius unable to rape or have sex? I thought that's what the first part with Voldie meant... hrm wonder what he used to break her hymen.In any case she should still be technically a virgin...right?Great Chapter... I loved godfather Draco!~*~Selene~*~
Response from seleneangel (Reviewer)
Found it...“You refuse? Oh, well… perhaps I should punish you instead.” Voldemort raised his wand, and with a menacing smile, he hissed, “Castracio!”He has nothing to work with thanks to Voldie... heheh!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
AHH!!! Very good! You are reading between the lines. We are still a few chapters away from the answers to that particular question. I wanted to make Draco more vulnerable. He's still going to be an aristocratic jerk at times, but he needs something to give him hope. Thank you again for reviewing. I always know I can count on you!
OMG I love this fic. It is absolutely amazing. Sad, but amazing. I'm upset that I didn't start reading it sooner.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You are so sweet. thank you. chapter 9 should be up next week.
As usual, a wonderful chapter. My only complaint is I didn't get an alert. are there still bugs in the system?
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
There must be. I didn't know it was up until I got home and checked it. chapter 9 should be up shortly. draco and hermione will have their little talk.
read chapter 6 and 7 and I must say that I am enjoying the chapters. I hope that Harry catches Lucius before he can do further damage to Harmione and Draco. Looking forward to reading another update.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have a lot of twists and turns in store. I just put chapter 8 in queue and I'm finishing up on chapter 9. Thank you so much for the review.
OH BOY!You really made Hermione loose her virginity to that bastard Lucius. I think I might kill him with my bare hands if I were Hermione. You have a twisted mind-in a good way- to let Draco make the examination.Nice. Isn't he mortified be it? Hermione was his 'enemy' at school and is now his wife and patient!!! He isn't even blushing. ( I know he is stuttering a bit, but that's all!!!)Looking forward to the next update.Big hugs, Carmille
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
You have made some very valid points. All of which are going to be addressed in the next chapter. Draco and Hermione are both freaking out right now. Neither one of them want to face what's coming. Thanks again for being such a dedicated reader and reviewer. I really appreciate it.
Poor Hermione, obgyn exams are never fun, but this is just too sad. I think Draco will help her out.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Draco is going to going through a lot of emotions in the next few chapters. Right now he and Hermione are just trying to get through the day, doing whatever they have to do.